Verse Embarks Rhythm, Sings Existentially, Liberates Outwardly, & Voices Endlessly (#V.E.R.S.E.L.O.V.E) with Bryan Ripley Crandall

Welcome to Day 1 of Verselove. We are so happy you are here, however you choose to be present. If you know what to do, carry on; if you are not sure, begin by reading the inspiration and mentor poem, then scroll to the comment section to post your poem. Please respond to at least three other poets in celebration of words, phrases, ideas, and craft that speak to you. All educators – authors, librarians, teachers, teacher educators, coaches, consultants, preservice, retired–are welcome. It’s free. No commitment is needed. Please invite a teacher-friend to join you one or more days because poetry heals. Click here for more information on the Verselove. Click here for the PD tracker if you’d like PD credits.

Bryan Ripley Crandall

Bryan Ripley Crandall lives in Stratford, Connecticut, where he directs the Connecticut Writing Project and is an Associate Professor of English Education at Fairfield University. There, he brings his love of verse to award-winning Young Adult Literacy Labs and teacher institutes. He gained his teaching legs at the J. Graham Brown School in Louisville, Kentucky, a K-12 public school with a mission for diversity, inclusivity, and equity, and is co-host of the National Writing Project’s The Write Time.

Inspiration

I had a teacher who once said, “No. Yuck. Absolutely Not. Acrostic poems are awful. There’s no point to them.” I, of course, went gremlin, scampy, and rogue. More importantly, I had fun at her expense and wrote about her using her name (always a fool, even beyond the 1st of April). Døde fisk flyder i strømmen – dead fish float with the stream (I stole this from the back of  a kid’s leather jacket while teaching in Denmark). 

Being an imp can be good. We need playfulness and rebellion in our lives. I say  fool around with language, use thesaurus.com and Google search “Verbs beginning with…” as you write.  Find rhythm, rhyme, imagery, and flow, and resist the “nopes,” “never,” & negativity of others. Open a new page. Rebel.

Process

For years, I’ve gifted students with acrostic poems as a way to “capture” who we were as a class  (as I do with teachers, now, e.g, Flooded with Imagination, 2021 – an Acrostic Salute to Teacher Leaders). 

Akros – the end. Stichos – a line. Greek and Latin poets (& playwrights) inked alphabet letters onto leaves and trickled them to the ground in a game of thinking…whatever order they  fell, compositional wit was a necessity. But go beyond B-R-Y-A-N – ‘Banana Rabbit Yodeling Aardvark Nerd’. Use  a name, a phrase, or a thought, and gift your words to the world.

Directions: Sing eminently. Voice endlessly. Think of your  person, place, or phrase. Lay the letters onto the page as if fallen leaves. Game-on. Write as if you are ‘gifting’ to another, and use each letter to craft an original poem. 

Bryan’s Poem

Thank You, Sarah Donovan 

by Bryan Ripley Crandall (aka Frog)

 

T here’s music within the  process, the way one finds a song in 

h ow each letter meanders and maps into words, dripping an idea

a cross the page with desire to dance

n ear shores of the Aegean Sea, such sedated urgency, for 

k nowing (unknowingly) that March has marched on. 

 

Y ou, always with a baton in front of the  symphony, building community, an

o rchestration for April  showers (come what may) 

u nderwritten with assurance: all things sprout eventually. These

 

S tories. These narratives. Perhaps some confessions. The

a rrival of poetic possibility set above the net, perfectly, with

r hyme  &  rhythm for you to spike. Ubuntu. Human togetherness. We,  an

a nthology composed collaboratively, choosing to believe in 

h ope (most lovingly).

 

D ay one. A first. The sun rises

o bediently and you welcome a pen for tilling blank pages with

n ourishment: 30-days of writerly seeds planted &

o rdained, strategically, for growth and renewal…

v erse to restore ourselves, asynchronously,

a crostically, and purposely with

n eccessity for equity, diversity, and inclusivity. This,  a  bloom for you.

Your Turn

Perhaps it’s a friend, a phrase, a writer you love to read. Maybe it’s your own name, a pet’s, or even the street or neighborhood where you are right now. Let the chosen letters  be leaves that fall to the page. Write  your way into the first day of April and liberate yourself outwardly. Welcome new growth.

Now, scroll to the comment section below to write your own poem. (This is a public space, so you may use only your first name or initials depending on your privacy preferences.) Not ready? That’s okay. Read the poems already posted for more inspiration. Ponder your own throughout the day. Return later. And, if the prompt does not work for you, that is fine. All writing is welcome. Just write something. . Oh, and a note about drafting: Since we are writing in short bursts, we all understand (and even welcome) the typos and partial poems that remind us we are human and that writing is always becoming.

Respond to 3

Respond to 3 teachers today. Writing educator Peter Elbow said, “To improve your writing you don’t need advice about what changes to make; you don’t need theories of what is good and bad writing. You need movies of people’s minds while they read your words” (Writing Without Teachers, 1973, p. 77). Please offer a mirror to our writers by sharing what you noticed, what moved you, and what you learned. Responding to one another is a way of saying “I see you” and “thank you for writing” and “I carry your words.” Responses create a much needed space of reciprocity in a teacher’s life. Here are a few sentence stems that may be helpful for you and your students.

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Macy Hollingsworth

T eam leader 
E energetic to help her students 
A lways there for the people that need it
C aring and welcoming 
H elping hand when you need it
E nthusiastic 
R espectful and honest

Katie K

Honesty is the best policy
Always on your side
Never leaving you
No matter what
A best friend
Her beauty grows

Macy Hollingsworth

Katie,
I loved this poem! Hannah seems like a great friend! Very descriptive! I am sure she would love to see this poem!

Katie K

Kasey, the imagery in your words is insightful. Mothers are gift from the heavens and your words bring life to each line.

Ella Wright

I absolutely adore this poem! You did an amazing job of using imagery throughout the piece!

Emma U.

The imagery in this is so touching. Thank you for sharing this,

Ella Wright

Say you will stay next to me
After all that has happened 
For the end of our days are near
Even with you here I feel your leaving
Tame my flaming heart
You used to keep me safe

Katie K

Ella, the descriptive words you put into your work fit in and make this poem jump off the page.

