Our Host

Dave Wooley is an English, Journalism and Creative Writing teacher at Westhill High School in Stamford, Connecticut, where he has taught since 2001. He has served as a Co-Adviser for the school’s hybrid newspaper The Westword since 2003. He’s been an adjunct Professor at Fairfield University, teaching Philosophy of Hip Hop, and he is currently a teaching fellow at the Connecticut Writing Project. Dave has been involved with the Furious Flower Center for Black Poetry as a participating scholar in its last three Legacy Seminars and he is one of the authors of Furious Flower’s newly created open access syllabus, Opening the World of Black Poetry: A Furious Flower Syllabus. He lives in Stratford, Connecticut with his wife and four children.

Inspiration 

Whew! Today is Day 16 of Verselove, the halfway point in our month-long journey. I thought today would be the perfect point for a praise poem to celebrate the community of writers that we have coming to write during this month–and also offer a shorter form so that we can catch our breath a bit. I was introduced to the Kwansaba form through my participation with the Furious Flower Poetry Center and, last #Verselove, I wrote one and a couple of folks asked about the form, so I’m excited to offer the chance to explore it here. 

Process

The Kwansaba is an African-American poetic form that was created by Eugene Redmond in 1995. It is inspired by the seven days of Kwanzaa and it is a praise poem

The rules of the form are:
-it is a seven line poem,
-each line is seven words in length,
-each word is seven letters or less,
-and the poem should be a praise poem,
often celebrating family or African-American traditions.

So, you can see how the poem lives in the foundation of sevens as a spiritual, astrological, and cultural reference point. 

You can check out some great examples of kwansaba poems here, and below is an example from poet Angel Dye:

Dave’s Poem

30 Days

This space fosters friends and found family
A place to bare hearts, bear witness
To sharpen skills, purge pain, perform joy
It’s a daily sprint, a manic month
An invite to conjure thought to think–
Time alone to create, calls to comment,
Gifted this short time, in shared purpose.

Your Turn

Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe.

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Juliette

Happy Place

A calm that shares warmth in us
Space with beauty that holds us captive

Palm trees upright that deliver a wave
Sweeps through us like the sea breeze

Food, drinks, chats and new found buddies
Love abounds in this place of peace

Meeting sister friends and the mild sea.

Thank you Dave for introducing this new format, Kwansaba. It gave me the opportunity to share a special holiday celebration.

Jennifer Kowaczek

Rushing through a busy, hectic Tuesday morning.
Lunch on my own, sitting quietly, reflecting
on what comes next; gather with family.
Time to visit, recall a fond memory
or two or many — pay respect and
revisit happy days, years, a life lived
fully. Rest now in God’s open arms.

©️Jennifer Kowaczek April 2025

Dave, thank you for introducing this new form. I like the simplicity of the form but this was not an easy poem to write. Today we said goodbye to my mom’s cousin. She truly did live a full life (she was 104 and lived at home independently until just a few years ago).

Juliette

Jennifer, the format and context of this poem (format) allows us to celebrate and relive times with our loved ones. One of my favorite lines is ,”revisit happy days, years, a life lived.” the effect is strong starting with the now and stretching it to a life time.

Allison Laura Berryhill

Hello, poet friends. I came to the post tonight needing to process a humbling experience from the day. I tried to wear colored contact lenses! I used the rules of the Kwansaba, but focused only on myself. (sorry not sorry)

I’ve never liked my bland grey eyes.
Tight steely irises ooze “forget me” (not)

Today I dared to try blue lenses–

“You have vampire eyes!” Rebecca said.
Then Rylie: “What’s wrong with your eyes?” 

8:06 a.m. my experiment ended;
(like Oedious) I plucked my eyes out.

Allison Laura Berryhill

LIke OEDIPUS! (typo)

Kim

Oh no! Are Rebecca and Rylie your students? I know my young students to be brutally honest–especially when it comes to what you are wearing! (And I bet your gray eyes are not bland!)

Dave Wooley

Allison, I’m sorry that the colored contacts experiment didn’t work out (I have a loooong contact lens story, for another time and space), but your poem is a delight! The last line is genius.

Scott M

Oh, Allison, I’m sorry for that; I’ve felt the discomfort of contact lens’ mishaps and the irritations that have led to “vampire eyes!” I hope you can figure out what happened, what went wrong. (And I’m with Kim, I’m sure your “grey eyes” aren’t “bland.” And anyways, isn’t “blandness” in the eye of the beholder….that’s a saying, isn’t it? 🙂 )

Stacey L. Joy

Oh no! I hope you’re okay. I hate when students questions or comments don’t aim to hurt us but they cut like swords. You are beautiful, gray, blue, brown, green, eyes are just eyes but your heart is the source of YOU!

Denise Krebs

Allison, thank you for sharing! Such fun, especially that last line. I like the way you keep it light and fun even though you are “processing a humbling experience”. So glad you did it here. Oh, my, though, they only made it to 8:06 a.m. I wonder…?

Susie Morice

Allison – what a funny confessional poem (maybe all poems are)… I just totally was feeling it when those students blurted their knee-jerk-way-too-honest reactions to you. Oh my word… kids are brutal. The Oedipus ending was perfect. But tell me you didn’t give up the contacts… it sounded like such a fun adventure. Though I’m glad you were not drawn to a wild-eyed red or cats-eye yellow! LOL! Great poem! And by the way, you have beautiful eyes… such a fine looking gal! Hugs, Susie

Allison Laura Berryhill

Susie, thank you for hearing me! It really was a hoot of an experience! Much more fun than awful–like playing bad accordion music or falling off the unicycle! Good adventures all!

Kim

Dave…I do love a fun, short format to play around with! I was surprised at how many times I had to find different words since my first thought had too many letters!

Sing a Song of Coffee

Magic morning elixir in my pink cup
portals me from sleep into my day
with smells of earth that ground me
drip drop gurgle, music to my ears
first sip…aah hot dark melted amber
Jolts. Brings energy into clear present focus
never you mind that it is decaf 🙂

Allison Laura Berryhill

Kim,
I, too, enjoyed the challenge of forcing my initial ideas to meet the poem’s constrictions!
Wonderful lines here:
“portals me”
“smells that ground me” (OH!)
“melted amber”

Love your words.

Dave Wooley

Kim,

About having to find new words-RIGHT!!! That’s both frustrating and generative. I am a coffee addict so this poem is perfect! I love the sounds, the imagery, and the descriptive word choices and the little decaf twist at the end!

Denise Krebs

Kim, haha! That last word, what a surprise. I’m not a coffee drinker, but your poem sounds convincing that you are writing about regular old coffee. I love that you get all the benefits without the caffeine. I love this line: “hot dark melted amber / Jolts.”

Juliette

Kim, I had to work on using alternative, shorter words too. The rhythm and smoothness of your poem is appealing, just like the content. The humor at the end seals it, “never you mind that it is decaf.’

Emily Cohn

Dave, thank you for the introduction to a poetry form new to me. I liked “A place to bare hearts, bear witness
To sharpen skills, purge pain, perform joy” So true, and I love the wordplay and alliteration here!

In Praise of VerseLove

I confess: I don’t always want to
Write a poem this way or that.
I don’t always want to write. Period.
But gentle urging from poem siblings works!
I open prompts like an advent chocolate:
What new sweet will we have today
For our tired minds and willing hearts?

Kim

“I open prompts like an advent chocolate” what a perfect line to describe that sweet anticipation each morning!

Allison Laura Berryhill

Thank you for this. I’ve missed a few days this month, even when I know this space offers “gentle urging” and “prompts like an advent chocolate.”

“Tired minds” (but) “willing hearts” says it all. Thank you.

Denise Krebs

Ah, Emily, I love that idea of the prompts as an advent chocolate–a daily sweet. Perfect metaphor! And that last line is great for you busiest of teachers!

Susie Morice

Emily! Hugs coming your way! Your poem this evening is just so honest, so lovely. The chocolate comparison is a dandy. And you capture the magnetic draw of writing poetry. Love that you’re an “ethicalela girl! Love, Susie

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

And now we are here liminally beautifully.
The physical breathes beside, outside, alongside here.
The voices chat, birds chitter, wind howls.
To-dos wait, sink water runs, static stirs.
Coming to this digital echo, cursor blinking
has its place– beyond the embodied spheres,
we make heart beats in our poetry..

Glenda Funk

Sarah,
You have such a beautiful way of whispering poetry, of presenting ideas in a gentle touch. Do you remember when Kim described writing poetry as “breathing through pens” early in our journey here? That has always stuck w/ me, and now you’ve given us that gorgeous last line: “we make heartbeats in our poetry.” Another line that resonates is “To-dos wait, sink water runs, static stirs.” Ken made dinner last night and this evening so I could write my blog post and comment on poetry.

Denise Krebs

Sarah, yes, poetry that mends and heals and makes heart beats. This is so soft and lovely. Thank you, thank you for this good space you’ve created here.

Susie Morice

Beautiful, Sarah! You capture the variety here in the first lines. And the way the world spins but stops for the brief moments when we step into this poetic place is so real, especially the “sink…”. Poetry is magic… you capture that! Hugs, Susie

Tammi Belko

Dave,

Thank you for your prompt. I’m getting to this a little late tonight but the topic of praise was perfect today because my middle school student poets have been sending their poetry out into the world, winning contests and getting published, and I’m so proud of them.

Praise to My Student Poets! 

   My student poets make my heart dance. 
   Their poetry, openly shared, is the music.
   They embrace and breathe life into words
   Pour joy and pain, laughter and tears
   into the world, contests near and far
   and their words are heard and felt
   and now and then they even win.

