Welcome. All are welcome to participate in the 5-day Open Write — from one day to all days, depending on your schedule. There are no set rules for the length of a poem, and you are free to modify or reject the prompts as you wish, allowing you to write whatever is on your mind or in your heart. We firmly believe that the best writing instructors are actual writers, and this platform offers a supportive environment for you to nurture your writing journey. Just scroll down to share your poem in the comment section. For more information about the Open Writes click here.

Our Host: Dave Wooley

Dave Wooley is an English, Journalism and Creative Writing teacher at Westhill High School in Stamford, Connecticut, where he has taught since 2001. He has served as a Co-Adviser for the school’s hybrid newspaper The Westword since 2003. He is also an adjunct Professor at Fairfield University, teaching Philosophy of Hip Hop, and a teaching fellow at the Connecticut Writing Project. Dave has been involved with the Furious Flower Center for Black Poetry as a participating scholar in its last three Legacy Seminars and he is one of the authors of Furious Flower’s newly created open access syllabus, Opening the World of Black Poetry: A Furious Flower Syllabus. He lives in Stratford, Connecticut with his wife and four children.

Inspiration 

January, after the revelry of the new year, seems like a perfect time for reflection. For a reset, perhaps. Or a time for thinking about purpose. Or perhaps, purposely not thinking about purpose!

At NCTE this past November, I went to a panel presentation on the excellent Chicagoland poetry anthology Respect the Mic and I was eager to bring some of those poems to my classroom. One piece from the anthology that really resonates with the idea of reflection and purpose is Leah Kindler’s poem “Why I Write Poetry”

After reading the poem, my students and I wrote our own “Why I _______” poems after Leah Kindler’s. My students found it to be a great exercise in reflection and in thinking about their own sense of purpose. For their own poems, I asked them to create at least 10 “Because” statements, modeled after the lines in Kindler’s poem, but I didn’t limit them to any specific number of lines. 

Process

Besides offering an opportunity for self reflection, the “Why I…” poems are a chance to write an “After” poem in the style of Leah Kindler (whose poem is actually written after Major Jackson), and a chance to write in the style of a list poem, while using anaphora as the dominant stylistic element of the piece. 

Feel free to stick to the “Because” statements at the beginning of every line or use a different phrase to begin your lines. 

Alternatively, another choice that embraces the use of anaphora, while still keeping within the framework of reflection is the poem “What You Talking ‘Bout” by Damaris Hill from her book Breath Better Spent. She uses direct address to confront her (younger) narrative persona and begins all of her lines with “you”. The effect is really powerful. Here’s an excerpt from the first stanza:

you scary all the time
you live in a world that don’t never make sense
you haven’t learned the currency of lies
you got honesty scabbed on your lips
you got scars on your face
you got worries, hot and blistered fright
you figure truth must taste like poison

So take this moment to reflect, reset, get deep, or be silly. As always, the choice is yours! 

Dave’s Poem

Why I cook…

Because ordering out is too damn expensive.
Because I tend to treat calorie counts like word counts and
cooking is the editor that I need.
Because the right mix of ingredients is alchemy.
Because nobody knows that cumin is the secret
ingredient in my barbecue chicken.
Because my kids miss my meals when they go,
so I know they’ll always come home.
Because I crave the feeling of making people happy.
Because I got served bland ass food as a kid and
I’m stopping the violence.
Because garlic and onions and peppers and salt dance in
a pan of olive oil and soften to one another in the heat.
Because it’s DJing, but I don’t have to be in the club.
Because it’s like the classroom–I cook there too.
Because every meal is a blank page that needs just the right words.
And because when we share a meal, we share each other.

Your Turn

Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe.

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Amber

Dave, I really enjoyed the idea of implementing anaphora.

I have fallen a bit behind in sharing poems each of these days, but it has been on my mind in the prewriting process. Somehow my poem ended up merging with a later prompt I had not yet written either. So, it’s cool to see the two prompts come together as one into this poem.

I took all the lines from text messages (including the title) and merged them to work together. I searched “maybe” in my messages and found that word is used often for me and those I text.

This was fun to write. I enjoy playing with words in this way. Thank you for opening up the space to write creatively.

Maybe They Are Fools (Two HaHa Crying Emojis)

Maybe you – maybe
maybe we hang out this week – go dancing or something
Maybe Friday, Sunday, next Tuesday! – Meet at 11, maybe later…
(Maybe she will think about it.)

Yeah. Maybe.
Maybe, if my dad will let me.

Then, maybe it’s not the time right now.
Maybe another time; some day!
Maybe for Spring Break in March.
Maybe next year…only 30 years.

Yeah. Maybe.
Maybe I’ll drink enough – gain some dance moves.
Maybe it’ll be the Jägermeister, maybe I’m born with it.
Maybe some of my energy can rub off on [others].

Maybe something simple: I can call you;
maybe just stick with that.

Yeah. Maybe.
(Maybe ask him???)
Then, maybe no maybes.

(Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.
Yes.)

Donnetta D Norris

Why I Care

you can be pretty and smart
you are much more capable than you know
you are not who you pretend to be
you are getting in your own way
you have untapped potential
you will use this some day

I don’t know how not to;
not every teacher will

1/23/24

Stacey L. Joy

Donnetta,
Oh, this is the heart of a caring teacher! And I love that the person you’re speaking to is not necessarily the top student in the class. I love this for so many reasons.
♥️

Meredith

you are not who you pretend to be” – yes!

Jessica Wiley

Let the church say “Amen” Donnetta! “You have untapped potential you will use this someday”. So many of our kids are in this dilemma. It only takes one person to notice, to care. Thank you for expressing this!

Glenda Funk

Dave,
Thanks for hosting. As others have mentioned, I love your reasons for cooking. They echo my own. If a little garlic is good, a lot of garlic is great. I like spicy food, too. ‘Preciate all the resources and look forward to exploring them. I took a little different approach, but the gist is the same, a why and because.

Post-Retirement Love Poem

Today I will drive 
across town to a 
school I called rival. 
&
Today I will implement 
a young ELA teacher’s 
lessons for AP Lang learners.
&
Today I will hear a 
young poet read her
spoken word verses. 
&
Today I will feel tears 
pool in my dimming eyes
when she asks, “Where do I fit in?” 
&
Today I will know the alchemy a 
life of learning sparks in a candle 
flickering & fading in dying light. 

Glenda Funk
1-22-24

Juliette

Thanks Glenda, For sharing what your day will be like in these succinct stanzas. This stanza touched me:
Today I will feel tears 
pool in my dimming eyes
when she asks, “Where do I fit in?” 

Dave Wooley

Love it! Thank you for such a beautiful reflective poem. Those last 2 stanzas–the imagery and the word choice evokes so much emotion.

Stacey L. Joy

I wish I could have written earlier because I had a ton of ideas this morning. This is what I deal with regularly so I decided to go with it.

Why I Fake Like I’m on a Call

Because she talks too damn much
and I don’t have time to listen to nonsense
Because I only have 42 minutes for lunch
and one quick question means I don’t eat
Because “Can I tell you why solar panels can help………”
and I can’t put a panel on a condo roof
Because I only like listening when it’s reciprocated
and I only like talking if you’re listening
Because I love to imagine those days when my Mom called
and we talked and listened and talked and listened
and no one ever interrupted

©Stacey L. Joy, 1/22/24

Glenda Funk

Stacey,
Im sensing the bad communication blues in your poem. When I talk to my sister I hear her asking “Are you there” frequently. I don’t really like talking on the phone. Loving this line:
Because I only like listening when it’s reciprocated
and I only like talking if you’re listening”.


Dave Wooley

Sometimes you have to do it! Time is precious and I feel your longing for meaningful conversation in this.

Donnetta D Norris

Stacey,
I find myself in similar situations with a particular person, but I’m apparently not smart enough to fake a call. (LOL)

Stacey L. Joy

Pull your phone out as soon as you see the person and just talk to yourself! 😂 Works every time!

Meredith

Wow. Being a good listener doesn’t mean you have to listen to everyone all the time! This was powerfully written and has a beautiful touching twist.

M M

Why I Try
Because I am too stubborn not to
Because the habits are engrained
Because the trying brings joy with the sorrow
Because my hope runs deeper than my fears
Because the future that follows is worthy the pain
Because you hold my heart and everything I want
Because I know you too well to believe the story you tell
Because God whispers, encouraging me onward
Because one day, someday will actually be here
Because I am strong

Leilya Pitre

Hi, M M! I like your “why.” Trying is a sign of strength, and you clearly demonstrate that. My favorite line is: “Because my hope runs deeper than my fears.” This is a great reminder that if we don’t try, we won’t see the outcome. Thank you for writing and sharing your thoughts today!

Dave Wooley

M M,
I love the balance of these lines–“the trying brings joy with the sorrow” is a great mantra!

Donnetta D Norris

Whoof!! So powerful. Someday does actually come. Your poem expresses the first 14 years of my marriage. Someday does actually come. Stay strong, but take care of you, too.