Freddy Cavazos

Such great poem

Freddy Cavazos

Ice Box
Author Freddy Cavazos

Ice Box 

Walking in it feels like an icebox
My fingers were so numb and cold
Walking past rooms filled with sick patients
Hallways reeking of disinfectants and rubbing alcohol 
Walking in search of room 606

Lost once again not sure where I am? 
Walking toward the elevator pressing button for the 6 floor
Stopping to get directions at the help desk 
Walking in the right direction 
Trauma occurs and nurses rush by with a Gurnee 

Walking into a room the air smelled of sadness
Rushing to find a seat on the comfy reclining chair
Walking by more footsteps like the sound of moving traffic 
The nurse comes in to check on my mom 
Walking away to get the chart and bring her medication

Standing up looking out the window on a rainy and cloudy day 
Walking back and forth pacing myself 
Mother now is fully awake 
Walking over to hug her is difficult due to all the IV bags connected to her 
Thankful that she has lived to see another day

Ella Wright

I love the imagery you used in your poem to bring it to life! Touching poetry.

Emma U.

Thank you for sharing this personal piece. From the first stanza I could vividly see the setting in which you are painting a picture of and my nose turned at the scents you are describing.

Macy Hollingsworth

I love how descriptive your poem is!

Rob Karel

Love the imagery and longing you created! I especially loved the use of “the breathy dusk.”
Thanks for sharing!

Jinan

When I read that an acrostic will be the first poem, I knew I was in the right place! Thank you, Bryan, for a beautiful message and a wonderful welcome to the month. This is my first time participating and I am excited about what’s in store. My poem comes out of the relief I felt as I read the introduction, other poems, and just time spent on this page.

Revisiting my inner writer,
Enjoying the flow of words.
Loving the community in which it is shared
Investing time with a return of
Everlasting records of human connection.
Fostering joy and knowing all are welcome!

Shaun

Welcome, Jinan!
This is a wonderful community, and your poem is a perfect expression of how important it is to share your words with others. Poetry is a great way to foster “human connection.” I look forward to reading your poetry this month!

Maureen Y Ingram

Beautiful word for an acrostic poem, “RELIEF” – love that! I also love the line “Enjoying the flow of words” – this poetry community makes this happen for me, seems to tap something within and let my words flow. Welcome, Jinan!

Rob Karel

Thanks for sharing Jinan! I had many of the same feelings going into this. I am glad to see I am not alone. I appreciate the positivity in your poem.

Ella Wright

Amazing word choice! You captured the image of this community beautifully.

Katie K

Jinan, I love how you exemplified each letter into its own but also working each line into the next.

Macy Hollingsworth

I loved how you chose the word “Relief” as the topic of your poem! Very well done!

Shaun

Bryan, thank you for the playful inspiration and giving us permission to have fun today!

Lucky the Cat-Dog, or Cog
By Shaun Ingalls

Look at your scruffy, unkempt face!
Under your chin I can see bits of kibble and leaves.
Come here so I can clean you up, make you presentable.
Kindly set aside your stubborn ways and cooperate.
Your headstrong defiance is most frustrating.

Tomorrow I will call the groomer.
He will transform you from a beast to a beauty.
Every mat and tangle will be removed.

Come to me so I can brush the hair from your eyes,
And scratch the spot behind your ear that makes your leg
Twitch and spasm like a piston.
Drop the act.
Once you are in my arms, you know it’s safe.
Give in to the fact that you are a dog, not a cat.

Only you will sit in a patch of sunlight,
Relaxing in the warmth it provides.

Cats will perch on the couch, free from disturbance.
One day you will come to your senses and
Gamble to me like a dog would.

Joel R Garza

Argh, I’m late to this challenge, but thanks for it. This is a tribute to musician / producer Brian Eno

before a melody, a mood,
rolling waves of sound, resolution always
imminent,
all connecting a
network of
electronic ethereal lines.
now the voices—
oh, how they climb.

https://middleagedmiddlechild.com/2022/04/02/acrostic-ode/

Laura Langley

Joel, I love your ode to Eno. I especially like the enjambment in your second and third lines. I keep running those lines through my head. Thanks for sharing!

Rob Karel

Joel, I love the flow of your poem. The picture you painted was clear and concise. Even for those of us who may not know him you created a great introduction.

Lisa Noble

Joel – I’m so glad I hopped back here, in anticipation of trying this more complex acrostic form with my Grade 7’s. I can close my eyes after reading this, and hear Eno. And oh, yes, always those voices, climbing.

Denise Krebs

Oh, Kasey, how beautiful. I love this. My favorite phrase is “the plumping curves of cheek” It is such a vivid image.

Bee

“Leaving”
Letting go of what no longer serves me,
Evolving into the version of myself that I always longed to be,
Admitting the loss that will accompany me as I depart,
Verifying the decision that has come from my heart,
Instigating changes that have been hurtling towards me like a train,
Not looking back, going against the grain,
Going forward with gratitude for all that came before
thankful for the gifts, yet knowing there is more.

Denise Krebs

Bee, this is lovely. I love the -ing words you chose to start the acrostic. Powerful self-actualizing words. Here’s to leaving the old behind and embracing the gifts of the future you.

Freddy Cavazos

“Evolving into the version of myself that I always longed to be” amazing I think of the growth and maturity one must endure along with trials and tribulations. So a great poem.

Emma U.

This poem speaks to self-growth and reflection, a process we all must embrace at points in out lives.

Ruth R

Let nobody tell you that you are not worthy my son
Overstand that you are a King, a lion, a champion
Nothing can keep you from destined Royalty
Don’t ever settle for mediocrity, or distracted by formality
Original, authentic, impressive is your design
Notable for great works, empowering mankind

Bee

“Overstand” I love this word

Denise Krebs

Yes, I love “overstand”

Ruth R

Hi Bee
I have heard the word ‘overstand’ in the Rastafarian culture to emphasize understanding.

Denise Krebs

So many beautiful adjectives to describe London. The rhyming is very effective, as well.

Ruth R

Thank you Denise

Saba T.