Mo Daley

How wonderful fur your students! This is a perfect celebration of their efforts. Yours too!

Glenda Funk

Tammi,
I hope you share this w/ your young poets. It honors them so beautifully.

Emily Cohn

This is so wonderful and inspiring! What a way to engage students and get them comfortable being uncomfortable. I like the idea of your heart dancing to their poetry music. They are certainly lucky to have your open nature leading the way!

Allison Laura Berryhill

Tammi, I AM YOU! Thank you for this mirror poem. I see and feel in my own students what you write about here so beautifully.

Ona

I love when I love a prompt and then as I work on it I love the kismet of it even more. This is my 7th year as an instructional coach .. and I am all in for the culture of coaching. But the district is taking the position away… so I’ve used this form to praise my seven years as a coach.

For seven years I have peeked into
this class or that, a quiet inquiry,
“Can I join you? How might I
help?” Some doors were locked at first.
But, we chose to take a chance
with each other. I’m selfish you know.
I’ve learned so much in seven years. 

Ashley

Ona,

What a beautiful way to lean into the “7” today!

Tammi Belko

Ona —
“Some doors were locked at first” — I can totally relate to this. I am a middle school gifted intervention specialist and for many years we used a push- in-co teaching model and I provided enrichment opportunities for my gifted students. I didn’t always feel welcomed at first. Establishing co-teaching harmony isn’t always as easy task.

Glenda Funk

I’m so sorry to hear about the instructional coach position. You deserve both self-praise and accolades from all you’ve served.

Emily Cohn

“But, we chose to take a chance”
This line stands out, and honors the bravery it takes to receive feedback. So sorry about the loss of the position, and kudos for taking the time to honor it.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Your poem captures the paradox of teaching in that we at once want to be of service and yet love and need to be of service. I love this image of unlocking in our asking.

Peace,
Sarah

Leilya Pitre

Thank you for today’s prompt, David! I like learning about new forms, especially the ones that force me count the words, lines, or letters. I am up to a little challenge. Your poem means so much for me, so thank you for a caring tribute to this space and community, which allows us to “sharpen skills, purge pain, perform joy.” We need it so much!
I live near a beautiful city, and I want to celebrate it today.
 
Song of N’Awlins
 
In the jovial city of New Orleans,  
The Big Easy on the mighty Mississippi,
The jazz notes sway in a laid-back way.
Balconies adorned with blooms, a picturesque sight,
The Crescent City’s charm—impossible to disarm
Adored by the locals and tourists’ crowds,
Doubled for festivities of Mardi Gras season,
A city, where a love affair begins.

Leilya Pitre

Here is one of my favorite New Orleans views.

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Mo Daley

Leilya, your poem is a love note to New Orleans. Your third line is perfection. I’m enjoying the internal rhymes, too.

Glenda Funk

Leilya,
I love this celebration of the Crescent city. She’s such an important American city and possibly the most unique, culturally rich city in the country. The food scene is magnificent. Next time in that area, I’m gonna need time w/ you so you can show me your favorite spots.

Leilya Pitre

Make sure to let me know, when you come, and we will meet, Glenda! I love to cook too 🙂

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

The praise here is beautiful in the phrasing of “jazz notes sway” and the familiar imagery of “Balconies adorned” that lead us to the love affair. I think the people are everything. You.

Emily Cohn

I love your alliteration, and I love N’Awlins! I particularly like the “jazz notes sway in a laid-back way” is musical in its meter, and “balconies adorned with blooms” highlights some of the beauty of New Orleans that gets overlooked for the parties is worth mentioning. Thanks for the trip!

Dave Wooley

Leilya, I LOVE this poem! I actually just flew back from New Orleans this afternoon (and maaan, my arms are tired!). French Quarter Fest, Superior Seafood, the river walk were all part of the weekend. It is a city where a love affair begins! Your poem really captures that joy.

Leilya Pitre

Dave, I remember you wrote a few days ago that you are visiting New Orleans. Even mentioning the common place brings us closer in this space. We know Superior Seafood too well. Thank you!

Susie Morice

Leilya- You do N’Awlins proud. You oughta send this to their Chamber of Commerce, explaining our prompt and inviting them to post it on their website. It’s lovely. Susie

Katrina Morrison

Twenty-two days of the school year
Are left. I hope you found a
Safe haven here. I hope our classroom
Nourished you for the challenging flight ahead
I hope you have learned and grown
And stretched your beautiful wings before you 
Fly away and bedazzle the waiting world.

Mo Daley

What a sweet poem to your students, Katrina. I’m sure your students will be stretching wings soon enough!

Leilya Pitre

Not counting the days yet, just weeks, but I know how it feels closer to the end of the school year, Katrina! I love the final two lines and your hope for your students who will “bedazzle the waiting world.” Wonderful!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Katrina, this message is full of hope with imagery of flight and wings with that fun phrase “bedazzled the waiting world.” Yes, we want them to leave a beautiful mark!

Tammi Belko

Katrina,
This — “I hope you found a/Safe haven here” — really resonates with me. When it is all said and done and the year is over, it is my hope that my students have felt cared for and safe to learn, grow and challenge themselves.

Hope you have a great rest of your year!

Ona

I love this poem to your students! It’s such a hopeful message. I love “bedazzle the waiting world!”

Emily Cohn

I love the idea of a safe haven for people to grow and then “bedazzle the waiting world” as only birds (and sometimes teachers and students) can. Thanks for this!

Dave Wooley

Katrina, this poem captures what all teachers wish for I think. I love the repetition of the “I hope” statements and where they show up in your lines. And your last line is perfection!

Glenda Funk

Dave,
Thanks for hosting. This prompt reminded me of a poem I wrote about this community in 2020 when we were all hiding in our homes.

Poemville

We find our way to virtual turf
via golden tickets and those who web-surf.

Once here we mingle, read, and greet
other scribes in poetry potluck verse feasts.

Each dish offers a new writing way
for versifiers who plate poems and praise. 

Except word streakers who drop and dash. 

Beep! Beep! 

Glenda Funk
4-16-24

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Leilya Pitre

Your title is telling, as always, Glenda! It is about that time I joined this community. I think I has an email from Sarah, but once I started, I got hooked. I want to praise each line here, but the second stanza about the community of and the following with the extension of the food metaphor are the most delicious here.

Leilya Pitre

I wish there was an “edit” option here; the typos are getting to me ))

Barb Edler

Oh my gosh, your Canva roadrunner is hysterically funny. I really appreciate your potluck metaphor and the golden ticket celebrates the wonderful opportunity to share or perhaps even be blessed with a wonderful experience like Charlie getting to go to the chocolate factory! The rhythmic flow of your poem is gorgeous. Thanks for your fun poem!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Glenda, This is so much fun with “poetry potluck” and “versifiers”. This is not a poem about the pandemic rather this is about the nourishment in “each dish” we shared together. Love it.

Tammi Belko

Glenda,

You’ve really captured the essence of this space. These days really are “verse feasts!”
Love the “Beep! Beep!” and Road Runner addition.

Glenda Funk

Barb gave me the idea for the roadrunner and beep beep. This is actually the second poem I wrote for today’s prompt. I didn’t like my first one. The Cava photo is via Pixabay.

Jeania White

I’m really fond of the word streakers who drop and dash…lots of images lining up In my head!

Stacey L. Joy

Glenda,

I am sure I read this in 2020 but I am loving it more today because thinking back on the poems we wrote in 2020 reflect our resilience!

Perfect line, has me wanting to write more alliterations with “p” words.


for versifiers who plate poems and praise. 

Susie Morice

Glenda – What a super way to pay homage to our friends here. I love the plates of poems idea. And always your visual enhancement with Canva is a tickle. I really admire your poetics every single day. What a woman!! Hugs, Susie

Donnetta D Norris

Weekend

Friday night…after a long five days
of pouring out into little humans.
Sabado…sleep in and get up late;
liven up just enough to check off
the private list of things to do.
Sunday…praise and give thanks to Him
in whom I live, move, and be.

Jeania White

Perfect! I love the line “liven up just enough”. And the Sunday praise, excellent!

Leilya Pitre

Yes, Donnetta, that Friday night is so welcomed! Love the sound of”pouring out into little humans.” Beautiful!

Tammi Belko

Donnetta,

Yes! Sleeping after a long week is the best part of Saturday! Your poem makes me long for the weekend!

Susan O

I like the line “pouring out into little humans.” So descriptive of teaching. I relate to the Saturday that you hope to sleep in but there are lots of personal things to do on your list. You sound just like my teaching daughter who always says she can’t get it all done. That Sunday praise gives energy and positivity for the week ahead. Amen!

Stacey L. Joy

Donnetta,
There is something to be said about the “private list of things to do” and I deeply appreciate it.

I’m ready for Friday and it’s only Tuesday! WTH!

Juliette

Donetta, I’m sure you enjoyed writing this poem as much as I did writing mine. Part of this sounds prayerful and indeed we need to do this:”praise and give thanks to Him”. You also introduce me to ‘Sabado’, Saturday and using it gives your poem that feel of acceptance (mulit-lingualism).

Mo Daley

HI Dave. Thanks for the great prompt. I realized that I like to use a lot of 8 letter words as I was writing this poem. I recent search for some family documents led me to write this poem today.

A Search for My Birth Certificate
By Mo Daley 4/16/24

I riffle through my long-dead
Mom’s paper trail, I unveil
love letters, cards from kids, news
stories, thank you notes, deeds for
loved ones’ burial plots, and
military records, I
unearth who I want to be.

