This is the Open Write, a place for educators to nurture their writing lives and to advocate for writing poetry in community. We are here every month. We’ll be here today, tomorrow and Monday. This month Leilya Pitre has a series on “Summer Escapes & Small Adventures.” Next month, the Open Write is July 18-20.
Our Host

Leilya Pitre lives in Ponchatoula, LA, a small town celebrated for its strawberries. She teaches and coordinates the English Education Program at Southeastern Louisiana University. Preparing future English teachers, she hopes they become caring, competent, and effective educators. She is an editor and contributing author of Where Stars Meet People: Teaching and Writing Poetry in Conversation. Her other books are devoted to teaching young adult literature in high school. Leilya loves people, cultures, and their rich traditions. She reads, writes, listens to music, visits her children and grandchildren, and enjoys traveling with her husband.
Inspiration
Summer invites us to slow down, wander a little, and imagine places we want to go. Sometimes, a getaway is a plane ticket across the ocean. Sometimes, it’s a porch swing, a favorite chair, a hidden café, or a quiet morning with nowhere to rush. This June, I am dreaming of Italy with its morning espresso, warm stone streets, late sunsets, and long conversations over pasta and wine. Maybe, even a whispered “Andiamo” before boarding another train. We are leaving right after the Open Writes, and I am getting so excited. Where would you go if you could leave tomorrow?
Process
Write a poem about your perfect getaway or escape. It may be real or imagined, near or far away, luxurious or wonderfully simple. It may be a place from memory, hope, or longing.
You might want to describe what you see, hear, smell, and taste. You may write as a postcard, travel journal, or free verse poem. You could also focus on one small detail that makes the place unforgettable.
As always, you may ignore the prompt completely and write about anything you would like to share with us.
Leilya’s Poem
Somewhere in Florence
I want mornings
with tiny cups of strong coffee,
windows open to warm air,
and church bells chiming softly
into the streets below.
I want evenings
that arrive with surprise,
gold light resting on old buildings,
my husband beside me,
both of us walking nowhere important.
Let there be gelato,
late dinners in small piazzas,
and someone calling ciao bella
to no one and everyone at once.
Your Turn
Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may choose to use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers.
Leilya,
God, I love Florence! Beautiful!
I am late to the game, but here is what I wrote:
A Perfect Summer Day
I want undisturbed sleep
No midnight dog rumbles
No 3:00 am tossing and turning under the covers
No 7:00 am alarm
I want a breezy morning
Kisses and coffee
Side-by-side headlines and shared language lessons
Scrolling a stream of “likes” and “loves”
I want a lazy afternoon
Sunscreen and sunglasses
Empty calendars and empty To-Do lists
Reading books with snoring dogs underfoot
Pool naps, loungchair naps, under the covers naps
I want an energized evening
Dinner from the grill and fireworks on the water
A warm breeze and a chilled cocktail
Half conversations filled in by 30 years of a knowing smile
I want you—
For another 30 years
Leilya,
Thanks for hosting. I’m arriving late because our day in Portland was long, culminating in a reading with Naomi Shiba Nye and Kim Stafford. My poem began as a response to a prompt at the Stafford Conference but fits your prompt, too. I love how you honor quality time and simple pleasures.
Portlandia
“Keep Portland weird.”
Flying into the weird city
I see Mt. Hood’s snow-capped peak &
snap a photo from the middle seat.
This constant, a stasis, an iconic view.
Riding the Max Red Line into downtown
the view changes to crowds of lifeless
buildings populated with memory-ghosts
whispering behind razor wire.
This inconsistency, a changed city.
Still, I am ready to greet the weird city.
ready to read her storied life,
the people and pages
written through her streets.
Glenda Funk
June 20, 2026
How is the Stafford Conference? Love this poem of seeing a place from so many perspectives and your embodied positions like the middle seat and the red line in the greeting of “her”. That was a lovely surprise, to see the “her” at the end. Love it.
Glenda, I’ve never been there, and your evocative description did a great job capturing the mood of a city in which memories reside. Loved:
“buildings populated with memory-ghosts
whispering behind razor wire.”
Made me wonder: why the razor wire?
Thanks for a beautiful poem to start the morning!
Hi, Glenda! I already mentioned how I envy you and Kim. I wish I could be there too, but so many things were happening here. I understand your move to snap a pic of Mt. Hood’s snow peak–I wouldn’t resist either. The image of “buildings populated with memory-ghosts
whispering behind razor wire” is haunting. I have a student who is going to Portland in July for a writing workshop, and now I think I have to go there too sometime in the next couple of years. Enjoy the conference and “tgd weird city.”
Glenda, I have a friend in Portland right now attending a conference for her work. She wants to go to Ireland; I want to be paid to travel for work. ToMAYto, toMAHto…not really. These lines brought a point to my mind: “the view changes to crowds of lifeless
buildings populated with memory-ghosts
whispering behind razor wire.” I shared a photo where you can see part of it. When my companions and I went to the Peace Wall in Belfast, it was like the scenery and temperature changed. There’s literally a daycare center outside of the wall…as well as a liquor store across the street! We saw the razor wire, still went inside. Memory-ghosts were the writings on the wall, literally! Razor wire to extend the wall upward to keep people from throwing things over. Surreal! Thank you for sharing.
Glenda,
I love “populated with memory-ghosts whispering behind razor wire,” and I wonder if it is intended to be “memory-ghosts” as written or if the hyphen is supposed to be an em dash? Either way, it reminds me of New Orleans.
Best,
Thank you,All, for today’s words, lines, images! I will check back in the morning and greet you with a new prompt.
Let there be softness
Let there be light eastern clouds
and fuzzy socks.
Let there be muscle
winning against
gravitational pull of inertia.
Let there be a fume
of caffeine–
mightier even
than the moment
lip touches cup.
Let there be morning.
Allison, what a beautiful poem! Love each line that skillfully marks “eastern clouds,” “gravitational pull,” and “a fume of caffeine.” Yes, let the be tomorrow–“Let there be morning.” Each day is our travel time on this side of the universe. Thank you for this gem!
Oh, let there be, indeed. Each stanza is a lovely stage of morning coming to be. That muscle is unexpected and such an intentional move to choose and be able to pull oneself toward the coffee, toward another day.
Allison, these lines were so beautiful and contributed to the feel of a magical morning in this poem:
“Let there be muscle
winning against
gravitational pull of inertia.”
Allison, your poem brings me abundant hope and peace in things as simple as socks and coffee! I love mornings and your poem is gorgeous.
“Let there be softness” just ushered in a slew of memories from when my 23-year-old son was little and only wanted to wear “softy pants,” AKA pants with a drawstring. Thank you!
Leilya, loved your poem, and I’m green with envy over your Italy trip. Next year is last year teaching, and I am eagerly anticipating booking this trip soon after!
Show me a place where Austen to used to roam
Stone-set streets and quiet little homes
English tea roses and garden full of gnomes –
That place known as jolly old England.
Show me castles looming over the moors
North of London by a few scant hours
Where my hero Charlotte may have tended her flowers –
That place known as jolly old England.
Show me a theater, fully in the round
Where Will may have tipped a barkeep half a crown
And was known as the famous playwright about town –
That place known as jolly old England.
Castles and royalty, muddy, thick Thames
Crown jewels sparkling, crusted in gems
Royals rose gardens, with thorny green stems –
That place known as jolly old England.
Wendy, how I love your description of “Jolly old England,” and I recognize places you name. I haven’t traveled much in Europe, but was lucky to visit England (Scotland and Wales along the way) a few times because my children live there. I especially love your stanza about the Globe Theatre “fully in the round / Where Will may have tipped a barkeep half a crown.” Thank you for this lovely, warm poem.