“Open a new page. Rebel.” These words speak to my soul. So here I am, opening a new page, joining #VerseLove for the first time.
I thought long and hard about what word/phrase to use. There were far too many contenders. But one phrase kept coming back to me.

Imposter! Imposter! Imposter! says the voice in my head,
As I sit down to write,
Making my words shimmer and fade.
Enough, I say to myself,
Not today, not again.
On the white expanse, I pen but a word,
Ubiety! I am here. I exist. I am worthy.
Gallantly, I claim this space, this page.
Here, between these lines, I am enough.

Glenda M. Funk

Saba, I’m so glad you made it. Your poem is fantastic. I think women in particular hear the echo “imposter” in their ears often, and repeating the word reinforces that point. “I am enough” is so important to remember.

Saba T.

Thank you, Glenda. It is my mantra these days – I am enough, as a daughter, a sister, a teacher, a friend.

cmargocs

Your words fit the acrostic, Saba, starting with “imposter” and ending with “enough”. This is powerful, like a battle cry, shoving and fighting against that which seems to tell you–us–that we don’t matter, our words don’t matter. And now I have to go look up “ubiety”–thanks for the new word!

Saba T.

Thank you! I like how you call it a “battle cry” because when I wrote it that word also went through my head.

Ruth R

I enjoyed and appreciate your poem. It is creative, reassuring, and inspirational!
Ruth

Denise Krebs

Wow, so beautiful, Saba. The word “ubiety” is a great one word to pen. I just learned that word from you. So much truth in this powerful poem.

Shaun

Saba,
This is a great affirmation on the first day of our thirty-day adventure. Very inspirational! I love the confidence of “I am worthy” “I claim this space, this page.” Let’s GOOOO!

Jinan

Saba, this is such a powerful poem and one definitely needed, especially for folks like me who haven’t participated in this before. Thank you for being vulnerable and in doing so inviting all of us to be so as well. Also, appreciate the powerful “heroic” diction of “gallantly,” “claiming”, like the pen (or keyboard) is your “weapon” to overcome this imposter syndrome(we all face). Looking forward to this adventure! 🙂

Maureen Y Ingram

Welcome, Saba! What a powerful message for your acrostic, and you have woven together gorgeous lines – “Ubiety! I am here. I exist. I am worthy.” This should /could be a mantra taped to a mirror and read/resolved over and over throughout the day; love it!

Saba T.

Thank you, Maureen! I’m actually thinking of printing this out and putting it up in my classroom as a motivator to both myself and my students.

Angie

What a lovely tribute to Sarah, Bryan! Thanks for the prompt. I’m currently in Oman for Spring Break so here ya go.

Oh, the only country that starts with this letter, I didn’t know
You and your vast and varying landscapes 

Mountains and deserts and beaches oh my! Hiking around the “Grand Canyon of Oman” and reminiscing 

Adventures when I was nine years old in Arizona, terrain so similar except here there is an abundance of Goats and the one that caught my attention is the 

Nimblest one of all, standing in a neglected tree, looking like it’s about to crack from dehydration but the tree survived, the goat survived, all are alive.

Saba T.

I’ve never been to Oman even though I’ve lived in the Middle East all my life. The last line “but the tree survived, the goat survived, all are alive” adds so much depth to this piece. Thank you for sharing!

Laura Langley

Angie, the way you’ve shared your experience of Oman as similar but different from Arizona is such a nice invitation for the reader to join you in your far-away travels.

Denise Krebs

Wow, Angie. This is so beautiful. I have had the pleasure of the “mountains and deserts and beaches oh my!” of Oman. I love your poem, especially the detail of the nimblest goat and that the tree and goat survive and live in this harsh environment.

Shaun

Angie,
I love the image of the goat “standing in a neglected tree” – such a contrast to the image of the Arizona desert. Now I want to see this amazing landscape!

Kim Kinsella

Hello all from Ireland, an American friend has shared this challenge with me but how do I comment, read each day? Through this website? Or is there a fb page or link. Or do I open this website everyday?

Angie

Hello Kim, subscribe here with your email: http://www.ethicalela.com/verselove/ and you will get a daily email with the new prompt.

Denise Krebs

You’ll use this website for each day’s writing. Welcome, Kim!

Laura Langley

Before I was an adult, I thought it would get
Easier.
Now, I feel what he was singing.

For the last two decades, I’ve heard 
Only now, I
Listen.
Did I know then that with my own kid 
I’d unlock what it means to be
“Still fighting it?”

Angie

Nice tribute to a favorite artist, Laura. I can feel the disillusionment and definitely understand how listening to something or reading or seeing something later in life changes from when we were younger.

DeAnna C

Thank you for this fun prompt today.

Moments big and small spent loving them
Occasionally worrying about them
Making memories to last them a lifetime

Angie

Love the last line especially, DeAnna. S sweet!

Cara Fortey

DeAnna,
So very you and so very true! But shouldn’t you have done Grandma, too? 😉

DeAnna C

LOL!!!

Rachelle

How sweet, DeAnna. This makes me think about how you are not only a mom to your own children, but how motherly you are to our students at school 🙂

Denise Krebs

Brian, I loved reading your inspiration and process today. It made me smile. I had a busy day, but acrostics were on my mind all day. Then the day got away and I wrote a quick poem before bed. I loved this image in your poem about the beauty of this space that Sarah has invited us to:

The arrival of poetic possibility set above the net, perfectly, with rhyme & rhythm for you to spike.

Denise Krebs

For sitting and staring
I really can’t think of anything
Remotely as mesmerizing,
Enjoyable, and relaxing as these
Lingering moments around the fire.
It was what kept me this evening.
Good night, welcoming #Verselove.
Here even though it’s late.
Thank you, friends.

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Angie

Hi Denise! Love sitting by the fires like this. Your poem is so calming and peaceful – a great welcome for Poetry Month! 🙂

Glenda M. Funk

Denise,
Late is better than absence. I wanted to sit around a fire last night but was too tired. Maybe tonight. I’m imagining your fire w/ Joshua Trees in the background and stars in the sky. Gorgeous photo.

Ruth R

Hi Denise,
Nice warm poem. A fire within and without.