Susie Morice

Mo – You capture so clearly the “paper trail” we leave as evidence of who we’ve been, who we are, who our beloved ones were/are. It’s very touching how you’ve tethered to your mom. I love this. Susie

Leilya Pitre

Oh, what a treasure, Mo, this “Mom’s paper trail.” It is from all these things we learn to know ourselves better. Your final line is amazing: ” I unearth who I want to be.”

Tammi Belko

Mo,

This is a beautiful poem. I can imagine the nostalgia you felt as you riffled through family history. This last line really struck me –“I unearth who I want to be”

Barb Edler

There’s nothing as sweet as sending off a poem and reading someone’s thoughtful note to keep us encouraging. It’s just like when we send off our children to school, we hope their teachers will love them and care for them as we do.

A Labor of Love

a new babe is born after a
valiant fight, lifted and cleaned from soiled
sheets, wrapped in warmth, coos and cries
passed like a fresh bouquet into her
mother’s arms who kisses her sweet cheeks
nestles her close to her loving breasts
then passes her on into open arms

Barb Edler
16 April 2024

Susie Morice

Barb — A truly glorious scene. So dear. I love thinking about this, having never seen it… in movies but…

…pass[ing] … bouquet is particularly lovely.

Thank you for sharing this. Susie

Donnetta D Norris

Having experienced this twice, it is just as your describe it.

Glenda Funk

Barb,
This is so beautiful and eloquent. These poems do feel like babes we nourish. We trust them to the world, but they’re not always accepted. And as w/ birthing babies, writing poetry can be hard. I love the metaphors, the ethereal language, all of it.

Leilya Pitre

Barb, your entire poem is an extended metaphor of crafting a poem. You composed it with love and care for each word. I love the progression of movement here. From being born to being cleaned up, wrapped, and passed to a mother to further movement to pass it to the readers. Comparing it to “a fresh bouquet” sounds delightful! Thank you!

Stacey L. Joy

Oh, Barb, you have reminded me of the special moments after childbirth! The ones before the pain kicked in and the hollering all night made me lose my mind! 🤣

This is the best metaphor for passing a baby to its mother!

passed like a fresh bouquet into her

Denise Krebs

Oh, Barb, everything is perfect about this. The title, the “valiant fight”, “like a fresh bouquet” and those sweet actions of the mother.

Sharon Roy

Dave,

thanks for introducing me to a new form.

One of my amazing colleagues is out recovering from surgery. I checked in with her this morning and she’s missing the energy of school so I wrote my poem to her. I mentioned this to my students and gave them an opportunity to write a poem for Coach Brown. Several did and I know that’s going to make her day.

Coach Brown

Thanks for helping to found our school
Thanks for talking to our seventh graders
About the need to always be kind
Thank you for sharing your cancer journey
Thank you for making us laugh and cry
For calling your Stars, please STAND UP
Leading us to be our best selves

Barb Edler

Sharon, what a lovely tribute to Coach Brown. Coach Brown sounds like a wonderful mentor, sharing their own cancer journey and leading others to be their best selves. Marvelous poem!

Susie Morice

Sharon – terrific tribute to Coach B. Wonderful guy. Well done! Susie

Donnetta D Norris

This is great way to honor and cheer up your colleague. She sounds like a wonderful person.

Rachel S

Sorting
I’ve spent my day sorting through clothes – 
I folded each piece neatly, stacked them 
by size and type, then grouped them 
smartly in proper wood drawers – a humdrum,
vanilla venture, which now tucked away leaves
me free for a more lovely toil,
that is: sorting through words – writing poems.

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Wh
at fun Rachel to be able to write a great “narrative” poem in just seven lines having more fun writing the poem that doing what you wrote about!
You mention folding, sorting, and storing clothes! My grandmother was a neat-nick about this and I simply developed a guilt complex about it! Your poem, therefore sparks fond memories of a loving grandmother and sad memories about the times I opened junky dresser drawer delighted she was visiting me. 🙂

Barb Edler

Rachel, love how you lead us to your end. Sorting through words was definitely a required chore for this form. I often found myself writing ones with more than seven letters. What a perfect illustration of how we celebrate our poetry here. Perfect title, too!

Kasey Dearman

You were able to tell a story and make a great point about sorting through words. I love your images and the way you needed the poem.

Seana Hurd Wright

Purses carry our items and contain the
secrets, destinations, keys, financial green of us
Mommie strongly stated, “don’t touch my handbag”
brother peered inside once, hand got popped.
He whispered, “gum, money, hairpins, lipsticks, sunglasses..”
An Uncle always carried Auntie’s pocketbook and
left it once. Returned hours later for it, alone.

By Seana Hurd Wright
*had to deviate from the pattern a little for the ending.

Rachel S

I think this form worked perfectly for your poem – making it nice & concise, with a bit of a rhythm. Like this line – “brother peered inside once, / hand got popped.” Fun topic to dive into!

Glenda Funk

Seana,
I adore a good rule breaker and a gorgeous purse. The dialogue is perfect and reminds me of asking my mom for money when she was drunk. I have lots of purse stories. I should write a few! Fun poem.

Stacey L. Joy

Hi Seana,
Isn’t it funny to think back on the secrets of our mother’s purse! OMG. I can see my mom’s Silva Thins and lighter!

I loved this and the ending had me wondering what happened to Auntie. 😞

Susie Morice

Dave — Thank you for the Kwansaba form…hits close to home for me. Eugene Redmond is a hometown (St. Louis/East St. Louis) celebrity. He used to show up at all sorts of poetry gigs here…so much fun to hear him do his own poetry…rhythms and beats and sheebangs! Geez, he must be close to 90 by now. Susie

Barb Edler

Thanks for sharing this detail with us, Susie. That must have been so much fun to experience!

Dave Wooley

That’s so cool!

Susie Morice

[In the mid ’50s, I was a first grader and Brown vs BOE had just shifted things in central rural Missouri. I didn’t realize much at that age, but I sure loved the new kids on our long, long bus route to and from school.]

THE BEAUTIFUL CHILDREN ON MY BUS
 
I loved Clyde, thought Wendell gentle, tall,
Wilson the jokester, smiled easy to all;
the teen girl, Miss Cosby, sharp, sassy;
the Herndon boys, smart, silent, so slim;
Norman, old enough to know anger, wronged,
never got a fair shake even once;
in ’55, black in Missouri, a tightrope.
 
by Susie Morice, April 16, 2024©

Maureen Ingram

I love this praise; honoring ones who were often ignored or spoken to negatively, in that transition time. You recognized them as friends. Lovely!

Denise Krebs

Susie, I love this honoring poem. You are part of history, as we all are, I guess. I love how you personalized it with so many names and personalities alluded to. And that last line!

Kim Johnson

Susie, what a ride! A ride on a bus and a ride through the memory. Thank you for introducing us to Clyde, Wendell, Wilson, Miss Cosby, the Herndon boys, and Norman today. My heart goes out to him for not getting a fair shake – it is heartbreaking to think of this.

Rachel S

What neat descriptions of these kids! I’m intrigued by the things you remember about them, years later. I love your last line – “a tightrope” seems just the right way to describe that time (and maybe still this time).

Barb Edler

Susie, I love your title and how you describe each of these children on your bus. From the jokester to the smart, silent, and slim ones, we can recognize our own bus buddies and the ones who were always wronged. I especially liked your last line. Tightrope is a perfect descriptive word to describe the long bus ride and this time of integration.

Glenda Funk

Susie,
Thank you for this poem and for naming those children. Those last two lines are heartbreaking. There was a black boy in my first grade class at West End Elementary in Joplin. I didn’t realize then what that meant for him. We visited the national Brown vs. Topeka last summer. I fear the trajectory we’re on now.

Susie Morice

Glenda – you are so right… so many places in this country have brutally stepped backward with the ridiculous conviction to “hark back to the good ol’ days” … those racist, nasty backward days of cruelty. Trying to rewrite, erase, gaslight our history is a horrific effort on the part of the 🍊 man’s mob. I will not quit fighting this. Hugs to you, Susie

Stacey L. Joy

Ooweeee, Susieeee! What I always love about your writing is how you create visuals and tell stories with so few words! This is a whole chapter book in 7 lines!

Norman leaves me questioning and hoping. Thank you for sharing your bus ride and the children with us.

Hugs, my friend!

Dave Wooley

Susie, this is so good and you do so much with the scarcity of words that the form dictates. The progression through the young people that you encountered, escalating to Norman is amazing. I can picture all of these kids on the ride to school. Amazing poem!

Kasey Dearman

No Thank You!  Do Not Say Sorry. 

I do not want to praise Today
I am fuming, furious- so mad at words
a wise woman knows how to fight
smile sweet and take punch after punch 
do not dare to dream to defend
let the blow’s blunt force, force you
to fight a battle with no win

Maureen Ingram

a wise woman knows how to fight” – yes!

Kim Johnson

Kasey, I sure do understand the not wanting to praise some days. What I love is that we are free to share where we are – – this is a space where there are plenty of arms to reach out and plenty of hearts that have needed those same arms from time to time.

Denise Krebs

OH, ouch. These are painful: “force you / to fight a battle with no win” and “smile sweet and take punch after punch” Here’s to a win and a better more praiseworthy day tomorrow.

Katrina Morrison

Kasey, though you may be fighting “a battle with no win,” there is such power and strength in your choice and arrangement of words. “Let the blow’s blunt force, force you/ to fight…” Sometimes, we need to air anger too.

