Verselove is a community celebration of poetry in April—an invitation to write, read, and reflect together. You’re welcome to write a poem a day or to come and go as you need. Reading and leaving a brief note—a line you loved, an image that stayed, a feeling a poem stirred—is also a meaningful way to participate. This is a generous, low-pressure space. We’re glad you’re here.

Our Host

Clayton Moon lives in Thomaston, Georgia and teaches for the Pike County School System. He is happily married to Melinda Moon. They have three children, Seth, Greylen, and Sara. Clayton and his daughter, Sara Moon, published a children’s book, Where Peanut Butter and Jelly Sandwiches Come From, in 2020. He also has self-published multiple short stories and poem collections. His short story Oglethorpe Estates was mentioned in the Georgia Outdoor Magazine in 2022. He has hosted multiple book discussions and signings in local libraries, coffee shops and art galleries. 

Inspiration 

When I drive the rural Georgia dirt roads and look out my window, I see bobwhite quail, deer, squirrels, and daffodils waving by the road.  I see the spirit of the Creator, and life teeming everywhere.  I feel the dust sunburn of my left arm resting on the open window, the tears of ancestors gone, and the magnolia breeze.  I taste the salty sweat of chipping wood.  I smell the familiar scent of pine and cedars, sweetgum and rain.  And I hear the song of the whippoorwill, the screech of the red-tail hawk and the echo of the owl. All this because I’m a Dirt Road Mystic, rooted firmly in my ancestral heritage of the Georgia backwoods. 

And you, my writing friend, are invited to become a poetic cartographer as you travel your route today.  Get in your car and take a drive – in person, or in your mind’s eye. Invite us to come along to see your sliver of the map.

Process

Home is what we know.  It’s where we’re from, where we belong, where our hearts live.  Some of us are from one place, and some are from many places.  Today, show us your roots of your favorite place.  Using your five senses, write a paragraph of prose as I have done in the inspiration.  Then, use line breaks and poetic techniques – in any form you choose – to create your poem.  

Clayton’s Poem 

Drive 

Bobwhite quail,  

             daffodils,  

               and whitetails, 

        Gems of our, 

                Creator’s, 

                      Winding nature. 

Sunburnt spotted dust, 

                 Window down specks of rust, 

                  Magnolias dance to ancestral songs, 

                      A screaming red-tail carries me on, 

   Around curves of loblolly pines, 

       Drenched with sweetgum rain, 

                  Dried with cedar sunshine, 

       Within each hook of this washboard road, 

              Reveals the backwoods of stories, untold. 

Your Turn

Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may choose to use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming. If you’d like to invite other teachers to write with us, tell them to subscribe. Also, please be sure to respond to at least three writers.

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Kasidy Fry

Small town kid
main street full of shops
smell of farm life all around
roads that want to take your bumper off
Dandelions blowing in the wind
driving down old dirt roads
This was the place I once called home.

Allison Laura Berryhill

If 29,000 is a city,
I was a city
girl who married
a farm boy

because
he took me
to the field in November
and used nothing
but sheer physicality
to lift himself
in an effortless pullup
to check the combines’s
hopper level of corn.

There was no
turning back.

I was not a farmer
or even much of a farmwife.

I resented
town-runs
for hoses
and bearings
and two more bags of seed. 

And yet
the years slowly intoxicated me
with scent of soil,
sight of a gravel dust cloud,
sound of his Chevy

pulling in long past dark.

His workworn hands on my hips.

Wendy Everard

“Anticipation”

Strawberries bloom in
the undergrowth:  Sam and I
trot – one slow, one fast

Husky Sawyer makes
an appearance on his porch
prompting Sam’s fierce barks

Though I warn him to
stop, he pays no heed, spinning 
me in a spiral,

Leash tangling my legs.  
He is two – incorrigible.
Despite my warnings,

It is not until 
Sawyer is out of sight line 
That he turns up his

Aussie Shcorgi nose
and continues down the hill,
as if nothing had

happened, me peering
at violets, him watering them, 
as both of us wait –

wait for the summer 
to return and bless us with
both freedom and full,

ripe berries 
to taste along our many
summer day travels.

Luke Bensing

This was a cool prompt Clayton, I couldn’t contribute yesterday, but I may still come back later if I can. I have a heavy week. We’ll see.

Denise Krebs

Clayton, it’s my last day in Seattle, so I’ve been busy today. I wanted to leave something here. Thank you for your prompt. I’ve been thinking of home all day, as I read the prompt and your poem earlier today. What a great exercise to write a paragraph with such sensory language, and then find a poem within. I will try it again when I have more time. There are so many beautiful lines and images in your poem. Here are some of my favorites.

“Gems of our, 

               Creator’s, 

                    Winding nature.”

Home

This is not my home, except for
occasional weeks spent here
with adult children finding their way
with the hope of the next generation,
with the rivers of blossoms covering springtime,
with the promise of cherries on the side yard trees,
with the Tonka trucks baring the flowerbeds,
with the pride flag celebrating a Seattle of sexualities,
with squeaking bushtits, cawing crows, & singing robins,
with a little grandson saying, “I’ll miss you, Grammy,”
with thoughts that maybe home is here too.  

glenda funk

Denise,
Your poem reminds me of the cliche “Hone is where the heart is.” I know you’re feeling the schooling, especially in this sweet words, “I’ll miss you, Grammy.” The parallel structure here is excellent. It emphasizes the competing emotions you’re experiencing, as well as articulating notions of home.

Susan O

“Adult children finding their way with the hope of the next generation” is the line that grabbed me. Your description of being Grammy in the midst of other generations and comfort is a warming thought.

barbedler

Denise, I love the specific details of your Seattle. From the birds to the celebration of acceptance, you bring the reader into the vibe of Seattle. The end adds possibilities and the line of dialogue is precious.

Leilya A Pitre

Denise, it seems as your children and Milo, the blossoms and cherry trees, the Tonka trucks, the pride flag, and the birds make it your home, even for a short time. Using parallel structure with prepositional phrases works effectively to build up to the definition of home. Love “the hope for the next generation,” and your grandson”s miss you.

Darshna

Denise,
The lines you have created point to the inter generational love that is layered and central to your parenting. The beauty that you point out with imagery, rhythm, a sense of making mimics real life. You capture the evolving love and stages of our life. Love it!

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Susie Morice

Denise — The opening line carries a lot of weight. I have family in the Seattle area and you capture some of the exquisite beauty there, especialy those spring cherry blossoms…they are indeed a “promise.” And yes, when I used to go back and forth to Seattle a lot, I had those same final “thoughts that maybe home is [there] too.” LOvely…and so serendipitous that I heard from one of the Seattle folks on Sunday…made me smile all over. Hugs, Susie

Wendy Everard

Denise, this was lovely! Loved how it came full circle, and the imagery throughout and the last line made me smile. Too cute, that little grandson!

Susan O

Sunday Quiet

Sunday morning, I overslept.
Almost missed my weekend breakfast
with my niece
who was waiting.
My car started. 
A sigh of relief
coming from inside
as I drove down the hill.
No one stirring
except a line of cyclists
maybe a few walkers
following the line of eucalyptus trees
edging the valley.
I listen for hawks
but hear only small birds.
I am happily surprised at the quiet.
Soon will come the rush
noisy engines, 
people going to church or the mall.
A bustling crowd to get things done
before Monday
and an end to tranquility.

Thanks, Clayton, for today. We got to learn a bit more about you. I like the “screaming red tail” that carries you on. I look forward to hearing mine each day. Mine is a Cooper’s Hawk.

kim johnson

Susan, I saw a hawk yesterday, and every time I see one, I think of my mother – – who often watched for them and could spot them what seemed like a mile away. Usually on telephone wires overlooking meadows, looking for a snack of mice. Your poem reminds me to keep looking – – – and listening.

Dave Wooley

Susan, I love the details that you weave into this–the line of eucalyptus trees and the small birds, and the quiet. This sounds like a perfect Sunday, actually.

Carrie Horn

Reading your poem reminded me of the quiet I take for granted. One of the things I love about where I live and yet I often forget just how quiet it can be out here. Your poem was so relatable, right down to the sigh of relief over the starting car. Thank you for sharing this little glimpse into your Sunday morning.

Denise Krebs

Susan, what a fun glimpse into your Sunday morning. I am glad you didn’t miss the breakfast with your niece. Sweet time, I’m sure.

Wendy Everard

Susan, the imagery here was so vivid and sensory that I felt like I was there with you. Loved this.

glenda funk

Nothing to See Here

This state has a reputation 
across 83,642 sq miles.

Its emerald green panhandle, 
timbered mountains, pristine 
lakes, jagged Sawtooth peaks,
desert lava landscapes 
overshadowed by white 
nationalist hate groups.

Home to book bans,
anti-trans laws, and
a rainbow flag hating government,
you might miss the Hiawatha 
Rails to Trails bike ride, iconic 
Lewis & Clark history, 
designated dark-sky areas,
rolling sand dunes, and 
cascading Shoshone & 
Mesa Falls road-tripping through.

Few know the Frank Church 
River of No Return Wilderness 
protecting 53 million acres of
unspoiled gem state land but 
Ruby Ridge’s jagged hate 
history is carved on 
the nation’s psyche.

Mountain bluebird
white syringa 
Western White Pine
Appaloosa
Cut-throat trout—
symbols replaced by 
swastikas & MAGA 
Don’t Tread on Me 
open-carry cowards

This state has a 
nothing to see or do here
reputation meandering 
along the white-capped 
Snake River flowing from
Hollister anchoring its 
southern border with Nevada to  
Bonners Ferry touching the
northern lights of Canada. 

Only the Idaho potato 
escapes unfavorable 
Yelp reviews.

Glenda Funk
April 26, 2026 

*Idaho had a democrat governor when I moved here but is almost always defined by the bigots among us, including those who moved from Texas, California, Oregon, Washington. The West in general is misunderstood by East coast folk. Like every other state, this one is complicated. Like every other state, it’s not idyllic. I did not want to construct a single story narrative. I’ve traveled in all 50 states. I know the good, the bad, and the ugly of each.

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barbedler

Glenda, your poem offers two distinct perspectives. The true beauty one can find and the ugly, racist attitudes that mar Idaho’s beauty. I’d love to see the No Return Wilderness and the Snake River. Open-carry cowards has me pause. I know the disappointment of living in a state that treats others poorly, especially trans youth. I love how adept you are with language and how you do show the truth. Powerful!

Leilya A Pitre

Glenda, your poem is somewhat in concert with Barb’s today. You both showed two sides of the coin: the good and the ugly. Not surprisingly, the ugly comes from humans. So sad. I wish “emerald green panhandle,
timbered mountains, pristine
lakes, jagged Sawtooth peaks,
desert lava landscapes”
weren’t “overshadowed by white / nationalist hate groups.”
The ending sounds a bit sarcastic in the context of your poem. As always, I admire your diction.

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Susie Morice

Glenda- I so appreciate the honest look at the beauty juxtaposed with the notorious hate groups that stain Idaho. Complicated and difficult. The first time I went to Idaho I was absolutely in love with it. Now, decades later, I can’t wait for my kids there to escape it. For sure, it is a cruel place for women. But as you say… all the corners of this country have “the ugly.” These are wicked times. Hugs and love, Susie

Clayton Moon

Your use of imagery to describe the beauty and disagreements within your home state was very creative.
thank you for sharing

kim johnson

Glenda, your rich descriptions of your state and all there is to see and love have me envisioning them, and then you share the only unfavorable review is the potato – – I love it! I know those northern lights must be quite a thing to see from Idaho, and would love to do that someday! I like how you balance the serious and serene with the reality and humor of how things are. As always, love the Canva that adds a visual element. I need to do a better job of learning these tools.

Dave Wooley

Glenda, you bring the dichotomy of the state into perfect clarity in this poem. The natural beauty and the ugliness that people can bring to these idyllic places. I have to say that Pennsylvania feels similar–such astounding natural beauty, and warmth of people, juxtaposed by some truly reprehensible hatred.

Carrie Horn

Your poem intrigued me. I want to know more, I want to come visit your state and explore! I don’t need more maga but that is everywhere, it’s not unique to Idaho. I’m definitely in the minority in small town Kansas. So here in central Kansas there is hot, political fighting over the Rails to Trails pathways, either trails being sabotaged, no trespassing signs, vandalized bridges and more.

Denise Krebs

Glenda, I love that you pointed out some of the things to see in Idaho, even while saying there’s nothing to see. The stereotypes of the bad do stand out, but I am glad to see some of the beauty catalogued here. My favorites are the fourth stanza about the Frank Church River’s beauty. And the long south to north length of Idaho, as described in the sixth stanza:

Hollister anchoring its 

southern border with Nevada to  

Bonners Ferry touching the

northern lights of Canada.

Wendy Everard

Glenda, you did a great job capturing the complexity of your state. I loved how you structured your stanzas, beginning each with a series of positive images and ending with the darker side. This was really great.

Jordan S.

Thank you, Clayton, for this time to meditate on all the dirt roads I have frequented in life. I kept this in more of a prose-poem due to time.

Railroads and Highways
Driving this two-lane highway, I fully understand the line “purple mountain majesty” as the mountains of the Green and White tower over the horizon. I’m a long ways away from the Southern cotton and peanut fields, from thick humidity and green curtains of fuzzy pollen, even further from the salt-sprays of the Atlantic that raised me. My tongue adapts to new lingo and local flavors: bubbler tastes of bitter hops, y’all is coated in cayenne and rich gravies, wicked is the burst of fatty clams. And everywhere I turn, a train always whistles in the near-distance, reminding me my journey is never quite done. 

Susan O

This is the beauty of driving and travel on the highway. I recently drove in Tennessee and am so glad that I did. New flavors and tastes. I like the train whistle as well.

Clayton Moon

There’s so much wonder in your poem. A traveler- a chameleon that adapts to wherever he stops. But also, a saint who never forgets where he has been.
thank you

Leilya A Pitre

Jordan, I love how your piece lingers on what’s absent as much as what’s present. Those small sensory shifts along the drive (language, food, and certainly a distant whistle) really capture that feeling of being between places in a way that feels so real and tender.