Jinan

Denise, thank you for this welcoming poem! It is like you are inviting us (warmly) to enjoy the fireside (poems/this space) together. 🙂

Donnetta D Norris

Denise, your picture along with the poem are perfect. I don’t sit around a fire much, but I have memories from the past…lingering memories.

Maureen Y Ingram

What a treasure, to include a photo, Denise! I, too, would have had trouble pulling myself away from “Lingering moments around the fire.” Here’s to a month of poetry together!

Donnetta D Norris

Regulations to be followed ~ do this and do that
Uniformity with conformity ~ everything looks the same
Limiting, established ways ~ being boxed in
Etiquette and decorum ~ has to be appropriate; has to be correct
Systems or methods ~ maintaining order

Rebel writers don’t always follow the rules.

Cara Fortey

Donnetta,
Ooo! I love this! Rules are too limiting, and while systems and methods provide order, they don’t always allow creativity! This applies to so much more than rebel writers–rebel teachers, too. Nice!

Denise Krebs

Donnetta, I love all the synonyms for rules, all tidy and sure. Then that last line is perfect!

Emily Cohn

Thank you for the inspiration, Bryan! I love the idea of using this as a wrap up for an event or a welcome, and your poem showed the depth this simple form offers. Cool!

I had an old buddy come to teach my students shadow puppetry this week and this one is for him!

Homeslice

Hearty laugh heard across the room
Original thrift store treasure hunter
My old friend, it’s good to see you’re still unmistakably yourself
Enthusiastic about each new passion: pickles to puppets,
Still finding new stories to tell from a
Life well lived.
I admire how you
Create
Each day and enjoy it – with a hearty laugh.

Denise Krebs

Emily, such a delightful poem. I spent two days with an old friend this week, and I might have written a similar poem about her. I loved: “a life well lived” and also how it began and ended with a “hearty laugh”. Homeslice is a neat word too.

Susan Ahlbrand

Bryan,
What a great prompt, especially with so many newcomers.
And, thank you for your homage to Sarah and this space. You wrote for all of us. I love these lines especially:

you welcome a pen for tilling blank pages with

n ourishment

I’m late to posting as we had our third baseball game tonight, all three in under 40 degree weather. Brrrrrr.

Baseball isn’t meant for sleeping bags
And blankets and gloves 
Scarves and hats. 
Even the grass shivers.
Bats sting hands
Air is filled with vapory breath puffs
Looking forward to sweating and 
Leaving the layers in the car. 

~Susan Ahlbrand
1 April 2022

Cara Fortey

Susan,
Yikes! My son did soccer, so we expected it to get cold, but baseball is supposed to be warm, dang it! You really captured the cold with “Even the grass shivers / Bats sting hands / air is filled with vapors breath puffs.” Very visual and you made me shiver for you!

Denise Krebs

Oh, my Susan, that sounds miserable. Your word choice and details have made me feel every shiver. Here’s to sweating and lots of layers shed sooner, rather than later.

Dionna

Hello, Detroit

H ope you’ve been well since we last kicked it

very time we’re together dope connections happen organically 

et me start by saying thank you 

L ove seems to be a complicated thing, but it’s second nature with you

O bviously, you were my first

D id I ever tell you how on those nights spent together I’d watch amazed as you drifted off to sleep

E nveloped in your beauty, mesmerized by your mystery

T alk to me like only Detroiters do

R aw and authentic, code-switching for what? For who?

O nly my authentic self when I’m with you

I miss us

T il’ I see you again, take care my friend 

-Detroit’s Girl 

Emily Cohn

Fiona- I like the rhythm and repetition in here. I love that it’s a kind of love letter, the place of authenticity. I feel like this could be a song!

Charlene Doland

Dionna, this feels like a love letter. I liked how you wove vernacular language into it, as it reinforces to me your thought “Only my authentic self when I’m with you.”

Amber Harrison

Just…I don’t want to say it’s
Even true — the death of you
Now two Decembers past. The absent tears are
Now an April storm — they well up then poor out. And
I can see they help because
For without this
Everest pain I couldn’t connect to the ones who have lost their people, too. Just sit. Just be. Shhhhh is all we need
Right now.

Dionna

Amber, there’s so much raw emotion to process in this piece. Thank you for sharing your words and heart with us.

Emily Cohn

Amber- first, I wish you lots of love and healing. I feel the heartbreak from the first line. I am particularly drawn to the image of Everest pain. “Just sit. Just be.” I love the transformation in the poem from the painful start to the beginnings of peace at the end. Beautiful.

gayle

This Everest pain… this has been a year of so many losses amongst the people I love. “Just sit. Just be. Shhhhh is all we need/Right now.” That is all we can do. Just be…

Rachelle

Thanks for this great prompt to kick us off, Bryan! Great example poem–Sarah is truly amazing for organizing this!

An acrostic poem to myself after a loooooong week:

Real acts of rebellion
Exist not in defiance
But within the audacity to
Exist as myself: to
Love mushy poetry, gooey chocolate cake, and chilly bike rides at sunset–to
Live as fully human
In spite of teaching’s demands. So, go
On and write, you rebel!
Normalize prioritizing yourself.

Dionna

Yaaaas!! Finger snaps and hand claps for this one, Rachelle. I felt as if you personalized this permission slip for me, the writer, the teacher, and me. I absolutely enjoyed your word choice in line 5.

Emily Cohn

Rachelle, this totally speaks to me today!! Good for you for enjoying the at cake, bike ride, and poetry! It is an act of rebellion to not give into the busy martyr mentality, and I love how you frame it- to live as fully human after you give so much is indeed rebellion. And it sounds more fun than work life balance! Thanks for this offering!

Cara Fortey

Rachelle,
Aren’t we the pair! I wrote about overwhelming myself (even for a good reason) and now I need to follow your lead. It does take “audacity”to have a real life and prioritize yourself as a teacher. Not mushy poetry, but necessary activism. 🙂

DeAnna C

Rachelle,
Awe, REBELLION such a wonderful poem. It is true that teachers need to prioritize themselves.

Jinan

Rachelle, rebellion is such a beautiful way to frame self-care. I think I will have to enjoy some chocolate cake and write future poems outdoors, feeling the sun and cool breeze! Hope you continue to have more rebellious activities planned and enjoy each of them 🙂

Alexis Ennis

Hello! This is my first time participating in the April poetry session and I am so excited! I hope I keep with it.