Stacey L. Joy

Kasey!!!

I want to know more because today I feel like I am the wise woman! It was that kind of day!

Such a good way to express emotion when words just aren’t enough:

I am fuming, furious- so mad at words

Jeania White

Thank you Dave, for today’s challenge. Just the short form and 7 word lines were inspiring to me today.

Thank you all for this safe space
To think, grow, write, learn and dream.
Such a joy to join you all
In verse and story,rhyme and song.
Seldom would we share a place to
Meet like this as folks unknown, yet
Here we are, together, face to face.

Maureen Ingram

Yes, this is a safe place. I love that, too.

Kim Johnson

Jeania, in a world full of unsafe places and mean people, this space is truly a haven for writers and kindred spirits. I share your joy.

Denise Krebs

Jeania, what a beautiful sentiment. I love the way you re-envisioned “face to face”. Though we are meeting in this virtual place, “Here we are, together, face to face” Beautiful! So glad you have joined in this good and true place this April.

Rachel S

I love your last 3 lines. Modern technology is such a blessing, bringing this group of people together that might never have met otherwise! And though we aren’t, technically, “face to face,” the writing of poetry together somehow makes it so.

Barb Edler

Jeania, your poem is a wonderful tribute to the writers who post at Ethical ELA. It’s wonderful to share our stories, our joys and experiences.

Glenda Funk

Jeania,
I love your poem. I’m so glad you’re here w/ me and finding joy among all these incredible poet friends.

Katrina Morrison

Jeania, what a perfect “Seven’s Up” poem. You are absolutely right. “Seldom would we share a place to/Meet like this as folks unknown, yet/Here we are, together, face to face.”

Stacey Joy

Dave, how fun!!

I composed some ideas as spoken notes while driving to work. I had a little time while my class was testing to get it finalized. I enjoyed this because I needed some constraints. Sometimes free writing takes me in a rabbit hole. Your poem reflects the love I have of Ethical ELA so I opted to praise it also! Thanks Dave.

Our Poetry Place

Ethical ELA, Sarah’s site for teacher poets
A place to share life in verse
Awaken our senses with fun word play
Choose a form or enjoy free write
Watch our hearts open, our worlds expand
Comment with care, read with open minds
Rejoice it’s April! We write each day!

©Stacey L. Joy, April 16, 2024

Maureen Ingram

I love the idea of “life in verse.” Yes! Rejoice it’s April!!

Kim Johnson

A place to share life in verse – – this is what thrills my soul and brings me joy. The poems are like little windows we all have into each other’s minds, worlds, homes, places. I’m so glad I get to be part of your world.

Denise Krebs

Stacey, so precious! This is like a list Kwansaba with so many ideas for making April a great experience. We should create a little collection to use for advertising next March. “Awaken our senses with fun word play” Ain’t that the truth! Super poem!

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Stacey, what a glowing tribute to Sarah and all those who come and share, and then allow us to compare what we’ve done to what we’ve seen other do … and not to be overly jealous!

It really has been folks like you who have kept me active in this space. You take time to give thanks, but you usually do so in the poetic style recommended by the person who offers the prompt that day. Thus honoring that time and effort those persons take to suggest and recommend a variety of ways to use our language to write this versatile genre. That takes quite a thoughtful person …and you are one of many here on VERSELOVE.

Barb Edler

Stacey, lovely poem! I adore your lines:

Watch our hearts open, our worlds expand
Comment with care, read with open minds

Commenting with care and reading with open minds resonated strongly for me. Thank you for sharing this wonderful celebratory poem with us today!

Glenda Funk

Stacey,
What a gift Sarah has given us. I love this cheering poem, especially the line “Watch our hearts open, our words expand.” hugs

Katrina Morrison

Stacey, I join you in your praise for our shared space here, where we “watch our hearts open, our worlds expand.” Thank you.

Dave Wooley

Stacey, love this! This is a fitting tribute to Sarah–“comment with care, read with open minds” really captures the ethos of the site!

Susie Morice

Hey, Stacey — This is, indeed, ethicalela! You said it in this Kwanzaba form so perfectly. Sarah could use your poem as the ad for VerseLove! I’m glad you squeezed this in your way-packed day today. Whew, I so admire you! Hugs, Susie

Clayton

7 Blue 7

Courage allowed resting comfort, citizen freedom appears,
Triumph Trooper, helpful, healing, Protect clearly pioneer.

regular Bravery donated , honored, secured, statued austere.
Removal corrupt politic, embrace harmony, forever sincere.

Liberty flowing thought, without calvary, missons unclear.
Officer blessed, culture nations, beliefs unified premier.
Obliged spirits welcome officer without shocked career. 

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Scott M

I stopped reading midline and started to count letters…mind blown, lol. This is the poetic equivalent of that meme, “hold my beer.” You were like, seven lines got it, praise poem got it, words of seven or fewer letters, wait, what if I only do words of seven letters and I throw in some end rhyme, too. (You’ve also made me subconsciously — or now rather consciously, because I counted, lol — brought my attention to and made me focus on that last word because of the number discrepancy.) Great job! Thank you for crafting this and sharing it!

Kim Johnson

I applaud the all-7 letter words. My goodness, what a challenge and a salute to the blue, too!

Denise Krebs

Boxer, wow. A 7 x, 7 x 7 Kwansaba! That is magically built. Here’s to all officers being this: “Triumph Trooper, helpful, healing”

Dave Wooley

Clayton, this is amazing craft! I second everything that Scott said. I found myself counting letters, too!

weverard1

Dave,
Thanks for the inventive form! Love it, and loved the alliterative quality of your line.
My poem today is dedicated to one of my favorite students, Jaden Kaplan.

To Jaden

Voice ready and resonant
Glimmers of greatness in eyes
He speaks profound truth daily
And writes insights with no peer:
What will his bright future hold?
What bold words will spill like gold?
Will tales of his life be told?

Rachel S

This is so neat. “Glimmers of greatness,” “bold words…spill like gold.” I often wonder if students can see in themselves what we see in them! I hope Jaden does.

Denise Krebs

Wendy, Oh, no wonder Jaden is a favorite! I love those rhyming questions at the end. Especially “What bold words will spill like gold?” I can’t help but think you might not have asked it that way without wanting to craft the rhymes, so that is a lovely gift to us and to Jaden. I hope you share it with them!

Barb Edler

Wendy, you offer such powerful questions in your poem. Provocative poem!

Susan O

Yes, Wendy, isn’t it great to have as student like that! Such an inspiration to you as a teacher. He is someone that you will always remember. Some have wise souls at a young age.

Maureen Ingram

April Joy

such a gift as this, each morn 
a poetic muse to feed the soul
pen in hand, I play with words
and bask in you, dear writing family
all day long, alcoves of my mind 
tinker and weave and stretch and wander
holding you close – all praise, Ethical ELA

weverard1

Maureen! What a sweet and loving tribute to this family! <3

Susan

Maureen,
I just love this! Your words capture so many different aspects of our community. You stayed true to the form and created power with small–yet mighty–words. I especially love
muse
bask
alcoves
tinker
weave

Stacey Joy

April Joy, perfect title for a beautiful praise poem!

tinker and weave and stretch and wander

Love that line!

Susie Morice

That’s totally sweet, Maureen. I feel the same way! Hugs, Susie

Denise Krebs

Ah, Maureen, what a beautiful poem. I love the title, “April Joy” It could be someone’s name, but instead, it is us together held close in this place. So lovely!

I love that this April joy makes our minds “all day long” “tinker and weave and stretch and wander” So true!

Barb Edler

Maureen, you’ve chosen so many beautiful words to craft your poem. I love the poetic muse feeding our souls and the “alcoves of my mind” is pure gold. Your ending is sensational, showing the power of holding each other close. Beautifully written!

Glenda Funk

Maureen,
Reading your poem I feel as though I’m opening a little gift each time I read a poem I love. That is April. Favorite line; “alcoves of my mind.”

Susan

What a great mid-month prompt, Dave!! It’s appropriate to praise our space and the form is one unfamiliar to me that I now just love. And so will my students.
Your mentor poem is fabulous. I love your word choice.

Safe Haven

I write, you write, and we write
five days a month, all of April
valued input full of heart and mind–
from diverse yet like souls miles apart–
helps build our fierce love for words.
I love to write but really love 
to read the wise kernels of others.

~Susan Ahlbrand
16 April 2024

Denise Krebs

Susan, you nailed this new form and have built a safe haven out of love. I love that title. “fierce love for words” and “wise kernels of others” are two phrases that I’m hanging onto today.

(I am curious about the five days a month, instead of seven. I wonder if the audience is your class, or do you join us five days a week in April, and I haven’t noticed yet?)

Susan

Oh, Denise, my wording is not very clear and I couldn’t figure out how to get it clearer with the seven word limit. Would
“five days each month, all of April”
help with clarity?

Barb Edler

Susan, what a gorgeous poem. Loved “helps build our fierce love for words”. Yes, I love gleaning kernels of wisdom from others and feel constantly amazed by the poetic skills demonstrated each time I visit here.

Susan O

Susan, your title struck me because lately I have heard a lot of discussion about safe places and there are very few. Your poem sums up the blessing we have each month together writing in a safe place.

Katherine Lindsey

Family. Loving, cheerful, amazing.
A breath of fresh air…
on a sad lonely day.
Filled with a child wanting to play
A grandma and grandpa recall old times
Their child grew so quick and Keen.
Turning into some one quite unseen.