Darshna

Thank you Clayton for hosting today and taking us into your part of the world with gorgeous beauty and layers of scenery. I love the photo, the piano and your arc of  poetry. We took our daughter upstate for college acceptance day and just returning… This is a working draft.

Route 17

Today ocean meets mountains
Long Island to the Catskills
Driving up my girl
for college acceptance day

The swoosh and splash of rain
forgotten wallet
no turning around
Gray skies 
held against cumulus clouds 
crossing the Throgs Neck Bridge
onto the Cross Bronx
greeted by semi trucks 
early morning car crashes
and then
onto the George Washington Bridge

hard to believe 
but we cleared the bridges and tolls
in less than an hour
if anyone is from New York 
You know
I know
that’s insanely wicked

Making our way through 
the New York State thruway
Onto Route 17

After a short distance
tops of blue green mountains
dashes of purple

Morning fog
Reminds us of 
untouched wilderness
devoted fragments
vigorous wilderness
declaring what’s transient 
and ephemeral

slick roads
small bodies of water 
sharp jagged rocks
steeped in geology 
of landscapes

sporadic pear tree blossoms
with fluttery whites
hills and valleys
valleys and hills
billboards and more billboards
Dawn breaks

Green signs pointing 
to local towns
clouds clear
making way 
for the morning sun

Blue skies 
watercolor the day
verdant spring buds
breathe in new life
Maples, Elms, Evergreens
Golden rod snugs

bends of brown orange 
hints of rust 
shedding the old
making way
Masten lake
Yankee lake

Mountain meets kisses of yellow
Golden rods and Spruces of heaven
Pockets of sunshine on the ground
draped by a canopy of wonder
Poplar, Maple, Elms
not to mention
Alpines and the Evergreens
Holding out their arms
Bearing witness to their 
forest play of ferns

Sun glistening through them
veiling and unveiling
a new kind of love
making life liveable
returning to the forgotten parts
hoping she will
always find her way home

glenda funk

Darshna,
What a beautiful drive you’ve taken us on. I do know that traffic as we road tripped through NY a few years ago, including driving into NYC! These lines remind me of the end of The Great Gatsby:
Reminds us of 
untouched wilderness
devoted fragments
vigorous wilderness
declaring what’s transient 
and ephemeral”
Its among my favorite novels and favorite passages in all literature.

Clayton Moon

Such a beautiful voyage. Through all the traffic and rush, you were able to capture the calmness and beauty of nature.
thank you

kim johnson

Darshna, I am a fan of trees, and I see you have mentioned several in your poem – – I love the colors, the scents of evergreen, and the sound as they blow in the wind. This rich sensory imagery is gorgeous:
Blue skies 
watercolor the day
verdant spring buds
breathe in new life
Maples, Elms, Evergreens
Golden rod snugs

barbedler

Darshna, I love the focus on colors in your poem. I’m sure this beautiful drive was a delight after getting past the dangerous traffic. The end is full of beauty and love.

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Barb Edler

Beauty & the Truth

Below a sunkissed sky
rolling hills of emerald green
whisper sweet serenity— 

while hogshit and pesticides
poison the air and water
cancer rates climb— 

tonight as I linger by the riverside
I watch an eagle soar,
listen to catfish flopping— 

longing to believe in dreams
believe peace is possible
life will get better— 

but who am I kidding?

Barb Edler
26 April 2026

Susie Morice

Hey there, Barb – The contrast between the pastoral and the “hogshit” really blasts hard and effectively. I, too, am “longing to believe…”. If only.,, Keep dreaming, my friend! Susie

Leilya A Pitre

Oh my, Barb, you put the beautiful and ugly so close next to each other,and it is clear that the ugly and destruction is caused by humans. I want to hug you and say, “Everything is gonna be okay,” but who am I kidding? Still sending hugs and love ❤️

Darshna

Oh Barb,
I love the sunkissed sky and the emeral green — it is visual beauty and then you take us on this internal and external journey.All the essential questions with such deftness. Life has gotten better with your poetic charm and prowess.

glenda funk

Barb,
I see we’re both tapping into our cynical side today. I love the Grant Wood idyllic green hill imagery in the first verse. I hate the reality of the second one and cling to the possibility of the third, but I love in the reality of those last lines. Maybe the big beautiful obit will help. Lord knows or shoot ‘em up culture needs target practice.

kim johnson

Barb, your title drew me right in, and what a poem to show the hope of peace and the reality of continued sufferings throughout our world and lives. You ended on a powerful question – – I would love to find a deep peace, and I look for it all the time……but of course it’s really hard to find, and I saw two great blue herons today but no eagles. Love your poem today.

Carrie Horn

Oh. Your poem ends in such a hopeless manner. Short. Curt. Final. I hope your sentiment is real and right. I hope your dreams of peace and hope come to fruition.

Denise Krebs

Barb, the back and forth of your poem is hard. A juxtaposition of the sunkissed sky to hogshit and cancer is stark. Then back to a peaceful and serene beauty and hope for a better tomorrow. Then that last sad question. Wow. In so few words, you have really shared “Beauty & the Truth”

Kasidy Fry

Hi Barb! Thank you for sharing your poem with us. You used such vivid imagery. “rolling hills of emerald green.” This makes me think of my small town. The message here is structured beautifully. I understand what you mean when you are longing for the world to get better.

Kim

With no dirt roads to drive on, my mind was stuck of the raindrops on the windshield as we drove down the freeway. The novelty of weather and moisture beyond the night and morning gray blankets that cover the coast. I love the “dust sunburn” and the “salty sweat of chipping wood.” Thanks for invitation to be a poetic cartographer today.

Streaking down car windows 
tiny rivers filling
snaking in search of the parched
finding a path through dips and crevices 

Taps of wind and water
serenading me in my sleep
moistening memories
drip dropping into my dreams

Damp streets and random pools
reminders of liquid treasure
gathered in succulent bellies
hiding beneath aloe spears

polka dotting blueberries 
hanging teardrops cling
as backyard plants cry happy tears
rain is here, if only for a moment

There’s also a small gallery of watery photos on my blog to accompany the poem:
https://thinkingthroughmylens.com/2026/04/26/rain-joy-npm26-26/

Tammi R Belko

Kim — Falling asleep to rain “serenading me in my sleep/moistening memories/drip dropping into my dreams” — I actually love that too!
“hanging teardrops cling” and “gathered in succulent bellies” I really enjoyed all your vivid descriptions of rain.

Darshna

Kim,
Such a gorgeous poem filled with immense beauty and life.The rhythm and imagery feels calming and soothing.The photos really enhance the poem and transport me. Love it!

Anna J. Small Roseboro

Your personification on rain drops gives the poem life along with the life giving value of the rain. This vibrant poem rings even more special as we learn of drought like weather in some areas of the South. Take care!

Lori Sheroan

Your beautiful poem reminded me how, as a child, I’d choose a raindrop on the back window of the car and watch it race the other drops to the finish line! I especially loved your “backyard plants cry happy tears.”

Kasidy Fry

Hi Kim! I loved this poem! Such good use of imagery. “finding a path through dips and crevices.” I loved this poem discussing the rain.

Julie Elizabeth Meiklejohn

Leaving the sticky
August air behind,
as soon as we turn off
the highway, the air
already feels cooler, crisper.
No time today for Vern’s
“world-famous” cinnamon rolls–
we’re heading to camp!

Driving up the gradual elevation
through the winding, snaky curves,
windows down, stereo up,
singing loud to “Roam” and
Edie Brickell. Timeless in our
youthful joy, we continue the climb.
We can’t wait to get to camp!

We hit the dirt road and slow down
some. The sharp pine scent fills
our nostrils, blending with the
road dust. We blow kisses for
luck at the fish rock as we zoom
past–no doubt driving faster
than any of our parents would
be happy about. Immortality
burns in our eyes.
Soon, we’ll be back at camp!

The road narrows, the curves
tighten. We hit the first gate,
Chinese firedrill as we open it
and drive through. Then the
second gate, and the third.
We honk greetings as we make
our way through Sky High Ranch,
slowing to avoid spooking the horses
We are almost to camp!

We crest the final hill, and there it is,
laid out before us, its rustic brown
cabins and lodge holding so many
memories; the place that made me
who i am today.
This is home–
Camp Hope.

Tammi R Belko

Julie — I’m feeling the excitement of your adventure in these lines —
“Driving up the gradual elevation/through the winding, snaky curves,/windows down , stereo up,/singing loud to “Roam”  and “We blow kisses for/
luck at the fish rock as we zoom/past– ” and “Immortality /burns in our eyes.

Any road trip with Edie Brickell is one I’d love to be on…especially if it means the air is more crisp and water will be involved.

Lori Sheroan

Oh wow! This map of your trip to camp is filled with happy memories. The details made me feel as if I were a passenger in the car with you.

Tammi R Belko

Clayton — Thank you for your prompt and for a glimpse of your Georgia backwoods.
Raised in suburbia, I enjoy natur in our Metroparks.

The Jewel of Cleveland

Our Emerald Necklace wraps our city in green
Walking paths thread through trees,
towering oaks and maples that lean
a vibrant network of roots connecting trees like families.

Along these paths, traversed by young and old,
knotty pines and craggy knolls,
indigo wildflowers bead the earth,
butterflies stitch the air between them,
and a burbling stream sings here.

Our Emerald Necklace,
the quiet jewel of Cleveland.

Lori Sheroan

The image of a necklace of nature wrapping your city is superb! I love: “butterflies stitch the air…”

Darshna

I love the repetition and emphasis of the emerald necklace — quiet jewel, beautiful imagery.

Kim

Oooh! I love that emerald necklace that wraps the city in green…and the roots connecting trees like families. Makes we want to visit!

Kasidy Fry

Hi Tammi! Thank you for sharing this poem with us! I loved the way you called the forestry surrounding Cleveland “Our Emerald Necklace.” That is a very beautiful way to put it.

Susie Morice

RURAL ROUTE 2

Despite the pull of the city,
the moves between
then and now,

I will always be from Rural Route 2
far from people,
where subsistence defined the gardens,
hoed and weeded, not plowed,
watered with buckets from the well,
paying rent for 11 years
to the real farmers 
down the road.

I will always be 
from galvanized tubs of fresh cut spinach,
fuzzy apricots,
juicy, voracious tomato worms
meeting their maker at the end of my big stick,
my job on those acres, 
to squash away their squirm;
 
beagles sprawled in the summer dust
under the black gum,
roosters scratching in the silt,
always on the wrong side of the bent chicken wire,
Silver in the barnyard,
replete with milk.

I will always be
from crimson sumac along the road in October,
a swing roped from a high sycamore limb,
wood plank seat, splinters worn smooth,
lemon forsythia canes in April;
knee-deep snow in winter;

on the doorway wall,
a wood box telephone that rarely rang 
its two-longs-and-a-short number,
seventy years from speed-dial.

I thought I’d shake off the grit 
of Warren County somehow; 
yet, still it sticks
under my collar.

by Susie Morice © April 26, 2026

Clayton Moon

BAM!!! That’s it!! We from the wrong side of the chicken wire. So many memories we’re running through my head as I read your poem. A true expression of the backroads. And yes our weedeaters were picks or hands!! Thaaaaaannnk you!!!

Leilya A Pitre

Susie, I loved your poem with each rich image defining the landscapes that shaped you (a nod to Sarah’s firs day prompt).
I can see how this place is dear to your heart, as you share (or declare):
will always be
from crimson sumac along the road in October,
a swing roped from a high sycamore limb,
wood plank seat, splinters worn smooth,
lemon forsythia canes in April;
knee-deep snow in winter.”

Yes, some places “stick under (the) collar.” Thank you, Susie ❤️

Carrie Horn

Lovely. Just lovely. What really stood out, made me chuckle a little, was the “it’s two longs and a short number…” I’m too young for that but remember my parents talking about that. I can remember my grandmas rotary phone on her party line and her admonishments not to talk too much on the phone because “that Mary so-and-so” likes to listen in… she’s such a gossip! It’s amazing how much life has changed from the wooden box on the wall telephone days. Thank you!

Mo Daley

Susie, your poem is one picture-perfect lush image after another. I could picture everything so clearly with your beautiful descriptions. The sentiment is wonderful. I know I’ll always be that girl from Kedvale Ave.

Tammi R Belko

Susie — The picture you paint of Rural Route 2 is so vivid. I can see the “beagles sprawled in the summer dust/under the black gum” and feel the heat of summer.

Barb Edler

Susie, wow, what an amazing poem. I love the rich detail of life in Warren County. I can see those chickens, apricots, tomato worms, and the lemon forsythia. The phone bit resonated for me as I remember party lines, etc. I also appreciate the real farmers reference and know how hard it can be to make a profitable life on a farm, but your end has me pause, feeling that grit sticking. Stunning and brilliant poem. Thanks for sharing your incredible talent here. Hugs!

Darshna

Susie,
I loved learning about you through this poem. All the places of your life and what they’ve meant to you is priceless!

crimson sumac along the road in October,

a swing roped from a high sycamore limb,
wood plank seat, splinters worn smooth,
lemon forsythia canes in April

Gorgeous imagery and sensory details.

glenda funk

Susie,
My show-me sister, I feel that stick, too. You can take the girl out of Missouri and all that. Love the alliteration and fun in “squash away their squirm;” That’s an important job. And this poem has echoes of your mama, which I always love seeing from you.

kim johnson

Susie, I laughed at the tomato worms meeting their maker at the end of your big stick. Yes, we have done that a few times – – smashing worms. Your poem shares your realities of farm life and gives a glimpse that there is so much to know. Also, I loved your watercolor today. I want lessons in watercolor haiku. Small verses, small paintings. It sounds like a good May theme and your painting and your poem inspire me to want to paint something like crimson sumac. Your language is so rich and vivid, I can see the pictures.