I am currently working on a dystopian verse novel and have written an acrostic based on a group of characters in my book called “the roamers.”

I hope you enjoy and thanks for reading.

We lost everything and refuse to be forced to pretend everything will be okay. 
Even the adults left say we just need to wait it out. But we

Are tired of waiting. Tired of standing in line. stuck in a town that took everything. we want to 
Roam where want. 
Early on we followed the rules but now we set off on our own. 

The bribe to come to school for food is all about control. 
Here, take this food, some toilet paper, and then give us a blood sample. Now go to class! Keep learning!”
Everyone we loved is gone, and we can take care of ourselves. Each other. 

Reaching for a hand. 
Outstretched arms. 
All are welcome. 
Many are tricking you. 
Each one of us will look out for you. 
Refusing to play their game, we
Set off to make our own way and start our future together. 

We are the roamers

Britt

Alexis, welcome to Verse Love; so glad you’re here. Second, I so look forward to reading your novel one day! 🙂
This is a brilliant idea – the acrostic for your characters. You’re giving me ideas for implementing this in varied ways for students!
Here’s to the next 29 days!

Rachelle

Alexis, thanks for the background and nice poem! I am interested in what happens–the drama between these lines intrigues me:
All are welcome. 
Many are tricking you. “

Thanks for writing today!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Alexis, welcome to VerseLove! Your poem gives hints at both mood and plot without revealing too much – just enough to intrigue. And the acrostic form works so well for introducing the roamers.

Britt

Happy first day! Glad to be back in this space 🙂 I love this prompt and can’t wait to use it with students later this month. I write to the open page today…

Thank you for welcoming me with
Open arms, for being a space

To tell my truth. In you, I
Have discovered and questioned and
Embraced my

Own thinking,
Presumptions, and
Evolving ideas.
Notebook after notebook,

Page after page, I am
Astounded by the
Gift of words, of the
Empty page – waiting for me.

Rachelle

Ah! What a wonderful acrostic, Britt! I’m feeling a nice writing prompt for myself based on this. While an open page can feel daunting for some, it also has such a sense of excitement! Thank you for sharing 🙂

Glenda M. Funk

Britt,
This is an apt tribute to the empty page awaiting each of us. It reminds me of the poem “Echo Sonnet to an Empty Page.” I think that’s the title anyway.

Stacey Joy

My grandmother was a true prankster so April Fool’s Day always brought out the best pranks. This year, I opted for a believable prank, one that I could pull on just about anyone who knows me. I told my friends, family, coworkers and students that Abbott Elementary’s producer was interested in using my classroom and one other in an upcoming episode. I actually HATE the show, but it’s high ratings and positive reviews make it a topic of much discussion amongst educators. My poem is Abbott Smabbott!

Abbott Smabbot

April Fool’s Day
Begins with a staff prank 
Bringing Abbott Elementary to our school
Oh, but not everyone, just
Two classes would be chosen 
To be filmed for an upcoming episode

Students pumped about being on TV
Maybe I should tell them, yes… 
April Fools! 
BOOOOOOOOO!!! No way!
But even my son and daughter fell for it
OMG Mom, that was a terrible joke
To play because it was
Totally believable!

©Stacey L. Joy, 4/1/22

Happy April Fool’s Day but most of all Happy National Poetry Month! ❤️

Britt

Stacey! Happy April 🙂 I absolutely love what you’ve done here, and what a great April Fool’s joke. You win today!! Also, I have yet to watch the show, but only ever hear amazing things. I’m so intrigued that you hate it, and now I want to watch it even more haha.

Stacey Joy

I appreciate that, Britt! And let me know what you think if you watch. I have given it 4 tries. I should’ve stuck with 3 strikes and you’re out. Just not believable to me at all. But I’m so happy that the show and cast are getting great reviews.

Rachelle

What a great prank! I loved that your poem also included the reactions from not only the students but your children too! Thank you for sharing this; it made me smile!

Lisa Noble

For my beloved, indispensable, #EduKnitNight community

Every Tuesday, uninterrupted, we gather,
Determined to fight off the ongoing dark.
Unbowed, despite the painful stories we
Knit into existence, and sometimes unravel.
Never quite giving up. Often, starting again,
Idea-sharing, questioning to get through
The toughest bits. Reaching out to
New faces who have bravely found their way to this
Illuminated space.
Growing, always, together, finding that thread of
Hope to guide us through the labyrinth of our week,
To Tuesday, again.

Amber Harrison

This really spoke to me. The part “and sometimes unravel” is a hard truth to knit nights. (I’m a knitter, too.) thank you for sharing

Lisa Noble

Thanks, Amber. Let me know if you ever want to join our virtual space on a Tuesday night.

Britt

the painful stories we
Knit into existence, and sometimes unravel.”

This line gives me chills, Lisa! I read knitting, but I could also see it with writing and writing groups. How gorgeously you’ve pieced together this poem to highlight the beauty of your knitting group.

Charlene Doland

I love the metaphor of a community knitting together not only pieces made of yarn, but also many shared stories.

Stacey Joy

Bryan! Hi, my friend! Wow, such a fun prompt to get us started for a month of poetry. And to have chosen our phenomenal leader, Sarah, as your focus just warms my heart!
Ahhhh! Yes!!

r hyme &  rhythm for you to spikeUbuntu. Human togetherness. We, an

a nthology composed collaboratively, choosing to believe in 

h ope (most lovingly).

I am going to be a late poster today because I’m still not home. But I can’t wait to write!

Thank you! ?

Jessica Wiley

Thank you for hosting today, Bryan. I loved it all, but this stanza was my favorite:
T here’s music within the process, the way one finds a song in 
h ow each letter meanders and maps into words, dripping an idea
cross the page with desire to dance
n ear shores of the Aegean Sea, such sedated urgency, for 
k nowing (unknowingly) that March has marched on. 

It reminds me that just writing is a process, and how you compared it to music and finding a song, just like finding the words to make it all fit and make sense to us. And yes, goodbye March, hello April! This is a very fun prompt, but I found it difficult. I see what you did there. Challenge accepted!

