This is the Open Write, a place for educators to nurture their writing lives and to advocate for writing poetry in community. We are here every month. We’ll be here today, tomorrow and Monday. This month Leilya Pitre has a series on “Summer Escapes & Small Adventures.” Next month, the Open Write is July 18-20.

Our Host

Leilya Pitre lives in Ponchatoula, LA, a small town celebrated for its strawberries. She teaches and coordinates the English Education Program at Southeastern Louisiana University. Preparing future English teachers, she hopes they become caring, competent, and effective educators. She is an editor and contributing author of Where Stars Meet People: Teaching and Writing Poetry in Conversation. Her other books are devoted to teaching young adult literature in high school. Leilya loves people, cultures, and their rich traditions. She reads, writes, listens to music, visits her children and grandchildren, and enjoys traveling with her husband.

Inspiration

Summer invites us to slow down, wander a little, and imagine places we want to go. Sometimes, a getaway is a plane ticket across the ocean. Sometimes, it’s a porch swing, a favorite chair, a hidden café, or a quiet morning with nowhere to rush. This June, I am dreaming of Italy with its morning espresso, warm stone streets, late sunsets, and long conversations over pasta and wine. Maybe, even a whispered “Andiamo” before boarding another train. We are leaving right after the Open Writes, and I am getting so excited. Where would you go if you could leave tomorrow?

Process

Write a poem about your perfect getaway or escape. It may be real or imagined, near or far away, luxurious or wonderfully simple. It may be a place from memory, hope, or longing.

You might want to describe what you see, hear, smell, and taste. You may write as a postcard, travel journal, or free verse poem. You could also focus on one small detail that makes the place unforgettable. 

As always, you may ignore the prompt completely and write about anything you would like to share with us.

Leilya’s Poem

Somewhere in Florence

I want mornings
with tiny cups of strong coffee,
windows open to warm air,
and church bells chiming softly
into the streets below.

I want evenings
that arrive with surprise,
gold light resting on old buildings,
my husband beside me,
both of us walking nowhere important.

Let there be gelato,
late dinners in small piazzas,
and someone calling ciao bella
to no one and everyone at once.

Your Turn

Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may choose to use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers.

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kim johnson

Leilya, thank you for this amazing prompt. I saw your Louisiana Writing Project meets New Orleans Writing Marathon post yesterday and would love to participate in that sometime. I treasure my memories of Grub Street in Boston. I’m in Portland with Glenda at The Stafford Challenge Poetry Conference, and we’ve been out meeting people on the streets, so I used that to write my poem today.

Taking Notes

Glenda and I went people-ing
on the streets of Portland
asking folks
What’s your favorite thing
to do here?
then smiled for quick snapshots
to remember these kind souls

Ellie likes parks ~ waterfalls and Pioneer Square
Josh likes fishing ~ salmon and rivers
Joe likes running and showed us to a garden
Cheriss likes staying home (she attracts dead ancestors)
Arthur yawns ~ he likes sleeping
Higinio likes remembering Venezuela and Miami
Librarian poet Leslie likes reading and eating Ethiopian food
Matt likes adventure ~ camping on Mt. Hood (he has a feral cat named Big O)
Scott’s favorite thing to do is eat

we are all a human tribe~
how can we not be filled with
such a vast love,
this diverse and unified living of life?

Leilya Pitre

Kim, I so envy you and Glenda, but my Summer Institute that culminated in the new Orleans Writing Marathon wouldn’t allow me to join you.
I love your street interviews with a question about favorite things to do–this is such a fun way to learn about people in new places. I like all your “characters” and especially the parentheticals. People often tell us more about themselves than they realize.
yes, I agree, we are a human tribe, so versatile yet unified. Say hi to Glenda, in case she misses the prompt today 🙂

Anna J. Small Roseboro

Thanks, Leilya, for a lovely way to start my birthday. Our family celebrated last week because my daughter has business travel this week. Such “gettaways” is what sparked this poem.

Beach Walks

Walking along the beach
Just walking and talking
Not there to swim
Not there on a whim
But to share the time with my Honey.

He’ll be wearing a small brim hat
Probably a shirt, usually sky blue.
We’ll be watching the kids and the birds
Assembling around noon, alone or in herds
Giggling and chirping, having fun in the sun.

Watching the powerful waves
Splashing or crashing in the wind
Wondering how they know where to stop.
Slooping and slopping, stooping and watching
Tiny plants sprouting through crumbly rocks
Wondering why I bothered to wear purple socks. 

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Leilya Pitre

Happy-happy Birthday, Anna! Hope today is filled with blessing and joy that will follow you throughout the year. In your poem, you describe the perfect beach walks that I enjoy with my husband as well. We, too, don’t go there to swim–just to walk, talk, and enjoy time together.
I love these lines, where you skillfully place kids and birds into one image sketch:
“We’ll be watching the kids and the birds
Assembling around noon, alone or in herds
Giggling and chirping, having fun in the sun.”