Hi Wendy,
I believe in your plans and love the “Show me” that pulls us right in. I can say this for certain, the last year for me FLEW BY because I was not wanting to get to the end. I pray that you enjoy every moment of your final year. And then, get ready for all the places the world wants to show you, but your first stop sounds like it will be England.
🥰
Wendy,
Love the nod to Jane Austin and other writers. I like to imagine what the places they roamed felt like and have visited some. They are touristy now, but we have books to keep the imagination sparked.
Wendy, this show me echo is a lovely way to beckon scenes of place. All the books and stories that we as readers and English teachers have shared with hundreds of students yet haven’t needed to physical be in any. The past, the castles, the jewels, the gardens, the heartbreak have always been on the page for us to turn. No passport needed.
Summer is for traveling right? Leilya, thank you for this prompt. I’m going to deviate slightly from the prompt; not to talk about my perfect getaway, but a recent travel experience I didn’t know I needed. So many connections to your poem: surprised evenings, walks to nowhere important, and the gelato I never got! This is just a poem of rambling thoughts. Free verse-let’s go with that.
Northern Ireland
15 days of studying abroad:
Political, religious, and cultural division, The Troubles.
Pounds, euros, expensive to exchange.
Protestants, Catholics, Others.
Controlled, Catholic-Maintained, Integrated, Special, Irish Medium, so many.
University is high school, pastoral care and religious education provided.
Still light at 9:05 pm!
Cool weather, the one week of summer in May we missed. No A/C, but didn’t need it.
Rainy days, green everything.
Cobblestones along the way, dilapidated fortresses once were solid.
Shrek, Fiona (inside joke).
Breathtaking Giant’s Causeway, a sneaky trip to The Peace Wall in Belfast, expletive included, St. George’s Market-better than Buc-ee’s, Ulster American Folk Park with a slave house, so much culture!
A few Arkansas ties, thankful for no humidity! Pics with 1,000 words coming soon.
Jessica, I loved how you took us on a tour of Ireland with you through your words and imagery! I hope you had a wonderful time!
Jessica, I wish I could do a study abroad when I was a student. I think itis such a wonderful opportunity to learn, explore, and travel. It sounds like your trip was packed–thank you for narrating all the things your experienced, including “The Peace Wall in Belfast, expletive included, St. George’s Market.” Looking forward to the pictures. Maybe, you can include them tomorrow or on Monday 🙂
Love the rambling!! I did pretty much the same about our trip and just kinda stopped before it got too long.
i fell in love with Ireland and we didn’t make it to Northern Ireland (or many other parts), but we definitely plan to go back.
i would love to mix study with travel—I felt we learned a lot of on our tours and through immersion, but your trip sounds amazing.
This captured so much of what we saw:
Jessica, how wonderful that you had this opportunity to explore and share scenes of Northern Ireland here in these lines of place woth little commentary of an insider woven in. Sweet.
Leilya, thank you so much for hosting! I enjoyed this prompt. Your upcoming trip sounds like a wonderful adventure in the making. Wishing you safe and happy travels and all the gelato and strong coffee and Italian sunsets!
Thank you, Lori! 🙂
“Grand” Vacations
Papaw Hillard, Daddy’s dad, didn’t like leaving home,
so he never vacationed with us;
but he would drive me to surrounding counties
to watch my cousin Steve play baseball…
Just the two of us, in the cab of his work truck,
stopping on the way to the game for a bottle of pop.
Granny Faye, Daddy’s mom, loved a good trip
to anywhere.
She rode in the backseat
with my sister and me.
We marveled how she could read
a book, on those curvy mountain roads,
from our hometown to Gatlinburg,
without getting carsick.
Daddy forbade her from smoking in the car,
even with the windows down;
but she never complained.
She bought us souvenirs,
paying with bills folded up in her
quilted wallet.
Between shops, she snuck smoke breaks,
leaving lipstick stains on her cigarettes.
She lobbied to see the show
with the Elvis impersonator;
but we ended up at Tommy Barlett’s Water Circus
where she oohed and ahhed along with the rest of us
as Tommy Bartlett and his crew
waterskied barefoot
on the little man-made lake.
Grandma Noplis, Mom’s mom, traveled with a bucket
of cleaning supplies,
no matter where we vacationed,
donning rubber gloves and scouring
the hotel bathroom
before we were allowed to use it.
She wore homemade polyester pantsuits
and sensible shoes.
She and Grandpa called their suitcases “grips,”
and, when we crossed busy streets
in strange towns,
she always gripped our hands
so fiercely
the bones in our fingers nearly cracked.
Grandpa Noplis, Mom’s dad, preferred museums,
walking slowly from exhibit to exhibit
his hands clasped behind his back
reading every single word on every single placard
while we all waited impatiently…
raring to move on to the go-cart track
or the Fudge Factory; and
even though Daddy and my Uncle
vied for the check,
Grandpa always insisted on
paying for everyone’s breakfast
at the pancake house.
Looking back,
those were grand vacations…
three generations
traveling together
making memories
to last a few lifetimes at least
Lori, this was just lovely! Loved the play on grip, and your story of Grandma Faye especially struck me the way that she sublimated her desires really shone through — you portrayed her character in such an interesting way. Loved the characterization of Grandma and Grandpa Noplis, too. Such an interesting take on this prompt — I loved this poem!
Lori, those were really “grand” vacations! Thank you so much for introducing us to Papaw Hillard, Granny Faye, Granma and Grandpa Noplis. They all are such distinct characters, and it seems as though I am spending some time with each one of them. Your Grandpa Noplis reminds me of my husband who always picks up the check for any meal when the daughters and grandkids come to visit. Your final stanza sums up these invaluable memories.
‘”Grand” Vacations’ is such a sweet title. How special to have had four grandparents,and to take trips with them. Wow! I love the details that help us get to know them. Your grandpa paying for the pancakes, the quilted wallet, and the homemade polyester pantsuits are just few of the memorable ones. Fun! I love the last line, as it brings to mind even future generations who will hear the stories.
Yes! These are wonderful memories and you are so lucky to have such adventurous grandparents. I love the stories you tell in your poem. I would have enjoyed meeting them.
Lori,
I have such a sense of your voice. You do an amazing job telling stories. I read that part about cleaning hotel rooms to Kim and she said her MIL was the same way! OMG! I could never handle that. Anyway, love the poem.
Lori, you tell the story of memory so vividly I feel I was there. This takes me to my mother in law, who also had a bucket and would even wipe down the telephone.
Grandma Noplis, Mom’s mom, traveled with a bucket
of cleaning supplies,
no matter where we vacationed,
donning rubber gloves and scouring
the hotel bathroom
before we were allowed to use it.
This is just puts the icing on the cake with description, and I can see the suit and shoes.
She wore homemade polyester pantsuits
and sensible shoes.
I love your stories of family and what you remember. This is gold.
Been a busy day. I bought a new computer and “fell down the rabbit hole” of figuring it out. Thanks, Leilya for your prompt today. My poem needs some more work as I would like to make it rhyme. But….
Road Trip Wishes
I think I would take a road trip
and drive up the California coast.
Playing songs by the Beach Boys
while breathing in the fresh air.
I think I would start very early.
Have to get past crowded LA
then see the Channel Islands
as they peek through the fog.
I think i’ll look at Carpenteria
where I camped years ago
and find out how much it has grown
since 1959 – not like I remember.
I think I will drive on Hwy 1
along the windy cliffs of Point Conception
through sleepy towns along the bluffs;
Jalamu Beach and the lighthouse at Point Arguello.
I think I will stop after a few days
at Pismo Beach and put my feet in the water
near where I met my love in a sand dune
and knew my heart would stay there forever.
This was such a beautiful portrait — I loved the last two lines, especially!