Jessica Wiley

M M, your repetition of “because” builds upon your argument of why you try. We have to “because” ourselves to death to awaken what has been dormant for so long. My favorite line: “Because one day, someday will actually be here”. That means there’s no time to waste.Thank you for sharing.

Stacey L. Joy

Hi Dave, what fun! I am bummed that it was a long Monday at school and the rain creates chaos for L.A. drivers. I will definitely write but I will be in the late group. I absolutely love these lines because my mother committed the same act of violence when I was little! 😂

Because I got served bland ass food as a kid and

I’m stopping the violence.

Thank you for a great prompt.

Dave Wooley

Hi Stacey, I’m glad you got the chance to check in, I’m looking forward to what you write!

Sharon Roy

Why I Ride My Bike

After Leah Kindler’s Why I Write Poetry 

I ride my bike
Because it is the freedom of childhood
Riding to the park with the neighborhood kids
Crossing Jupiter to buy candy 
At Ben Franklin’s 
Even though our mothers would never let us 
Cross a street that busy
Because even during the surreal days 
Of the pandemic’s long beginning
I could ride to the grounds
Of Laguna Gloria
And look through the gates 
And visit the statues,
Hoping that the giant man
Made of metallic pie tins
Was right to be looking up hopefully
Because on the way to work 
I can spy whimsical graffiti
And new cardboard faces stapled 
To electrical poles
Because I can stop and smell
The prickly pear blooms
Because I can snap photos 
Of the weird juxtaposed with the wonderful
And text them to family and friends
Because at the end of the school day
I can ride off and away from 
Any stress or conflicts
Because I can weave from side to side
Because I can flow along the trail by the river
Because I can find peace
Because I can fly

Sharon Roy

Dave Wooley

Hi Sharon,

Your poem is brimming with such vivid images and specific remembrances. I really like the rhythms that you create between childhood and pandemic and present and the spaces between your because statements and then the flurry at the end. “Becuae I can fly” is perfect!

Tammi Belko

Dave — What a great prompt! Sorry, I’m getting to this so late today. Can’t wait to use this one with my students. Loved all the imagery in your poem, especially this line “Because garlic and onions and peppers and salt dance in a pan of olive oil and soften to one another in the heat.”

For some reason my mind was on summer with this poem, wishful thinking I guess. I will definitely revisit this prompt.

Why I Collect Sea Glass in Summer 

Because sifting through summer sand is meditation,
time to reconnect with the world and just be
Because the fine grains ground me, humble me, pull me to my knees and there I search 
Because searching is an atonement that mends everything broken
Because I will discover rainbows to fill glass jars
Because sea glass is art

Sharon Roy

Tammi,
Thanks for the trip to the beach. Appreciate it on this cold, gray day. Love your use of the word humble. Love the line ” because searching is an atonement that mends everything broken.” It is both comforting and thought-provoking. I’m going to think about that line for a while.

Susan O

Yes, Tammi, we are on the same wave today by being on a shore. I like your line of “humble me, pull me to my knees…” It reminds me of prayer.

Dave Wooley

Tammi–

“Because searching is an atonement that mends everything broken” is such a beautiful sentiment, beautifully wrought. Wow.

Susan O

Why I walk on the beach in the morning …

Because I can breath salty air
while I watch the seagulls soar
and wish I was flying too.

Because I can get my feet sandy
after I splash in the water to test the coldness
and untangle the seaweed from my toes.

Because I can escape responsibility 
and smile while hoping to meet a fella
who is smiling back.

Because I can throw a ball into the ocean 
let the wind blow my hair
and run with the dogs playing catch.

Because I can sit in the sun
and read a book 
while I feel the warmth on my skin.

Because I can stop 
and warm my fingers around a cup of coffee
before I head home for the day.

Rex Muston

Susan,

Thank you for giving me such a visualization of the beach, especially on such a wintery yech Iowa day as today. I feel a blood pressure drop just thinking about it, and memories of being at Destin.

opager.judi@gmail.com

I adore your poem! It is truly a poem within a poem. I loved the stanza, “Because I can get my feet sandy . . . and untangle the seaweed from my toes” I could actually FEEL the seaweek!

Mo Daley

Ooh, Susan! It’s been so cold in Illinois the last couple of weeks! Your poem speaks to me on a cellular level today! I’m imagining that warmth on my skin right now.

Tammi Belko

Susan,

You and I and were thinking alike today except my beach is Lake Erie, and it will be awhile before I’m enjoying again. Love all the images in your poem, especially this stanza:
“Because I can get my feet sandy
after I splash in the water to test the coldness
and untangle the seaweed from my toes.”

Leilya Pitre

Susan, you had me with your “why” and the first stanza. I wanted to be right there walking alongside. Thank you for such a great visual poem!

Denise Krebs

Susan, what a lovely mini vacation I just took with you at the beach. Beautiful.

Dave Wooley

Susan,

There are so many great sensory images in your poem. i can almost taste the salt in the air and feel the seaweed in my toes! Even so, I love the use of the word “fella” because it evokes so much nostalgia and a real feeling of summer romance. This is a great poem!

Mo Daley

Why I Thrift
By Mo Daley 1/22/24

Because upcycling is all the rage in 2024
Because one man’s trash is another man’s treasure
Because I love a bargain
Because I have the eye for beauty
Because love the thrill of the hunt
Because I am as qualified to evaluate a gem as any appraiser on Antiques Roadshow
Because I want to cry when I find a hand-stitched tablecloth for $3.99
And all I can think of is the little old woman who lovingly and ardently embroidered it
And I can’t help wonder why someone she knew didn’t cherish it, revere it
And I think if I take it home it will be a kind of atonement
For my past sins

Maureen Y Ingram

Mo, I can totally relate to your emotional response to that hand-stitched tablecloth! “I think if I take it home it will be a kind of atonement/For my past sins” – felt that in my gut. I love thrifting!

Kim Johnson

Mo, this is a work of absolute beauty and love. The reasons you thrift are so heartfelt – – to repurpose something tossed aside and breathe new life into it, wrap your arms around it and love it is to be blessed. I love your expressions and sentiments, and I, too, love the thrill of the hunt.

Susan O

We are kin, Mo, when it comes to thrifting. I love the hunt and definitely find one man’s trash is my treasure. I am looking for old pieces of junk for my assemblage artwork. I can’t evaluate a gem but I definitely adore hand stitched items. Yes, there is some atonement because when you take an item home you have saved it. Why I walk on the beach in the morning …

Rex Muston

Mo,

I think the moment that captures it for me is the idea of being moved to tears by the tablecloth. I sorta feel tht way with certain songs on a playlist.

It goes even further when you really go into the backstory on why it is even there, why you need to buy it to come to terms with your donation disregards.

Tammi Belko

Mo,

I’m not a huge thrifter, but my daughter is and I occasionally tag along. You’ve really captured the feel of those thrift stores with the “hand-stitched tablecloth”. I love the mood of nostalgia you’ve created.

Sharon Roy

Mo,
Your poem takes us on a journey, emotionally. I like the juxtoposition between the fun and lightness of being an like “appraiser on Antiques Roadshow” to “I want to cry when I find a hand-stitched tablecloth for $3.99.” Strong ending: “A kind of atonement / for my past sins.” I feel the same way when I see old family photos in antique stores. Treasures of the past unmoored.

Denise Krebs

Mo, what a treasure. I love where you went with this, and that precious “ardently embroidered” tablecloth that no one has yet cherished or revered. Yes, it is lovely atonement.

Drew Denbaum

Why I Ask Why

If there’s really no point,
Why ask why?
In the onslaught of absurdity,
Why persist?
As others yearn for a ruler, however base or cruel or stupid,
Why cry out in despair?
Even as misery metastasizes around the globe,
Why care at all?
When the rock always rolls back down, crushing hope over and over again,
Why keep trying?
Perhaps there’s no rational answer,
Especially when we’re all bounded in this nightmarish nutshell.
Yet there is a crack
A sliver of light
A persistence of energy
Of love
That permeates the darkness
And makes meaning
Despite the emptiness.
And anyway,
If time isn’t linear after all,
We’ve already been through this before and survived.
Or not.
Whatever the answer,
Life revives in questions.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Oh, the rhetorical questions are so powerful here in their repetition and stirrings for the reader (me). I am captivated by the line breaks and focused on the lines that have economy like “Of love” and “Any anyway” and “Or not.” These brief phrases offer such tone, Drew. And that last line is something that I will carry with me this week: “Life revives in questions.” Yes.

Peace,
Sarah

Dave Wooley

Drew! Thank you for writing with us! I’m with you on all of your “why” questions and I love the turn. There IS always a “sliver of light”. I like that your poem at least entertains the possibility of a better tomorrow or at the very least, survival!

opager.judi@gmail.com

Breathtaking! It reminds me of what I wrote back in the late 60’s! Every line is a gem, an awakening

Tammi Belko

Drew,
Your questions are thought provoking. It feels like we are living in very dark times. I was especially struck by these lines:

“Even as misery metastasizes around the globe,
Why care at all?
When the rock always rolls back down, crushing hope over and over again,
Why keep trying?”

clayton moon

The Toginani – Man

Why is the Toginani – Man becoming extinct?