This challenge was extremely hard but interesting. I had to be extremely mindful of the words that I used while writing since a lot of the words that I wanted to use were 8 or 9 letters in length. I also would have loved to extend my poem by at least 3 more stanzas so it was hard to come up with a good conclusion.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Katherine, you have intrigued us with wanting to write at least three more stanzas. I do hope you will, as this is a beautiful story ripe for unfurling. I am fascinated by the capitalization of Keen, and “on a sad lonely day.” I hope you will keep going!

Barb Edler

Katherine, I also struggled the same way as you did. I love the imagery of your poem, seeing the family cheering, breathing in fresh air and listening to the elders share old times. Your end has me pondering whether you mean, the child has left or that the child accomplished things that were unimaginable to the family. Either way it adds a wonderful emotional appeal.

Rita B DiCarne

Dave, Thank you for this short form. I have never heard of this before. The seven-letter limit was a bit challenging for me. Your poem is beautiful and captures this community so well. “Gifted this short time” really sticks with me. This month is a wonderful gift. Thank you for gifting me with inspiration.

Grands allow us to live life again –
to see it through their bright eyes. 
Their world is still filled with such promise
as ours once was – their parents’ too.
Can we find that sense of wonder?
Yes! Yes, we can if we believe
in hopes, in wishes, and in dreams.

Angie

Love your end lines, Rita, the hope, positivity and word choice!

Yes! Yes, we can if we believe
in hopes, in wishes, and in dreams.”

brcrandall

Grandma Rebirth, Rita! Love your use of this style, especially the line “Grands allow us to live life again.”

Susan

Oh, Rita, how I long to experience grandchildren! And for so many of the reasons you express in this short but powerful poem. Your way of concisely sharing that grandkids allow everyone to have a bit of a do-over really shines a light on the joy the role brings.

Stacey Joy

Rita,
Your poem is too cute! I recently read about the destruction of curiosity and wonder and the education system is to blame!! I want to keep my sense of wonder! Thanks for this gem.

Denise Krebs

Rita, yes, yes, indeed! So much truth in this sweet Kwansaba about grandchildren. “Their world is still filled with such promise” And they do help us recapture “that sense of wonder”, don’t they? Well-crafted.

Barb Edler

Rita, what a gorgeous poem. I love the way your poem flows. The affirmation at the end is striking and resonates with me. Beautiful!

Jordan S.

Thank you, Dave, for an introduction to this form. This was fun to play around with and revise a few times. I don’t think I was true to the seven in how many letters each word had, so further revision can happen.

Too many days, too many plastic toys.
Too many house projects, too many chores.
Too often, my brain short circuits, frazzles.
Yet when their small fingers clasp mine,
When your two arms create security, no
Pressure, when those few kind words escape
Our lips, I can achieve multitudes more.

brcrandall

Love this, Jordan, and thinking of all the times I’ve stepped on “plastic toys,” only to curse the Gods (especially Legos).

When your two arms create security

This is the magic, for me.

Rachel S

I’m with you, Jordan!! “Too often, my brain short circuits, frazzles.” But I love the sweet moments you captured in the second half – the small fingers clasping, two arms wrapping, releasing all the pressure! Poetry helps too, I think.

Denise Krebs

Wow, Jordan, This is beautiful. I love the anaphora “Too…many, too often, too much…” Yes, indeed, and then the “Yet” that finished the majority of your poem, more than half (showing your priorities) with the “small fingers”, “two arms”, “kind words”… and that, my friend, is what it’s all about. You have captured that here.

Scott M

The day before today (to be exact)
I gulped down water and, in fact,
choked on nothing – just H20, so let’s
give praise to those greedy hungry numbers:
they add and add to reach forever,
seven most of all, for he craves
higher digits. Look out nine: you’re next.

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Thanks, Dave, for introducing me to this new form and for your mentor poem: I loved your alliteration throughout – and, of course, the content, too!

Dave Wooley

Scott, is today the day that 7 ate 9?

Scott M

LOL. Yes! I was, like, uh, should I offer up an addendum, lol, there’s nothin’ here, just a silly joke, aside from the true phenomenon that sometimes I drink water (too fast, maybe?) and start to cough, like I forget how to swallow, aside from that, this was just a silly joke, but I was gettin’ nervous, it was like five hours…and nary a peep, lol.

Denise Krebs

Scott, how fun! The first time I read it, I didn’t catch the joke, just concentrated on the choke! Then Dave pointed me in the right direction. So funny and clever.

Glenda Funk

Scott,
I sense you’re feeling a little boxed in today. I counted the words in each of your lines. The water metaphor made me giggle.

Susan O

Happy Travel Kwansaba

Looking forward to a visit in mountains
of nature while driving the curvy roads
from Idaho to Zion to Las Vegas
then more southernly to warm San Diego
My sister with me all the way
talking, sharing, listening and laughing while driving
and happy to be soon living together.

Thank you Dave. Love learning a new form and it was perfect for today. I won’t be able to write for a few days because as my poem says, I will be on the road.

Rita B DiCarne

Susan, this sounds like a wonderful trip. Living with your sister sounds like it will be fabulous from the description of your car ride! Safe travels!

Dave Wooley

Susan, enjoy the road! I love the poem as travelogue. I hope you get to enjoy the company of your sister as you make your way!

Kim Johnson

Susan, I wish you a fun time with your sister, and safe travels. This is fun! I so wish I could be along – I’d love to see one of my. kids who lives out west. Laugh and love!

Denise Krebs

Susan, here’s true praise to a great road trip! Enjoy all the springtime sites. I would invite you to stop by because I’m sort of between LV and SD, But this week we will pass each other on different sides of the country, as we’re visiting my daughter. So glad you and your sister get to live together.

Barb Edler

Susan, your poem is the perfect celebration for the wonderful event lying ahead. I enjoyed the travel details, and the end result will hopefully be incredibly fulfilling!

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Okay, Dave. You got me. Seven letters, seven lines! Here you are! But, not seven words per line.

She’s All That?

Antique, yes she is.
Affable, she’s that too.
Amiable, some would say.
AnnaJSR, that’s her name.
Accused, of what, by the way?
Anxious, about what?
Absolve, please do.
 

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Dave Wooley

Anna, 2 out of 3 ain’t bad, lol. I love the playful nature of this and the move towards self love. This is a fun poem! (It made me smile on the security line at the airport!)

Kim Johnson

Anna, I am in awe of how you used your A in your name to come up with the adjectives and made your own rule. And that picture at the end with the question mark adds to the fun.

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

True confessions, Kim. I did a search for seven-letter words that begin with A. And, as I was reading through the list, the “story” came to me. Your students may find this a fun way to respond to this prompt. If I were teaching a group book, I’d ask my students to find seven-letter words that begin with the name of their favorite MINOR character. How would you adapt this for your current class? m This would be a little tougher with certain initial letters, like “k” https://www.dictionary.com/e/word-finder/words-that-start-with-k/. 🙂

Denise Krebs

Wow, you found seven seven-letter words that started with A and describe you. That was a feat! Some rhymes too. Fun poem!

Barb Edler

What an interesting title, Anna. I appreciate your A words and how you lead the reader to your end. Also, I saw your note to Kim. Thanks for sharing the link. As always, you support your poetry with the most amazing illustrations, etc. You are not antique, but definitely affable and amiable. Your positivity radiates!

Stacey Joy

Anna, what a brilliant approach! I love “s” words and your “a” words are AWESOME! Do you think we love the letter that matches our names or is there more to it?

Antique? You? No. 🩵

Denise Krebs

Dave, thanks for helping us dig into this great form. The counting letters in the word for new for me. It helped me make some different word choices than I would have, which is always a good thing. The two mentor poems are great. Dye’s about Being, so poignant. And yours is certainly true. So many details you gave of what makes this place so special. Thank you for sharing it, and thank you to this group for all the support and for maintaining the collective will to be here daily. I love beauty of this line in your poem: “An invite to conjure thought to think–” This morning I had a wake up call to write about quail.

I wake up to the quail singing
praise. After a winter of denned-down
waiting, they make their sweet company known:
In the flutter and rhythm of wings
In the scurry of enough food pursuit
In their joy of dusty dry bathing
I remind myself to praise this day.

brcrandall

Denise, and just like that I’m googling “quail singing praise,” as I don’t have quail to listen, too. Love “denned-down waiting,” too. Wonderful Kwansaba!

Denise Krebs

Ah, Bryan, you inspired me to go out and take a video. You can see one of these praisers here https://drive.google.com/file/d/17xP7dBxcUHypoKEJhZdEJihRs3moAIwa/view?usp=sharing

Dave Wooley

Denise, I love the sounds and imagery in your poem and the attention paid to the singing quail that called you to write. It’s a great reminder to be present and find inspiration in the world around us.

And, yes, the seven letter limit is the real stickler (8 letters-argh!) in this form.

Denise Krebs

Thank you, Dave!
 
The Kwansaba I meant to praise today:
 
April morns a friend gently places a
new lure in my box. I cast
my line into the boiling, teeming ideas
of the day, the week, the life.
I land what is hooked—not the
dying—but the living words of life.
Praise prompt makers and those who witness.

Jeania White

Denise,
The fishing metaphor is just perfect here!
My favorite image is hooking and landing living words!

Kim Johnson

Denise, quail! I am thinking back to your blog post and seeing you in the quail hat, knowing this extra layer of meaning here in your poem. Praise the day, praise the quail, praise love, praise the Lord!