Kenna M.

evening time, rural oklahoma
the sun is setting and the earth is quieting
the calm before the storm

red dirt dust and wheat stalks
waving in the wind
white tail deer jumping over fence lines

cattle bellowing to each other
tractors pulling into the yard, the day is done
coyotes howl

the smell of hay and dirt and
the smell of rain being blown in
there is a storm coming

the sun rests before it rises and
the day starts over again
summer time, rural oklahoma

Clayton Moon

Very creative how you used the day as the setting for your poem. As I traveled through all the imagery, the day ended as it started. Sometimes we are blessed everyday by our expectations, you showed us how to slow down and enjoy them.
thank you

Mo Daley

Kenna, the sparseness of your language paints a perfect picture for us. I get a feeling of no fuss, no frills, just get ‘er done. Your structure is wonderful.

Tammi R Belko

Kenna – Even with the storm coming, your poem conveyed the feeling of peace and contentment. I enjoyed the movement of your poem.

Anna J. Small Roseboro

Kenna your olfactory images give your writing special flavor!
I particularly like the line

”the small of rain being blown in”
as though it has no resistance power of it’s own.

I guess, against the wind it is pretty fragile. But without the rain, many places would be lifeless! More evidence of the need for collaboration. Hmm. Triple meaning in your poem. Thanks,

Kim

The smells…hay and dirt and rain. The resting and quieting, sun setting and rising. There are rhythms here and your words help me feel them.

Susan O

Gorgeous! I want to be there. My favorite stanza is the second one with the descriptive colors of the dust and deer.

Mo Daley

Early Morning Walk
By Mo Daley 4/26/26

Last week, vibrant lion’s teeth covered the field
but this morning, Jimmy jaunted through
a weedy assemblage of wish flowers
the persistent opened pappus plumes clung to his fur
until the end of our amble
when he gently shook, dispersing puffball seeds
and vortex rings to germinate
as he made his wish

Leilya A Pitre

Mo, oh, Jimmy “made his wish,” and I hope it comes true )))

Tammi R Belko

Mo — Love this image “he gently shook, dispersing puffball seeds/and vortex rings to germinate/as he made his wish.”

brcrandall

You might enjoy this, Mo…saw them a few weeks back…amazed at the body, movement, and equipment that can tell a story similar to your poem here. Sport of the Arts: Homage – Dandelion. Wish flowers for life.

Mo Daley

Thanks, Bryan! That was lovely to watch.

Sheila Benson

This was fun! I run with a group we used to call Dirt Divas (now joined to Trail Sisters), so I thought I’d celebrate one of my favorite running trails.

This afternoon I took the dog to the Katoski Greenbelt,
hoping one more time for bluebells before they fade,
hoping too that it wasn’t flooded.
I’m always amazed at how little the trails are used,
except for during the week or so that the bluebells bloom.

Then they’re crowded with families wearing matching outfits to coordinate with the bluebells,
taking their Christmas card pictures.
Not that I can point fingers,
because one year I hauled my harp out to the Greenbelt to take my own set of bluebell pictures for my website.
But I digress.

The dog happily snuffled through grass
while I hoped he wasn’t picking up any ticks.
A few Dutchman’s breeches still, but most of the spring ephemerals have faded,
including the bluebells.
They’re still there, just not quite as vibrant.

I realized that if I look from a distance, the woods still glow that magical blue,
but up close, the bluebells look a little tired.
Soon they will vanish completely,
replaced by purple flox and May apples.

And then the mosquitos will come,
as well as the stinging nettle.
But at least the woods will still be pretty.

We strolled along until we reached an impasse:
a swampy part that the dog REALLY wanted to go through.
I turned us around.
No mud today, thanks.

Clayton Moon

Your poem combines the spirit of companionship and nature. So free- to walk- run or jog with a true friend…. Smooth work of a Dirt Diva!!

Mo Daley

Sheila, the rhythm of your poem echoes the rhythm of nature wonderfully. I always want to see the woods of bluebells not too far from us, but I always seem to miss the timing. And I just LOVE the idea of you dragging your harp to the woods!

Lori Sheroan

Your poem took me right down the path, looking at the tired bluebells and anticipating the coming changes to the woods. Glad you made it back with no ticks or mud on your dog!

Lori Sheroan

Clayton, thank you for this prompt! I’ve been traveling my route all day, in my memory. I loved your dancing magnolias and washboard road.

Walkertown

I was a walker to and from school in Walkertown
and, though I wasn’t one to brag, 
I thought the town belonged to me…
or at least the little stretch from my yellow house,
on the corner of Pear and Spring,
to the red brick elementary school on School Street.
Each morning, after breakfast, I leapt flat-footed
from our front porch stoop, my belly full of cream of wheat,
my beloved denim satchel, handmade by Granny,
bumped against my hip, heavy with library books.
Miss Herrington, our school librarian, allowed me to check out
more than the limit (because I was the fastest reader).
Out the chain link fence, through the ornate gate,
I looked both ways, crossed the street
and nodded respectfully to Darlene, 
the fire hydrant, red as homegrown tomatoes.
She, with her cast iron arms like a cross,
resolutely watched me traipse by, book bag swaying,
In front of Miss Elsie’s, her twin poodles, Buffy and Jody,
whined at me, their noses pressed to the storm door.
I knew for a fact, when thunder rumbled,
Miss Elsie pulled the couch away from the wall
and made a safe space for her and those dogs
until the danger passed.
I wasn’t one to judge, though;
and if memory serves, most days were sunny.
On to school, treading carefully on the buckled sidewalk,
riddled with cracks, tiptoeing in spots
so as not to break my mother’s back.
In warm weather, blue-tailed lizards darted in and out,
bright as ground lightning,
their tails whipping like blue flames.
Then onward toward Mrs. France’s house…
Mrs. France, a mere shadow in the kitchen window,
lifted one hand from behind the sheer curtains.
I waved, but looked away, not one to pry.
The sidewalk skimmed over the retaining wall,
not so high; but when I dared to jump to the yard below,
it jarred from heels to hipbones.
If time allowed, I paused to sit on the safety bars 
that leaned drunkenly, guarding against falls
in their haphazard way.
Legs swinging, I surveyed my kingdom,
studying my friend Weeping Willow
who swept the ground around her trunk
with her swaying branches.
“Good morning,” I whispered
before leaving her behind.
By then, the school buses had arrived.
My heart swelled with pity for the riders,
their eyes half glazed with boredom…
all nearly lulled back to sleep by the rocking rhythm of the bus;
while I, enlivened, skipped past them, up the stone steps,
ready to learn, 
having swallowed a sip of my world and its lemonade sun.

Ann E..Burg

Lori, one who also avoided cracks to spare my mother’s back, I love every step of your walk – though my favorite phrase is lemonade sunshine!

Sheila Benson

Ooh, I love that last line! I also love that you named the fire hydrant. I felt like I was walking past every neighbor’s house right alongside you, avoiding those cracks to save my Mom, too.

Clayton Moon

What a wonderful journey! I think you caught all the joys of childhood in this walk. Skipping cracks so you don’t break mom’s back – could’ve been the start of my OCD! I am so glad to hear someone write about the blue tail lizard- I need to include him. Fabulous!
thank you

Susan Ahlbrand

You take me right back to my own childhood when I would traverse through Four Lakes neighborhood to Vigo Elementary. Amazing that we would walk a mile TO school and today the bus in our neighborhood stops at each house and drives a half a mile up the road to the school.

I love the detail you include, down the the names of the characters and the description of the landscapes. Such a beautiful recollection!

Diane Anderson

You had a delightful walk to school, with so many friends of all kinds along the way. And what a nice librarian you had!

I remember the “step on a crack” rule, too. Though the real terror of my first grade walk to school was going past the funeral home- I didn’t know part of it was the home where the owners lived, and one day the curtains were open and people were sitting in front of the window. I ran home as fast as I could to tell my mom they put the dead people in the window!

Denise Krebs

Oh, Lori, what wonderful images in your childhood home poem. That last line is magical. “swallowed a sip of my world and its lemonade sun.” I’m old enough to know the TV characters those twin poodles were named after!

Anna J. Small Roseboro

Clayton, I”ve never lived where I had to drive or walk on dirt roads! So, I decided to share a poem about the sounds my husband and I could hear on our evening walk in Scripps Ranch (San DIego, CA. It’s a poem I wrote with my students one year when we were talking about onomatopoeia, while teaching them to tell the T.I.M.E. of poetry, where the M=the music, or sound of words chosen by poets. So, it’s a little overdone, but it served the purpose, then, and I hope it will “suffice” today.

Sounds on an Evening Walk
Click-clack of push mowers
Low buzzing of electric ones
Clip-snip of hand-held trimmers,
Swish of broom
sweeping the clippings

Purr of European sports cars
Rattle-ti-bang of teenager’s clunker
Revving of motorcycle engines
Whirring of bicycle wheels on asphalt
Clackety-clatter of skateboards
crossing the cracks in the sidewalk
 
Yip-yapping
of small dogs
Husky snarly, breathy growling of big ones
Heavy snorting
through holes in fences
Padding back and forth
on hard paw-packed yards
Chains dragging along to a snap

Gasp of dogs trying to get us,
Ha! But we’re out of reach.

Sounds-on-Evening-Walk-26-April-2026
Clayton Moon

You know I am loving the rhythm of this poem. To put all the delights, sounds and sights into this poem is inspiring. Takes me back to Howell street, where I would ride my bike for hours!! Thank you so much for this!!

Leilya Pitre

Anna, another wonderful alliteration poem from you that takes me on a walk alongside you. Love rhythm, rhyme, and click-clacking, and clipping-snipping, and swishing, and purring! The ending is glorious–you are out of reach 🙂 Thank you!

Sheila Benson

The walk was going so well until you passed the yards with the big dogs . . . I’m glad you were out of reach!

Maureen Young Ingram

snapshot: our yard this grey spring day

Tree Frog sings out 
from their hiding places
(the neighbor’s Holly? Willow Oak?)

Dogwood has just flowered and
white blossoms are browning on
mostly-Clover lawn 

Redbud looks radiant with 
heart-shaped leaves of burgundy 

Azalea is having a stunning spring
showing off in fuchsia, pink,
lavender, and red

Robin, Sparrow, Blue Jay
Cardinal and Wren 
have plenty to sing about
competing for nests 

they choose surprisingly poorly 

I’ve tried to explain 
Mahonia at the backdoor 
is accessible by friends and foes alike
and
the fold in the awning 
goes up and down with the sun
sending twigs and straw flying 

no sign of Fox yet

I think we’re due for our 
every three year visit
by Opossom

both Bunny and Deer and 
their families 
visit frequently 
to partake in a buffet of
Hosta, Wood Hyacinth, Liriope…
actually, any and all that is green and growing

one of us chases them from the yard
one of us simply studies them

Squirrel delights in everything

we are all in this together

———
Clayton, your poem is a reverie (love that sweetgum rain). My own poetry writing was a wander today as I tried to write about my Silver Spring, Maryland yard. I tried several different approaches and finally just called it quits, lol. The process was total joy, thank you.

Clayton Moon

Absolutely love all the colors and wildlife in your poem. The joy you share with your plants and wildlife. I feel the connection you have with them as I read- beautiful!

I want to know more about the three year visit of the opposum- sounds like a cool short story!
Thank you

Sheila Benson

Oh, dogwood and redbud . . . I can picture this scene! So beautiful. I think my favorite lines are “one of us chases them from the yard/one of us simply studies them.” Funny and so true. I have chats with the deer in my neighborhood every morning as my dog and I walk by.

anita ferreri

Maureen, first, thank you for your kind words! I have enjoyed your writing as well and it’s pretty cool that we post close together so often. Your poem today is filled with the sights and sounds of springtime. Your descriptions of birds making bad choices is one I can relate to as well as the plants growing as food for Bunny and Deer! Your poem supports the idea that spring is a cornucopia of colors. sounds, smells, and surfaces. Great work

Susie Morice

Maureen — I was so homesick for my yard in MO as I read of all the wonderful blooming already unfolding in your yard. We are weeks behind all those beauties…here in MN it is still pretty chilly, despite the warm blasts we had earlier… it’s like the trees and plants know to hold off and not trust those crazy warm days…they know it’s still iffy up here. I loved the different ways of observing …chasing vs studying. LOL! Made me laugh. Some days I chase or the dog chases and others days we both just watch. Today has been a watch day. Loved this poem as it did transport me. Hugs, Susie

Lori Sheroan

What a lovely picture of the nature that surrounds your home. The last line is perfect -“we are all in this together.” Your poetry made me want to be more in tune with nature.

Jamie Langley

Clayton, I enjoyed the chance to take you on a walk with me. I loved all the details you shared with us. quails, daffodils, Winding nature and especially your ending words – Reveals the backwoods of stories, untold. Thank you for sharing.

morning walk with Lucky
as good for my head as for my body and the pup
we follow this familiar route without thought
Lucky’s favorite spots to stop and scratch
I run into an old colleague
who tells me she’s “still working at the church”
we chat catching up on highlights of the last 10
or more years
Rachel in Mexico; Laura’s got 2 boys
she’s playing pickle ball
Lucky and I move towards the trail head
I release her leash and watch a fleeing pup
the morning air is heavy with moisture and an occasional breeze
we follow the tree lined paths we know
there are stops long enough to link eyes
sometimes I holler “Lucky” and listen for the jingle of tags
her brown and grey coat easily blends into the trees
while her unique bounce creates a contrast to the sedentary trees
before long we are back on the street heading home
at just 10 months she’s learning
even drops the flattened frog when she hears me say,
“drop it, leave it, Lucky”
we make the turn to head up our street –
at the sight of the truck in the drive way
her tail begins to wag
home

Sheila Benson

Aww, this is lovely! I’m impressed that Lucky dropped the flattened frog! My dog would have swallowed it quickly.

anita ferreri

Jamie, you did a wonderful job taking me along with you on your walk with your frog flattening pup!

Susie Morice

Jaime — As I read this, I found myself right there with you and Lucky. I felt Lucky…as it was so calming, delightful. Downright cheery…tail wag. Just the right thing today. I needed this poem today. Thank you. Susie

Diane Anderson

What a prompt and poem!