Susan, I love how you mapped out your road trip “up the California coast.” The Beach Boys songs sound just right for this purpose. i like all the places you mention–from the Channel Islands to Carpenteria, to Point of Conception, to Jalamu Beach. But I am mostly attracted to Pismo Beach where you met your love and knew you “heart would stay there forever.” Thank you so much for taking us along on your ride.
I absolutely love this! It reminds me of a poem I wrote about all the places I’ve never been in my home state of California.
I hope you will get to return to the beautiful Pismo Beach where you met your love!
🩵
Susan,
This is a perfect poem for me to read as Sunday my husband and I are heading to the PCP and driving south, hopefully as far as Santa Barbra. We have a new car, which should make the trip fun. I’m hoping for poetic inspiration during our trip
Thank you, Leilya, for the push to right about our recent trip to Ireland. We have the travel bug now and hope to do Italy next . . . someday. I love your snapshot of that treasured place.
Ireland . . .
An island of endless patchwork quilts
of verdant greens stitched
together by ancient stone walls
Its people with their lilting accents
that turn every conversation into music
with every word wrapped in warmth
The ubiquitous pubs,
whether on every corner in cities
or in every pasteled streetscape in a village strip,
filled with unpretentious people,
uproarious laughter, easy conversation,
the clink of Guinness glasses,
all backgrounded by buoyant music,
vocals highlighted by the fiddle, tin whistle, and Uilleann pipes.
Narrow roads flanked by stone walls
camouflaged by green moss and lichen,
sometimes draped with a fuschia dress of protection
make travel even more of a challenge
for those use to the other side of the road,
other side of the car.
Beehive huts, primitive places
forged by monks during The Dark Ages,
Within these ancient stone shelters,
monks safeguarded language and learning
for generations to come.
Terrain of all types,
some overlooking serene lakes
while others buffeted by the ravaging Atlantic.
Trip of a lifetime.
Actually, I hope not.
~Susan Ahlbrand
20 June 2026
Oh I love Ireland! You have captured so much of it in this. The opening three lines remind me of my first glimpse by airplane.
Susan, I love your vivid details, especially in your second stanza: “their lilting accents / that turn every conversation into music / with every word wrapped in warmth.” And I love love the end: “Trip of a lifetime. / Actually, I hope not.” (I always shake my head when people use the expression “this was the best day of my life” because I always want to say, uh, what about tomorrow or the next day or the next…?)
Susan, Jessica, too, wrote about Ireland, Northern Ireland. I saw your Facebook posts about the trip, and now you beautifully sketch the places and people in this poem. I am so happy to read how you view people “with their lilting accents / that turn every conversation into music / with every word wrapped in warmth.” I have been in the UK trice , but not in Ireland (my daughter and her husband live near London), and I noticed the narrow road and sometimes scary turns where one of the upcoming vehicles has nowhere to go, but somehow techy find the way.
I want to go to Ireland! Your rich description of the sounds of music, laughter, and clinking Guiness glasses are just the perfect sensory imagery to bring the poem alive. Add the green grasses, the stone walls, and the water and it’s just stunning. Oh, what a beautiful place to be! Love this so much.
How wonderful, Susan. You have such insider, firsthand details that only a traveler or poet would see and carry from eyes to the page. I am with you in the beehive hit and fuchsia dress and toasting you with a Guiness that we actually had in Parma…because we were aching for that pint even among all the delicious wine. Hugs and gratitude for bringing us to Ireland in your poem.
Rooster’s early morning call
soft cool breeze through the window
I never wake up this early in my other home.
Quickly dressing, brushing my teeth and hair, then
I walk to the bakery.
Fresh pandesal still warm.
Coffee with brown sugar and a drop of evaporated milk
Pandesal slathered with homemade peanut butter.
It doesn’t get better than this.
A short walk to the church compound to walk some laps.
Later I brace myself
before going to crowded, noisy market
Home again to read
Vendors walk past hawking their wares
“Taho”. I quickly get up, grab my coin purse.
Another vendor call “Tilapia”.
When she sets down her tub, I see they are still jumping.
She cleans one for me.
More reading after lunch.
A siesta follows.
Umbrella in hand, visit to Ms. Ellie, retired principal.
It’s too hot to just sit. “Let’s get some halo halo.”
We exchange stories of students
different worlds, but very similar.
Soon it’s the end of the day,
I go home thankful and satisfied.
Tomorrow will come with its blessings.
Cayetana, you had me at this: “I walk to the bakery. / Fresh pandesal still warm.”
This walk and getting freshly baked bread reminds me of my home back in Crimea so much. I would love to “exchange stories about students with you.” Thank you for writing today with us!
I love the image of the fresh fish still jumping at the market! This is a delightful glimpse into a beautiful place.
Love this poem for the scenes and snapshot of a day in the life and the visit with Ms. Ellie to exchange stories.
Hi Leilya,
What a beautiful way to enjoy life. Have a fantastic vacation. Your poem should be part of their travel advertisements because it sure makes me want to go.
I got stuck in a cleaning project this morning and will offer a draft of a poem that I know I will come back to at another time.
Back story:
A close friend visited this incredible destination and suggested it to me since I am now retired. It sounded amazing. However, she is one who can afford any amount and when I looked into it a little more, I quickly realized it is OUT OF MY BUDGET for now. But who knows what may come someday.🙏🏽
My Golden Shovel strike line came from a message on the website: An extraordinary world forged by the elements preserved by coral reefs.
Imagining a destination beyond my wildest dreams; the
French Polynesian vacation paradise at The Brando…
A private resort on the Tetiaroa atoll. An
island reserved for travelers seeking an extraordinary
experience. Removed from the real world
surrounded by private plunge pools forged
in seclusion for every villa. Restaurants by
consultants with Michelin finesse. Green sea turtles and the
surprises of humpback whales thriving in their tropical elements
A cultural gem with its history preserved
Travel from Tahiti 20 minutes by
a private plane and find tranquility in a sanctuary of coral reefs.
©Stacey L. Joy, 6/20/26 (draft)
Oh, wow, Stacey, that does sound extravagant. A private plane, of course! Fun to think maybe you’ll go there someday; if you want to! I love the details of the Michelin consultants, sea turtles and humpback whales, private pools. So exquisite!
Oh, Stacey, talk about budgeting for the travel. I just looked at the price for the taxi from the airport to the hotel, and it is well over $100, so we’ll have to learn the metro and bus systems. That private resort “on the Tetiaroa atoll” does sound like a place that is beyond my dreams too. Sounds amazing with Michelin’s restaurants, sea turtles, and private plane. Let’s keep dreaming 🙂 Thank you for writing, friend!
Stacey, this sounds like a trip to paradise! I loved your use of the golden shovel. It wove through the poem perfectly.
My perfect gateaway
With the one I love
To a beautiful place unexplored
Sitting at a cafe
With crowds hustling through
On a beautiful summer
Where the only thought on my mind is you
In this magical place
To explore the sights
To find a place that speaks to us
To capture the magic and freedom
To freely be who we are
To be together
Through this time of adventure
We see the sandy beaches
We see the gorgeous buildings
We see and meet amazing people
We see the prettiness of the world
But most importantly
We see the beauty of our love
Adnan, you wrote version two of my poem! Isn’t it a blessing to be in “magical place” with the one you love, “But most importantly, We see the beauty of our love,” But perhaps, the most powerful line is, “To freely be who we are/To be together”. Thanks for sharing,
Oh, Adnan, this is so lovely to imagine your perfect getaway place is where your loved one is with you. It is just amazing to watch you two through the eyes of your poem enjoying the sights more because you are with each other.
Adnan, what a sweet poem that captures the love you both share. I truly believe that any place may seem beautiful to you because you have each other, and then you notices all the great things about it: the sandy beaches, the gorgeous buildings, and amazing people. Thank you for writing and sharing!
Adnan, I love your poem and the imagery you used in it. It made me feel like I was right there with you.