Barb Edler

Denise, what a wonderful opening full of sound and beauty. I am especially impressed by “After a winter of denned-down/waiting” What a perfect descriptor. Wonderful reminder to celebrate those things so close to us. Nature and all its wonder.

Stacey Joy

As much as I fear your feathered friends, I love the fun of this poem.

In their joy of dusty dry bathing

I remind myself to praise this day.

Yes!!

Glenda Funk

Denise,
This is a delightful poem. Excellent alliteration in “denned-down”
and “dusty dry,” but what I love most is the assonance: the long i in “remind my,” “wake….quail,” and so much more.

Rita Kenefic

Hi, Dave. I was just thinking about how much I am enjoying my first foray into participating in Verse love. Your Kwansaba poem mirrors my feelings and I enjoyed learning about this form of poetry. Thanks for sharing and a great prompt.

Brilliant sun brightens the day.
Oh, Sun, what gifts you offer.
I want to soak in your warmth,
and savor the joy within me.
I want to count my abundant blessings,
walk, laugh, sing and enjoy your presence.
I want to offer praise to you.

Denise Krebs

Rita, we are glad you are here too. Your kwansaba is full of praise and joy in living. I love the many blessings you list here!

Dave Wooley

Rita, this really is a super supportive community of writers. I’m glad that you’re writing with us. I’ll bet that this will be the first of many to come.

I appreciate your ode to the Sun. I’ve been traveling and spent a sunny weekend visiting my daughter and the warmth and brightness of those days allowed us to soak in warmth and savor joy!

Jeania White

Rita,
This is also my first Verse love! Definitely won’t be my last! I’m enjoying everyone’s writing, and I especially love your lines about savoring joy and counting blessings.

Kim Johnson

Rita, that sunshine has been so welcoming with its warmth after these days of rain. I hear it in your lines here, and I felt it during the eclipse, the sudden drop in temperature and thought to myself how blessed we are to have our sun present to warm our earth. I know it’s cliche because it’s the center of our solar system, but what a difference it makes!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Dave, your prompt lands right when I’m petering out (not from ideas but from time, energy that gets sucked into school) and brings the uplift I need to keep going. You solidify both the mania of the monthlong write and the sprint of the challenge. Thanks for a wonderful prompt and poem!

Heads up, #Day One! you’re fresh, optimal
with a bright outlook; ideas abound
I can do this thing (all month!)
these are my peeps, my writing family
I’ve got this, right? [whispers keep going]
energy waved goodbye long ago (all month???) 
Sevens Up, Day Sixteen… I’m still here
this group’s my (brand name) battery bunny

brcrandall

Love the use of parentheses, Jennifer (all month???) and the celebration of all of us loving verse. Dave was correct…we needed this prompt today.

Scott M

Lol, same, this month is flying by, but also, not. And I smiled at “brand name” as I know you counted out Energizer and were, like, curses, nine letters!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

That’s exactly how it went down.

Denise Krebs

Haha, Jennifer! I love this. You are the Energizer bunny for us too. This is so awesome. I love the (brand name) holding true to the prompt. Your nailed it, my friend.

Dave Wooley

Jennifer, it’s a marathon, not a sprint, right—okay, maybe a bit of a sprint too. I love your use f parenthesis to pull us into your internal monologue. I’m sure it’s the same one that most of us are having as we write through the month!

Susan

How inventive, Jennifer! I never would have thought to incorporate punctuation like you have. Purely brilliant. I love the casual, familiar style, and I positively love the image of the “battery bunny.” So clever.

Susie Morice

Jennifer — And I count on your being here…you are always a breath of fresh air. Keep that battery going! Hugs, Susie

Kim Johnson

How clever to stay in the letter rule with (brand name)……and yes, we are your peeps and you are ours. And how fortunate we are, how much better the world is because of it.

Glenda Funk

Jennifer,
Ha! I’ve been having the same conversation w/ myself, more so in thinking about the Stafford Challenge, which is 366 days! I’m counting on you and others to be my energizer bunnies. Push!

Keith Newvine

focusing the breath

I want to go to work today, again
but the aching in my bones are
telling me to breathe, instead, for hope.
Perhaps I’ll take Kingston for a “walk”
to soak in the sun so soothingly
given to us all from the sky
adoring these skins sloughed off soon enough.

Dave Wooley

Keith, I love this reminder to live in the moment and to savor the small pleasures of the day. “Skin sloughed off soon enough” is such a powerful line to conclude your poem.

Kim Johnson

Keith, my heart goes out to you with Kingston. Seeing him in these days will be the delight of the years to come – that he was loving the warmth of this sun.

Denise Krebs

Keith, I hope you will be able to get back to work soon. Here’s to peace in the breathing and focusing on healing!

Sharon Roy

Kieth,

I hope you feel better soon. In the meantime, I hope you can give yourself the rest you need to heal.

Thank you for this powerful, moving line:

telling me to breathe, instead, for hope

I love the idea of breathing for hope!

Thank you for sharing.

brcrandall

Not quite a Marvel movie in Germany for a budding philosopher to shed a few tears, but my first Kwansaba (love the form). “Time alone to create” – this line resonated with me the most given the frantic schedules of April. You may recognize this scene, Dave.

Good Days on Nichols Ave
b.r.crandall

Our kids are swatting birds again,
sweating on the side of the yard.
She’s cutting feta, inside, citrus chow,
He’s sipping an IPA at the smoker,
ribs, chicken, steak, yellow corn, green asparagus,
The patio painted navy blue. The blooms
for a little superman flexing pink. Strong.

Dave Wooley

Good days, indeed! This poem is so beautiful.

For the ornithophiles who are writing with us, I’d like to clarify that “kids swatting birds” is a badminton reference! I don’t want you to ruffle any feathers!!!

Thank you for this poem, Bryan, your friendship amd mentorship means the world.

Keith Newvine

Not by the smoker, but sipping an IPA nonetheless.

Kim Johnson

I’m feeling the porch vibe, the outdoors of getting ready to throw down with something grilled/smoked and the sunset going down off in the distance, bellies full and stories told over laughter.

Denise Krebs

Ah, in praise of a wonderful friend and family experience shared. This is beautiful. The meal sounds second to none. I’m glad to hear the birds are really shuttlecocks. I love this image: “The blooms / for a little superman flexing pink. Strong.”

WOWilkinson

I love learning about new forms. Thanks for sharing.

We cried in our time of need
and someone heard, cared, walked beside us
and someone said, “I’ve been there too
and someone shared a shoulder to support
and someone gave that little thing we
needed to make it through the storm.
Now, we can be there for them.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

I think it’s the hearing, along with the walking beside that brings home family for me. We can be heard in so many spaces and ways. This space is one of those places. True family is a symbiotic relationship and here we have the giving too.

Rita Kenefic

Gratitude for support during a tough time always lives in our heart. I love how beautifully you expressed this and the general word, “someone” helped me think of specific people who filled this role for me. I love your last line…isn’t that how life is supposed to work? Beautiful!

Dave Wooley

This is a lovely and necessary sentiment. We stand on the shoulders of those who have lifted us up when we most needed it. So true! Thanks for this poem!

Kim Johnson

Truly, the voice of experience is a powerful thing. The shoulder of tears, too, and the heart of listening and feeling. I do love so much the power of support in this group.

Rachel S

Love, love, love. The repetition of “and someone” makes this poem so powerful.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Eric, the “and someone…” line beginning are rich. They do a lot to help us through the storm, and then give us strength to “be there for them.” Lovely poem.

Sharon Roy

Such a beautiful sentiment. I’m grateful for everyone that’s listened and supported in this space and beyond. Love the universality you create by using we and someone. Your last line is so uplifting:

Now, we can be there for them.

Thanks for sharing and inspiring.

Joanne Emery

Good morning, Dave! Thank you for the introduction to this form. I got up this morning and was greeted by my trash collector, who set the tone for the rest of my day. We need more people in the world like him!

Out of the Dark

I step right out of the dark
into the spring morning and right then
the trash man greets me with cheer,
and welcome, a sweet song of morning –
“Good Morning, my darling,” he says smiling.
“The sun is here to meet you!”
I smile in return, blooming like flowers.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Joanne, what a wonderful way to meet the day! I felt as if I were greeted as well, both by your uplifting words and the cheerfulness of the trash man. This will carry me into and through the remaining hours. Happy, happy morning!

Rita Kenefic

Oh, Joanne, I can feel your cheer. I felt a similar gladness this morning because of the glorious weather we are having. No doubt, your trash man felt it too, and was shared his joy with you. I love the direct quotation of his greeting and can imagine how it brought a smile t your face. Great job with this!

Margaret Simon

What a wonderful uplifting poem! We could all use a happy greeting.

brcrandall

Bloom, bloom, bloom, Joanne. I love that “the trash man” greeted you “with cheer.”

Dave Wooley

Joanne, your trash collector is a poet and a philosopher! What a great way to start the day. I especially love the last 2 lines of your poem—blooming through the kindness of others!

Denise Krebs

Oh, my goodness. I agree we need more people in the world like him. “I smile in return, blooming like flowers” is perfect. Joanne, I encourage you to read Trish Emerson’s Slice of Life today. She writes about a cookie baker with a similar attitude and she shares a powerful poem “To be of use” by Marge Piercy.

Denise Krebs
Joanne Emery

I did read Trish’s Slice! So wonderful! Thanks for guiding me there! I shared her post with a bunch of my colleagues!

Sharon Roy

Joanne,

This is fantastic. I love the action and mood of your first line:

I step right out of the dark

What a wonderful illustration of how a small kindness from a stranger can make our day.