Because:

The driveway castles disappeared.
Dragons gave up fire – for tears.

Swords reverted to sticks,
       Bikes rusted from lack of tricks.

War paint dried in puddles,
   Backyard football forgot how to huddle.

Hot wheels sit motionless,
     Kings stare—- emotionless.

Everything “simple fast”- overpopulating,
            Technology artificially inoculating.

The Toginani- Man is dying,
            And Queens are denying!

Attacks of aliens, armies, and monsters,
          Are losing to Unnatural plotters.

The “look at me” survived pinecone grenades,
      As he drowns in empty cups of lemonade.

Good-bye Toginani-Man,
    I’ll cherish the castles of sand.

I’ll raise my branch for glory,
     Breathe, breathe! as I tell this story!

The dragon’s fire shall return,
                       As Make-believe towns will burn.

Design and innovate,
Children call on him to create!

He can only live within you,
Allow him to shine through.

Toginani-Man creates fascination,
                       Do let him die….. encourage IMaginaTion.

                                               
·       Boxer 

Kim Johnson

Oh, I should have known you’d define the Toginani-Man there at the end in your ever creative rearrangement of letters. I got the gist in the first few lines, then the shift from childhood to adulthood, then the defining of imagination. What a cleverly-written poem. Love it!

Tammi Belko

Boxer,

Your poem is beautiful and bittersweet. Loved the rhythm and rhyme and wonderful images: “War paint dried in puddles.” The passing of childhood and dwindling imagination reminded me of Toy Story.

Jessica Wiley

Thank you Dave for hosting today. Your poem resonated with me because “ordering out is too damn expensive”. I love all the imagery in your poem. “Stop the violence” with bland cooking and throw some “razzle dazzle” in the mix. Last week I was snowed in and I cooked more than I ever had. Did I enjoy it? No but I love to eat! But we had to eat and going out wasn’t an option, so to the kitchen I went. And today is another day to be tacked on at the end of the school year. <Sigh>. I decided to go really deep today because that’s where I felt I needed to be. Releasing some things so that I can go forward with my life.

Why I Cry
Because the seeds I have sown need to grow.
Because joy comes in the morning.
Because I don’t want to drown in my sorrows.
Because my cries speak their own language to my Father God.
Because after the storm forms rainbows of hope.
Because I need to be held sometimes.
Because others need to know I don’t always have it together.
Because I want to use my tears as a river, floating to higher ground.
Because I can.

Maureen Y Ingram

I need to be held sometimes.” – I read this and had an immediate mental image of the round edges of tears holding me up…I mean, how lovely is that? Crying is release and release is healing. Go for it!

Jessica Wiley

Ohhhh….”the round edges of tears holding me up.” Yes Maureen, I had a good cry Sunday. It was much needed! Thank you!

Mo Daley

Hi Jessica. What I really like about your poem is that it is simultaneously sad and happy. I guess it reflects life, right? I really like your first two lines. THe last line is powerful, too.

Jessica Wiley

Yes Mo, life is happy and sad all at the same time. And thank you so much!

Kim Johnson

Yes, Jessica, I have said several times this week that “joy comes in the morning.” I’m right there with you in this line especially today. My coworker has lost two parents, a step parent, and a father-in law all in the last few months, and that verse sticks with me and resonates strongly these days.

Jessica Wiley

Wow, so much loss, but yes Kim “joy comes in the morning”. That’s my hope every day. I will be praying for your coworker for healing and peace.

Rex Muston

Jessica,

I love the ending line. For me it really puts a perspective on shedding tears, and it being an extra level in feeling. I love the visual of the crying as a catharsis which brings you to higher ground, how tears provide the passage.

Jessica Wiley

Thank you Rex. I’ve been crying a lot lately, so I need to do something productive with my tears.

M M

Jessica,
Your poem deeply touched me. Thank you for putting into words things that I feel that I didn’t know how to express nor did I know they needed expressing. The combination of words that you tied together in your poem is simply beautiful.

Jessica Wiley

You’re welcome M M. And thank you. I don’t like to wallow in my sorrow, so I write so others can appreciate the good that comes out of it.

Leilya Pitre

Jessica, such a beautiful poem, and I want to hug you and let you cry on my shoulder. I love that you realize that it is okay to cry, and this line speaks volumes to me: “Because I don’t want to drown in my sorrows.” I also appreciate a reminder that “after the storm forms rainbows of hope.” Thank you so much!

Jessica Wiley

Thank you Leilya, I don’t mind hugs. And you’re welcome. Tears are not always meant for sadness. Just like rain, we need them to grow.

Stacey L. Joy

Because I want to use my tears as a river, floating to higher ground.

Because I can.

There could be no words more beautiful! I feel this poem in my entire soul. I am a firm believer in crying to relieve and to share with God whatever is on my heart. I am also a firm believer in checking in on our strong friends because we don’t always have it all together.

How are you, Jessica? I’m here.

💙

Jessica Wiley

It’s been tough Stacey Joy, but I’m still here. I’m seeing the joy in my suffering. Prayers for endurance and peace.

Glenda Funk

Jessica,
Speaking as a cryer, I feel every tear pooling in my eyes. But I cry out of anger more than from sadness. There’s a spiritual tone to your poem that reminds me of many tearful bible stories, and that is lovely.

Jessica Wiley

Thank you, Glenda. I’ve never been angry enough to cry, just cuss, lol!

Heidi Ames

WHY I WRITE POETRY

Because it helps me make sense of the world and my place in it,
Lets strangers in when I dare to share
Because I enjoy painting pictures with words
Because I choose the form:
   Haiku, free-verse, Golden Shovel
Because no one can tell me I did it incorrectly

Because every word matters,
Because it can affect people and catch them by surprise
Because often writing it is easier than saying it
Because my poems become a diary of a life
Because it is a gift meant to be shared

Because thoughts become things

Rita DiCarne

Heidi, I love to write poetry as well. So many of your lines spoke to me, but none more than “Because often writing it is easier than saying it” This is so true for me. I’d love to read more of your poetry.

Susan O

Heidi, I am mainly a visual artist but love to write poetry for many of your reasons, especially “it helps to make sense of the world.” Also the “dare to share” and the fact that “no one can tell me I did it incorrectly.” So true!

Scott M

Heidi, I love the truth of your last line: “Because thoughts become things”! Yes! It is one of the reasons I write, too. Thank you for writing and sharing today!

Meredith

Why I do yoga…

becasue breath is medicine

because I to move tomorrow, so I move today

because I sense the pain in my back as relief when I am in a forward fold

because my body is never the same two days in a row
and I am curious why that is

because I have never been dissapointed by savasana
or child’s pose

and because once I am on the mat, I am not anywhere else.

Mo Daley

I love this, Meredith! I started the month with the intent of doing yoga every day for 30 days. Then I got sick and haven’t been able to do anything for the last two weeks. My body is craving movement. I really l ike your second line which shows how important what we do today is on tomorrow. And your ending is perfect. Namaste!

Meredith

Hi Mo – thank you for commenting. I hope you feel better soon! Yoga with Adreine has a free practice for when you are sick. I love it so much I do it when I’m not sick. 🙂

Stacey L. Joy

Yes! Every morning before dawn, that’s how I feel!

and because once I am on the mat, I am not anywhere else.

🧘🏽‍♀️

Susan Ahlbrand

I am alive!! And, oh, how I have missed you and this space. It just hasn’t worked for the past few months, and I hate, hate, hate that I didn’t find a way to prioritize writing.

Anna, I love your prompts from the past two days. I hope to revisit them!

Dave, thank you for the great prompt today. So much potential! This is definitely one I will present to my classes. Your mentor poem was fabulous and got me thinking. I especially love the last line:

And because when we share a meal, we share each other.

I just wanted to make sure and re-join our wonderful little universe, so I didn’t fret about whether I created much; I just wanted to participate.

Why I Read

I read
because I love to learn
because I love to escape
because I discover history
because I discover myself
because I discuss books with friends
because I discuss books with students
because I grow my vocabulary through texts
because I grow my empathy through vicarious experiences
because I can’t imagine not.
I read because I can’t imagine not. 

~Susan Ahlbrand
22 January 2024

Leilya Pitre

Hi, Susan! Glad to “see” you here again. Love your poem from the first line to the final one. There is another “Why I Read Poem,” and they both just so well add to one another. the final two lines are the real why for me:
because I can’t imagine not.
I read because I can’t imagine not. “

Thank you for sharing!

Kim Johnson

Susan! I’m so glad you’re back! Welcome, friend! Sometimes life gets busy like that, but you are here now, so thank you for all the great reasons you read. I’m also glad you write with friends, too!

Scott M

Susan, It’s great to “read” you again! We missed you (and, more importantly perhaps, we understand that life pulls in multiple directions sometimes — so no worries at your “absence”….it makes the heart grow fonder and whatnot, lol.) I love the repetition at the end, driving home the importance of your point. And I totally agree: a life void of reading is simply unimaginable.