This is My Birthday Month

Tornadoing in, quavering as my eyes erupt with showers of joy and blooming flowers, 
Hello April!
 I’m not counting the days, but making the days count!
Sis, can you act right for 30 days?

I’ll reflect on the themes of my last two years,  2020: “Leap of Faith”; 2021: “Trust the Process”.
Significant changes occurred; I busted the seams of my comfort zone.

Mulling over life-altering decisions, saying
Yes to (almost) everything to advance in my career and future, hopeful of fame.

Better is coming.
In search of greater, I’m
Reaching for the stars.
Touching the universe,
Hovering faith helps me see my
Dreams no longer deferred.
A blessed assurance, Jesus is mine.
Yearning for the day I will be, come.

Many opportunities no longer
Overlooked over yonder.
Noting nothing is not on this year’s agenda.
Taking in account this century I’ll nickname the “Pandemic Years.”
Holding on dearly, I will continue to pen the rough edges of my existence. 

Britt

Jessica, what a fun and brilliant poem. I felt like dancing and found myself bouncing my shoulders a bit. 🙂 Happy, happy birthday month to you. I hope you celebrate and are celebrated every single day!

Jessica Wiley

Thank you Britt. This is Day 2 and I am definitely going to treat myself times two for yesterday and today!

Rachelle

This poem makes me wish my birthday was this month — I love the opportunity to see the new year as a fresh start. I sense you’re an optimist at heart 🙂 Thanks for this poem!

Jessica Wiley

I agree, new seasons bring about new things. Yes Rachelle, I try to be! Thank you! I think Spring is just for me because although I don’t like to be outside, when I have to be, it’s not too hot or too cold. It’s just right!

Seana Wright

Bryan,thanks for the inspiration!

To Stacey Joy
Hello my sistah and thank you for
Awakening the writer within me and introducing me to Ethicalela.
Needed to get these words and thoughts out of my head
Kindred spirits we are, teaching 5th grade for so long
Somehow you knew I had SO much to say…

Stacey Joy

My heart overflows with love for you! This is beautiful! I’m eternally grateful that you accepted the invitation to join us. We need you and all
the poems inside of your sweet soul!

Kindred spirits we are, teaching 5th grade for so long

Somehow you knew I had SO much to say…

I love how connected we are! Always!

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Britt

What a precious tribute, Seana. Glad you’re here!!

Rachelle

While I don’t know Stacey Joy IRL, I do know that EthicalEla would NOT be the same without her. Thanks for this poem, Seana, and thanks to Stacey for making this space on the internet such a welcoming place. I remember Stacey commenting on one of my first poems! 🙂

Shaun

Seana,
This is great! I love that friends are bringing people into this space and “awakening the writer within” all of us. I can’t wait to read you poetry!

Jessica Wiley

Oh I love this. Welcome Seana and what an amazing tribute to Stacey Joy! I don’t know her well, but I just love her spirit! Part of this line, “Kindred spirits we are…” deserves two snaps!

Jamie Langley

to Townes(first steps)

From May until March
I’ve watched you and your parents
rise to new places. Your life
shared with all of us.
The gift of you

sings in the moments of each
turning, a life once filled with
events of the adult world to
parenting challenges accepted
struggle, joy, and delight.

Ashley

Your last line shows the beautify and the hardship of those first steps forward.

Susan O

What a wonderful tribute, Jamie!

Laura Langley

I love the lines “The gift of you/Sings in the moments.”

Emma Gould

Bryan, I love the idea of an acrostic. Adults can be creative with these too! I get married this summer, so wedding planning is constantly on my mind…

W hen the time comes to make the commitment
E very bone in your body tingles
D eciding which color swatch to go with
D oing everything you can to please everyone else
I must stop and remember what this is truly all about
N othing matters more than the marriage that comes after the wedding
G azes at my fiancé:)

Mo Daley

Way to bring it back to what’s important, Emma! So many are focused on the big day, when there will be so many big years ahead. Best wishes!

Dee

Hi Emma,

Thank you for sharing! I absolutely agree with you that its the life that you will live with your partner that will truly counts. Your poem made me reflect on how much people spend on weddings and often times it does not last very long. Love, kindness and mutual respect will hold two people together for a life time. Congrats and all the best.

Britt

Yay, congrats, Emma! Those wedding planning days are no joke. Definitely keep reminding yourself what’s important; it’s so easy to forget amid all the chaos. 🙂 have fun!

Heidi

R eally proud of you always, I promise

E xceptionally meaningless during COVID

P owerfully resilient 4th graders who deserve patience and love, not

O nly letters and numbers, but identity affirmation

R ewarding for some, but

T ear-inducing for others

C ould I type more than 250 characters in the comment box,

A ctually giving meaningful feedback

R ather than T’s to target things no one understands….

D ones not define children

S napshots in time, not sagas

brcrandall

Our kids are so much more than a test score, and during Covid. Phew. Can’t imagine the stress…Ah, with this said, kids need to read poems like this…no how their teachers really feel

Anna

Heidi, As a parent of three children, I’m confide that you are truly appreciated even if few think to express it now. You’re making a positive difference in the lives of your students. That’s my report card to you.

Heidi

Thank you so much for the kind words. I appreciate it.

Dee

Hi Heidi,

Your poem is an inspiration. Indeed during these times teachers need to be more sensitive and empathetic towards students. Covid has brought on a lot of psychological stress and they need to be loved, nurtured and appreciated.

Lisa Noble

OhOh, Heidi. Thank you so much for this. That line about “actually giving meaningful feedback”. It would be such a gift to be able to do that. Thank you for encapsulating so much of how I feel about reports.

Chiara Hemsley

Bryan, thank you for your fun prompt! I love an acrostic poem as much as the kids do! I write this as my world-famous giant chocolate chip cookie bakes for a last-minute dessert.

B rown and crisp, salty sweet
A ttractive aromas wind and rise
K ids materialize
I ntrigued and craving
N ostalgic flavors call
G uess my diet starts tomorrow

Emma Gould

I love this poem, Chiara. It makes me think of all the nostalgic warm moments with my mom baking. The touch of humor at the end made me giggle.

brcrandall

And Crandall wish you were my neighbor….love that kids materialize. Like, how did that happen?