I smile in return, blooming like flowers.

Your poem makes me happy.

Thanks for sharing, Joanne and spreading the good cheer.

Heidi

Dave, this was a great prompt. I got the 7 lines with 7 words on each line, but trying to have each word be 7 letters wasn’t allowing me to say what I wanted to so I did the best I could,

Poetry and art are both creative endeavors:
Each starts out with a blank canvas,
When finished will hopefully inspire even one
Emotion evoked often moving me to tears,
Happy or sad depends on the day
Imagine having tools to do all that!
Praise for this community to share with.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Heidi! What a challenge you set for yourself and I’m amazed at the number of 7 letter words you came up with (words could be 7 letters or less). Now I want to see if it’s even possible to have them all that amount. I love that first line – the creativity in the endeavors of poetry and art, much like the challenge you took on.

Dave Wooley

Heidi,

I agree! The 7 letters or less is the super challenging part of this! I love the “blank canvas” metaphor—that can also be pretty intimidating on a day to day basis. The community that your poem recognizes helps to meet that challenge, too.

Denise Krebs

Oh, wow, Heidi, that would have been hard to do all 7-letter words and make it have as much rich meaning as yours does. so true about poetry and the arts: “Emotion evoked often moving me to tears,” And that last line: “Praise for this community to share with.” Yes, indeed, praise for the community here!

Did you read Clayton’s poem? https://www.ethicalela.com/sevens-up/#comment-89790

Rachel Lee

Neat idea, Dave! Here we go:

Thanks, Bro

The older I get, the more I 
keep my heart safe and sound so…
I’d like to thank me for that 
thank you for keeping it real, and 
thank you for taking care of the
groceries… and buying those crab legs you
wanted – they were good, you earned it

Dave Wooley

Rachel, I really enjoy the unapologetic tone of this. I think we all need to give ourselves credit. I hope you enjoy those crab legs!

Kim Johnson

Rachel, I am in awe of the self care here. You are wise to think of your heart and keeping it guarded. And of course rewarding yourself when you earn it – – and even when you don’t.

Rachel S

Haha this is awesome! This could be a cool prompt in and of itself – to write a praise poem for ourselves. I always feel guilty for splurge buying things for myself, but hey – it’s important! Thanks for sharing this!

Denise Krebs

Rachel, what a sweet tone and fun poem this is. I love: “I’d like to thank me for that” and the groceries and crab legs tell a fun story!

Angie

Hi Dave, thanks for the introduction to kwansaba. I couldn’t stop reading all the examples. I love this line in your poem: “A place to bare hearts, bear witness”. I wanted to write about the principle of faith today.

I ain’t ever had much god faith
I more believe in people I know
How they’re able to create, adapt, grow
How they’re able to do godlike things
even though they’re just human beings
I’ll believe in normal people, like we 
living because someone else chose to believe.

Rachel Lee

Hi! I really like “I’ll believe in normal people.” That’s kind of the secret to life – the good ones are among us somewhere.

Leilya Pitre

Angie, “I more believe in people” resonates with me. The human’s ability “to create, adapt, grow,” and “do godlike things” is vital to the core of our existence. This is such a wonderful kwansaba! Thank you, Angie!

Rita Kenefic

Angie, I enjoyed the tone of your poem. Raw honesty at the start, “I ain’t ever had much God faith,” and a positive message throughout. You praise the power of human beings ability to do “godlike things” and you’re last line is exquisite. A line to remember. Thanks for sharing.

Dave Wooley

Angie, I love your narrative voice in this, in the first line that sets the reader on your path and then, in this, “I’ll believe in normal people, like we”. The pronoun at the end of the line is perfect!

Susie Morice

Angie — I particularly love the line “I more believe in people I know”…it resonates with my own sense of what is amazing. Ordinary people doing amazing things… it is quite something. Nice poem! Susie

Denise Krebs

Angie, I like your two lines about people you know:

How they’re able to create, adapt, grow

How they’re able to do godlike things

Yes, people are amazing creations! I like how you used rhyme in your Kwansaba.

Kim Johnson

Dave, thank you for hosting us today! As a fan of the short form, I am in awe of the power of your poem to share so much of what we do here – purging pain and performing joy, bearing witness and sharpening skills – these are spot on!

He’s Back 
today I praise this dim quiet spot 
a sweet spot, still, fan breeze blowing
air on my face: my current view 
is the ceiling and flutter eyelid blinks 
because Vertigo demands all of my being 
ghost thief of time, work, family dinners,
but mark my words: still, I’ll rise

Fran Haley

Oh no, Kim… I am sorry if Vertigo is, in fact, back at the moment, or any moment. How I love the ending nod to Angelou; it is perfect here, and in fact, anywhere to set one’s mind to overcoming. Wouldn’t you know… you wrote of a ghost thief, and I wrote of a ghost baby. Be well, my friend – your poem is a praise of the poetic spirit that writes on, through all.

Leilya Pitre

Kim, I am sorry. That beast Virtigo visits me from time to time too. It’s a terrible feeling of being liminal at all times. I like how despite its cruel demands that “ghost thief of time, work, family dinners, you still rise. Hope you feel better soon. Hugs!

WOWilkinson

Thanks for sharing. I love how you took a challenge and changed the perspective.

Rita Kenefic

Oh, Kim, I’ve never had vertigo, but I hear it’s awful. So sorry you are suffering with this today. I’m glad, however, that you “rose” and crafted such a descriptive poem. You bring us right into what you are experiencing and I love the personification of vertigo. Hope he vanishes quickly.

Dave Wooley

Kim, I’m sorry that you are experiencing this and, clearly, not for the first time. I hope that it doesn’t steal too much of your time and I’m grateful that you have the solace of a “sweet spot”. Your and Fran’s poem share the idea of a ghost. Maybe more evidence that we all are in community.

Susie Morice

Ooof! Lots of strength here, Kim. Vertigo…dang! No fun! “…ghost thief of time…” excellent description of what steals away our moments. You are a force! Glad you are here! Susie

Barb Edler

Oh my, Kim. I’m so sorry. Vertigo is the worst. I love the quiet imagery and your determination to still rise!

Glenda Funk

Kim,
Nothing keeps a good poet down. Keep rising! And I hate hearing Verigo is bering such a “B”! “ghost thief of time” sure captures the stealing of precious minutes.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Kim, I’m sorry Vertigo came back. I’m sure you have told him so many times that he is unwanted, uninvited. That “ghost thief of time” Yes, you will rise! And be undizzy! Here’s to that happening much sooner than later.

Margaret Simon

Dave, Sometimes the simplest forms are the hardest, but I love the puzzle of them, the struggle to say what you want to say within the confines of word count. I appreciate this opportunity to praise this amazing community.

When my words land in “write here”,
they are in tender hands of mercy,
hands open to new or old sorrow,
free from false praise, adored, held in
esteem for their own sake; please find
a line to love, some message you
needed to hear and leave it here.

Fran Haley

Margaret, I agree with your observation that “simplest forms are the hardest.” I enjoy the challenge and the stretching as well. Perfect play on “write here” in your poem. We do have to be vulnerable in order to freely find the messages we need, and need to give. “Find a line you love” is the line I found to love most here. 🙂

Angie

Margaret, here is my line:

free from false praise, adored, held in
esteem for their own sake”

i love the slant rhyme of praise and sake and your offering at the end 🙂

Heidi

I enjoyed this very much. My favorite line was “they are in tender hands of mercy”
Amen!

Rita Kenefic

Margaret,your opening line is so lovely. As a first-time participant, I am experiencing all the things you outline in this poem. The richness of others’ verses has expanded my horizons and it’s easy to find “a line I love.” Lovely poem praising a lovely community of writers. Thank you.

Susan

Margaret,
Boy, did you ever hit on a few things I love about our community! I never thought about it, but we are “free from false praise” because it simply takes too much time to comment on a poem that just doesn’t move you. So, no false praise; it’s all very genuine. And I also appreciate how you tapped into the “tender hands of mercy” because we are really really really trusting others when we share and we are always met with those “tender hands of mercy.”

Dave Wooley

Margaret, I totally relate to your characterization of form as a puzzle.

My favorite thing about your poem is how it explores the dynamic between writer and audience and how we place our poems in so many different “hands”, each bringing different experiences to the text.

Kim Johnson

Margaret, the tender hands of mercy and the hearts and minds and hands that are open to new or old sorrow are the best hands of all. I, too, love “write here,” and when it has been awhile, it’s like coming home for a reunion.

Fran Haley

Dave, thank you for this prompt and form today. It’s one that can take me in infinite directions. I made myself settle on an almost-forgotten image, maybe an odd praise, but…what’s poetry for? Your poem celebrating the VerseLove is perfect; it is exactly the encouragement we need, right when we need it most, to keep going … hmmmm… that concept is very likely what stirred this memory back to life.

Odd Bird Remembers

When I was a child, feeling alone,
I’d pretend to hold a ghost baby.
I loved it like it was real.
No matter that I couldn’t see it
or touch it. Ghost baby didn’t mind.
Bless you, beloved figment, for staying until
my worried father bought me the parakeet.

Fran Haley

Dang, why does ‘parakeet’ have eight letters?? New last line:

my worried father bought the pet bird.

Dave Wooley

Fran,
Shakespeare it:
par’keet

Angie

Fran! “Ghost baby”!! Wow, such an image and I can’t help but chuckle when you say “my worried father bought me the parakeet”. Love reading about your rich imagination!