I took a little trip back to a long-ago childhood day on a curvy country road where my Granddad’s tiny white house sat next to a creek.

At the Creek

My cousin and I
Played by the creek
At Granddad’s house

Wading in the water, 
Scrubbing rocks,
Catching crawdads

But mostly arguing-
He’s my granddad…
Unh-uh, he’s mine
Over and over 

I don’t know why
We couldn’t agree
I love him, you love him
He belongs to us both 

anita ferreri

Diane, this is a lovely and very believable image of kids exploring their physical world and their heritage. My younger grands still cannot believe that I am their dad’s mom! I even have pictures to prove it!

Mo Daley

This poem is so sweet, Diane. It sounds like an idyllic childhood. Even your introduction is poetic!

brcrandall

As does the memory, Diane…siblings in water being kids…innocent to the life that is coming their way…fighting over the love of an elder. It never gets old.

Lori Sheroan

I found it delightful that your memory of this special place also included the memory of the ongoing argument with your cousin. Yes! This is exactly how children spend their time, so sweet and funny. Your last line is perfection!

Kim

You capture the love in the arguing while playing by the creek at granddad’s house. What a precious memory.

anita ferreri

Clayton, your home sounds magical with left over sweet gum rain hanging from the trees! Your prompt is actually hard for me, after a nomadic life growing up, I did live in a wonderful home on top of a mountain where my children grew up and there were happy times; yet, the when I go back there now, painful memories overpower any sense of peace.
 
Yet, there is a place of sanctuary where I have always felt secure and as if I belong. As I look back now, I am not sure how I braved those hikes with little children and their their mountain bikes, but we talked about the dangers that come with very magical memories. Perhaps I really do have my roots in Minnewaska, now a state park in NY?

That first hairpin turn out of New Paltz 
A clue of the breathtaking wonder ahead,
The road weaves, clouds envelope you,
Before you set foot or brave mountain
Bikes towards High Peters Kill 
In search of Castle Point, slowing for
Deer, strange tracks, left over ice, 
Dangling markers, higher and higher, 
Switchback where rocks dangle, respecting
That view stretching to the skies where
Prayers are a hop, skip, jump away.
Before descending, respectfully, 
Searching for Awosting Falls in the
Distance before skinny dipping, perhaps,
In frigid Lake Awosting or head to
Gertrude’s Nose or Millbrook Mountain
Or wander aimlessly taking in damp leaves
Trees trimmed by Mother Nature, herself,
Breathing deeply, making memories, 
Respecting the power of that glacier 
To leave pathways to heaven. 

Maureen Young Ingram

Anita, I am awed by your mountain biking with children – that “Prayers are a hop, skip, jump away” gives a gentle hint about the risk-taking. I wonder if you are right about those magical memories coming with a bit of danger! Wonderful poem – special to share with your family, perhaps in a photo album spotlighting these adventures. P.S. Anita, I’m enjoying that you & I seem to be on the same writing schedule, often posting right next to each other – I have enjoyed reading your poems this month.

Mo Daley

Anita, you are quite the adventurer! I love how you seamlessly wove all those place names into your poem.

brcrandall

It’s the ‘pathways to heaven,’ for me, Anita. Power of glaciers. Wet leaves of spring…this is the “Paltz” of living in the northeast, indeed.

Barb Edler

Oof, Anita, you’ve captured such a stunning view and tactile poem full of sensory appeal and incredible images. Your ending is breathtaking! What a pathway!

glenda funk

Anita,
Like that glacier that carved the place you describe, your words have carved for us a sense of place. You may have regrets adventuring w/ your children, but I’m sure they cherish those memories. Gorgeous poem.

Stacey Joy

Clayton, your poem and prose brought all the feels of your Georgia home. I love this prompt because it gave me an opportunity to dump some emotions. I dumped a little too much and needed Gemini to help me move from prose to poem. I am admitting use of AI because there are parts of the poem that don’t sound like my usual poet’s voice, but it’s pretty darn close. Thank you for hosting and inspiring us, Clayton.

(The dotted lines are indicating time passing.)

Ghosts in the Driveway
I stood where the driveway and sidewalk meet,
Eyes locked on the curve where the asphalt bends
At Don Felipe and Don Carlos Drive,
Waiting for the “Deuce and a Quarter” to appear
Mom’s burgundy and white Electra, gliding home.
My heart would race before she even parked,
The air blooming with her signature scent:
Gym class whistles, a lingering cigarette,
And the coconut whiff from suntan lotion.
————————————————-Coming from the bottom of the hill,
I’d trudged toward that same sharp corner
Seeking the yellow and white structure
that rose like a lighthouse.
But first, the gauntlet of the block:
The brown house, mysterious and jagged,
Where the 4-legged boxers 
Would throw their weight against the air and gate.
I’d clench my teeth, a silent tip-toe dance
Past the thunder of their ferocious barks.
Then little Guy’s house, a yellow twin to ours.
I remember the clutter of the garage,
The smell of glue, balsa wood, and shellac
As Guy’s grandfather built planes that never flew away.
After the silence of Guy’s chosen death,
The garage remained shut, the old man gone to shadows,
Leaving only Guy’s car buried under junk
A tomb of paint cans and airplane parts
Holding the fragments of a story cut too short.
————————————————-I passed the blur of quiet, nameless doors,
Then reached the sanctuary of our own driveway.
This was the stage for everything:
The warm splat of water balloons,
The scrape of skates and skin on the gritty path,
Handball rhythms against the garage door.
We grew up there, cutting engines at the curb,
Tiptoeing toward the door past a curfew,
Hoping Mom’s light was already out.
Years later, the roles reversed.
I reached for her hand in that same driveway,
Her Red Door perfume lingered in the car
While I guided her into the seat, on our way to church.
We prayed for healing
As cancer turned her organs into shards of glass.
It was here, a few years later, 
Where the crowd gathered,
A sea of blue spirits and heavy hearts,
Spilling out from the house to honor her name.
————————————————Two years passed, and we faced a ticking clock:
Forty-eight hours to pack a lifetime,
Before the locks would turn for good.
We filled trucks in sorrow and secrets,
Cramming memories into cardboard boxes
While friends bore the weight of the exodus.
—————————————————
Now, a Volvo sits where the Electra once was.
The house belongs to strangers who move through rooms
Where we once breathed, celebrated, and cried.
I wonder if they feel the vibration of the ghosts,
The echoes of the souls who sang and prayed,
The children who danced and played,
And the family that loved, laughed, and lost
Every good thing except our memories.

©Stacey L. Joy, 4/26/26

Maureen Young Ingram

So many extraordinary moments/memories woven into this poem, Stacey. I admire how you capture so many different emotions – that joy & love of mom at the opening, the creepy

gauntlet of the block:

The brown house, mysterious and jagged”

which put me on pins & needles,
the return to ‘sanctuary’ and more… truly you wove in “echoes of souls” – love that.

kim johnson

Stacey, I understand the dumping of too much emotion the way you described in your post. Sometimes my grief that might could be sadness comes out in other ways, realizing grief can last for so long….longer than I thought. I can relate when you write about your old house – – the memories are good things to keep. I struggle too and try not to let objects become constant reminders instead of memories – – I have had to do a lot of that same soul-sorting. Hugs, my friend.

Fran Haley

Stacey…I sense the mixture and depth of emotions here, and I know them. I have always loved looking at old abandoned houses and wondered what stories and secrets they know. The difference here being that this house knows you and you family, and that it was a player in your stories. I feel your aching and loss for the family that loved and laughed there…I do believe the house remembers. Gorgeous poem.

Leilya A Pitre

Stacey. I am crying, smiling, and feeling full with all kinds of emotions as you take us to your childhood home where you”once breathed, celebrated, and cried.”
For me, this is the hardest part,
“Before the locks would turn for good.
We filled trucks in sorrow and secrets,
Cramming memories into cardboard boxes
While friends bore the weight of the exodus.”

Sending hugs and love your way. After I write poems about home, I feel drained for days–those waves of grief can be all-consuming. 🤗❤️

anita ferreri

Stacey, your poem stirs the emotions. Taking us through the neighborhood actually makes this piece and your own home memories even more real. The contrasts between your family home in the earlies days and at the end is profound. Your last stanza with that new family is certainly something most of us have experienced, but your writing makes it come alive.

Jonathon Medeiros

We park in the lot that used to be 
hidden from view 
by tangles of cane and hau. 
The new bathroom, the one that replaced 
the one with the glory holes, 
is literally falling apart, 
rotting doors matching the rotting smells 
of the insides of people’s bodies, 
the smells of their shame and worry and rotting food. 
The vegetation was scraped away 
years ago 
in an attempt to dry this place out, 
to expose it to the antiseptic of the sun 
and the gazes of people 
who do not live in bushes 
or look for glory in the holes of bathroom walls. 
Junked cars, used condoms 
and needles litter the lot anyway. 
So, we park, we take a sip of water, 
we walk away from our car, double checking the locks,
and we step onto the path 
that dives down the hillside to the sea, 
under a tunnel of blooming hau.
The concrete is slick with fallen flower petals 
and is black with wet leaves. 
There is a cat lazing in the sun 
that shines through the only opening, 
two thirds down at the steepest curve, 
no wet leaves here, just bleached concrete, 
and a cat. 
We exit the tunnel and turn left in the sun, 
the sea is hidden behind six feet of guinea grass 
that sounds like knives being sharpened 
in the salty air. 
The trade winds cure 
our skin in mineral breezes, 
offsetting the shock of the heat of the sun 
outside the hau tunnel, 
and we walk on as the path curves to the right 
and the guinea grass falls away. 
The ocean roars its blues and whites 
up to our eyes 
and we step off the concrete 
down into the meadow that hangs above the sea, 
the violets and golds of pohuehue and ‘ilima
and we sit in the shade of iron woods 
on the black boulders, 
the shoulders of Kuna. 
We watch the water knock on the doors of the shore.

Clayton Moon

Captivating! Your poem illustrates the struggle we endure to find peace. The ocean will always wave to us, no matter how we treat her. I pictured myself viewing the ocean, then closing my eyes – to release all the pressures of modern society. Nice work.
thank you

Maureen Young Ingram

You have written deeply and beautifully into juxtapositions of place, I think – from “literally falling apart, /rotting” to that “ocean roars its blues and whites ” and everything in-between – this is our world, yes? Everything all at once. How beautiful to find peace within the chaos.

anita ferreri

Jonathan, your contrast of the rotting smells at the beginning and stepping off the concrete into meadow that hangs above the sea. Great imagery

Ann E, Burg

Thanks for you lovely invitation to slow down and notice the roots of the place we call home. I loved your window down specks of dust, could hear the ancestral songs and smell the cedar sunshine. I had hoped to write something as open and airy as your washboard road, but for the third time this week, what I thought I’d write is not what I wrote.

Treasure Road

Across the street from the house 
with the high pink stairs is Treasure Road. 
It has another name, a city name, 
but I called it Treasure Road because it was a
long grassy stretch set against a fenced golf course 
leading to the waterfront where I walked 
with Uncle Freddy. People always told me to look up. 
Up is where God and the angels lived, 
where Grandpa and Grandma were sleeping. 
But Uncle Freddy said, it’s ok to look down 
when you walk the grassy stretch to the waterfront. 

There are treasures hiding in the grass, he said,
and his ruddy face nodded to a glisten in the sun.

Mostly I found coins. But Uncle Freddy was lucky.
He had good eyes. He’s found coins, bracelets 
and a silver watch that didn’t work. 
Only once did I find something spectacular—
a gold wedding band inscribed Fritz & Juliet 1922 14k.
Uncle Freddy said that 14k meant the ring was real gold. 
He tried to find who lost it, but never did
and when my fingers grew big enough,
I’d wear the ring every day. 
Even now, on ordinary days, days too mundane
for my fancy wedding band I still wear the ring.

When we got to the end of the grassy road,
Uncle Freddy took my hand and we’d cross
the busy street to the waterfront.
I’d stand tippy-toed on the cement landing, 
and breathe the ocean smells and watch white birds
dance and dip. I’d listen to the lap of ocean water
and the calls of the fishermen standing by their poles.
Strange that I’ve lost so many things, but never lost
the gold band inscribed Fritz & Juliet 1922.
I didn’t discover until decades later
that the ring’s real worth wasn’t made of gold.

Clayton Moon

But the worth of the ring, was priceless to your soul. What an extraordinary journey with you and Uncle Freddy. So many paths we take,( but you showed us in this poem ) that those who we journey with—make the most memorable paths. So many stories inside this poem. Thank you.

Diane Anderson

You could make a novel in verse out of this, it has so many stories within it.

Jamie Langley

Ann. I love your memory with Uncle Freddy along Treasure Road. I love the importance of your relationship coming through his words and teachings – There are treasures hiding in the grass, 14k meant the ring was real gold. And gestures – Uncle Freddy took my hand and we’d cross/the busy street to the waterfront. You share powerful memories with us here.

Maureen Young Ingram

You have made me fall in love with Uncle Freddy! How I love his blessing to look down, that “There are treasures hiding in the grass,” – absolutely fabulous. Thank you, Ann.

Lori Sheroan

Your last line gave me chills. This is filled with serendipity and serenity. From Uncle Freddy to the wedding band and its inscription…I’m enchanted.

Heather Morris

Thank you for the invitation to celebrate my favorite place to walk. I would rather drive 20 minutes to walk there than walk through the surrounding neighborhoods.

When I Walk

I prefer the dirt path
to the paved road.
It is less pressure on my needs.

I prefer the gurgling stream
to the humming machines.
It soothes constant stress.

I prefer the canopy of trees
to the fence of structures.
It embraces me for being me.

I prefer the fractured light
to the open space invaded by man’s creations.
It reminds me that I am the visitor.

I prefer the path less traveled
to the busy streets.
It helps me find myself.

Jonathon Medeiros

I love that you selected a walk (as I did) for this assignment. Also, the opening stanza is great, the “less pressure” sets us up for something about the impact of the land on your feet but you make that lovely switch to “my needs.” Also, the overall structure of “I prefer” this to that is wonderful

Jamie Langley

Heather, the pattern of your stanza starts with “I prefer” provides a nice rhythm for your reader. Followed by the contrast and the benefit. It would make a nice choral reading.