This is pure love and so genuine. I hope you will share it with your loved one. Love, love, love!
Leilya – I don’t think I’ll have a moment to write today or tomorrow – but I couldn’t let the afternoon go by without telling you how much I loved your poem. It would be the poem I would love to have written – no guide book ever captured Florence the way your poem did – and your last line was just perfect. 💕
Oh, Ann, thank you so much! Your words are always a poem to me. Do what needs to be done. I am glad you stopped by to read and think about the poems even for a brief moment.
Leilya, thank you for hosting and I hope you are having a summer of gelato-based experiences.
getaway identity crisis
rest, read, sand in toes–waves crash
sweat from laying
hike, up, down, counting steps–waterfalls trickle
sweat from moving
food crawl, sensory, spicy–hydrating gulps
sweat from eating
rejuvenating adventures
novelties, always travel-curious
Stefani, thank you for sharing your packed with movement summer in this poem. As I read, I felt as if I am rushing to catch up with you as you rest, read, and hike “counting steps” (something my Fitbit does for me, and I love seeing the numbers grow with each step). Stay “travel-curious” and keep moving! Thank you 🙂
So much sweating with all the work of play! I love “always travel-curious” and “food crawl, sensory, spicy–hydrating gulps”
Stefani, I am really taken by your first line and appreciate the repetition of sweat throughout your poem. Love the idea of a food crawl and being travel-curious.
Stefani,
You captured the summer getaway with the sweat tied to the vacation verbs, specifically those midwest meat sweats! I think sweating is underrated as a reflection of the things we value, especially the hiking!
This sounds tropical and lovely. Sweat from humidity and all the moving around with water and spice. Love it…I want to go!
Stefani, I just returned home from my husband’s tennis tournament where he played and I sweated!!!! I really enjoyed your poem. Your word choices helped me see all the action.
midnight rendezvous
moonlight glows
waves lap our toes
Barb Edler
20 June 2026
Thanks for your lovely offering today, Leilya!
Barb, there is something special about moon reflections on water–especially as a rendezvous. Thank you for sharing today.
Barb, a dream setting in just a handful of words: “moonlight glows” are especially created for “midnight rendezvous.” Thank you!
Barb, what a sensual lovely haiku. Each line, each image is so rich.
Barb,
Makes me feel like it is a stretch off your backyard, down by the Mississippi. Does the Mississippi have enough waves for that? The quality of the rhyme and near repetition give it that wave feel. Short, and evocative.
So sensory, Barb – and sensual! Talk about a getaway! So few words but so lovely.
Barb, the rendezvous is a perfect getaway! Love the sensory feels!!
Not only a special place…at the water’s edge; but also a magical time…midnight! Your poem sets the scene.
Barb,
Gorgeous imagery. I hope to have waves lap my toes next week, but for now through your words I see you on the shores of the river w/ a boy having fun.
The Perfect Getaway
My perfect getaway today
is coffee and soup from a ritzy grocery store,
a full service carwash, and the local library.
Men sit here,
reading newspapers and being fat.
Have they all figured this out before me?
That this place awaits?
Air-conditioned, brimming with interest,
away from to-do lists and full houses?
I am learning that my mind needs solace.
Lots of it.
Time to daydream and plan
and wonder and write and collect.
Time to listen to the hum of distant children,
not mine to wrangle.
Time to hear the hum of a vacuum
that I don’t have to push.
Time to be glad
that I don’t have to touch chalky dry newsprint
if I don’t want to.
I can gather myself here
and bring my whole self home.
Nora, your lines:
“Time to hear the hum of a vacuum
that I don’t have to push”
Really call to a modern-day vacation/break–away from the normalcy of life and with no cares (at least for the short-term). Thank you for sharing today.
Nora, you made me smile with the question of yours:” Air-conditioned, brimming with interest, / away from to-do lists and full houses?” Some men know how to get away from the house chores and children 🙂 Enjoy your perfect getaway today, and Thank your or sharing this place of escape.
Nora, it’s a blessing to reach the point in our lives where we can say what you wrote so succinctly here:
“I am learning that my mind needs solace.
Lots of it.
Time to daydream and plan
and wonder and write and collect.”
Keep this on your to-do list, and you’ll continue to thrive in all areas of life. Self-care will get you there!
Thanks for the reminder. Take care!
Thank you, Anna, for highlighting that awareness! Good plan.
Nora,
I love the library and the way you capture the nothing and everything that happens there. It is such a refection of the being in the eye of the proverbial literate storm. I really like the articulation of gathering to return home. Sort of rings in a spiritual nature.
Thank you, Rex. I appreciate your insight that it is a spiritual practice. I agree!
I don’t have time to write today but just loved your poem, Leiyla, and wanted to say so! Thanks for taking me to Florence today. 🙂
Thank you, Kate! You are so kind. I hope you will find a minute tomorrow. 🙂
Leilya. I love your prompt and your poem. I can picture the “gold light shining on old buildings.” My poem took a slightly different turn.
Why the Okie set out for Californi’
Because things gotta be better out there.
Because cousin Lester done went.
Because mamma got TB.
Because the air is dry out there.
Because the well went dry.
Because Bessie dried up. Ain’t no milk.
Because pickin’ cotton is cotton pickin’ fool’s work.
Because the boll weevil.
Because the mighty wind.
Because the dust.
Because the bank took the farm.
Because the gov’ment took the rest.
Because it’s gotta be better than this.
Because things gotta be better out there.
Katrina, I like the turn you took. Reading this poem brought me back to Karen Hesse’s Out of the Dust, which paints the same harsh Dust Bowl landscape of dust, loss, and forced migration. The repetition here echoes that same sense of inevitability as if leaving becomes the only choice left. I hear you: “Because it’s gotta be better than this.” Thank you!
mmmmm. I love the repetition in each line and of the first/last line. It evokes persistent hope.
Wow, Katrina, what voice and power in the details of the migration out west. So powerful. The consistent, rhythmic drumming of the Because line beginnings and accent you used are so good.
Currently, I am lazying down
stream with Tom’s Crossing
by Mark Z. Danielewski, a
mammoth 1,200 page western
that drifts along unmoored
in pace and time, a story about
two boys and two horses that
I’m really really enjoying, but I
find that
I’m also longing for the rapids
and dropoffs, the strainers and
entrapments and recirculating
hydraulics of the next Gray Man
thriller – Mission Critical – by
Mark Greaney.
So, I guess there are worse
things than being on vacation
and sometimes dreaming
of another one.
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Leilya, thank you for your prompt and mentor poem. This sounds lovely: “gold light resting on old buildings” and you and your husband “walking nowhere important.” Just beautiful!
Isn’t that just like us, “being on vacation and sometimes dreaming of another one?” Nothing like a good book paired with water.
Scott, thank you for taking us on a brief tour with books you read. It is nice to have the break and enjoy reading without a rush, even if it is “a mammoth 1,200 page western.”
I, too, often find books like a perfect vacation destination, especially in the comfort of our homes. I am reading the fourth novel from Before the Coffee Gets Cold Boxset by Toshikazu Kawaguchi now, and I have a few others on my night stand waiting. Thank you for writing in between the pages of the mammoth. 🙂
Scott, what a great take on the perfect getaway prompt. I’m with you! I always look forward to my next book. I was happy just yesterday when I was reminded that I had a book on my Kindle I had purchased that I hadn’t started yet. I opened it right up. Also, thanks for the bonus book reviews!
Greetings!
Wish you were here—
Wincherster, WI
Lakeside Loon-A-See
Relaxing cabin getaway
Enjoy boat rides, water sports
Nighttime campfires
S’mores made with peanut butter cups
Quiet mornings, writing poetry
Watching the sun rise
over the lake.
Warm wishes, Us
We’re coming soon,
Just five more days!
Can’t wait to join you.