Thank you! Enjoy your special day.

Juliette

Thank you Leilya, you took me to Italy! I appreciate your prompt and for taking me back to a place I love, Wli falls, in the Volta Region of Ghana. In my low moments, I take myself there, on memory lane just for a respite to savor the experience .

Nine Bridges

Hours of driving                                                                  
drawing from the views
teasing us with nature
miles and miles of green
some wild, some tame
farms, quaint rice paddies
steep circling roads, take us
to the place we await

There, with a chaperone,
for the one mile trek
over streams, rickety 
man made bridges some
now worn concrete or
moving, aged planks
on the nine bridges we
pose, chaperone duty 
turns photographer duty

Trudging through the 
growth, following the 
path, thankfully made
by previous travellers
walking expectantly 
till the gushing sound 
meets us! 
An enchanting waterfall
in the middle of nowhere
surrounded by 
lush tropical forest!
An experience I still hold!

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Juliette, for taking me to your home. Like you, I tend to go to my Homeland when I feel down; it is the place that helps me rebound. The hours of driving are so worth it, and then that wonderful surprise:
An enchanting waterfall
in the middle of nowhere
surrounded by 
lush tropical forest!”
Wishing you peace 🙂

Anita

Leilya,your prompt, as the summer season officially begins, is both timely and speaks to may heart. You poem takes me right back to a piazza is Sicily where the coffee was strong and the love was overflowing. My space is just a dream, but fashioned from real memories of people I love to be around who can no longer be part of my beach dream reality for different reasons. Yet, I know I and they would find peace and happiness, together, at the sea. I look forward to reading more poems when I get home tonight.

They arrive with smiles, knapsacks,
Stepping out of busy lives, 
Returning from beyond,
Grabbing coffee, sitting briefly
Before the sea calls to them, too.
Returning sun-kissed, windblown
Momentarily carefree, to share
On the porch after sunset, 
Over tea, in the swing,
On indefinite walks, at sunrise,
Over elaborate sandcastles
On a rainy night, sunny morning,
Momentarily sharing my dream
Returning to the salty memories, life
Before pressures, busy live, sweet memories
Grabbing a towel for one last dip before
Returning to share memories, dreams
Stepping slowly, back to the sea
They leave my dream. 

Leilya Pitre

Oh, Anita, your poem takes me to my favorite dream place to be; it is where all my loved ones are together. I love that you bring everyone to the “beach dream reality,” where they are “sun-kissed, windblown,” and “carefree.” The repetition of “returning” to share memories and dreams give me hope for another returning. Love these lines:
Returning to the salty memories, life
Before pressures, busy live, sweet memories
Grabbing a towel for one last dip before”
Thank you! I want to plan a trip to your dream place.

Margaret G Simon

Leilya, have a fabulous trip to Italy. I still dream of our trip there almost 20 years ago. Gelato was my favorite. I was also on the quest to find the best tiramisu. I’m still searching every chance I get.
This prompt helped me to write a poem about our recent trip to the Olympic peninsula in Washington.

A Walk to Port Townsend

I hear
chirps of Pine Siskin hiding in the bushes,
watch seeds of cottonwood
fly like moths on cotton wings.

I hold
the view of Pacific waters chanting
over wishing stones, calling
my name
to inhale.

Open a door
to a free poem-of-the-day—
Here is Pádraig’s “Our Lady of the Garden”.
Thank you, universe, for all this time with you.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Margaret! I, too, will be on the look out for Gelato and tiramisu.
How I love the images and sounds in your poem and the way the waters call your name “to inhale.” And, of course, you find the door leading to “a free-poem-of-the-day”–this so you. 🙂

Fran Haley

Leilya, what a wonderful invitation this morning! And what a wonderful glimpse you’ve given us of “somewhere in Florence.” It makes me want these sights, sounds, and tastes alongside the gold and shadows of old buildings, too – most of all the unhurried pace, the slow savoring. I wish you a wonderful journey – I so sense your anticipation!

You prompted a memory for me. I attempt to relive it here…

Third Anniversary, 1988,
in the Parsonage at the Cape
(Before we knew we were
expecting our first child)

We wake
that August morning
with the tiny window AC unit
roaring full blast

sun glimmering gold
at the edges 
of the thick old shade
in the wide old window.

For a minute
I imagine
living in 1915
when this rambling house
was new
and the closets
(before someone
built tacky paneled ones 
over them)
were only two feet deep
just big enough
to hold couple of blouses
and skirts

maybe two pairs of shoes
one for every day
and one Sunday best

but as my bare feet
cross the wide-plank floor
I brace myself
for reality.

Twisting the
patinaed-metal knob

pulling the bedroom door

humidity pouring over me
like bathwater

—how did they stand it, years ago?