Charlene Doland

For my unforgettable Meliora students.

Many are the smiles you’ve brought me
Even though our days have not been perfect.
Loud peals of laughter
Interspersed with sighs of frustration,
Outlining magnificent theses,
Reading *ridiculous* books,
Always, always digging deeper.

Steadfastly building new skills,
Theatrically defending points of view,
Understanding why others disagree.
Daring to plunge in, wrestle with
Elaborate new ideas and tools.
Never giving up, instead
Tenaciously trekking through
Showing up for me, for you, for us.

Heidi

Being an elementary educator, I appreciated these words. I specifically loved the last 2 lines, the first for the alliteration, and the last because it screams community to me.

brcrandall

And the last line is what it’s all about for me. Human togetherness. I hope you share this with them!

Charlene Doland

I agree, Bryan, the human connection is what really counts! I hadn’t thought of sharing this with the students… not sure why not. With your nudge, I will definitely do so!

Shelly

Thank goodness for April and Verse Love and this community. You are just what I need today. Thanks Bryan for the prompt and your example. Thank you Sarah for opening this space.

Hello/Goodbye

Dad, you wake
Each day further away, but your
Mind remains alive with a spark behind
Eyes dancing with the
Need to bring comfort, silliness, and joy, if we can just
Take time to see you
In this moment
And let go of the rest.

Boxer

such a heart felt poem, with purpose, understanding, and grip. Blessed are those who comfort family in times of need.

Chiara Hemsley

Shelly,

Your poem was so meaningful to me as it brought back memories of my grandmother who also suffered from dementia. Your line about your father’s eyes spoke to my experience as well. Thank you for sharing.

Emma Gould

Wow, this poem hits very close to home. My grandmother lost her battle with dementia. I completely understand what you mean here. Thank you for sharing.

brcrandall

…and let go of the rest. Shelly, my father is in a similar space these days, as was his mother. Some of the memories are blending for me, especially with the eyes dancing and the mind sparking.

gayle

Oh, yes. Watching them fade away. To see them in this moment and let go of the rest…

Susan O

Shelly, this poem is a bit melancholy as I remember the aging and passing of my dear dad. He also had a spark, strong faith and imagination. One day as I went to visit him he said I had interrupted him because he was talking to the angels. Like your dad, mine had eyes always dancing with the need to bring comfort. Thanks for stirring up these memories.

Lisa Noble

Shelly, this is so powerful in its brevity. The reminder to genuinely see each other is so important and really resonated with me.

Dionna

In tears. Thank you for this beautiful reminder that taking time to see our loved ones in the moment is where we should allow ourselves to reside more often. My grandmother suffers from dementia and it breaks my heart.

Ann

Seventeen years you stayed, incorrigible from the start, an ill-behaved and
Mischievous 
Urchin with a freckled underbelly and soft fur the color of wheat and snow.
Disobedient yes, barker at shadows and foil and anyone trying to leave our house, but
Guardian too, faithful companion (though frequent
Escapee), seeking always to run freely beyond the fence to other yards and other
Sniffs, as we followed and begged and finally brought you home again where the years
slowed your pace and doors remained open while you slept, comforting us as we 
comforted you, our sweet Smudges, in a house now silent as a field of wheat in winter.

Mo Daley

Ann, what a loving and honest tribute to Smudges. I love the part about a frequent escapee! Hugs.

Chiara Hemsley

Ann, your poem brought tears to my eyes as I imagine someday losing our sweet and often mischievous dog Heidi. Smudges sounds like a wonderful dog to have known and shared so many years with.

brcrandall

Ann, the extension of the line ‘Sniffs’ is exactly how such memories work with inhalation of what was, what is, and what now will be. Thank you for taking time out of your day and contributing. 17 years is a long time – mischievous urchin with a freckled underbelly. I love it and glad Smudges lives inside of you.

gayle

A beautiful tribute-and one I understand deeply. “Other sniffs”—yes. The goal of every dog. Let me just find a tissue…

Cara Fortey

Really, it was just 
A simple request of my artistic student–
I needed a “Safe Space” sticker for my
New classroom door.
But after six months
Others finally noticed it 
Where it hung in my window.

So, in a matter of days,

The design became a 
Shirt pattern, sold to 
Honor the National Day of Silence.
I spent so much time selling shirts and 
Reneging on grading that it is now piled up.  
Today, under pressure to deliver on time, I 
Spent my prep pressing shirts–a new skill for me. 

And a picture so you know what I’ve been making. 🙂

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Mo Daley

Wow, Cara! What a beautiful story on your t shirt and poem! Your students are lucky to have you. We are, too. I love the thought of reneging on grading.

brcrandall

What a timely, active, and story-telling acrostic (Share with you kid! Share with you kids!). Really, it was just a simple request and, BOOM, that’s how it went.

Rachelle

Ah yes! This is perfection. Have I mentioned how fortunate we are at our school to have you? In this poem I feel the common tension teachers hold: that of what our contract demands (grade the papers!) and that of which we feel morally obligated (let our marginalized students feel seen!). We love you!

DeAnna C

Cara,
What an awesome tribute to my new favorite t-shirt. I may not have it yet, but I know I will love it. Your students are truly blessed to have you

Stacy

Thank you for this stepping stone into poetry month.

Alone

Alive, heart beating, blood pumping
Listen. In the silence be reminded that
One is enough. You are enough.
Notice how your hands are open, not empty. They are
Expectant, not desperate. Breathe.

Charlene Doland

Your poem resonated with me a lot! I felt such a sense of solitude, and in that solitude completeness.

Emma Gould

This poem shows the positives of being alone. We need to accept ourselves before we can make time for others. Thank you for sharing.

brcrandall

I love “Notice how your hands are open, not empty. They are expectant, not desperate” –

Lisa Noble

Stacy,
You brought me right back to this afternoon with a student. They have chosen “breathe” as a word to build a piece of art around. If it’s alright with you, I would love to share it with them, as I think it might fit right into what they are designing. “One is enough”.

Stacy

Absolutely. I hope it helps in some way.