Leilya A Pitre

Heather, what a nice way to find yourself by a walk through the “path less travelled.” I like how you justify each preference in the third line of each stanza. Love the sound of “gurgling stream”!

cmhutter

Thank you for this prompt. I wrote about a walk I took today but also taken often to a park near me. I read the prompt before going and I tuned into using all of my senses on the walk.

Crossing into Quiet

I walk on a typical gray suburban sidewalk
curving right, then left and finally straight ahead
through flowering cherry blossom trees casting pink as shadow
green yards peppered with yellows, oranges and reds of bursting tulips
Neighbors out and about- calling hello,
kids whizzing by on bikes with laughter filling the wind.

The sidewalk descends under a rusty but apparently safe to use railroad bridge
then ascends along a fairly busy street.
I pause across the street from the park entrance
and look left, right, left, right – pause- wait some more
as cars race by with their swish-swish-swish.

Once the street lays behind me
I step into the trees onto a cushioned pine needle path
silent feet lead me father and father into the woods
birds sing welcome in a variety of languages
as sunshine plays hide-n-seek among the just opening leaves.

I reach the top of the hill
and step sideways down to lessen the push of gravity to run.
Ahh- the rush of water tickles my ears
as each step brings me closer to the treasure of this park-
the waterfalls- gushing, rushing, tumbling with such force
of all the collected rain fall.

The bench is empty
allowing me to be alone in one of my favorite places.
I sit mesmerized by the dance of sun on water, water over rocks.
I’ll remain for about 15 minutes
before beginning my walk back into suburban reality.

So grateful for this glen filled with trees, water, deer, and birds
just moments from my home
my little oasis from life’s chaos.

Heather Morris

Such beauty in your words. I felt like I was walking beside you. How lucky you are to have this so close to you.

Joel R Garza

Thank you for guiding us step-by-step through where you feel home. What a gift that you have such variety — and especially some water! You’re reminding me that I need to leave my phone at home more often. Even reading this, I felt a welcome oasis in my suburban reality / chaos. Again, thank you for this!

Clayton Moon

Beautifully written! I love
“ my little oasis from life’s chaos.”
I could feel the pine needles. I want to walk to the oasis barefoot.
thank you

Carrie Horn

I want to experience your oasis. Thank you for sharing it. This line captivated me: “I sit mesmerized by the dance of sun on water, water over rocks.” I could see, feel, hear the water over the rocks.

Jamie Langley

Thank you for taking us on a walk with us. What a treat! A waterfall. You capture many of the unique qualities of this walk – sidewalk curving – flowers – cherry blossoms and tulips, cushioned needle path, the rush of water introduces the waterfalls? Happy you found an empty bench to enjoy the water falls. And thank you for sharing your little oasis from life’s chaos.

Carrie Horn

 First things first. I’m cheating just a smidge on this post. It’s Sunday. My day to be home. Not to take a drive. Here is where my serenity lies. 
So I’m on my porch in my ole rocking chair, watching and listening. To the rustling of the trees as the wind gently sways their branches. The goats are bleating because that’s what goats do. and birds are calling. The roosters are crowing and the ducks are pleading with me to set them free. The air is damp and chilly. As it can be this time or year. It stirs wonder and awakens my soul. I take a sip of my Sunday coffee, blissfully strong and a little bit bitter, with just a hint of something softer. Sunday coffee tastes better than Monday coffee. Relaxed and blissful. The wheat in the field still green but tall and starting to head. It dances in the breeze, majestic and choreographed. It creates its own rustling sound, the music of my forefathers with their Turkey Red Hard Winter wheat. Hardy and resilient. Just like the souls of the mennonites who brought it Kansas. It is my family’s heritage, softly moving in the breeze to the rhythm of the wind, the motions of the dance, captivating and awe-inspiring. I hear the birds creating their own songs and mixing their harmonies. The peace and stillness laced with life and song. The barnswallows are back. Swooping and careening and singing and sailing. They are forging their future and finding their nests. Who will inherit the nests of the past, who will relentlessly attempt to build on my porch, only to have their hard work torn down again and again? Here you can go to my blog where the picture in poem is posted.
Sunday Vibes
Today is the day
the coffee tastes best,
  strong and black,
  hot and steamy.
  Only a small hint of bitterness… 
I pause to wonder, 
is there a deeper metaphor here, 
the depths of my soul,
finally learning to give warmth,
still holding a hint of bitterness?
What do I hear on the breeze, 
and see in the air? 
Are they gulls of some kind? 
They crash my party 
With both majesty and mayhem
stirring up chaos 
and grandeur.
Mixing their melody with the harmony
of a killdeer or two
calling out,
the song of a songbird too.
What is that warble? 
A robin? A whipperwill? 
A call of a pheasant joins in the song
all playing on top of rhythm 
provided by the wind.
Barnswallow swooping, 
gracefully,
in tandem,
like an olympic champ.
They careen and they call
and look perfectly in sync
with the world of my farm.
Wind on the trees, 
wind in the wheat,
in my too tall grass that cries to be mowed.
Theres a chill in the air
carried across the breeze
calling beware
a reminder that Springtime in Kansas
can mean chaotic weather.
My slice of heaven
time with my creator
sporting a safety yellow hoodie
my favorite one of all time.
My coffee cooling quickly,
reminding me of Dad
(because he, like God, is everywhere)
and his magical ability to
 not only drink lukewarm coffee
but still enjoy it thoroughly.
Not a skill I’ve yet acquired. 
I’ll refresh my cup and ponder some more. 
The sound of roosters
calling to… who? 
I’m not sure. 
Maybe their hens, 
maybe to me,
maybe to prove
their voice is strong.
The wheat acoss the road
waves to me
beckons me
invites me to play. 
And old piece of farm equipment 
planted in the field 
like a prop for a photo shoot.
I’ll oblige you there.
I sip my black coffee
and ponder my Sunday. 
Not shaping up as I’d planned,
mother nature herself,
the sudden, spontaneous, changer of plans.
I now hear the chime that makes me smile
my windchimes I love, mix with
a new voice on the wind.
I’m not sure who, but adding its melody
to the background music. 
The band’s all here,
the instruments are vocalizing,
harmonizing as
a kitty comes trotting
across the yard
her prize in her mouth…
and the circle of life
keeps going round
to the harmonious sounds.
I sit in my rocker and rock to the rhythm
and sip my bliss and 
gather new songs 
and give thanks. 
to my creator. 
-Carrie Horn
4-26-26

Lori Sheroan

Your poem is filled with a symphony of farm life – what lovely sounds! It’s as if I could hear the music of your farm as I read your words.

glenda funk

Carrie,
The juxtaposition of bird songs w/ wind chimes, w/ Kansas wheat is lovely. Sound devices in poetry always sing to me, so to does your alliteration. I smiled at “They crash my party 
With both majesty and mayhem
stirring up chaos 
and grandeur”
as I know these birds.

Denise Krebs

Carrie, what a beautiful peaceful poem. I love the nod to coffee throughout. It made me smile thinking of your dad enjoying his coffee still when it was lukewarm. I also enjoyed learning about the growing wheat. Those ending lines are just beautiful with “sip my bliss, gather new songs and give thanks to my creator.” Yes!

Carrie Horn

I just posted and had to edit. It got flagged as spam. Not sure how to let the powers that be know?

glenda funk

Hi Carrie,
I sent Denise Krebs a message w/ a screenshot. Shes been helping Sarah while she’s on sabbatical. I think Denise can fix the problem. Sarah is in Amsterdam, so I’m not sure she’ll see your note soon.

Carrie Horn

The Song on the Breeze…
 First things first. I’m cheating just a smidge on this post. It’s Sunday. My day to be home. Not to take a drive. Here is where my serenity lies. The farm equipment photo is included on my blog if you want to see it.
So I’m on my porch in my ole rocking chair, watching and listening. To the rustling of the trees as the wind gently sways their branches. The goats are bleating because that’s what goats do. and birds are calling. The roosters are crowing and the ducks are pleading with me to set them free. The air is damp and chilly. As it can be this time or year. It stirs wonder and awakens my soul. I take a sip of my Sunday coffee, blissfully strong and a little bit bitter, with just a hint of something softer. Sunday coffee tastes better than Monday coffee. Relaxed and blissful. The wheat in the field still green but tall and starting to head. It dances in the breeze, majestic and choreographed. It creates its own rustling sound, the music of my forefathers with their Turkey Red Hard Winter wheat. Hardy and resilient. Just like the souls of the mennonites who brought it Kansas. It is my family’s heritage, softly moving in the breeze to the rhythm of the wind, the motions of the dance, captivating and awe-inspiring. I hear the birds creating their own songs and mixing their harmonies. The peace and stillness laced with life and song. The barnswallows are back. Swooping and careening and singing and sailing. They are forging their future and finding their nests. Who will inherit the nests of the past, who will relentlessly attempt to build on my porch, only to have their hard work torn down again and again? 

Sunday Vibes

Today is the day
the coffee tastes best,
  strong and black,
  hot and steamy.
  Only a small hint of bitterness… 
I pause to wonder, 
is there a deeper metaphor here, 
the depths of my soul,
finally learning to give warmth,
still holding a hint of bitterness?
What do I hear on the breeze, 
and see in the air? 
Are they gulls of some kind? 
They crash my party 
With both majesty and mayhem
stirring up chaos 
and grandeur.
Mixing their melody with the harmony
of a killdeer or two
calling out,
the song of a songbird too.
What is that warble? 
A robin? A whipperwill? 
A call of a pheasant joins in the song
all playing on top of rhythm 
provided by the wind.
Barnswallow swooping, 
gracefully,
in tandem,
like an olympic champ.
They careen and they call
and look perfectly in sync
with the world of my farm.
Wind on the trees, 
wind in the wheat,
in my too tall grass that cries to be mowed.
Theres a chill in the air
carried across the breeze
calling beware
a reminder that Springtime in Kansas
can mean chaotic weather.
My slice of heaven
time with my creator
sporting a safety yellow hoodie
my favorite one of all time.
My coffee cooling quickly,
reminding me of Dad
(because he, like God, is everywhere)
and his magical ability to
 not only drink lukewarm coffee
but still enjoy it thoroughly.
Not a skill I’ve yet acquired. 
I’ll refresh my cup and ponder some more. 
The sound of roosters
calling to… who? 
I’m not sure. 
Maybe their hens, 
maybe to me,
maybe to prove
their voice is strong.
The wheat acoss the road
waves to me
beckons me
invites me to play. 
And old piece of farm equipment 
planted in the field 
like a prop for a photo shoot.
I’ll oblige you there.
I sip my black coffee
and ponder my Sunday. 
Not shaping up as I’d planned,
mother nature herself,
the sudden, spontaneous, changer of plans.
I now hear the chime that makes me smile
my windchimes I love, mix with
a new voice on the wind
I’m not sure who, but adding its melody
to the background music. 
The band’s all here,
the instruments are vocalizing,
harmonizing as
a kitty comes trotting
across the yard
her prize in her mouth…
and the circle of life
keeps going round
to the harmonious sounds.
I sit in my rocker and rock to the rhythm
and sip my bliss and 
gather new songs 
and give thanks. 
to my creator. 
-Carrie Horn
4-26-26

Last edited 19 days ago by Carrie Horn
Joel R Garza

Thanks very much, Clayton, for the encouragement to be free with this writing so close to home. I … I don’t usually work with lines this long, so I really appreciate your guidance to let the poetic dog off the leash today : ) You are so attentive to the senses here with the dancing, the dried, the specked, and the things that are revealed if you take time & know where / how to look. Inspired by your vision, I captured this recent memory of my suburban oasis. As always, I post what I write here. I’m attaching a photo from the back of the field; here’s the field seen via Google streetview.

“Natural Habitat”
There’s a bend in the road tennis ball throwing distance
from our front door. The city put a sign there,
warning you not to drop trash, a message I thought
unnecessary for neighbors like mine.

Sometimes someone mows this field bordered by 
overgrown trees & a brackish creek. Walk through
the undergrowth, and you can see evidence
of child’s play & teenage weekend nights, the natural
detritus of suburban rituals of near-freedom, of wildness
within their aquarium, so far from the open waters
of their adulthood.

Walk far enough back into that postage stamp
of the wild, and you can almost see what it was.
A flat low kind of prairie. 

Recently, we got snow — a rarity here. I bundled up,
eager to see the blanketed field. Two steps past
the city sign, my foot fell on a twig pillowed 
beneath the snow. 

With its snap, four coyotes stood as one,
eyed me, and loped off through the high brown grass.

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Clayton Moon

Very innovative! To draw in the natural habitat of humans with that of the true natural world. I also feel how you long for how it used to be. I’ve often dreamed of walking through a forest unscathed by man. Your poem, takes me to a place where trees are magnificent and colors are abundant. The coyotes at the end was a creative spin, as they were eyeing you for the change, yet the ran away – perhaps searching for a natural habitat.
I am left wanting to know more, why four coyotes? Four corners of the world?
excellent!!
thank you

kim johnson

Joel, I’m so glad it was a twig the snapped and not your foot – – having broken mine a couple years ago, I felt a brief stab of pain and was so happy to realize you hadn’t injured your foot. Those coyotes, though…..ugh! I love living things, but coyotes are a little bit outside that realm for me.

Scott M

Joel, I love your figurative language!  Right from the start – “There’s a bend in the road tennis ball throwing distance / from our front door.”  I love that!  I want to start using that as a measure of distance from now on.  And your metaphors in stanza two about teenagers and their “rituals of near-freedom, of wildness / within their aquarium, so far from the open waters / of their adulthood.”  That is so, so good!  And the “twig pillowed / beneath the snow”?  Although it was almost your undoing, lol, the image is beautiful!  I’ve so enjoyed reading (and writing) alongside you this month!