Denise Krebs

Susan, welcome back! So good to see you again. Love that you made it today. And that you are alive! You have some great reasons for reading, and “because I grow my vocabulary through texts” and “grow my empathy…” are really good reminders to me today. Those last two lines are magic.

Rita DiCarne

Dave, what a great prompt! I love these lines. “Because every meal is a blank page that needs just the right words. And because when we share a meal, we share each other.” My husband is a newly retired chef, and cooking is his love language.

Why I Teach

Because it permits me to be a lifelong learner 
Because I get to read and write and share my passions with my students
Because it keeps me young at heart and mind through daily interactions with students
Because it gives me the chance to see the world through 7th-grade eyes
Because it allows me to see a student uncover a talent they didn’t know they had or were too afraid to pursue
Because I can light a spark, ignite a fire, and create excitement for learning
Because I can cultivate ideas, encourage new thinking, and foster a spirit of collaboration
Because I can focus on fresh ideas, lead to new self-awareness, and direct to unexplored paths
Because I can applaud efforts, cheer the unexpected, and celebrate the breakthroughs
Because it challenges me to be the best me I can be

Heidi Ames

You said everything I felt about teaching. I am newly retired and miss those things.
Thank you for saying it so perfectly.

Rich Novack

These are reasons for solid teaching, definitely. We’re lucky, as adults, to go swimming in the minds of young people so often. I find hope there. Thanks for reminding me.

Scott M

Why I Choose to Let My Ear Hair Continue to Grow

Because 
my hearing is currently too good
Because 
I’m losing my hair elsewhere 
so I need to make up the difference 
somewhere
Because 
it’s still cool, right?  
Long flowing ear hair, 
that’s like a thing, right?
Because 
my tympanic membranes 
are a bit shy
Because 
I want it as a throwback 
to villains of yesteryear, 
when I hatch a master plan, 
I’ll twirl my ear hairs 
instead of a mustache
Because 
I’ve read Hamlet 
so I feel like this will add 
a bit of poison protection
that I’m sorely in need of
Because 
I asked nicely for it to stop, 
and, 
apparently, 
it refused
Because 
I still like to 
(sometimes) 
maintain 
the illusion 
of control 
even when 
I know, 
unequivocally, 
that I don’t have it 

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Dave, thank you for this prompt and for your poem!  I laughed out loud at the “stopping the violence” of the “bland ass food” that you were served as a kid.  Keep fighting the good fight! The genesis of my offering was (indirectly) influenced by the fact that my wife ordered a Micro Touch MAX hair trimmer for me because the battery is shot on the old one … (and I realize now that I’m providing too many irrelevant details, which makes this seem untrue, but it is completely, one hundred percent, on the level) and the app glitched so we received a dozen or so of them.  And since they’re health and beauty products they didn’t want them returned, so now we have a box of ear and nose hair trimmers – as seen on tv.  There’s even a light, too, in case, you know, you’re trimming your nose hairs in the dark…?  All of this is to say, if anyone reading this “note” is in a gift exchange (Secret Santa type deal) with me the next couple of years, I apologize that I just ruined the surprise of your gift.

Amber

What a fun poem you wrote! I like the reality and truth in this. It reminds me of how stand-up comedians talk about themselves with the obvious observances and how that brings humor into the lives of others. And that line “a bit of poison protection” is powerful and fun.

Dave Wooley

Scott,
I laughed too many times from the title through the endnote–which is quite a remarkable story, and which, also, seems totally on the level. You still manage to leave use with a profound thought and a Hamlet reference. Amazing!

My favorite line is “Because my tympanic membranes are a bit shy”!

Rex Muston

Scott,

I think the bad guy twirling ear hairs is a new unique idea. I’d also throw in that you get to a point where your vision is bad enough (in my case) that you may not be aware of the shaggy growth. I like your polite efforts to get it to stop as a means of controlling the uncontrollable.

Kim Johnson

Scott, you never cease to bring the humorous side of life alive through your poetry and invite us to laugh with you. I’m imagining the twirling of ear hair.

M M

Scott
Your poem is delightful! Thanks for helping me to laugh today. I love how you connected so many other ideas back to ear hair.

Glenda Funk

🤢
Sounds as though you need some manscaping, Scott.

Larin Wade

Dave, thank you for this inspiring prompt full of so many possibilities. I loved reading the poems you have included here for inspiration, especially yours about cooking. It makes me want to cook more! I hope to open up this prompt to my students sometime!

I love that you can make this type of poem serious or sappy or silly. I took the serious route–I am feeling pretty reflective today!

Why I am a follower of God
Because I hear and feel Him
Because He gives me purpose and hope
Because the best people I know 
are good because of God
Because of the splendors 
of sunsets and snow and spring
Because this earth and its people 
are not a happy accident
Because He is just and patient
Because there is a right and wrong
Because His heart grieves when 
He sees a child be abused 
or a wife be cheated on 
or a girl spew hatred at her best friend
Because He is giving us time 
to come to Him before He casts judgement
Because the history of the world 
is the overarching story of God redeeming his people
Because this world is not all there is
Because there is more after this life
Because there is an order to this world
And someone made that happen.

Heidi Ames

Thank you for this beautiful poem.

“Because I hear and feel Him” spoke to me today. I have recently been speaking more to Him and I feel his messages coming through.
I also love your last 2 lines. Amen!

Rita DiCarne

Larin, this is a beautiful list. I couldn’t choose a favorite line. Thank you for the reminder and food for thought.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you for reminding us of faith, Larin! You crafter such a beautiful tribute to it. I especially love the final four lines.

A. Santos

Dave,
What a fun prompt! I had a lot of fun writing this poem on a snow day which was a great time to reflect on all of the things I have yet to complete.

Why I Procrastinate:

To avoid the future
To avoid the discomfort of
completing a task
To avoid challenges and stress
when my stomach turns to knots
To avoid the things I HAVE to do for
the things I WANT to do

To raise my heart rate
To keep the stacks of papers high like a monument to tasks
left undone
To model hypocrisy
To have a complaint for hallway toxicity
To convince my husband that I have work to do
To say stay longer than my contract stipulates

To write “I am so, so sorry!” to the third follow-up email.
To . . . never mind. . . I’ll finish this poem later

Rita DiCarne

“To keep the stacks of papers high like a monument to tasks
left undone” This line made me chuckle because papers are taking over my life! I can relate to so many items on your list. The last line is perfect!

Amber

I like how your infinitives flow together for this one. And the ending speaks volumes for the title. Fun!

Maureen Y Ingram

Thank you for this inspiration, Dave!

Why I know I am on the mend

Because my first waking thought was not
how do I move with these searing aches?
Because I slept through the whole soft
cozy warm luscious night 
Because I am not sweating from a feverish drive down 
a roller coaster road that suddenly ends in my free fall 
Because I got dressed in something other than pajamas
Because I made my bed for the first time in days
Because I want something to eat
Because it’s day five since testing positive and 
numbers matter, right?

Amber

I am almost there with you. It’s 3:29pm and I’m still in my pajamas, but this day I’m actually thinking of taking a shower and getting dressed. That’s the way to mending.

Thank you for sharing this.
Keep showing up! You matter. You are worth it.

Fran Haley

Oh, Maureen, those last lines are perfect – I am loving it because I lived it just.like.this. Favorite part: all those adjectives for the good night of sleep – whole, soft, cozy, warm, luscious. Numbers do matter – if only to the mind that needs to lean on them!

Scott M

Oh, Maureen, I’m so glad you are “on the mend”! I love the line “the whole soft / cozy warm luscious night.” Keep on mending!

Kim Johnson

Oh, Maureen, I’m so sorry. It sounds like the sickness is still making its rounds in your family – or is at it again. I know you mentioned it before, following a visit to see some relatives. I’m glad you are finally feeling like you’re getting back to living life and actually wanting to eat and get dressed as you continue along the journey of being on the mend. Feel better, friend!

Denise Krebs

Oh, Maureen! I’m so sorry you are sick, but happy you are on the mend. This: “I slept through the whole soft / cozy warm luscious night” is beautiful! It is a true sign of healing. And written in my favorite Maureenesque way.

Glenda Funk

Maureen,
Im so glad you’re feeling better and hope you have no lingering side effects.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Dave, your poem is brilliant. Just brilliant. Each line rivets and edges and pioneers and digs in. Thank you for sharing such thought provoking inspiration today. I only hope I did your prompt justice.

Why I Plant

because earth beckons movement
and seeds are the space between fingers’ touch,
giving me a hand in God
because darkness will eventually fall
allowing light to spring
because the dark loam grounds me
because deep down, there’s a need for self-sufficiency
when the world goes haywire
because a too hot world dried up is way scary to contemplate
and this is a chance to fight it
because backyards are canvases and flowers paint in poppy and lilac,
rose and fern
because birthing more humans of my own is too much work 
and the labor of the garden tones, not flabs
and birthing from dirt is less messy than blood
because I want to bring life into this world,
not take it.