Thanks for having us, again
See you soon, Guests
©️Jennifer Kowaczek June 2026
Leilya, thank you for today’s post! I’ve been writing poetry since January 1st, one poem a day, but after the death of my mom in late April, I fell behind in May. I’m playing catch up (and I have a lot of catching up to do) but always write the current day’s poem first. Thank you for making today’s practice attainable. My family will be joining friends at their Wisconsin cabin later in the week so this poem pretty much wrote itself 😊
Jennifer, I am so sorry for your loss. Sending hugs and peace to you.
Your poem felt like it had written itself, and I would love to enjoy all the things you list (except for s’mores with peanut butter cups lol), and especially
“Quiet mornings, writing poetry
Watching the sun rise
over the lake.”
There is something in the sunrise that any gorgeous sunset can’t beat–it’s the promise of a new day.
Enjoy your Wisconsin cabin with and friends! Thank you.
a poem a day sounds like a lovely idea. Thank you for that. I am needing direction.
Jennifer, my condolences on the death of your mom. Writing a poem a day is mending and cathartic, as I’m sure you are experiencing, thus the catching up you are doing. All the best to you in this endeavor.
Lakeside Loon-A-See is such a fabulous play on words! So fun. The place and experience sound absolutely wonderful! Enjoy!
Summer in the Upper Peninsula
With sixteen hours of daylight, we’ve got time—
to wake up slow, wander into the kitchen,
percolate a cup of espresso,
and slide a loaf of sourdough into the oven.
To play a sleepy game of cribbage
before taking the dogs for a walk,
the sun on our faces,
the lake breeze at our backs.
To bask alongside the birds,
the wildflowers, and the woodland creatures
until it’s warm enough
to brave Lake Superior.
Holding your breath before the jump,
knowing the cold will steal it from you anyway.
Then letting everything go,
because nothing matters
except this moment.
Watching fish dart beneath your toes
and freighters push steadily toward the horizon.
It’s summer in the U.P.,
and there’s no place
I’d rather be.
You may daylight hold everything possible in so many specific scenes of summer basking. The freighter is the only glimpse of fall pushing its way in to remind summer fades. Lovely poem.
Haley, I’m loving the alliteration of the Bs and Ws of this stanza: “To bask alongside the birds / the wildflowers, and the woodland creatures / until it’s warm enough / to brave Lake Superior.” Thanks for crafting and sharing this!
Oh, Haley, I am falling in love with the U.P. the way you narrate it–so beautiful, relaxing, restoring. Love “percolating espresso” (I am about to go and make me another one). You’ve created such a rich imagery with the sun, the breeze, the birds, the wildflowers. Then that glorious moment:
“Then letting everything go,
because nothing matters
except this moment.”
I want this moment, and I crave this freedom. So delightful!
I love how you described a day of your perfect getaway and it sounds wonderful and magical. I have never been to the U.P. but this sparks a desire for me to go.
Haley, I feel the joy and lightness here in being present in these lines
Then letting everything go,
because nothing matters
except this moment. I’d love to visit the UP at some point and you bring the best of the feels!!!
Haley,
this is a great description of the UP and I love my vacations up there. This makes me miss it so much and I cant wait to go back
Leilya,
Thanks for the prompt, and the opportunity for me to get fired up about another return to the Park. I have a son and daughter both working out in Yellowstone again this summer, and I can’t wait to breath the air again!
YELLOWSTONE
The soul infusion
first birthed more than forty years ago,
driving through Bozeman,
through Paradise Valley, Yankee Jim Canyon,
then Gardiner, and Teddy’s arch
a quarter mile from the Northeast Entrance.
Every summer a stripping away,
stripping the heavy frock of midwest moist corn sweats
for sweet rarified air
of the Gallatin
and Absaroka ranges,
humidity traded for the wings of thermals
sewn into a Montana sky that carried him on its shoulders
like a father caught in a child’s enthusiasm.
And the coyote lopes a dance of hopeful perusal
across the Old Faithful parking lot…
The bison, one of hundreds, wallows in dust beds
in the quiet of Hayden Valley…
The wolf pack stalks in synchronicity
in the Lamar Valley…
The elk move along the Madison River,
caught in the sound of rapids and distant campers…
The grizzly sow and cubs move on a hillside
by Phantom Lake, celebrating scents in the air…
The pools, fumaroles, and geysers of the Upper Basin
bubble clouds of steam, wet and tinged with sulphur.
All becomes a symphony,
whispered on the breeze through the lodgepole pines…
And the young man finds a verve,
in the double meaning of inspiration:
a Valhala,
a warrior’s spirit,
…the newness of home
redefined.
Rex, I have not been to Yellowstone yet. I enjoyed your symphonic imagery of all of the animals that dwell there.
After watching some part of the TV series, I have an altogether different scene I bring to the title and recognize some site names, and then I am so grateful for the turn toward wings pf thermals and bubble clouds as symphony. Such a sense of knowing here that only you could have written this poem, this cameo of a father echoed in Old Faithful and the young man. Beautiful.
Rex, thank you for bringing me to Yellowstone. It’s still on my list, and I hope to be there while I still enjoy long walks.
Love the way you introduce the place with “humidity traded for the wings of thermals
sewn into a Montana sky.” I like how you “show” us the Yellowstone’s habitat: the coyote, the bison, the wolf pack, the elk, and the grizzly with cubs. Love that the latter are “celebrating scents in the air,” such a neat remark. You’ve created the symphony with your words in this poem. I am a bit envious you get to go there every year with your son and daughter 🙂
Thanks for helping me return today!
Rex, your poem is rich with images, places and sounds. I love the closing lines and message. Provocative piece!
Leilya, your prompt is so timely for me, as I’m leaving for a trip tomorrow. I should be packing, but here we are!
Travel Calling
By Mo Daley 6/20/26
The cobblestone streets
of ancient Strasbourg
the uncanny cry
of a Kenyan hippopotamus
the Northern Irish epenthesis
in film, farm, and arm/filum, farum, and arum
the sunburnt serenity
of vast Australia
the lemony lushness
of lazy Amalfi
the dizzying drama
of Disneyworld
all call me,
but today, the call from my couch
is stronger
Oh what a lovely contemplation of all the places you carry with you, and it seems a poem is a perfect place to confess they rest with you on the couch in Illinois until the next departure. Excited to follow your travels.
Mo, that is a great way (and a blessing) to be able to muse all the places you’d like to visit. The call from your couch knows you need tons of energy for the upcoming trip, so rest and gain that strength. Love the word play, alliteration, and consonance (wow!) in this part:
“in film, farm, and arm/filum, farum, and arum
the sunburnt serenity
of vast Australia
the lemony lushness
of lazy Amalfi
the dizzying drama
of Disneyworld”
Thank you!
Love the way your poem delivers all the wonder of travel! I feel that calling from the couch!
Leilya, I am going to join you in Tuscany today. I could see the gold light reflecting off the Duomo from the balcony of my fantasy apartment. Thanks for the free ticket!
Ponte Vecchio
On this fresh, spring morning let’s take a walk down the cobbled stones of Florence.
First, we stop at the nearest cafe for a schiacciata (prosciutto and cheese sandwich) and a bottle of chianti.
Then we cross the Ponte Vecchio where the laughter and freedom of youth fills the air.
On both sides of the bridge, we see stunning displays of leatherwork, handblown class, and watercolors – vibrant reflections of the beauty that surrounds us.
As we ascend, the fragrant wisteria and roses greet us in the Boboli gardens.
We settle down on a shaded spot of verdant grass, passing the bottle between us,
Never wanting this moment to end.
Shaun, I love that you buses “we” in this poem. So inviting to talk us on a stroll of an extended moment of imagining. Cheers.