Joanne Emery

Clayton – I’ve been away from VerseLove for a few weeks. I let Life get in the way. I’m glad to return today to your dirt road poetry. Your images shine through like I’m riding along next to you. Love the line: “dried with cedar sunshine.” Thank you for this invitation. Now, I’m going to try my hand at some Jersey dirt road poetry.

Island Road

Summer’s come,
we head to the beach
to our bungalow
between two rivers.

We get let off
on the dirt road
and walk the dusty
two miles in.

New green reeds
and yellow catkins
on either side,
and then the river.

We are surrounded:
bluebirds dip and glide
along with golden finches,
an osprey wheels in the blue.

We can smell the salt,
kick off our shoes,
walk off our city sense,
Become part of our surroundings.

A lone, old rowboat
rocks at the bank.
In the distance, children
dig for clams.

Summer’s come,
we head to the beach
to our bungalow
between two rivers.

Joel R Garza

love the compactness & clarity here, almost like you’re sticking within the between-two-rivers landscape. And new green reeds! Lone old rowboat! Love the music of it 🙂

Clayton Moon

Wow! I would love to visit the place between the two rivers. I see the two rivers flowing in your poem as well as the other two rivers. One of the birds and wildlife and one with you and your family. The lone row boat sits patiently, waiting for you to merge all the rivers.
very poetic!!
thank you

Joanne Emery

Thank you! The place is Barley Point Island in Rumson, New Jersey – a very special place indeed. My parents sold the bungalow many years ago – but I still have the memories.

Leilya Pitre

Joanne, this view is alive in your poem:
bluebirds dip and glide
along with golden finches,
an osprey wheels in the blue.”
There is something liberating in watching the birds fly. Love it!

kim johnson

Joanne, such a scenic and sensory poem with the images. It makes me think of One Morning in Maine with the clam digging at the shore. This brings back memories of a Robert McCloskey favorite, even thought it’s New Jersey and not Maine – – I still see the beach and all the fun it brings. And you, at the bungalow.

cmhutter

Your repetition of the first stanza as the last stanza impacted me as your reader that summer holds different things than your other seasons in Jersey. I liked your description “to our bungalow between two rivers”

Ann E, Burg

How wonderful to have a bungalow between two rivers…we’re just a state away in New York, which still doesn’t have a handle on spring! You’ve painted such a beautiful picture here,,,I love the bluebirds, golden finches and the osprey but the lone, old rowboat pulled at my heartstrings,,a lovely poem!

Heather Morris

I love the line “walk off our city sense.” The sights and sounds in your poem are so vivid.

Jonathon Medeiros

Wonderful images here of your approach to the bungalow on the shore. The specific concrete details of the birds and the sounds of the children and the lone rowboat, perfect

Fran Haley

Joanne, so great to be reading your words! Love how you start and end with the same stanza, and that image of the lone rowboat absolutely beckons one to adventure – one of a leisurely, idling pace. Yes – give me the bluebirds and finches and wheeling ospreys, the salt in the breeze – how I am longing for summer to actually come!

Scott M

They all piled in to my Jeep Liberty, the one on its last legs,
the one where the air vent in the center console doesn’t work
the one where the engine light turns on for no reason, and
immediately they started to bicker, Robbie taking shotgun
(although WW called dibs) and Uncle Walt strongarming
Mary Oliver out of the way so that he could sit in the backseat;

There we were three nature poets and me, taking a Sunday
drive and while we drove toward the express way, I just
kept pointing out the various chain hotels that had semi-
recently sprung up like Quality Inn or the Tru by Hilton or
TownePlace Suites by Marriott or Holiday Inn Express or–
and Wordzy would keep pointing at clouds, expressing how
lonely he was – and we’d pass the Stay-Well Inn and the
Travelodge by Wyndham and the Econo Lodge Inn and 
The Hampton Inn – Whitman was, apparently, encroaching
on Wordsworth’s seat in the back, he claimed he was large,
contained multitudes so he needed the whole backseat, he
wanted Wordsworth to sit in the back back with the tire iron
and jumper cables and I said absolutely not (although I think
Ole William would have).

I was hoping Frost would help me out here, but he just kept
pointing out the window and seeing birches and elms, oaks
and pines or he would be telling me some sad story about
some kid losing his hand and I just kept pointing out places
to eat like Tiffany’s Pizza or Sal’s Place or the FiveStar Cookout
& Funkybones or Jerry’s or Panda Chinese or Stone House
Mediterranean & Grill or Burger King or Taco Bell or McDonald’s–

and there, that’s where Frost wanted to stop, at the Golden
Arches, so I pulled in (almost getting clipped by a white Nissan
Rogue that cut us off, apparently needing his Sausage, Egg, and
Cheese McGriddle five seconds sooner than us) and we ordered
and as we got closer to the window I tried to explain about the
penny and how the fast food places round up or round down
according to the final price, and immediately Whitman was
trying to see if he could cheat the corporation by having them
round up in our favor and I just smiled and nodded, remembered
to order a hash brown, Sausage Burrito, and Mocha Frappé for Oliver

and pulled back out into traffic, eager to point out the Family Dollar
and Dollar General and Dollar Tree and Five Below along our
return route or maybe I’d treat them to a Starbucks or Tim Hortons
or Biggby’s or Dunkin’ or … 

________________________________________

Clayton, thank you for your prompt and mentor poem today!  I loved your trip down the Georgia dirt road with all its natural splendors.  In my offering today, I tried to see nature, too, but other things just kept getting in the way, lol.

Joel R Garza

Omg you had me at the broken vent, but you SENT me with the cast of characters. Love how you captured the lens & limits of poetic ancestors. And the playful back & forth of “high” culture & pop culture … it is our life. You lovingly render both nature & the things that get in the way 🙂

Fran Haley

Scott, although this adventure in the old Jeep has me giggling to myself, I sense a real and important truth: We do carry our poets (and our favorite characters from novels, etc.) with us wherever we go. They do influence our thoughts, sometimes to such a degree that,if we are too involved with them conversationally while driving, we are going to miss a turn or something. Not that this has actually happened to me (ahem…) Your poem, with the brilliant nature poets being distracted by each other and impervious to the hospitality industry that you are trying to share spins it in such a delightful way – your characterizations are priceless. Trying to explain the penny (!) and WW immediately trying to cheat the corporation (well-done!) by rounding up, (Robbie) Frost’s preoccupation with trees…in short. so much fun to read. I can actually see it as a movie clip. Or a comic book 🙂

Gayle j sands

Excellent. But pushing Mary out of the way?? Wrong!!

Dave Wooley

Scott, Fantastic! The nature poets in the land of McDonald’s and Dollar General is amazing. The listing that you do in the poem really drives home the point of how littered our natural landscapes have become with the “conveniences” of our modern world. I love the Jeep LIberty as a central character–your own personal Rocinante!

Cayetana

Pandesal, small dinner roll, crunchy on the outside and soft on the inside
Ilog, river, mostly filled with water lily
Longanisa, sweet-ish sausage with garlic fried rice and fried egg
Ilang ilang, fragrant flower, part of sampaguita lei
Lukban, pomelo, mostly sour with a hint of sweet
Labanos, white radish in sinigang a sour soup
Atis, sugar apple fruit, soft, white, lots of seeds

Leilya Pitre

Cayetana, I like how you used everyday Filipino foods, scents, and textures to shape the word Pililla, and maybe, also sketch a portrait of your cultural identity. It seems like those things are also symbols of home and comfort for you/the speaker. Thank you!

kim johnson

I love an acrostic and had never heard of this food – – thank you for introducing it to us today! I have so much to learn, and learn so much from the poetry that others write – – this has me wanting to try this dish.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you for hosting, Clayton! I love driving, especially longer road trips. your poem curves like a country road taking us on a ride to see what you see: birds, flowers, trees. Lovely!

Driving to a Friend’s

Driving to a friend’s home
for morning coffee.

Freshly baked
strawberry-and-cheese Danishes
fill the car with sweetness.

The morning is gloomy,
thunder rolling, then lightning.
The road is wet,
wipers working hard.

But the trees are green,
flowers still blooming,
and everything feels fresh—
like the Danishes riding shotgun.

I will be back to comment after this outing. have a restful Sunday, Friends!

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Leilya Pitre

And the Danishes

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Joanne Emery

I can feel that rain coming in and smell those strawberries. Summer is on her way! Thank you, Leilya.

kim johnson

Leilya, you have a knack for for making me want pastries. I love the way you cook and bring not just food but fellowship and togetherness and all the sweet things of life.

cmhutter

I like how you connected the freshness of nature to those lovely danishes riding shotgun. I can just picture them in the car next to you. Hope you have a lovely visit.

Ann E, Burg

I love this Leilya ~ what better way to counter the gloom of thunder rolling than a dive with Danishes riding shotgun (which I’ve just added to my bucket list)!

Heather Morris

I love the positive in the gloom of the day and the “Danishes riding shotgun.”

Gayle j sands

I love that your danishes were riding shotgun…

Barb Edler

Love the focus of your poem, how you capture the action and surrounding. I loved the line about the Danishes riding shotgun. Lovely poem and I’m sure the Danishes were delicious!

Lori Sheroan

Those “Danishes riding shotgun” look and sound amazing…a bright, sweet spot on a rainy morning!

glenda funk

Leilya,
You seized and captured a moment. I hope you enjoyed your visit and hope that rain doesn’t turn into a torrent that washes away all that beauty you describe. However, I do have thoughts about Mike Johnson, rain, flooding, and drowning unrelated to your poem.

Denise Krebs

Leilya, a fresh rainy clean spring day and fresh Danishes. What could be better. Love the idea that the Dansihes are riding shotgun.

Dave Wooley

Clayton, I really appreciated the quiet noticings of your poem today. It made me think of the drive home yesterday from my son’s soccer game. “Home” games are about 45 minutes to an hour away–still getting used to distances in this new home, and always up for some exploration.

Father and son on a Pennsylvania Road

The first turn was off
the highway onto the two lane road
with a faded double yellow line,
then a narrower road,
no lines, less signs,
save for the yellow
“horse and buggy” warning,
left at the Mennonite Church
then gravel,
ascending the mountain
in the steady rain,
rivulets through the gravel,
slowing now as the ride
gets rougher, steeper,
into clouds, peaking
down in pockets over
the valley–

“Where are we?”
“Heading home”, I say.
“Nobody else went this way.”
Quiet, slowly descending,
as gravel kicks off the roadside,
about a car and a half wide,
tumbling to the trees below,
winding down the mountain
to the sound
of the rain
and the wind,
“you went this way
on purpose, didn’t you?”
More statement,
then question,
answered with a smile
and we continued on.

brcrandall

Continue on, Dave. Continue on. I like that you chose to go this way intentionally.

Sarah

Oh, this ia lovely and sparked a memory of my own as poems tend to do. My Dad would always find the longer more scenic drive when my mom wasn’t in the car. And the dialogue here is perfect. And, knowing you as I am coming to, I bet you are listening to music, too.

Also, I am on the ocean the next few days with limited cell or wifi. And 7 hours ahead. I have a poem for you/us, but I may not get to post it or respond. Enjoy hosting tomorrow. So grateful for Verselove to be with Clayton today and you tomorrow. Hugs.

Leilya Pitre

Dave, this brief dialogue and your son’s “Nobody else went this way” tell me you took “the road not take” (sorry, I couldn’t help it), but I love your curiosity and desire to explore new roads and places. I am smiling as if it’s a part of my plan too. Thank you for a ride along!

Kenna M.

Dave, this poem really reminds me of my own drive home from my college town! I love the last two lines “answered with a smile / and we continued on” because there is just something about taking the inconvenient route.

glenda funk

Dave,
You did a good thing w/ that drive and the implications for life of taking indirect routes, roads less traveled. I’ve traveled through Pennsylvania several times and love those country roads. Lots of beauty in your state.

brcrandall

Clayton, your Sunday prompt taps into a weekend ritual and now that the sun is bullying the rain away, I’m writing in anticipation of the hike still to come (which begins with a very short drive). I’m loving the ‘backwoods of stories, untold’ (and wish to shout-out your use of the comma there). Here’s to another day of writing, hiking, and for those of you still teaching, grading.

Lordship 
b.r.crandall

it’s easier on 
weekends to
drive along
short beach
(larger than 
the longer one
where teenagers
occupy cars
as if drive-ins
still exist).

We park Katniss
(never-green-no more)
and leash Karal
for a walk along
waving gray lines
that meet an 
eggshell horizon —
where the
lemon strip
hovers between
pigeon-blue clouds
& glacier stone.

This is our prospect
of an ocean,
a movement along
the shoreline
(to curb our 
inner drive) —
where Golden Hill
Paugusetts once 
hunted deer —
where ferries
transport travelers 
from Bridgeport 
to Port Jeff —
where ospreys
hawk the sea
with barbed talons
in a hunt for 
bluefish, sup,
& fluke

Sarah

Such movement here on this walk and the repetition of “where”added on aling the way pf memories and also present, there is an inner and outer concentric circle you walk is through.

Leilya Pitre

Bryan, this is what I want to see sometime soon:
where the
lemon strip
hovers between
pigeon-blue clouds
& glacier stone.”

Ospreys are in Joanne’s poem too today.

brcrandall

ta-da!

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Leilya Pitre

Looks so quiet and peaceful. I need a vacation. Thank you for sharing!

kim johnson

Bryan, I’m loving the color and shape metaphors here to enhance the visual imagery. The eggshell horizon is a great way to show so we can imagine exactly what it looks like. Love this Stanza so much and so happy Karal gets to go!

We park Katniss
(never-green-no more)
and leash Karal
for a walk along
waving gray lines
that meet an 
eggshell horizon —
where the
lemon strip
hovers between
pigeon-blue clouds
& glacier stone.

anita ferreri

Kim, your poem screams colorful! That image of the eggshell horizon calls to me to watch the sunrise tomorrow and catch what I might have missed!

Sharon Roy

Bryan,

I love your evocative use of color—lemon, pigeon-blue and eggshell.