Dave Wooley

Jennifer,
The “earth” and “seed” of the first 2 lines and the fight against a “too hot” world are really calling to mind Octavia Butler and Parable of the Sower. Planting as resistance.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Jennifer, my, oh my. You are over the top in doing this prompt justice, my friend. So much beauty here. I can see this painting… “because backyards are canvases and flowers paint in poppy and lilac,
rose and fern”
The colors/plants you chose are perfect to make that image pop.

And the birth metaphor–OMG. Perfection.

Larin Wade

Jennifer, what a cool poem you’ve wrote linking gardening and birth and creation. The line “because backyards are canvases and flowers paint in poppy and lilac” show the potential to create something beautiful–you only have to put in some work. Gardening is art. And the line “because I want to bring life in to this world, not take it” shows the beauty of bringing forth life when the world around us can seem so dark and destructive. Thank you for sharing such a reflective, hopeful poem!

Kim Johnson

Jennifer, this is a lovely way to bring life into this world – – I agree about the more humans and too much work for sure. Thinking of backyards as canvases and flowers as paint in poppy and lilac is a colorful image, and a creative one. You make me want to plant, plant, plant.

Leilya Pitre

Jennifer, thank you for such a beautiful gift of words today! I am savoring each one, and it is difficult to choose a favorite line. When I read, “and seeds are the space between fingers’ touch,” I can almost “see” and “feel” these seeds. The reality of the world going haywire might be inescapable, and I agree with ” a need for self-sufficiency.” The final two lines reflect your generous and caring nature. Thank you!

Stacey L. Joy

Hi Jennifer,
I was not on the ball with reading and commenting as much as I like so I’m delayed. I absolutely love the topic and these lines are priceless:

because birthing more humans of my own is too much work 

and the labor of the garden tones, not flabs

Nothing better than time in the dirt!!

Denise Krebs

Dave, thank you, thank you. Your prompt made me think of several titles. I want to try again with other topics. Your poem made me laugh several times, so I had to keep reading to my husband, who was sitting close by. Now I know about the cumin. And these lines make me so happy:

Because my kids miss my meals when they go,

so I know they’ll always come home.

When I first read this, I read “my kids kiss my meals” and that wouldn’t have been all bad. 🙂

Dave Wooley

Denise, I wish I could get my youngest one to “kiss the meals’–he just pushes them away! And, yes, cumin is the indispensable ingredient!

Denise Krebs

Why I Delight
After Leah Kindler

Because life is a kaleidoscope of flowers and failures to cherish
Because all the good games need to be played until the streetlights come on
Because I refuse to give up on faith in god
Because I belong with all my being to something bigger than myself
Because I can make a difference, even just writing a letter to my congress member
Because I don’t have to understand the bigger-than-myselfs
Because I am telling a new story
Because I have hope

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Denise, your poem is a breath, light and radiant, announcing all the good. I especially love the game playing until the streetlights come on. I wish we lived in that world again. But you land us in hope and remind us to find those times and circumstances to cherish so beautifully. Thank you for that.

Dave Wooley

Denise,

Love this! I want to hug this poem. This is a perfect Monday poem.

Larin Wade

Denise, I love your poem about delighting because of belonging to something bigger than yourself. I feel that, too. This hope makes living worthwhile. And telling a new story gives us the opportunity to leave something better than we found it!

Kim Johnson

Denise, your name begins like Delight, and all these are great reasons to delight in things. I love the last two lines – – a new story, and hope. Those are indeed reasons to delight. And making a difference in writing is a beautiful way to delight (plus you get the delight of the choice of all those delightful stamps, too).

Leilya Pitre

Denise, I love, love, love your poem today! It is so warm, full of delight and hope. “Because life is a kaleidoscope of flowers and failures to cherish” draws me in right away, and I want to experience this kaleidoscope with you. The realization that one “have to understand the bigger-than-myselfs” is so valuable. Thank you for this joy!

rex muston

Dave,

Bless you for letting me let the genie out of the bottle. We don’t have school today because of an ice coat on surfaces, so Gretta and Zuko and I got to really have fun with this prompt. The hard thing is when to stop.. I think I may add more later.

Why I use sarcasm…

Because I was instructed to when I left the mother ship,
Because the Lady of the Lake had run out of swords,
Because I used to line dry my laundry, and the weather makes me angry,
Because I don’t make mistakes, just happy little accidents,
Because I like to watch the gerbil run in the wheel as the processing takes place,
Because it was a gift from an old Apache shaman,
Because I was fed SPAM as a child,
Because I’m fresh out of bubble gum,
Because playing dead doesn’t work,
Have you met my family?
Because I could of sworn I left it here an hour ago,
Because I swam ten minutes after eating,
Because the kids will be tested over denotation and connotation,
Because the bullet is lodged near my heart and they can’t operate,
Because my son won’t text me his mailing address,
Because 6 to 8 weeks for delivery,
Because I was raised on jelly and potato chip sandwiches,
Because I was born the night of a thundersnow in Boston…wicked pissah!
Because the room is dark, and I can’t judge my palette,
Because I still mourn the Edmund Fitzgerald,
Because something Slugworth whispered in my ear,
Because of overuse of the word literally,
Because the instructions slipped under the refrigerator with the dust bunnies,
Because the love you take is equal to the love you make,
Because I don’t know the way to San Jose, 
Because it is a lost art, like calligraphy,
Because it’s fresh out of the oven,
Because I am haunted by the ghost of an undead Tom Robbins,
Because if we couldn’t laugh we would all go insane.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Rex, this is a treasure, literally. Wow, I loved reading every single funny line. Anxious for the next. I’m reading it in awe, wondering how you could keep going for so many lines. Some of my favorites today are “Because something Slugworth whispered in my ear” “Have you met my family?” “Because the bullet is lodged near my heart and they can’t operate” I could go on and on! I love your sweet last line too. Amen to that.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Rex, this is literally the best! Ah, sarcasm. Such a fine art and you art it so well. Love that “fresh out of the oven” line along with the jelly and potato chip sandwiches (I thought I was the only one to add chips to my lunchbox specialties. I kinda want you to keep going.

Shaun

Wow, Rex! I love the non-stop barrage of fantastic zingers. The allusion to Tom Robbins made my day. I’m a HUGE fan! Your poem made my day!

rex muston

I had to change the line some, as he is surprisingly still alive.

Kim Johnson

Oooh, ending on Buffett is literally the cherry on top of this delicious confection, with a little Gordon Lightfoot ringing out in there and I, too, literally mourn the sinking of that ship
(my engagement ring literally came from a smashed and resurrected Cracker Jack ring found in the parking lot of a GL concert, literally). Oh, what fun you’ve whipped up in this sarcasm. I love that second line most of all.

rex muston

“If You Could Read My Mind” would have to be one of my top ten song picks.

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Dave, I believe God has gifted each of us with something we get to share. . My poem reflects why I keep coaching and mentoring. Both give me a reason to stay connected here in OPEN WRITE to learn from educators like you. You’re sharing ideas that we get to pass along

Why I COACH

Because I learn so much!
Because it keeps me in touch
With those entering the profession.
And here’s my true confession.

We teachers are reachers,
We’re taught to share,
Yes, ‘ cause we care,
But mainly because it’s right.

When we have light,
We’ve gotten from others,
We get to share with our sisters and brothers

So, I will keep coaching!
And, though with old age approaching,
It ain’t gonna catch up with me!
I’ll keep coaching ‘cause I love learning.
Gonna keep up while the clock keeps turning .
And I invite you to do the same.

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Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Anna, I love this line – we teachers are reachers, and how it connects with your escape from time catching up with you (as in reached the age of ____ fill in the blank here). Your energy and inspiration are a blessing to your students and you give me hope that I can hang in there too.

Dave Wooley

Thanks, Anna, for your poem today and the first two mentor prompts of this month’s open Write that were so rich and complex! You really embody the words of your poem, especially the 2nd verse–teachers as reachers, taught to share and care.

Larin Wade

Anna, I agree that God has gifted each of us with something to share. You have shared something lovely with us today! I especially love the line “I’ll keep coaching ’cause I love learning” because that’s how I feel about teaching–I love learning, and I want to keep learning as I teach and help my students enjoy learning, too! Thank you for sharing this joyful poem about your love for your profession!

Susan O

Yes, you and I have the coaching bug, Anna. Here we are still teaching, writing, creating as your lovely line says “with old age approaching, It ain’t gonna catch up with me!”

Stacey L. Joy

Anna,
Thank you for the first two days of prompts and for this beautiful poem! I hope when I retire that my passion for “reaching” continues the same as yours! 💜

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

you let the bikini industrial complex tell you food is a traitor
you haven’t learned how to respond to passive-aggressors
you swallow your words so that one day you can write them
you hide alone in closets eating your nightmares in dreams
you scratch lesions in your belly that signal proximate harms
you open wounds we will mop up later in poetry

rex muston

Sarah,

I love the bikini industrial complex! It makes me think of the Alan Parsons Project for whatever reason. What a great combination of words. I was going to say you should patent it, but I looked it up and saw it already existed. I am ashamed I never heard it before.