Shaun, you make me want to go today to walk “the cobblestones,” to taste a “schiacciata,” and “cross the Ponte Vecchio.” I am definitely going to find some gardens to enjoy roses, wisteria, and other flowers. What a delightful image you’ve sketched here! Thank you!
Thank you, too, for being me along! I could just picture the cobbled stones, that sandwich and chianti!
Shaun, you’ve captured this perfectly! Your vivid details paint the “walk down the cobbled stones of Florence” so beautifully, and I love the line, “where the laughter and freedom of youth fills the air”!
Paradise Persists
It is still there
Despite everything
The island withstands
Human and Mother Nature
It’s been heard about
Talked about
Written about
Spoken about
To get there
To see it
To walk it
To feel it
Paradise in passing
From one hop to another
Not by choice, but by order
It’s time to fly
Unlikely never again
But, glad that I’ve been
Unlike the men who rest
Where Paradise Persists
Thank you, Matt! I am not sure whether you you mean some place (I can’t quite pinpoint), but from your poem it is a bittersweet place–a paradise that “withstands Human and Mother nature.” For some reason, I think it might be a place of the military base in another country because the speaker is there “[n]ot by choice, but by the order). This sober feeling is a bit more intensified for me because there are “the men who rest” in that paradise.
Thank you for your comments. The place is Wake Island.
Matt, I am so curious about this paradise and glad you experienced it. Your capitalization adds some personification that is also intriguing. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for your comments on my use of capitalization. My poem is about Wake Island
Your first line holds so much meaning, “It is still there”. The word “still” hooks your reader, and sends them wondering what is happening at the place.
Thanks Juliette
Matt,
this is an interesting place to me and I would love to learn more about it and visit it
Thanks Alicia. Best opportunity to visit comes with government involvement.
Good Saturday Morning, Friends! I am looking forward to read more poems throughout the day in between reading through the writing pieces of my Summer Institute participants. In anticipation of my trip, and to write along with you, I drafted another short verse:
Pre‑Flight Butterflies (or The Art of Waiting)
The flights are confirmed,
the train seats chosen,
the outfits folded
and the suitcases zipped.
Now each morning, after rising,
I check the date again.
Three more days—
Just three more days—
Yes, and we’ll be off
toward warm Italian shores.
As you post your poem and read the poems of our teacher friends, please, respond to at least a few of them if you have a minute. Thank you! 🙂
This sums up the anticipation of an exciting upcoming trip! I like the title “Pre-Flight Butterflies”. 🙂
Leilya, so fun to include SI teachers. Welcome. There are SIs happening all over the country, and the Open Write is certainly a low stakes way to nurture your writer self. Love the title here pre flight butterflies because of all the metaphoric work that comes with the butterfly and the way travel changes us before, during, and long after an actual visit. See the Italian shores are already doing their magic on you in this poem.
I can feel your excitement!
Nowhere and Everywhere
A place where there is a rustle of trees
and the taste of warm tea
a cool breeze
my wife beside me
Where time stands still
present in the moment
no need of frills or a thrill
communing with the One like an Ent
Many things of course I want
food, drink, leisure, and pleasure
but these things do not satisfy nor satiate
the longing for that place where I am
But One person can
It is here
It is there
The place is nowhere
and yet it can be everywhere
Brian, your poem reminds me of one of the poem I wrote a couple months ago with an idea that home is where my loved ones are. I understand that in any place where we have that special person, we find a perfect getaway. For your (your speaker), it is your dear wife–“One person” giving you that feeling of being complete and happy. Thank you for sharing!
Leilya, thank you for your comment! As I have grown up (even though I never had to move) I always had the sense that home is where my people are. My wife indeed makes me complete 🙂
Brian, I admire how well the narrator shows the importance of being present in a moment. The provocative closing lines add emphasis and joy.
The ending lines where what came first! Being present is something that I have been working hard on for the past few months being very busy, if anything I am writing to remind myself to check in and make sure I am in the present!
Present in the moment is such a wonderful center of your poem, Brian. Sweet love poem!
Thank you Mo! Writing is a lot easier with muse.
Brian, what I take from your poem is it’s simplicity and the honest expression of what matters to you. “It is here, It is there…” the last stanza holds so much meaning.
Thank you Juliette! The last stanza is what I was most happy with in what I wrote, and I am glad it resonated with you!
Late nights listening to a band I never heard of
Dancing with friends in the moonlight
Until my legs are too tired and I lay on the cold grassy ground
The weekend has just begun
Early mornings breakfast before anyone else wakes up
Calm. Slow. Reading a book I just found
Teeth chattering with a warm cup of coffee
Counting the minutes slipping away from me
Friends wake up and the music begins all over again
Guitars, harmonicas, and voices fill the quiet morning air
We plan our day slowly with workshops and bands
Time stands still for awhile
Walk to the stage sore from the previous night
Lay down a blanket and stare at the clouds passing by
Until the music forces me to get up and dance
Time passes too quickly
Good imagery, Corrina. You paint a mental picture of a musical festival that is is a lot of fun!
This captures the most beautiful exhaustion of packing in pleasure and slowing time to keep the weekend music from silencing. Fun.
Corrina, I am mostly connecting with these lines: “Early mornings breakfast before anyone else wakes up / Calm. Slow.Reading a book I just found.” Thank you for reminding how we would go for loud music with friends and dances through the night. Enjoy while you can–time passes to quickly indeed 🙂
Love the sounds here
Kevin
Leilya, this was fun! I love imagining you with your small cups of coffee and the beauty and culture of Florence around you. I’m so glad you get to go very soon!
Last year I missed an anticipated trip
and, now, I want to go.
I’ll visit Charcoal Kilns,
Badwater, and Stove Pipe Wells.
While there, I’ll visit Natural Bridge
and Dante’s Ridge;
Salt Creek, Coffin Peak
and Furnace Creek;
Devil’s Golf Course
and Devil’s Cornfield;
the Funeral Mountains
and Teakettle Junction.
Wait, maybe I should
choose a date
in the future—
like the WINTER solstice
to visit Death Valley.
Denise, thank you for joining us today (and always!). As I read, all those stark, almost ominous place names–Coffin peak, Furnace Creek, Devil’s Gulf Course, Devil’s Cornfield, and the Funeral Mountains–surprised me. I didn’t recognize the geography right away and thought they are from some horror movie :), so I found myself waiting for the reveal. When I saw “Death Valley” at the end, everything clicked for me. You built a perfect suspense that paid off beautifully, and then capitalizing “WINTER” also did some heavy lifting here. I imagine that it is best to visit a place that feels really like a furnace only in winter. Let us know how it goes in another poem sometime 🙂
Oh, the best plans make for the best poem here. So many places swimming between commas and semicolons, each punctuation mark signaling anticipation and intention until that dash of aha to set the perfect date. Beautiful.
I love the mystery and the irony of your poem. You have us wondering where you want to go and upon the reveal, you take a turn, “Wait, maybe I should / choose a date / in the future– / like the WINTER solstice / to visit Death Valley.”
I love the playful tone and the way the narrator reveals the place at the close. I hope you get there! Sounds amazing!
I love the varying locations that you list, and makes me want to better explore the world and all the beauty it beholds.
What Poe-esque place names, Denise! They make me want to know their origins and history. This was fun to read, in a light-hearted dark way, especially the last stanza. Good idea to wait-!!
Denise, your poem made me curious about all the places you mentioned. I love how the names of the various sites at Death Valley contribute to your poem. I wanted to read it aloud just to hear the sounds of all those strange locales. I’m so glad you shared!
Denise,
Visiting Death Valley during winter solstice would be amazing. I love that you named so many specific places that create a picture in my mind.
Leilya, thank you for this amazing prompt. I saw your Louisiana Writing Project meets New Orleans Writing Marathon post yesterday and would love to participate in that sometime. I treasure my memories of Grub Street in Boston. I’m in Portland with Glenda at The Stafford Challenge Poetry Conference, and we’ve been out meeting people on the streets, so I used that to write my poem today.