Fran Haley

Bryan, your brief descriptions are delicious – eggshell horizon, lemon strip, pigeon-blue clouds, glacier stone. I am savoring them. We have ospreys nearby – sometimes I can hear them calling – and I imagine myself standing in this short-beach place in awe of them as they fish. Just beautiful – all of it.

Dave Wooley

Bryan, I can smell the salt water in the air in your poem. I miss Short Beach (any beach, actually). I really love that last stanza, collapsing time and adding movement and life to your vision of the beach.

Sharon Roy

Clayton,

Thank you for providing just the prompt I needed this morning.

Thank you for these peaceful images:

Around curves of loblolly pines, 

      Drenched with sweetgum rain, 

                 Dried with cedar sunshine, 

————————————————————————————————

Visting

I google places to bird near my aunt and uncle’s house
leave before anyone else is up
send a text that I’ve gone for a hike
gone birding
the voice of Google Maps tells me to turn on Bread and Milk Road
I find the wilderness preserve but the parking is gated closed
I keep driving
looking at the tall trees
the houses which have different names here
capes and colonials
I try and fail to get Siri to help me navigate
I miss my husband who would be driving
if he had come with me on this trip
Canadian geese on the road act as way finders
pointing me to a pond with parking
the croak of a common grackle greets me
the uncommon cousin of the most common bird back home
a man arrives on a moped
tries to convince me that I’m the woman who caught three fish here yesterday when no one else caught anything
launches in to a “long story short”
tosses in a non sequitur 
“my brother can’t get out of his own way”
on brand for this week of hearing things I don’t want to hear 
about cousins, aunts and uncles
I put some space between us
watch four pairs of Canadian geese fly in
doubled by their reflection on the pond
a plump robin ruffles his feathers
a tree swallow glides above the water, flashing white 
red-winged blackbirds squeak their rusty merry-go-round
a trio of double-crested cormorants rest on dead branches
it rains gently on the pond

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Hop over to Pedaling Poet to see my poem with pictures of where the geese pointed me to this morning.

Scott M

Sharon, I love that the longest line of your poem is the annoying one from the man “on a moped,” but I’m sorry that this is “on brand for this week of hearing things [you] don’t want to hear.”  And I love the vivid details and descriptions at the end of your poem of what you were able to see as “it rain[ed] gently on the pond.”  Thank you for this!

Joanne Emery

So much detail about the journey, the people, and nature. You painted such a rich image! I love your photos too! Where in the world is this – Sharon? I want to go!

Sharon Roy

Joanne, I’m visiting family in Connecticut. I was happy to find this beautiful spot this morning. I’m enjoying all the tall trees.

Sarah

The houses have different names here. Love that line.

Clayton Moon

Such beautiful imagery throughout your poem. We have to endure the aggravation of humanity to find our peace.

I love
“ redwing blackbirds squeak their rusty merry- go- round.
thank you

Leilya Pitre

Sharon, thank you for taking me on a ride today. I didn’t know that “Canadian geese on the road act as way finders / pointing me to a pond with parking,” and next time I am lost, I will look out for the geese. I can “see” that man annoying you with his “long story short.” the ending slows things down and makes me feel comfortable while “it rains gently on the pond.”

Fran Haley

I felt I was on this pedaling birding trip, Sharon – chuckling about the man who talks too much and your need to put some space between you (wise move!). I savor every image of the birds you found, and the peace they impart. I note, too, how you miss your husband on this trip. That line pierces my heart.

Lori Sheroan

Sharon, I felt delighted when you found your birds on this birdwatching venture. Your description of the trip, the encounter with the talkative stranger, the birds…I loved it all!

Stefani B

Boxer, thank you for hosting today. The process of narrative writing, then a “found” style poem after is a useful tool for all levels of writers and a way to show one’s thinking. I am digging your last line!

urban hike with recollections
dirt of memories from the late night
early morning raving in the city
stories of travelers bridging business
leisure, exploration of
smells of urine, smog, sewer

rural unpaved ramblings
dusty steps unbuilt greenery
unknown stories, hidden in 
brambles, barns, nature’s call
life blooming in nooks of 
flowers and fertilizer

suburban stroll, sucked into gossipy 
dirt, paved lanes for safety
stereotyped faux landscapes
hide recollections behind the doors
while children’s laughs echo in joy
prefabricated roads of america

Clayton Moon

You captured all “ the unknown stories” of the dirt road and topped it off with joyful children. All the imagery and detail makes this poem a backroad gem!!
thank you

Sarah

Stefani, love this trio of place and that commentary in faux and prefabricated just after the joy. Joy is real, right. They don’t know or care…yet.

Leilya Pitre

Stefani, I love how your poem moves through city streets, country paths, and suburban blocks as if each one leaves a different mark on the speaker/you. The mix of beautiful and not so beautiful in every setting feels honest and real. It reads like a tender tribute to the roads we walk and the memories we carry, especially “children’s laughs” that “echo in joy.” Thank you!

Susan Ahlbrand

The appreciate you have for your home state is so apparent in your poem, Clayton!

My Historical Home

The oldest city 
in the Northwest Territory
and for a long time 
a vibrant city along the Wabash River,
my hometown 
of Vincennes, Indiana
now struggles to thrive . . .
old places keep getting older.

Settled mainly by the French
but a strong presence of
Irish and German
made for an interesting triad
of cultures.
I was told growing up,
“There are the drunks,
the thrifty, and the slobs.”
I’m not much for stereotypes,
but there truly were a trio 
of distinctly different areas 
of towns,
and the cultures showed through.

I never really realized as I played
on the grounds of the 
George Rogers Clark National Historic Park
and attended mass in a basilica 
(named simply the Old Cathedral)
built in 1826, 
that romped around with ghosts
and lived in a place steeped in history.
I didn’t know that the college campus 
on the north end of town 
where I attended sports camps
and cultural events
was the first institution of higher learning 
in Indiana, 
chartered in 1806.
I knew President William Henry Harrison’s mansion,
Grouseland,
was a focal point of 4th grade field trips,
and I knew we went sledding down
Sugar Loaf Mound,
a prehistoric native American burial site.

I was oblivious to the history and culture
that people traveled from near and far
to visit.  
It was just my playground.

and my home.

~Susan Ahlbrand
26 April 2026

Stefani B

Susan, what a lovely model this could be for students to discover the history of their own town or four corners. This is important historical knowledge that (even with the internet) is often lost or unshared. Thank you for sharing this today.

Clayton Moon

I love, love, love, how you took the history of your hometown from the perspective of you on the playground (mound). Isn’t magical when we are young and playful that we are unaware of place, time and history. Yet, as we grow we began to realize the threats, love, and history that were there.
thank you

Sharon Roy

Susan,

Love how your poem allows us to see the layers of your hometown through both your adult and child eyes.

Joanne Emery

Susan, I love the history lesson you wrote in poetic form. It would be a great exercise for students to think and learn about their homes. Funny how something familiar can become brand-new.

Heather Morris

I love the history you shared in your poem. I live in a town with an interesting history, and I wonder if there is more to it. I would love to write a poem like this for my children and then explore where I grew up,.

Fran Haley

“It was just my playground/and my home” – makes me think about how we grow into the places we are from, Susan. Just as we do with our families – they are what they are to us until one day, when we are older, we learn and see things differently (for better or worse, depending). I love this idea of “romping with ghosts” and the solemnity of the prehistoric native American burial site – where kids go sledding. Sometimes I wonder: If I dug up my whole backyard, what ancient secrets would I find? Maybe none, but the idea pulls (not to actually DO it, ha). You so honor the history of your home.

Kenna M.

Susan! This poem made me feel and remember the innocence that children often have about the regions that are growing up in. I think this was a lovely tribute to both your childhood, but also how you learned about the history of your home!

Gayle j sands

Clayton—the peace of your poem starts this day beautifully. Thank you! I started to think of images, of places, and the one that I remember most is a cold day in Jamestown NY. My grandfather and I walked downtown through a blizzard to buy material for a dress that my grandmother was going to make for me. Blizzards then were no joke. Cars stayed home. Grandpa and I ventured forth, and the memory of that afternoon is one that I treasure. I revisited a poem I wrote years ago and made some edits.

Thank you, Clayton, for taking me back again…

Snow Globe

We walked through swirling snow
Grandpa in his grey wool overcoat and fedora
Me in my snowsuit. Scarves wrapped high,
      circling our faces against the blizzard’s cold.

My mittened hand was held securely in his gloved one
      even though no cars ventured out.
There were
just the two of us, solitary together in the storm.
Snow muffled all noise except
       the sharp crunch of our booted steps
in the gathering snow.

We walked up and down hills in sturdy silence.
The squeeze of his hand were all the words we needed.
No birds, no cars, no sound,
        nothing moving but we two.
Snowflakes gathered on the brim of his hat,
      clung to lashes, iced cheeks.

We were figures in a diorama,
        a snow globe just shaken
Two people 
in a storm—
Silent city, silent streets, silent snow
A snow globe filled with love.

GJ Sands

Cayetana

“The squeeze of his hand were all the words we needed” weren’t words at all, but still volumes! “A snow globe filled with love.” Thank you

Clayton Moon

Thank you for sharing. I found it intriguing how the storm was around you but you were protected by your grandfather. So many symbols throughout the poem. There is no love that can match a grandfather’s love. “Nothing moving but we two.” I believe he is still moving with you as you strive through storms.
thank you

Stefani B

Gayle, your poem (maybe the title helped) built this cinematic experience where I was pulled into a snow globe, then the “love” ending pulled me back out as a third party. Lovely work on this experience through your words.

Sharon Roy

Gayle,

what a beautiful memory. I’m so happy you’ve preserved it in a poem and shared it with us.

These lines make me so happy:

We walked through swirling snow

Grandpa in his grey wool overcoat and fedora

Me in my snowsuit. Scarves wrapped high,

      circling our faces against the blizzard’s cold.

I can feel the love

Joanne Emery

Is it possible for strangers to have the exact same experience? As I read, I thought – I’ve seen that, I’ve done that with my grandpa, I’ve seen the snowflake gather on the brim of his hat. Thank you, Gayle, for bringing back that memory. I love the line: “nothing moving but we two.”

kim johnson

Gayle, I can feel the cold, see the snowflakes on the eyelashes, and see the only movement there in the snowbanks as you and your grandfather. What a special memory, one that sticks and lasts – – the only kinds of snowflakes that can last forever. Beautiful.

Diane Anderson

So many phrases to love here: solitary together, sturdy silence, nothing moving but we two, snow globe filled with love- such quiet happiness.

Fran Haley

Such a poignant memory, Gayle – I savor the sturdy silence and the warm togetherness despite the bitter cold. You have preserved the moment so clearly that I can see it as if it actually were a snow globe – except with moving people.

Kenna M.

Gayle! This poem is beautiful and does a wonderful job displaying the relationship you had with your grandfather. The picture you paint of this memory allows me to envision this as something that could have set the scene for a real snow globe!

Leilya A Pitre

Gayle, thank you for such a treasured memory of your grandfather. Love the poem and a feeling of longing it evokes. This is golden: “The squeeze of his hand were all the words we needed.” So much love here! ❤️

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Clayton, thank you for the gift of this prompt and offering another way into a poem while giving us so many ways to speak of home. I am drawn to the washboard road, having grown up in the country and traveling (rattling) down so many. That, and the loblolly pines, carry me to Georgia.

Mishigami

Ancient glaciers 
carved gouges 
in gray matter,
soft sand dunes lining
neural pathways.
Maple trees scour–
their leaves my hands,
their roots my feet.
Rivers run like veins
through me,
copper droplet cells
my blood.
The sea of the sky
and the vast of the water
rise above and below me,
thread within me.
My eyes seeing what once was
as the ancestral waters
speak their origins.
My ears hearing what is to come.

Linda M.

Wow! Mishigami…what a play on words and metaphor of the land. I’m especially drawn to the, “river veins, gouges in gray matter, leaves my hands/roots my feet.” Wonderfully sensory.

Clayton Moon

Wow! An ancestral touch! To mold your life into the surrounding is so creative. Being able to relate to nature as we move on earth, is a skill possessed by a few. “Carved gouges in gray matter” is my favorite. I believe those carvings add authenticity to the spirit world, as we experience the natural realm. Very cool!!

Stefani B

Jennifer, I just went down an internet rabbit hole of the term “Mishigami” and cannot wait to ask my kids if they learned of this word in elementary school here in MI:) I love these lines, as the first one is beautiful alone but emotionally stronger with the second line:
Rivers run like veins
through me,
Thank you for sharing today!

Sharon Roy

Jennifer,

in your stunning, powerful poem this lines resonate:

Rivers run like veins

through me,

kim johnson

Jennifer, I was intrigued, so I went to the web searching, and I see this is a lodge with a bicycle race! Like a ride through the history of mammoths and rocks and geological and cultural history….oh, what a great event to celebrate our origins. I’m completely taken with the tour through history pedaling the wheels of a bike. And you have taken us on the route, and made me want to get on an e-bike and try it too.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Oh! I will join you there but I’ll have to look the lodge up too. I want an e-bike with a side car for Willow! Michigami is the Ojibwe word for Great Lake!

Fran Haley

Such a beautiful correlation of body to earth and vice versa, Jennifer. The whole poem has the feel of that first word, ancient. I am reminded, again, of the interconnectedness of things and of the spirit of place.

Fran Haley

Clayton (Boxer), you are singing my own ancestral song with your rural imagery. The poem is beautiful from start to finish, and nothing draws me more than “the backwoods of stories, untold.” This is something that has pulled at me for my entire life. There’s one particular dirt road I’ve written about many times before, and no doubt much of this poem I bring today is a borrowing from my own self and previous poems. I cherish my heritage, laced with abiding gratitude for those who loved my from my beginning, and whose own stories still captivate me.

Thank you.

My Dirt Road

“And all times are one time, and all those dead in the past never lived before our definition gives them life, and out of the shadows their eyes implore us.”