Nice contrast with later swallowing words in lieu of being able to enjoy the traitor food…eating nightmares in dreams, awesome. It is tough (I think) to pull off shorter poems, but you have done it, most certainly.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Sarah, each line is a stand alone, punching us with emotion. I’m correcting exams today and kids wrote how they’d grown as writers – so many commented about being able to express what they really feel and had similar experiences to “swallowing words” to later “mop up” in poetry – these are exquisite wordings here. And eating nightmares – so, so good!

Dave Wooley

Adding Bikini to an ominous trifecta of military/prison and now bikini industrial complexes. That’s a brilliant bit of imagery.

Every line here is so powerful on it’s own. The 2nd and 3rd lines, especially, really hit home for me.

Amber

OOOOhhhhhh!!!! You got me at that last line. Isn’t that the truth?! Thank you for sharing this. I felt this to my core, and am not able to at this time put that into words that compare with how they have hit me. But it hits in a good way.

Kim Johnson

Sarah, every single line packs a punch, and then there is that final line that delivers a KO, that leaves us speechless and motionless. Mopping up the open wounds later in poetry is such rich truth in imagery that it needs awhile to churn around in my thoughts. Wow, just wow.

Linda Mitchell

Wowsa….truth. Right. There.

Stacey L. Joy

Wow, this is deep! I don’t know if you listen to the podcast “We Can Do Hard Things” but one of the hosts had an eating disorder and speaks about the journey to recovery in just about every episode. These lines hit me hard:

you hide alone in closets eating your nightmares in dreams

Glenda Funk

Sarah,
The *you* creates ambiguity that speaks to many. I hear echos of Kate Baer’s themes, and that last line is both a gut punch and a promise filled w/ tenderness.

Jordan S.

Why I Write

Because I cannot remember a time where words on my tongue did not fail me, instead choosing to loge in my throat.

Because if the syllables are able to dislodge themselves, each syllable is a failed skipped rock across a lake.

Because a pen feels natural as my fingers, the stuck and skipped words in my mouth now come from my head in rivulets across the page.

Because ink and words move my blood with energy that make my heart beat and skip like someone in puppy love, infatuation.

Because laying down each looped line is like laying brick, layer by layer, creating an edifice in which I can make sense of a senseless world.  

Because when others’ eyes lay upon my scribblings, and their mouths crack to smiles, they can finally make sense of me.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Oh, Jordan, that first line is everything “where words on my tongue did not fail me” and then that image of “syllable is a failed skipped rock across a lake.” Wow!

Peace,
Sarah

Dave Wooley

Yes! There is so much power in these lines. The 5th stanza (I love the element of alliteration) really reminds me of Fred Joiner’s wonderful poem “To the Builders” where he writes “a syllable is/ a brick./ a single inked word on/ a page is a monument”. Your poem is that evidence that you write about in the resolution. So good!

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Jordan, I concur with Sarah and Dave about the power of your poem. The lines that strike me most are

Because when others’ eyes lay upon my scribblings, and their mouths crack to smiles, they can finally make sense of me.

which reinforces the pedagogical strategy of allotting class time for students to read and hear what others have written. There also is the NWP theory of “when I read what I write, I see what I think”.

Thanks for sharing your heart with your head through your hands on the keyboard.

Larin Wade

Jordan, your poem showcases not only your love for writing but your talent for it. Wow. The line “laying down each looped line is like laying brick, layer by layer, creating an edifice in which I can make sense of a senseless world” reminds me of the palaces and structures we can make with our words while also making sense of the world through writing. You give so many poignant reasons for writing. Thank you for sharing!

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Dave, for such a wonderful prompt for this Monday. It is inviting, doesn’t seem intimidating, and yet makes us think. I like the mentor texts you suggested and thoroughly enjoyed listening to Major Jackson.
Your poem is so relevant to me on so many levels: I love to cook, and I have to cook for various reasons. This one hits so close to home: “Because my kids miss my meals when they go, / so I know they’ll always come home.”  
I couldn’t find one particular “why” today, so I took an approach that would allow me to include many of them.
 
When One “Why” Is Inseparable from the Others
 
Why I like gathering friends at my place
 
Because it gives me a reason to spruce us and deep clean my house;
Because I love to cook their favorite food (and mine too) you can’t buy;
Because I bake desserts that remind us of home, parents, happy moments
Because I can prepare little gifts for them just because.
 
Why I like having friends at my place
 
Because in a far-away country, they are my family,
Because with my loved ones gathered, we can talk about everything:
Why we prefer coffee or tea to carbonated drinks,
Why we cook, why we read,
Why we travel, why we dance,
Why we go to the gym,
Why we enjoy long walks in the park
Why we enjoy quiet evenings,
Why we watch sunrises and sunsets,
Why we dream of careless life while caring about the world
Why we have to prove ourselves daily,
Why we cry, why we laugh,
Why we love being around each other.

Leilya Pitre

And of course, I have a typo. I meant “to spruce up” in the first line.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Leilya,

The line that really got me was “Because in a far-away country, they are my family.” This poem may be serving as a repurposing of the harm to revive what is possible and ought to be in the war-torn countries with our loved ones.

And that final line “why we love being around each other.”

Peace,
Sarah

Dave Wooley

Leilya, this poem is such a beautiful celebration of the communities that nurture us and that we create!

Larin Wade

Leilya, your poem captures the intimacy and hope of friendship. So much can be shared by gathering for dinner or conversation at someone’s home. It gives us joy to be able to give something good to them (like the food you make!). Thank you for sharing this poem today!

Glenda Funk

Leilya,
I am the typo queen. They don’t matter, my friend. I want to come hang out at your house. I am a nervous host so avoid that as my h as possible. And I live in a culturally closed off place. Anyway, I think about you and all your friends and family in Ukraine every day. I am crying w/ you and mourning our short-sightedness.

Michelle

Why I Read

Because I don’t always understand the world around me
Because I can better understand the world around me

Because I can get lost in the lives of others
Because I can find myself through the lives of others

Because I can’t always reach my own emotions
Because I can find my way to my own emotions

Because I don’t have to leave my house
Because I love to travel to other worlds

Because I don’t always have the right words
Because I can always find the right words

Leilya Pitre

Thank you for your poem today, Michelle! I like every “because” you mention. The first one is especially important and relevant: “Because I don’t always understand the world around me.” I love how you developed your poem in a two-line stanzas, where each first line shows a lack of something, but the second leads to how you fill up this void. Love it!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Michelle,

That first line got me “Because I don’t always understand the world around me.” Yes. This signals a stance of open-ness and consideration.

The couplets work so well here as you explore word variations that really signal different meaning-making for me, the reader. I loved rereading these lines more slowly once I noted the pattern.

Lovely,
Sarah

Denise Krebs

Michelle, such a powerful pattern you have used here, which says a huge AMEN to why one reads. We get lost and found, we don’t understand and reading helps us understand, I can travel without leaving the house…So much truth in this beauty.

A. Santos

Michelle,

What an interesting take! I love the “can / can’t” anaphora. Just another reason to appreciate the duality of living on planet Earth!

Juliette

Thank you Dave for the prompt.

Why I write…

I write to catch my words
Lest they fall and are never found
I write to speak to myself and the page
or else I may burst and roll asway
I write to empty my thoughts as the silence
may turn into a yawn
I write so I can share all the beauty that I see
I write so I can hold the stories I live and keep
I write to show my lil ones what I saw but could not store
I write because mama wrote but never published
I write so the world sees my world
I am so lucky to have found you…my writing pal!

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Leilya Pitre

Hi, Juliette! Thank you for such an amazing poem. There are so many great thoughts and lines in here: These are some of my favorites:
“I write to catch my words”
“I write to show my lil ones what I saw but could not store”
“I write because mama wrote but never published”

I can relate to each one of these line. We are also happy to have you in this space. Thank you for your words today!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Juliette,

Ooh, I love that “to catch my words” and then later “or else I may burst and roll asway.”

So lovely.

Sarah

opager.judi@gmail.com

Why I Daydream

 
Why I daydream,

Because I can go places I cannot reach

Because I can talk to people who are no longer here

Because vistas open up beyond my wildest dreams

Because I can dance to my heart’s content

Because I will see things from a different perspective

Because I will find answers I could not see

Because it lowers my blood pressure

Because reality is not where I want to be

Because it’s like floating on a calm lake

Because it is like taking a mental nap

Because there is no time or space

Because all things are a possibility

Because I am a Poet

Judi Opager

Leilya Pitre

I love your “why” as it is so inviting, tempting, and allowing us to remove ourselves, even briefly, from the harsh reality. My favorite line, which I will linger on through the day is: “Because I can dance to my heart’s content.” Thank you for sharing!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Oh, I love thinking about day dreaming. This reminds me of one of my favorite Nikki Grimes books Words With Wings.

The italics are lovely visually and also signal or lean into each line’s dream. Place, people, and wellness are all wonderful reasons, but I am partial to “I am a Poet.”

Peace,
Sarah

Shaun

Great inspiration, Dave. I love the way you describe the way you cook, both literally and figuratively!