Taking Notes
Glenda and I went people-ing
on the streets of Portland
asking folks
What’s your favorite thing
to do here?
then smiled for quick snapshots
to remember these kind souls
Ellie likes parks ~ waterfalls and Pioneer Square
Josh likes fishing ~ salmon and rivers
Joe likes running and showed us to a garden
Cheriss likes staying home (she attracts dead ancestors)
Arthur yawns ~ he likes sleeping
Higinio likes remembering Venezuela and Miami
Librarian poet Leslie likes reading and eating Ethiopian food
Matt likes adventure ~ camping on Mt. Hood (he has a feral cat named Big O)
Scott’s favorite thing to do is eat
we are all a human tribe~
how can we not be filled with
such a vast love,
this diverse and unified living of life?
Kim, I so envy you and Glenda, but my Summer Institute that culminated in the new Orleans Writing Marathon wouldn’t allow me to join you.
I love your street interviews with a question about favorite things to do–this is such a fun way to learn about people in new places. I like all your “characters” and especially the parentheticals. People often tell us more about themselves than they realize.
yes, I agree, we are a human tribe, so versatile yet unified. Say hi to Glenda, in case she misses the prompt today 🙂
I feel as if I have met some of these folks now too. Portland doesn’t feel so far off anymore – I love the humanization and closing question.
Kim, what an engaging poem. I love how you completely pulled me into the experience!
Kim, your Portland people-ing excursion sounds most intriguing. We all have so much to offer one another – beginning with our stories and caring about others’, as illustrated here. Hope you and Glenda have so much fun at the conference!
I hope you do something really cool with those snapshots and snapshots of these kind souls!
I would love to be traveling about with you two power women/phenom poets!
Kim, your interviews with your new friends made for a vibrant poem, capturing so many moments of connection. I hope you and Glenda are having the best time ever!
Thanks, Leilya, for a lovely way to start my birthday. Our family celebrated last week because my daughter has business travel this week. Such “gettaways” is what sparked this poem.
Beach Walks
Walking along the beach
Just walking and talking
Not there to swim
Not there on a whim
But to share the time with my Honey.
He’ll be wearing a small brim hat
Probably a shirt, usually sky blue.
We’ll be watching the kids and the birds
Assembling around noon, alone or in herds
Giggling and chirping, having fun in the sun.
Watching the powerful waves
Splashing or crashing in the wind
Wondering how they know where to stop.
Slooping and slopping, stooping and watching
Tiny plants sprouting through crumbly rocks
Wondering why I bothered to wear purple socks.
Happy-happy Birthday, Anna! Hope today is filled with blessing and joy that will follow you throughout the year. In your poem, you describe the perfect beach walks that I enjoy with my husband as well. We, too, don’t go there to swim–just to walk, talk, and enjoy time together.
I love these lines, where you skillfully place kids and birds into one image sketch:
“We’ll be watching the kids and the birds
Assembling around noon, alone or in herds
Giggling and chirping, having fun in the sun.”
Thank you! Enjoy your special day.
Anna, I love your imagery of the beach it’s exactly what I think about when I’m there. I need to go to the beach soon to lay on the sand and take in my surroundings.
You describe being on the beach so serenely and powerfully! The mixture of calm and play was a joy to read throughout your poem (love the line about purple socks!)
Your poem made me reminisce about my own times on the beach. It makes me want to go back! I had the same thought you had on one of my trips to the beach, but my socks weren’t purple!
Your description of the beach makes me miss the beaches of Florida from which I just came back from. I love that you got to experience it with the one you love as I did too.
Thank you Leilya, you took me to Italy! I appreciate your prompt and for taking me back to a place I love, Wli falls, in the Volta Region of Ghana. In my low moments, I take myself there, on memory lane just for a respite to savor the experience .
Nine Bridges
Hours of driving
drawing from the views
teasing us with nature
miles and miles of green
some wild, some tame
farms, quaint rice paddies
steep circling roads, take us
to the place we await
There, with a chaperone,
for the one mile trek
over streams, rickety
man made bridges some
now worn concrete or
moving, aged planks
on the nine bridges we
pose, chaperone duty
turns photographer duty
Trudging through the
growth, following the
path, thankfully made
by previous travellers
walking expectantly
till the gushing sound
meets us!
An enchanting waterfall
in the middle of nowhere
surrounded by
lush tropical forest!
An experience I still hold!
Thank you, Juliette, for taking me to your home. Like you, I tend to go to my Homeland when I feel down; it is the place that helps me rebound. The hours of driving are so worth it, and then that wonderful surprise:
An enchanting waterfall
in the middle of nowhere
surrounded by
lush tropical forest!”
Wishing you peace 🙂
Juliette, thank you for sharing the location (I looked it up after I read your poem). I appreciate how you note you are taken to this place during your low moments–how amazing an experience of lived memories to be able to lift your spirits up in the present.
Juliette, your poem takes me right back to my walk in the treetops of Kalyn National Forest. Such a magical place! Thank you for awakening those memories for me.
“aged planks
on the nine bridges we
pose”
Something about those lines really intrigued me
Kevin
Leilya,your prompt, as the summer season officially begins, is both timely and speaks to may heart. You poem takes me right back to a piazza is Sicily where the coffee was strong and the love was overflowing. My space is just a dream, but fashioned from real memories of people I love to be around who can no longer be part of my beach dream reality for different reasons. Yet, I know I and they would find peace and happiness, together, at the sea. I look forward to reading more poems when I get home tonight.
They arrive with smiles, knapsacks,
Stepping out of busy lives,
Returning from beyond,
Grabbing coffee, sitting briefly
Before the sea calls to them, too.
Returning sun-kissed, windblown
Momentarily carefree, to share
On the porch after sunset,
Over tea, in the swing,
On indefinite walks, at sunrise,
Over elaborate sandcastles
On a rainy night, sunny morning,
Momentarily sharing my dream
Returning to the salty memories, life
Before pressures, busy live, sweet memories
Grabbing a towel for one last dip before
Returning to share memories, dreams
Stepping slowly, back to the sea
They leave my dream.
Oh, Anita, your poem takes me to my favorite dream place to be; it is where all my loved ones are together. I love that you bring everyone to the “beach dream reality,” where they are “sun-kissed, windblown,” and “carefree.” The repetition of “returning” to share memories and dreams give me hope for another returning. Love these lines:
“Returning to the salty memories, life
Before pressures, busy live, sweet memories
Grabbing a towel for one last dip before”
Thank you! I want to plan a trip to your dream place.
I appreciate your imagery and inspiration of dreams! Your choice of language reflects it well speaking of memories, ‘sun-kissed’, ‘sharing my dream’, and the choice of being called back to sea resonated with me. Normally we think of the sea as calming but here it seems like you use it as a way to ‘return to the chaos’ or ‘stormy sea’ of life. Thank you for sharing!
So simple and yet so beautiful, Anita. You’ve described the perfect place with such lush imagery. I can so relate to your poem
Leilya, have a fabulous trip to Italy. I still dream of our trip there almost 20 years ago. Gelato was my favorite. I was also on the quest to find the best tiramisu. I’m still searching every chance I get.
This prompt helped me to write a poem about our recent trip to the Olympic peninsula in Washington.
A Walk to Port Townsend
I hear
chirps of Pine Siskin hiding in the bushes,
watch seeds of cottonwood
fly like moths on cotton wings.
I hold
the view of Pacific waters chanting
over wishing stones, calling
my name
to inhale.
Open a door
to a free poem-of-the-day—
Here is Pádraig’s “Our Lady of the Garden”.
Thank you, universe, for all this time with you.
Thank you, Margaret! I, too, will be on the look out for Gelato and tiramisu.