 – Robert Penn Warren, All the King’s Men

Good-bye, neighborhood
and traffic lights
and screaming jets
from the base

hello, unpainted houses
with all your mysteries
and hi, all you pastures
and all you horses

Daddy, at the wheel,
says you watch your side
and I’ll watch mine

count your horses
one point each,
ten points for a
white one

we’ll see who wins
but
if you see a cemetery
on your side
you lose
all your horses

I am winning
until the pastures
give way

to flatlands
as far as I can see

fields
with longest green furrows
running, running, running
alongside me

hurry! hurry! hurry!
they seem to say
to my racing heart

then

bye, fields
hello trees
and scattered houses

the road forks
Daddy the church
is over there on your side
it has a graveyard
you lose!

he chuckles
and slows way down

because
 
here

on the right

is the turn

little dirt road
little dirt road
little dirt road

you can’t know
how much
I love you

as you carry me past
the old white house on Daddy’s side
tin roof gleaming in the sun

hi, house where
Grandma was born!

past the wild, tall tangle
of sunflowers
looking like something
straight out of Grimm’s

as does the man
standing among them,
with his long strange face
and dingy ballcap

he waves at us

hey, great-uncle Taylor

past the vegetable garden
so neat and misty
a watercolor artist
might have painted it

and there it is, the backside 
of another little white house 
with two screened doors
side by side

just past the scuppernong vines
heavy and full of light
on their trellis

and then 
the gardener

Granddaddy!
Granddaddy!
 
out in the yard
in his plaid shirt
and straw hat

waiting and watching

Daddy and I round the bend
to the shade
of the old pecan tree
studded with woodpecker holes
one big limb
holding a tire swing

I am out of the car 
almost before it stops

never minding
the tiny cemetery
in a clearing
across the dirt road
on my side

(yeah my horses are lost)

because here’s Grandma 
hurrying, hurrying
from the house

she stops in the yard 
stooping low
arms flung wide

and I run
I run

as cicadas
take up their deafening buzz
and the dust
of the little dirt road
settles its golden cloud
under the sun
as the bog-scent of ditches rises
and spicy-earth fragrance 
of decomposing leaf litter
wafts from the shadowy woods

it does not matter
how long the journey
or what I’ve lost
or what I’ve left behind
or that I never actually
lived here

all that matters

is now

I am home
 
I am home

Last edited 20 days ago by Fran Haley
Gayle j sands

Fran— the joy, the urgency, the anticipation!! Your repetitions throughout made me read faster to see the next image. I felt your young heart…

Linda M.

Awwwwww. That road home to Grandaddy is wonderful. All the moments of generations distilled into your final, “I am home.” Beautiful.

Aggiekesler

I was right there with you, on the journey to Grandma and Graddaddy’s house. Much of your trip reminded me of my own ride to visit my grandparents. I can hear the joy and anticipation in your poem. Thank you for sharing.

Clayton Moon

Man!!!! Just when I thought I’d played all the car riding games!! You got the best one. I imagine your dad was fun to hang around!! I am definitely using this one on my next trip. I was riding down the road wit’ cha. The history, the geography, and culture of the dirt road is summed up in this one! Thanks for sharing.

Joanne Emery

Beautiful as usual, Fran. I love the game you played with your dad – shiny with surprises! I’m glad I came back today to start writing and reading poetry again. Your poem is a gift – just like home!

kim johnson

Fran, this played like a movie in my mind, like one of those real modern classics, an opening to a story yet untold that becomes the next Where the Crawdads Sing and gives everyone reading fever to see what happens…..and then the end of your verse that ends there so beautifully, the homecoming with the car version of a horse race (how fun!!) and cemetery showdown like that Go to Jail card in Monopoly. This is just the kind of movement I can see – – yes, really SEE as the dust kicks up on the road and little feet exit a car still in motion, running into the arms of those who love her, at home.

Stacey Joy

Fran,
I hope you consider turning this into a picture book! Such an incredibly warm and loving journey!

all that matters

is now

I am home

Barb Edler

Love this, Fran. So beautiful and your end pulls at every heartstring.

Scott M

Beautiful, Fran, cinematic!  I loved experiencing this through the filter of young you as you take in the route and all the people and scenery along the way, bidding hello and bye to various “unpainted houses” and “pastures” and “horses.”  (And I love the horse game you played with your dad.)  You are such a wonderful and artful poet, Fran.  You have the ability to paint an image or emotion with such few strokes: “with his long strange face / and dingy ballcap / he waves at us” or “past the vegetable garden / so neat and misty / a watercolor artist / might have painted it.”  Thank you for taking us along on this journey!

kim johnson

Thank you for hosting today, Clayton! So glad we share a love of the beauty of rural Georgia and all it means to us. Your poem captures the essence of home.

Sipping Home

come sit by me
on my front porch
first light rouses, groggy
from the dark of night
into the glorious morning skies
over rolling hills
winking at morning songbirds
praising their Maker
in the misty morning breeze 
even as wildfires rage

come sit beside me
raise your coffee to your lips 
take the lid off
breathe deeply
in /out/ in/ out
because just like any place
you must take it all in
to experience the rich flavor ~ 
hear its drip
taste its roasted bean
smell its trademark aroma
feel its piping warmth 
see its dark awakenings
against the light of the eastern sky

come sit with me 
let’s sip home
together

Clayton Moon

Wow! You did it again! Capturing all the imagery and comforts of home. Love the Trademark aroma!! I’m getting a cup of coffee now!

Fran Haley

I am right there with you, Kim, sipping home together…in the light of the eastern sky, listening to morning songbirds praising their Maker. I am filled with deep contentment, too great for words – thank you for all the beauty you harness and give to us all.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Kim, the bookends of sipping home places me right alongside you on the porch, savoring the morning, wrapping the rich flavor all around. I imagine the movement of the rocking chairs like that of the in/out/in/out breathing. The contrast between the dark awakenings and the eastern sky lightening soothes. I have been thinking of Georgia as the fires rage on and hope you stay safe.

Gayle j sands

This is my favorite line, and my favorite analogy—
because just like any place
you must take it all in
to experience the rich flavor ~ 

yes. To both! Beautiful morning poem!

Linda M.

I accept your invitation…and, I think I’ve joined you many a morning from my spot on my porch. Sipping home together is a wonderful thought. Maybe a title?

Cayetana

“winking at morning song birds” and others. I can see and visit your home.

Joanne Emery

Hmmm… your poem is quiet and rich. It embraces the reader in a hug. Thank you, Kim!

Leilya Pitre

Oh, Kim, “let’s sip home together” – your invitation and poem make me feel so warm and welcomed. We do need to find a place and time to make it happen 🙂 Love your rich morning decription:
from the dark of night
into the glorious morning skies
over rolling hills
winking at morning songbirds”

Then the coffee beans, their enticing aroma–everything is breathing in your poem.
I was in rush this morning, so just wrote a quick note, like the one you leave on the fridge for a family before heading to work.

Stacey Joy

Kim, my friend, you make me want to be right there with you! I adore the comparison to coffee and the experience of it to taking in this moment with you! I want a sip!! Beautiful, Kim. 💙☕️

first light rouses, groggy

from the dark of night

into the glorious morning skies

Barb Edler

Gorgeous poem, Kim. I love how the narrator invites the reader to take everything in, the sky, the songbirds, and the coffee. Loved the diction throughout and your use of repetition. Lovely poem through and through.

Lori Sheroan

Kim, I love the warmth of your poem! My favorite lines: “you must take it all in/to experience the rich flavor.”

glenda funk

Kim,
I’ll sip coffee w/ you only if I can get a selfie w/ my favorite mug. And while I love the idyllic imagery here, and while I hear birds chirping and feel the morning dewy air and see the mist, I also can’t help of think of the Antebellum South when in southern states and wonder how near the stars and bars and white-hooded men are. Blame Clayton for that.

Denise Krebs

Kim, I would love to sit and breathe in and out your sweet home in Pike County, Georgia. What a delightful poem. “let’s sip home / together” Yes, indeed.

Linda M.

Clayton, your introduction and inspiration are heartfelt. Love for your home is filled with the music of beings, weather, the taste and sights of a back country road. Thank you for that and the meandering poem. It’s so nice to meet you this way.

Years ago
when I was a Mom
of little ones
we’d sing this song:.
Oh, where oh where
is River Crest Rd.
Oh, where oh where
can it be?
Where mommy and daddy,
L and J and J and D
live in a snug little house
with Georgie (the cat)

It was my way of teaching our preschool kids their address and having a homecoming song all in one. Sometimes, I sing that song on the way home from work and smile through happy tears, remembering the days I got to be that mom.

Clayton Moon

So precious! Our moms shape who were are and their love, songs, and poetry stay in our hearts. This was a creative way to teach addresses – imma steal it and teach my nephew!!
thank you

Fran Haley

Song and happy tears remembering little ones…Linda, how you pull on my heartstrings today!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Linda, you remind us that what we learn when we are little becomes a part of us. I’m sure your children hear this song in their memories, just as you do. I sang a song to each of my boys, made especially for them. Your poem reminded me of that this morning, and I am grateful.

Gayle j sands

Oh, my goodness! What a perfect memory. What a perfect song-let! How to start my morning with a joyful memory…

Cayetana

Songs are truly powerful tools for learning!

brcrandall

We are singing with you, Linda! I can hear it all, both poetically and musically.

Joanne Emery

Oh, what a great idea, Linda! People always carry songs in their heads. This is just a lovely idea. I’m sure your kids sing it too, and remember. You need to write a picture book about this. I can see the mom and kids singing, and maybe Georgie gets lost, and they sing outside looking for him, and he comes home. See where your song has taken me? Thank you!

Leilya Pitre

Linda, this is such a wonderful memory, but also a great strategy to memorize the address for little kids. The final two lines are warm and cozy “in a snug little house / with Georgie (the cat).” Thank you for sharing!

kim johnson

That familiar song with new words instead of the little dog gone….what a lovely way to teach children their address. You have good strategies, and to think it can all be done with poetry set to music……it’s how to learn the world! Creativity at its best.

cmhutter

That is absolutely precious! What a wonderful way for your children to learn that returning their address is a celebration of home.

Stacey Joy

Awww, Linda, so sweet! I think all moms should do this because 5th graders don’t know their addresses anymore. ☹️

Kevin

Thanks, Clayton.
My wife and I just got back from a trip to Puerto Rico, where — for a few days — we hiked a rain forest in the center of the island. Finding our way there was tricky, though.
Kevin

The country road twists 
like angry cat’s tail,
all hissing like that –
you know the mood —
and she and I are bent
over the car glass window,
staring at the altitude;
there’s no turnaround
or back-em-ups 
or do-overs up here –
just keep the car goin’,
hopin’ you find the trail head
before night takes over

Clayton Moon

Amen brother, some of these backroads can be a challenge. But I believe you are describing more than a backroad, I love the hidden meanings in your lines, especially you know the mood.
thank you

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Kevin, from someone who is deathly afraid of heights, I am clinging to the dashboard as you bend over the window “staring at the altitude.” I’ve been on those roads before with no back-em-ups. You build such immense tension, right up to the possibility that night may fall as you continue your search.

Linda M.

Ahh! This is a trip I want to take! It sounds wonderful…even with the tricky. “You know the mood–” is perfect.

Gayle j sands

Kevin, I tensed up just thinking about that angry cat’s tail of a road! wonderful imagery, and better you than me!!!

Scott M

Kevin, I love the suspense you’ve crafted with “there’s no turnaround / or back-em ups / or do-overs up here” and “hopin’ you[‘d] find the trail head / before night takes over”!  And the “road twists / like [an] angry cat’s tail.”  This makes me tense just reading it!

brcrandall

Wusah! a poem POEM. Love everything about it, especially the ongoing feline qualities of each line…and really appreciate the “you know the mood” inviting us into the two in the car winding their way up. Perfection.

Joanne Emery

Oh, Kevin, your poem brought me back to a time when my husband and I were driving through Northern California and the Redwood forest – very tricky. I love your analogy of the road twisting like an angry cat’s tail. Perfect!

Stacey Joy

Ohhh, man! This filled me with anxiety imagining the experience if night came! I have vivid memories of Jamaica’s windy roads in a van that seemed it could easily turn upside down. Scary but fun, right? I hope you and your wife enjoyed the destination.

Sarah

bakery roots

with you—
always
across tables
in borrowed cities
salt
sogeum
dissolving on the tongue
bitter coffee
steam between us
sugar
zucchero
ricotta sweet
shell cracking
honey
μέλι
phyllo thin
layers flaking
hands I have never held
folding dough
before dawn
flour
sugar
salt
the grammar of elsewhere
not mine—
but tasted
again
and again
until
home becomes
this—
your smile
dusted in azúcar en polvo
over something
someone else
made
with hope

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Linda M.

Oh, my goodness. This is so beautiful. The combination of concrete ingredients with words other than english and concepts like hope, hands never held, before dawn give this an elevated feeling…we are along on this trip by our own imaginings. I love travel because of what it does for my seeing and feeling and understanding. This poem takes me there.

Kevin

This: “the grammar of elsewhere”
Lovely
Kevin

Clayton Moon

Oh, to be in “borrowed cities”. A beautiful way to express companionship of another or with your own imagination. I feel as though, the cities are borrowing you, as a blessing for us. By you traveling we are enlightened by your experiences in poetic verse.
thank you

Gayle j sands

oh, Sarah. This made me sigh out loud. “Until home becomes this”—soft joy, soft love. Wow.

Dave Wooley

Sarah, “your smile dusted in azucar en polvo over something someone else made with hope” is a stunning ending to your poem.

Scott M

Sarah, I love the lowercase start and lack of end-point punctuation which speak to the repetition of this lovely scene “across tables / in borrowed cities,” and I also love the bookendings of “with you” and “with hope.”  So tender, so good!

brcrandall

Favorite lines of a wonderfully tight poem,

across tables

in borrowed cities

and

the grammar of elsewhere

not mine—

wonderful!

Leilya Pitre

Sarah, from the title till the end, this is such a moving skinny poem. I like he brevity of phrasing–who needs many words when you see two people sharing the table “in borrowed cities,” learning “the grammar of elsewhere,” and finding home in a smile of a loved one. Beautiful and warm!

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