Christine Baldiga

Fran, I love the thought of a “beloved figment” a ghost baby. There is such delight and wonder in these words of seven! And I’d keep parakeet! Last word – rule breaker for emphasis! Hehe

Rachel Lee

What a fun imagination you had. I would have probably been a good friend of yours when we were kids, but now works fine too. LOL – I found myself having to double, triple check my counting every which way on this one.

Heidi

I am an only child and my dolls were my friends so I get it! I loved the last line where your worried father bought you the parakeet…that made me laugh out loud!

Leilya Pitre

Morning, Fran! i am about to run to work, but I keep reading the beautiful poems here without even thinking what I will write and at which point of my full day of teaching and advising on campus. these words touch my heart: “I’d pretend to hold a ghost baby. / I loved it like it was real.” That ghost baby saved you at that time. I am so glad your father bought you the parakeet. Such a great point to complete your poem! Love the “ghost baby” and “beloved figment” – both are so touching.

WOWilkinson

I like how you shifted the tone with that last line.

brcrandall

Fran, this intrigues on so many levels…from “ghost baby” to “parakeet” and a “worried father.” (Oh, snap…I don’t know if I stayed under 7 letters per word). I do know I love how you tackled this assignment. You offered us a photograph of your world and I love it.

Dave Wooley

Fran, your poem is reminding me of a song on the new album by Tierra Whack called “Imaginary Friends” that is an ode to her,
well, imaginary friend. Your “ghost baby”, and I love “blessed figment”—is a beautiful tribute to the things that we conjure to get us by.

Susie Morice

Fran — You made me laugh…dad “bought me the parakeet.” (# of letters be damned)… That parakeet is just such a funny counter to the whole “ghost baby” idea. I totally enjoyed your poem. Susie

Linda Mitchell

What a neat memory and praise. I think you have enough bird poems for at least a chapbook. Hint!

Kim Johnson

Fran, there are days when the evidence of a wavelength from Ztown to Ztown is strong, and today with the ghost baby and the ghost thief – – it’s one of those days. I can see you holding the ghost baby and pretending, and then your father buying a parakeet so you would have a bird, or as some of us call it, the thing with feathers. A lovely memory, and breaking a “rule” at the end? It’s really fine….that extra syllable is ghost baby peeking around the punctuation.

Christine Baldiga

Dave, what a wonderful form. I enjoyed the simplicity of the form, yet challenged by it as well. Your mentor poems are inspiring – and I agree it is a manic month!

Verselove Friends

This month-long group of friends
Yes – I call you friends
Fills me, feeds me, dares me
With words of hope, grace
and truth
You lift my words to reveal light
And while I’ve never seen your face
I await to meet you each day

Fran Haley

This definitely is a group of friends, Christine – supporting each other, nurturing each other – it really is an experience that feeds and fills the soul. We grow together. Your poem conveys the VerseLove venture so well.

Margaret Simon

Christine, like you, I wanted to capture how this community praises without judgement “lifts my words to reveal light.” The feeling of this small act is everything.

Angie

And while I’ve never seen your face
I await to meet you each day”

this is so true, Christine. Even on days I don’t have a poem in me, I love opening to see the prompt and read at least a few poems. Lovely!

Heidi

I absolutely think of this community as friends. I am always moved by something I read, including your poem today. Thank you. See you tomorrow.

Dave Wooley

Christine, I definitely feel like we are in a community of friends. Your last 2 lines are a perfect ending for this poem. I look forward to meeting everyone here each day too, noticing their stylistic tendencies and inspirations.

Kathrine

I felt a bit like one of my students this morning – a little resistant to the prospect of counting and frustrated by every too-long word, and both of those feelings pushed me into spaces I would not have gone otherwise. My head’s been in a grumbly space, so the push towards praise felt vital.

“Uncharted Territory”

Tickled whisper or a what if? Hmmm… How?
Frantic pages of dashed-off notes and
Crossed-out queries. Doubt hovers to watch.
Courage feeds on each breath, each step.
Clarity emerges with each tete-a-tete:
Goals, targets, skills and options take form
New idea becomes action; I feel alive.

Fran Haley

What a great encapsulation of the writing process!-Or, collaboration. It is good for us to walk in students’ shoes from time, wrestling with ideas, crossing out, dealing with doubts, overcoming with courage until clarity finally comes and we feel alive – this is exactly what writing a poem feels like, sometimes (many times!).

Kathrine

I hadn’t made the connection to the writing process until I read your comment – I was thinking about launching a new project with one of my classes and how daunting that felt. But YES, the creative process is pretty much the same regardless of what we’re working on.

Margaret Simon

“I feel alive” I would add “I feel seen”. These dashed-off notes carry the weight of our lives and here they are precious and praised. I’m glad your resistance didn’t stop you from writing this poem.

Christine Baldiga

I feel a transformation happening within this short form of a verse, punctuated by that ending! I feel alive!

Dave Wooley

I’m with Fran, this is a wonderful description of the poetic process; and your last thought is a powerful confirmation of the reason to write!

Saba T.

Dave, thank you for this wonderful prompt and a chance to try a new poetry form. Love your poem – it is indeed a “manic month” but the found family makes it worth it.

Come Home
They say not to build a home
In people. But when the world gets
Too dark, too heavy, too much,
It is my mother’s heart that calls
“Come home, you sound a bit tired.”
“Come home, there’s food on the table.”
“Come home, you will always be loved.”

Linda Mitchell

Saba, yes. The found family is worth it. I so love learning something new every day. The repetition you build into this short form is lovely. I sincerely hope my children feel this way about me someday. “But when the world gets too dark, too heavy, too much” is exactly when I want to be there for my kids.

Kathrine

I like the movement in your poem – I can feel the increasing weight of the world in the line “Too dark, too heavy, too much,” and then the shift, the lift.

Fran Haley

Saba, I can see her open arms here, so clearly. Home being where your mother’s heart is…and how it always sees you and what you need. Those first lines pack a punch, not building a home in people, for we do lose them…but never their love. That lives on and on. Beautiful tribute.

Christine Baldiga

It’s my mother’s heart that calls. Yes, I too hope that my children – and grandchildren come home to me because there’s always food on the table and they will always be loved. This verse is singing to me today!

Rachel Lee

I love this. I was considering writing about my Mom too. This reminds me of when you aren’t feeling well or on the verge of tears and you’re holding it together until your mom sees you and says, “Aw, what’s wrong?” and the tears just start a comin’ – great poem.

Leilya Pitre

Saba, what a beautiful tribute to your mother! I wrote about the same yesterday–when something gets unbearable or troublesome, Mom unconditionally welcomed us home. Love the final line: “Come home, you will always be loved.” Thank you!

Dave Wooley

Saba, that is such a beautiful refrain. A mother’s love always call us home, even at great distance. I love the point-counterpoint of your opening line with the rest of the poem.

Linda Mitchell

Oh, my goodness, thank you! I love a constraint–I must be a rule follower. When I challenge myself to write within constraints, I’m most surprised at what comes. It’s so fun.
This form is pretty cool. I enjoyed many of the Kwansabas on the website. The flavor of words is rich and familiar–not mine–but I love it.

I think your Kwansaba, Dave, inspired the idea of learning and relationship. Thanks for that too.

For Isaiah

Here, I am not ship or sea
I’m breath of wind to fill sails
words to travel a learned life on
words to lift you up
We embark in fair-weather most days
But we endure storms, love, sometimes gales
Even so, praise be for the voyage

Saba T.

Linda, thank you for sharing. Love the lines “We embark in fair-weather most days / But we endure storms, love, sometimes gales” – that’s the essence of any lasting relationship.

Fran Haley

Your poetic prowess amazes me, Linda. “I’m breath of wind to fill sails”… and despite the “gales,” “praise be for the voyage.” Yes! Life is the great gift, the ultimate adventure, and we are here to help one another through. We’re at our best when we remember this. Your poem for Isaiah reminds us that all of life is about learning. I would say (noting your intro) that your words ARE rich. As are your images. Pure poetry in every way.

Margaret Simon

I feel I should raise a glass to this poem and praise you for embarking on the journey we share just for the sake of sharing our storms and our fair weather. Wonderful!

Dave Wooley

Linda, I like having the guardrails and direction of form to keep me from ping ponging all over the place too! Your title does some great work here, and I sense that Isaiah is very lucky to have you as a strong wind at his back. (One of my sons is Isaiah, so that connects for me too!)

Kim Johnson

Absolutely! Praise be for the voyage, indeed! Our storms of endurance are made gentler in this space.

Ashley

Writing with all of you dear friends
Feels like going to summer camp again
But from the comfort of my bedroom
A cocoon of coffee and poetry mates
A yearly joy I’ve come to crave
If I fall out from the race
I know you will keep the pace

Linda Mitchell

Fantastic! I’m grateful to have written along with you this morning. Coffee here, in a bedroom too. Now, I have to get out of this cocoon and go to work.

Saba T.

Ashley, I love the term “a cocoon of coffee“! Thinking about it is going to keep me happy all day. Thank you for sharing today!

Fran Haley

I celebrate with you in every line here, Ashley! What makes this all work is the sense of community and the support we give each other. Going to summer camp is a great analogy for the anticipation. You shall not fall out of the race – we will help carry you 🙂

Margaret Simon

The summer camp analogy of feeling comfort and yet sometimes homesick and anxious describes how I feel vulnerable most days, but write anyway.

Dave Wooley

I love this! You really
capture the sense of community that is so welcoming here! “A cocoon of coffee and poetry mates” is a wonderful image!

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