How I love the images and sounds in your poem and the way the waters call your name “to inhale.” And, of course, you find the door leading to “a free-poem-of-the-day”–this so you. 🙂
Your vivid language of Port Townsend is both specific to the place, but connects with elements of nature we all admire, making me want to vacation there! Thanks for sharing!
Good reflection of the Pacific Northwest. Puget Sound’s beauty is one of a kind. Your selection of images brought up my own memories.
I’m drawn to the opening lines of your poem’s stanzas. “I hear…” “I hold…” “Open a door…” So beautiful. And you were “Our Lady of the Garden” as you read this poem in one of the greenest places in North America.
I like the “I hear” and then “I hold” starts to the first two stanzas, ending with an open door, Margaret.
Leilya, what a wonderful invitation this morning! And what a wonderful glimpse you’ve given us of “somewhere in Florence.” It makes me want these sights, sounds, and tastes alongside the gold and shadows of old buildings, too – most of all the unhurried pace, the slow savoring. I wish you a wonderful journey – I so sense your anticipation!
You prompted a memory for me. I attempt to relive it here…
Third Anniversary, 1988,
in the Parsonage at the Cape
(Before we knew we were
expecting our first child)
We wake
that August morning
with the tiny window AC unit
roaring full blast
sun glimmering gold
at the edges
of the thick old shade
in the wide old window.
For a minute
I imagine
living in 1915
when this rambling house
was new
and the closets
(before someone
built tacky paneled ones
over them)
were only two feet deep
just big enough
to hold couple of blouses
and skirts
maybe two pairs of shoes
one for every day
and one Sunday best
but as my bare feet
cross the wide-plank floor
I brace myself
for reality.
Twisting the
patinaed-metal knob
pulling the bedroom door
humidity pouring over me
like bathwater
—how did they stand it, years ago?
And then, on rising, you say
Today
we will get
away
The Bay
is only two blocks down
but we have learned
in August
the sand
holds the heat
like an oven
and the water
is too warm
to be any respite.
So, clad in bathing suits
and shorts
we toss towels into the car
and head north
to Ocean City
for the one and only time.
Strange, how a degree
of latitude
brings relief…
stiff breeze off the water
not too many people
voices and radios
pleasantly muffled by the wind
drifting wild cries
of seabirds high above
wafting fragrances
of Coppertone and Banana Boat
a cup of salty vinegar fries
from a boardwalk stand
and the wide silver-blue sea
stretched before us
like our future.
Grasping hands,
we plunge into
the startling-cold depths
gasping
laughing
never letting go
in the crashing icy throes
until my teeth are chattering
and I’m thanking God
over and over
for every wondrous shiver.
Fran,
I love the reminiscence of this poem. I, too, love waking in an old house. We try to find them for our vacations. The feel of an old house is so much more comforting than a stark hotel room. Your poem takes me with you with all of my senses.
Thank you, Fran, for kind wishes! But most of all, thank you for this beautiful memory. As I read I was there with you, in that room with a blasting AC and a tiny closet and then followed you on a getaway to the bay.
I love water, so my favorite image:
“and the wide silver-blue sea
stretched before us
like our future.”
You are a master of imagery!
Wow, Fran. Your close is a wonderful shiver. Love the imagery and tactile details that draw the reader completely into this wonderful experience. Gorgeous poem!
Fran, we are right there with you in the relief from the heat, this perfect getaway for you and your dear hubby. So beautiful. You have captured the sweet relief of being cold when you’ve been so hot.
Fran, such a lovely moment to bring us along and feel the water and the splash of young(er) love. Those shivers of love in all the warmth of togetherness just warm my heart, and I sense the thrill of love in this beautiful place, in these glorious moments. As always, beautiful!
I want early mornings where
the sun is shinning through my tent
the birds are chirping
the crackle of the pine heat up my morning fuel
nature is my home for the week
I want late nights where
the damp earthy smells put a smile on my face
the flickering embers of the fire are a calming sight
i hear the rustling leaves in the distance
i crawl into my warm cocoon to recharge my battery
camping is my safe space
where i can recharge and enjoy
Alicia, give me the early mornings and birdsong, too – and all the restorative power of nature. Such a beautiful, beckoning poem. Just reading it gives me a “recharge.”
I wish I enjoyed camping. You make it sound so cozy. I do love a good fire pit on the cliff of a mountain with “deep earthy smells” and “flickering embers”.
Good morning, Alicia! You narrate such an enticing camping adventure that I want to join you to see the sun “shining through the tent,” to hear the birds, the rustling leaves, and other nature sounds. “Camping is my safe space” reminded me of one of my students who recently said that “it’s better to hug a tree than to see an angry person.” Thank you for rich imagery and such a beautiful invitation to your campgrounds!
Alicia, camping is my safe space too (I’m camping right now) I love your imagery of “the crackle of the pine”. There’s a peace to camping that you can’t replicate in any other way.
Thank you, Leilya, for reminding me of these long walks from last summer on the eastern side of Nova Scotia with my wife and dog.
Kevin
The beach was empty
at the break of day
but for us – she and I
quiet and contemplative
as our dog bounded laps
among the coastal waves,
a game of hide and seek
within lunar shifts
with the sun breaking
of night to rise;
the view to forever,
unbroken for miles
Thank you, Kevin, for narrating the quiet morning beach walk. This is the best time to be there. Love “a game of hide and seek / within lunar shifts;” it makes me want to join your company.
What a gift, being on an empty beach with the beloved and your dog – the closing lines are especially beautiful. They glimmer with strength and hope.
We traveled to the Pacific Northwest and I experienced the “view to forever”. I yearn to go to Nova Scotia! It is the homeland of the Acadians who live in our area of Louisiana.
Kevin, early morning beach visits are truly restorative. I love watching the sun rise and always feel the most peaceful when everyone else is still asleep. Being alone in nature is a truly powerful experience.
What beautiful and unique language, Kevin:
Every time I am in a borrowed home,
I try on the bodies of varied dwellers,
belly that barely fits through the bi-fold
shower door, ankles resting on a bed’s
edge, lips match the remains of almost
clean goblets once filled with Grenache.
Then, I see my cellulite hip lumps through
a steamy mirror, bunion angles under
sheets, taste blood from chipped stemware—
we can only borrow for so long
other imaginations until we return to self,
who I am is destination,
place to return to again.
This: “I try on the bodies of varied dwellers”
Wow, Sarah. A great line.
Kevin
Sarah, thank you for responding to this poetry invitation first. Your poem carries wisdom of and experienced traveler and a reflective thinker. Yes, “we can only borrow for so long” and the final two lines make me come back to them again and again. “Who I am is destination” is a profound realization. Love it!
Sarah, the imagery is just gorgeous – even in every imperfection described. Fascinating concept of trying on “the bodies of various dwellers” and the mention of blood drawn from a chipped cup – so symbolic of life, all of it. Then self as destination, a place of returning, with the implied comfort of familiarity – to me this speaks to living the writerly life, the endless imaginings and wanderings until at last we come back to self to rest. Beautifully written!
I enjoy how you try on another body then realize that the only body you have is your own. Acceptance can be a hard but necessary step toward healing ourselves.
Sarah, I love the perspective shared here, the imaginative thoughts transferred through physical objects and the provocative close. I can imagine your height can cause some challenges when traveling abroad.
Sarah, in your fresh sabbatical life you make such a meaningful metaphor for living in other people’s places. “we can only borrow for so long / other imaginations until we return to self” Yes, to that perfect getaway destination–self.
So much imagery and emotion in these compact lines. I continue to envy your ability to capture so much so beautifully.
We went to Ireland a few weeks back, leaving North America for the first time ever and now I have wanderlust! I have always traveled a lot through reading, but to experience the beauty of a foreign land first hand really got under my skin.
is just wow.