And then, on rising, you say
Today

we will get 
away

The Bay
is only two blocks down

but we have learned
in August
the sand
holds the heat
like an oven
and the water
is too warm
to be any respite.

So, clad in bathing suits
and shorts
we toss towels into the car

and head north

to Ocean City

for the one and only time.

Strange, how a degree
of latitude

brings relief…

stiff breeze off the water

not too many people 

voices and radios
pleasantly muffled by the wind

drifting wild cries
of seabirds high above

wafting fragrances
of Coppertone and Banana Boat

a cup of salty vinegar fries
from a boardwalk stand

and the wide silver-blue sea
stretched before us

like our future.

Grasping hands,
we plunge into
the startling-cold depths

gasping
laughing
never letting go
in the crashing icy throes

until my teeth are chattering

and I’m thanking God
over and over
for every wondrous shiver.

Margaret G Simon

Fran,
I love the reminiscence of this poem. I, too, love waking in an old house. We try to find them for our vacations. The feel of an old house is so much more comforting than a stark hotel room. Your poem takes me with you with all of my senses.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Fran, for kind wishes! But most of all, thank you for this beautiful memory. As I read I was there with you, in that room with a blasting AC and a tiny closet and then followed you on a getaway to the bay.
I love water, so my favorite image:
“and the wide silver-blue sea
stretched before us
like our future.”
You are a master of imagery!

Alicia DuBois

I want early mornings where
the sun is shinning through my tent
the birds are chirping
the crackle of the pine heat up my morning fuel
nature is my home for the week

I want late nights where
the damp earthy smells put a smile on my face
the flickering embers of the fire are a calming sight
i hear the rustling leaves in the distance
i crawl into my warm cocoon to recharge my battery

camping is my safe space
where i can recharge and enjoy

Fran Haley

Alicia, give me the early mornings and birdsong, too – and all the restorative power of nature. Such a beautiful, beckoning poem. Just reading it gives me a “recharge.”

Margaret G Simon

I wish I enjoyed camping. You make it sound so cozy. I do love a good fire pit on the cliff of a mountain with “deep earthy smells” and “flickering embers”.

Leilya Pitre

Good morning, Alicia! You narrate such an enticing camping adventure that I want to join you to see the sun “shining through the tent,” to hear the birds, the rustling leaves, and other nature sounds. “Camping is my safe space” reminded me of one of my students who recently said that “it’s better to hug a tree than to see an angry person.” Thank you for rich imagery and such a beautiful invitation to your campgrounds!

Kevin

Thank you, Leilya, for reminding me of these long walks from last summer on the eastern side of Nova Scotia with my wife and dog.
Kevin

The beach was empty
at the break of day
but for us – she and I
quiet and contemplative 
as our dog bounded laps
among the coastal waves,
a game of hide and seek
within lunar shifts 
with the sun breaking
of night to rise;
the view to forever,
unbroken for miles

Leilya A Pitre

Thank you, Kevin, for narrating the quiet morning beach walk. This is the best time to be there. Love “a game of hide and seek / within lunar shifts;” it makes me want to join your company.

Fran Haley

What a gift, being on an empty beach with the beloved and your dog – the closing lines are especially beautiful. They glimmer with strength and hope.

Margaret G Simon

We traveled to the Pacific Northwest and I experienced the “view to forever”. I yearn to go to Nova Scotia! It is the homeland of the Acadians who live in our area of Louisiana.

Every time I am in a borrowed home,
I try on the bodies of varied dwellers,
belly that barely fits through the bi-fold
shower door, ankles resting on a bed’s
edge, lips match the remains of almost
clean goblets once filled with Grenache.
Then, I see my cellulite hip lumps through
a steamy mirror, bunion angles under
sheets, taste blood from chipped stemware—
we can only borrow for so long
other imaginations until we return to self,
who I am is destination,
place to return to again.

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Kevin

This: “I try on the bodies of varied dwellers”
Wow, Sarah. A great line.
Kevin

Leilya A Pitre

Sarah, thank you for responding to this poetry invitation first. Your poem carries wisdom of and experienced traveler and a reflective thinker. Yes, “we can only borrow for so long” and the final two lines make me come back to them again and again. “Who I am is destination” is a profound realization. Love it!

Fran Haley

Sarah, the imagery is just gorgeous – even in every imperfection described. Fascinating concept of trying on “the bodies of various dwellers” and the mention of blood drawn from a chipped cup – so symbolic of life, all of it. Then self as destination, a place of returning, with the implied comfort of familiarity – to me this speaks to living the writerly life, the endless imaginings and wanderings until at last we come back to self to rest. Beautifully written!

Margaret G Simon

I enjoy how you try on another body then realize that the only body you have is your own. Acceptance can be a hard but necessary step toward healing ourselves.