Why I drink coffee…

Because, in the church social hall, while the grown-ups talked about grown-up nonsense, I could obscure the bitterness with tons of sugar and non-dairy creamer.
Because, in my community, drinking coffee was taboo. It was a way to signal to the majority, “I’m not like you!”
Because it provided a destination for young teens on a school night.
Because my best friend’s father made the world’s best espresso.
Because the neurons will strike if their demands are not met.
Because I only need 500 more stars before I earn a FREE bacon, egg, and gouda sandwich!
Because, as Dylan said, “One more cup of coffee for the road. One more cup of coffee ‘for I go to the valley below.”

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Oh, yes. You had me at the “coffee.”

And then that next line about sugar and creamer (powder?) brought me right back to the post-church socials. There was coffee and donuts the first Sunday of the month. You better believe we showed up for church that week (and stayed until the end).

You have me wanting another poem about “Drinking coffee was a taboo.”

And the FREE all caps worked to draw me into that line and the incentive to keep coming back. Ah, the hope!

Peace,
Sarah

Ruth Terry Walden

Why I get planes in the middle of the night

Because I never tire of seeing Africa at sunrise
Because in different lands my blackness is treasured
Because the silver hairs on head are wires of wisdon
Because there are mangoes everywhere
Because all children possess beauty
Because I can speak truth to power anywhere
Because I want to bear witness
Because long after I am gone
Because each piece of earth remembers I have been there

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Ruth, I like the way you leave one line unfinished for such a powerful effect….and the mangoes, the mangoes. I love the mango that reminds me of what Billy Collins says about bringing in the unexpected. Your mango is his spider. Creative and fun!

Dave Wooley

Ruth,

So glad you’re here! I love silver hairs as “wires of wisdom” and the strength of all of your “why”s.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Oh, Ruth.

“Africa at sunrise” — how wonderful. That last line will stay with me all day, “each piece of earth remembers I have been there.”

Peace,
Sarah

Fran Haley

Profoundly lyrical and beautiful, Ruth – every image is so pure and clear, and it all flows like honey. I believe the earth does remember us, when it receives us back again. Just glorious.

Ruth Terry Walden

The title should be “why I get on planes in the middle of the night”! Rapid Finger Reflex! Thank you my Peeps for the shoutouts! Love Dave Wooley for doing this. My students are now writing their own “Why I” poems right now!

Edited version

Why I get on planes in the middle of the night

Because I never tire of seeing Africa at sunrise
Because in different lands my blackness is treasured
Because the silver hairs on head are wires of wisdom
Because there are mangoes everywhere
Because all children possess beauty
Because I can speak truth to power anywhere
Because I want to bear witness
Because long after I am gone
Because each piece of earth remembers I have been there

Stacey L. Joy

Ohhh, to visit the Motherland, someday I will write poetry with this rich experience. Thank you, Ruth! The ending is magical and makes me want to set foot on all parts of earth I’ve never traversed.

Because long after I am gone

Because each piece of earth remembers I have been there

Margaret Simon

Dave, I love this prompt and will use it with my students. Your poem about cooking tickles my senses. My sons-in-law cook. One of them told me it relaxes him. I get stressed about cooking 9 times out of 10, so I don’t do it often, but I love making cookies or muffins with my grandchildren. I am going to draft right here, right now using Why I Write Poetry.

Why I Write Poetry

Because a poem can contain big emotions I’d rather not face.

Because writing is exercise for my fidgety fingers.

Because Mary Oliver, Naomi Shihab Nye, Sandy and Darrell wrote poems
I cry over.

Because sometimes my words matter to someone.

Because wisdom comes in small doses like nectar to a butterfly.

Because my father isn’t here anymore.

Because my father lived a creative life.

Because, because,
because, because…

Mystery of Magic.

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Margaret, you say it so well. Sometimes the words are not big enough nets to capture all the feelings, and so the first line and the last line really tie it all together into the essence of what it’s all about. Yes, your words DO matter to people – and the nectar to the butterflies (and water to the little ones on jump day)….and on and on. Lovely words, full of peace and truth.

Judi Opager

What a beautiful and accurate poem! I love the line, “Because sometimes my words matter to someone.” – So true.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Margaret,

Oh, that first line had me pausing. Such truth in this line — writing what we’d rather not face is a repurposing or a writing into or a writing away — the poet can choose. (That’s my interpretation:)

I love the range of writers beyond and creatives within your family and then the connection to place and nature. I think place is such a big part of a Margaret poem — “nectar to a butterly.”

Peace,
Sarah

Fran Haley

Your words always matter to me, Margaret – I am so grateful you write poetry. Mystery of magic, indeed.

Linda Mitchell

Beautiful. Just beautiful. I love those four because-s at the end. And, “wisdom in small doses like nectar.” Great lines.

Sharon Roy

Thank you for this beautiful poem, Margaret. “Because my father isn’t here anymore” is a powerful, moving line.I like the repetion of the last stanza–the urgency of trying to explain the many “becauses” giving way to the “Mystery of Magic.” A lovely release. Also really like the “wisdom comes in small doses like nectar to a butterfly” line. Indeed.

Kim Johnson

Dave, Dave, Dave! This prompt gets the day going – – thank you so much for bringing creativity to the writing and to your model poem for us! I love to cook, too, and your cooking in the classroom takes away my excuse that I never have time. What a great prompt for the classroom – – or anywhere! I wrote a list poem that became a prose poem….why? Because…..well, I won’t go into that….I’d need another prose list.

Why I Watch Birds

Because Eastern Phoebe, see, she’s the forest drunk and she hiccups and calls her own name like she’s forgotten who she is and where she’s supposed to be, and she makes me laugh first and then cry later like that time at the Atlanta Braves game when that lost woman looking for her seat stumbled down to the front of an entire section and yelled up to ask if ANYBODY recognized her

Because Brown-Headed Nuthatch, see, she’s always in the middle of a domestic dispute telling somebody how it’s gonna be, telling her man he ain’t got a lick of sense and he ain’t coming all up in her tree stirring up no more trouble, better carry his ass on out there and find another nest to be a deadbeat dad, and she makes me cheer her strength

Because White-Headed Nuthatch, see, she’s the Social Media Gossip, laughing like an evil circus clown at all the crap she stirs up in the woods, revealing her own true self in the mirror, projecting her sins through the rough-bared face of the forest trees, and she helps me see the weakness and insecurity of people who laugh at others like this

Because Great Horned Owl, see, he’s an all-nighter with all this early morning coffee shop talk across the farm, like he’s an old man sharing some great wisdom when all it is, is a ploy because let’s face it — the man sleeps all day and sheds no light on anything pertinent to school, so why they ever put a cap and gown on him baffles me, and he reminds me not to let his kind fool me

Because Wood Thrush, see, he’s a bird that blends into the scenery, yet his song is the most beautiful of all, kind of like those normal-looking people who step behind a microphone and belt out a song that’ll bring you to tears and give you chills and wonder to yourself, where did that come from? And who else am I underestimating?

Because Eastern Wood-Pewee, see, he’s always answering roll call, saying his name like he’s entered the building and the party can start, like a kid with a bad case of Senioritis who is perpetually late and wants to be sure he’s marked present so he’s not caught skipping

Because Northern Cardinal, see, he’s a woman-whistler, cat-calling at every female who walks by, calling her pretty, pretty, pretty, just like some will do – some with good intentions, some with not-so-good intentions, but still giving me the gumption to tilt my chin up and carry on with the day

Because Ruby-Throated Hummingbird, see, she will ask for her food and thank me for it, then hover directly a foot from my face, staring into my eyes like she’s blessing me with good vibes of peace and joy to feel like I can make a thumbprint-size difference, reminding me that all hope springs forth and wells up from a tug the size of a tiny thimble and becomes a cascading waterfall

Fran Haley

Kim: Jinx! I will be back later to comment properly, my dear bird of the very same feather <3

Fran Haley

I am back, at last to tell you what a joy of a poem this is, how every bird springs to life true to character, how every character so well-pegged in your unique Kim-voice. Lyrical, fun, a bit irreverent, ultimately reverent. After re-reading several times for the sheer pleasure of it, I must say Phoebe’s characterization is my favorite, although the image I love best is the hummingbird. They are so curious and so bold – those tiny bodies and big brains (relatively speaking) do impart good vibes and even some of their incomparable stamina. I had to laugh out loud at our arriving here back-to-back with the same general content and form – and neither of us wrote of hawks!! What are the odds?!?!

Susie Morice

Ahhh, Kim, you made my birdie-lovin’ heart feel so good this morning. Each observation goes right to the soul of both your love (and mine) of birds and their HUGE contribution to the joy of life and to the birdie’s unique gift of character…they are so much more than birdies outside the window. They are part of who we are…you did all that, captured all that exquisitely. ¡Muchas gracias, mi amiga! Abrazos, Susie

Moonc

Wow! This is amazing! Great metaphors, upbeat, with a little hostility! Sooo creative!!
thank you

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Oh, Kim. “Ruby-Throated Hummingbird” is a special figure here with the “thank me for it” and the “hover directly a foot from my face” and “staring.” Such proximity and intimacy! Wow.

Hugs,
Sarah

Denise Krebs

Kim, the pattern you have chosen is so very sweet. We get to watch the birds with you today, “see, she’s a…” Wow. How did you do that? The woman lost at the ball game, wanting to be seen and the kid with Senioritis…so many great examples to make the birds your seeing come alive for us. Here’s to making a “thumbprint-size difference” Those closing lines are beautiful!

Dave Wooley

Kim, I’m with Denise, the way you structured the poem is innovative and perfect. I feel like we’re sitting across from each other on two tree stumps! I laughed at so many of these descriptions, but the Brown-Headed Nuthatch is my favorite! You and Fran are making me want to become a bird watcher.

Maureen Y Ingram

What fabulous anecdotes you offer here, sweet flights of imagination. I’m loving each and every wing of this, especially that dear owl – “and he reminds me not to let his kind fool me”.

Linda Mitchell

Wow! You and Fran are on the same topic. The repetition of “Because” is great…but I love, “see.” See leads me right into why the because. I love it. That Cardinal…ooooh, he’s got some nerve. Thank goodness he gives gumption or I’d have White-Headed Nut Hatch give him what for. This is a wonderful piece.

Leilya Pitre

I have read your poem early this morning, Kim, and getting to a response just now, after a long work day of reading and prepping for classes. I love watching birds, but I would be able to describe them as beautiful as you had done. The way you invite us into your poem with that gentle, but so friendly-familiar “see,” warms my heart, and it feels like I am sitting with you in a cozy coffee shop as you tell me your stories. Loved all the bird sketches, but the one about Eastern Wood-Pewee won my heart. Thank you so much. This is brilliant, delightful, and joyful!

Fran Haley

Dave, what wonderful inspiration today! Your joy of cooking comes through every line. It is, after all, like poetry itself – a uniquely creative act. Cooking really does make other people happy; I think of the intimacy and sustaining of relationships around the tables. Food is the anchor… through it we DO share each other, just as we do with our poems (from ‘blank pages”). Just so lovely.

I went with a different form today partly because I was trying to harness my thoughts: prose vs. a list poem, but it’s still my “why” with reasons. Thank you again for this dose of joy to start the day.

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I Watch Birds 

Why do I watch them? Why could I lose hours, days, immersed in studying what they do, just in my own yard? There is nothing random in their actions; they come and go like clockwork, without need of a clock. They sing the coming of every new dawn; they herald the falling curtain of night with vespers. Their absence portends a storm (although the tiny hummingbird, fiercest of them all, comes to my feeder, undeterred, amid a hurricane). Scientists say birds are the only remaining dinosaurs and I can believe it when I discover pink, naked finches with bulbous closed eyes wriggling and huddling in their nest, raising their heads like miniscule T-Rexes when my cool shadow falls over them (am I Mama or Papa? Am I bringing food?). The nest itself, so perfect, a marvel of artistry, is lined with the softest fluff, threaded with tiny flowers and a feather of some larger bird. I can hold their world in the palm of one hand. I want to believe I have given something valuable back to the Earth by sheltering them…more flowers, more songs for the future. More hope. God knows we need more hope. So he’s left us birds, winged creatures that transcend and transform…I watch them because they have nested themselves deep in my heart, where they continually pull my spirit upward, upward, to the skies. I love them. Is it too much to ask that they love me, too? This much I know: I watch them, and they watch me.

Kim Johnson

Fran, I don’t believe it. Yes, I do. Yes, I do, yes – – I do believe it. Not only did we choose the same topic, we chose the same form in rambling prose. And gave honor to the tiny hummingbird. And the hope birds bring. I’m glad we both find the peace there, because there are so few places where it still exists even though birds can bring such humor and still a lot of pain as we see the tiniest, most innocent creatures succumb to ill fates through no fault of their own. I was thinking of your Carrion poem the other day – that one still stays with me many times as I am driving. Indeed, as you remind us, God knows we need more hope.

Dave Wooley

Fran,

The extent of my ornithology is listening to Charlie Parker, lol, but I love the intricate descriptions and the sense of wonder that your poem embodies!

Maureen Y Ingram

I, too, have my spirit pulled upward by birds. “God knows we need more hope. So he’s left us birds” – yes! I feel mystified by how a simple sparrow might choose to sit in the bush right in front of the window I am looking out…they bring me so much joy.

Linda Mitchell

God knows we need more hope. So he’s left us birds, ” This is gorgeous. I will keep this thought with me. All the references to freedom make me smile — oh, to have freedom of birds without need of clock. Those baby birds…the nests. I need to get outside soon! I want to find birds this way.

Leilya Pitre

Fran, I have just reread Kim’s poem and yours. You were thinking in the same vein today. Such a great tribute to birds and reflection on your role as a bird watcher. You have so much knowledge about them too. I was moved by the line: “I can hold their world in the palm of one hand.” This is true, yet makes me think about this huge power and responsibility we have toward nature. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts in beautiful words today!

Linda Mitchell

Dave, this prompt is incredible. Thank you for not only the prompt but the backstory of your time at NCTE, the mentor poem and yours. I love how folksy your poem is with “it’s time to stop the violence” and yet still high art–cooking is that. Writing is that. I’ve called the library I work in a kitchen. It’s something kids can understand. Your students are fortunate to be in your care.

Why I Paint

Because it’s a world that’s mine all mine.
Because the paint forgives the line and 
line respects the fluid of the paint.

Because all the time the brush
is in my hand I’m in a world
of my creation.

I paint because the rules
are of my making
Because I can blend, shadow, stipple
Because, I follow a line’s story until 
the bitter end and we’re both in tears
Because there is hope in my brush
Because I have loved someone who’s gone
and I cannot bring them back unless
It’s with what I have at hand,
paint, brush, water, rag, paper, window light…

I paint because I am
because it’s how I grow
how I know

I paint
because
it’s life.

Kevin

“Because, I follow a line’s story until 
the bitter end and we’re both in tears”

Powerful lines, Linda

Kevin

Kim Johnson

Linda, there is such beauty in your words – that paint that can bring somebody back is the real magic. I like that you wrote about hope today, too – there is hope in your brush. I find hope in little hummingbirds. I feel the peace of your brush strokes today, and there is a lot of real life magic and healing there.

Margaret Simon

Your poem makes me want to go back to painting. It’s the starting that is hard for me, getting all the supplies out and such. I love “hope in my brush”.

Susie Morice

Linda — This is beautiful. And I so so so feel this, as I’ve taken up watercolor painting in the last eight months, and it has become the “because I am” for me as well. The power it give me…give to my heart…”the rules/ are of my making”… does it get any better than that? I love how your art, your passion, your bond with this act of painting is visceral …in each line. Great way to start my day. Thank you! Susie

Dave Wooley

Linda,
I love the rhythms that are embedded in your poem and the way you animate “lines”. The craft of painting always fascinated me and your poem captures the alchemy that happens in that creative moment.

Denise Krebs

Wow, Linda. I didn’t know this about you! “hope in my brush” “how I grow” “how I know” Your poem is convincing. So beautiful. Like Margaret, it makes me want to paint.

Maureen Y Ingram

“because the rules are of my making” – I hear freedom, ease, and bliss in this.

Leilya Pitre

Hi, Linda! I love your passion for painting. These words truly reveal the importance of painting for you and for readers:
I paint because I am
because it’s how I grow
how I know”
Thank you for sharing!

Kevin

Thanks, Dave!

Why Write Songs

because words, jumbled, needed rhythm
because i heard it and hear it that way
because making music once may have saved me
because my father’s drumbeats are a phantom click-track
because i get lost, nearly completely, in the moment
because i found a guitar and a chord book and my voice
because that summer, i had third shift overnight with nothing else to do
because i already knew saxophone but needed something different
because i had poems that needed something more
because i had to and still do

Kevin

Linda Mitchell

“a chord book in my voice.” Wow! What a line. This is such a great poem…and maybe a song too? Music saves. True, so true. I’ve seen it. Experienced it.

Margaret Simon

“My father’s drumbeats are a phantom click-track” tells me more about you and I can relate. And words need rhythm. I envy your songwriting. I just write poems, but my brother is a musician. I’ve always wondered if I should….

Susie Morice

Kevin — I so appreciate this “had to…” … as a songwriter myself, as a poet, as a singer, and now as a painter, I totally walk into this poem and smile with a shared spirit. The beauty of it all is that it seems it will be there for us for the rest of our days. Something that can’t be cleaved from who we are as we lose ourselves in the act and thought of this art. I remain very amazed at your clarity so early in these shared mornings. Thank you. Susie

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Kevin, I can hear the sax and the guitar and the drum….those rhythms, your words, your have-to-ness pulsing along to the beat of need.

Dave Wooley

Kevin,

Thank you for starting things off today! As a fellow song writer your poem really resonates with me; I share so many of those same why moments. But, “my father’s drumbeats are a phantom click track” is an amazing line!

Maureen Y Ingram

“i had poems that needed something more” – love that!

Sharon Roy

Kevin,

Fabulous line: “because my father’s drumbeats are a phantom click-track.” Thank you for sharing your why.

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