Lisa Noble

Thank you. I think they will feel themselves in the poem.

Emma U.

Thank you for sharing this reminder of appreciating just being present and in tune with one’s self.

Susan O

Got a Dime?

Gonna need some change?
Only those pennies seem well.
To see the other coins is strange. No exchange
as retailers and businesses see a spell and
depend on the quarters and dimes in our piggy banks.
In a circulation slowdown, can’t extend the range or give thanks. 
Most of us order electronically using numbers and plastic.
Empty your pockets America. It’s not so drastic!

Anna

Susan, your poem is right on target! I can count on one hand how often I’ve used cash in the past few months! I’m not sure I be able be tell the difference between a real quarter and a counterfeit one!

Heather Morris

Bryan, there is so much inspiration in your post. Thank you. You have shed new light on the acrostic form.

Finding Life

No judgment here
Only space
To pour out words that
Encircle your mind and
Beg to be set free
Onto a page
Open to breathe life into ideas
Keen to endure

Susan O

I love the way you put this one together. It is subtle and very descriptive with out using the NOTEBOOK word directly.

Shelly

Heather, I love my writer’s notebook. The many hard copy versions and now I’m welcoming the digital. I relate especially to the lines, “Beg to be set free” and “Open to breathe life into ideas.” You capture for me, the essence of writing to be.

Cathy

I almost chose notebook as my word too but I went with novels. I hold my notebook dear because of its no judgment zone.

Dee

Hi Heather,

Your poem made me feel like writing is not a task but a way to free ones mind without the fear of being judged. Developing self-efficacy in writing is what both teachers and students need.
Thanks for sharing.

Barb Edler

Bryan, if there is someone who definitely needs to be recognized, it is Sarah. I love your prompt, and how you demonstrate through your delightful poem, how rich and inviting an acrostic poem can be. I look forward to the challenge Verse Love offers and appreciate the positive vibes from the poets who share their creativity and generous support in this wonderful place:)

After a Week of Dismal Gray─Verse Love Begins &

Spring suddenly appears in a slice of welcoming sunshine
Promising to paint the world a gorgeous green
Relinquishing dismal grays; embracing a newborn’s warmth
Igniting bird song, joyful blooms, and Verse Love─
Nurturing a kaleidoscope of poets, communing in a
Gracious space to celebrate the precious gift of words

Barb Edler
1 April 2022

Shelly

Barb, Your line about spring “suddenly appear[ing]” feels so true. Waking up to a day like this one with a brilliant blue sky (in Oklahoma) makes it easier to let go and “relinquish.” I also appreciated your line about the “kaleidoscope of poets” – it definitely captures this beautiful community of teacher writers.

Glenda M. Funk

Barb this poem is full of gorgeous imagery: “slice of sunshine,”kaleidoscope of poets,” and so many more. Please send spring to me. It was a not so balmy 36 this morning when we took the dogs out, and the wind was icy this afternoon.

Kevin Leander

This looks like fun. Thanks everyone!

Being in the now can’t possibly satisfy my dark side because there’s not enough

Anxiety in the present—there’s not the  

Crush of

Knowing what I now know

Wishing what I now wish

Anxiously

Recoiling

Down the rabbit hole.

Shelly

Oh Kevin, your poem captures, perfectly, a tension I continue to grapple with. “Being in the now cannot possibly satisfy my dark side” and “not enough anxiety in the present!” Yes. Somehow, I knew I was choosing anxiety and you offer me a such a reasonable explanation for why. 🙂

brcrandall

It’s the line “Being in the now can’t possibly satisfy my dark side because there’s not enough anxiety in the present…” I had to sit with that for a second…come back to it…and love the writing again.

Denise Hill

Oi. This one word was the winner today. Thanks, Bryan. BTW I would never trust a person who complained about any poetic form. Like red wine, so many to choose from, why bash the ones you don’t like?

Wake each night at 3am.
Open my eyes begrudgingly.
Really? Another broken sleep?
Resisting, tossing, turning.
You win. Let’s go write.

brcrandall

Well, Denise…my evening last night was in colonoscopy preparation. I get the sleeplessness. Here’s to more zzzz’s in the next month, and less worry. The strong word here is ‘resisting’ as are these: Let’s go write.

Barb Edler

Denise, your poem brought an immediate smile to my face. Oh my, how I can relate. This poem flows so effortlessly. Loved it!

Susan O

Denise, my nights exactly! I have the open eyes begrudgingly wondering what to do. Love the way you wove in the words WORRY.

Glenda M. Funk

Denise, I feel this poem deeply. I awoke at 2:00 a.m. and decided to read today’s prompt. I panicked when I couldn’t find it until I remembered it was too early!

Maureen Y Ingram

It is a delight to be here in April, writing poetry with this dear community! Bryan, your poem is filled with the adoration I feel for Sarah, too – thank you for making this your poem’s focus…I am especially captivated by this line:

Y ou, always with a baton in front of the symphony, building community,

Yes, yes, yes!!

It was surprisingly fun to get caught in a downpour yesterday, with my bestie…it led to this:

Rain, Rain, Go Away

Rain began so softly, intermittently, we ignored it and continued walking, nodding
Aloofly at passersby, not having any need to know them, excited about our day, 
Immersed in conversation, as we wandered farther away from our car, 
Noticing darkening skies, yet trusting soft and intermittent to continue

Rapid drops began to fall, so we threw on raincoats, popped up umbrellas, and 
Acknowledged we had best turn back; but it was to no avail – steady shower became
Insistent raucous unceasing downpour, with us bent over in a wild, desperate run,
Numbing to cold soaking pants, wild whipping hair, and bathtubs for shoes 

Great gobs of water pelting from the sky and us merciless below, no refuge, no shelter,
Only misery, wondering how to go on, knowing this was all we could do, step, step, step

Absolutely doused, dunked, done in, so unexpectedly, so thoroughly swamped, 
While countless soaked strangers, similarly unmoored, offered giddy wet dances of hello  
At once connected to us, immersed in the same crazy storm, and we learn: 
You have no say, you have no control, yes, surrender and laugh, together

brcrandall

Maureen,
This is the beauty of the genre. It invites play, and in the case of the poem here, ‘singing in the rain.’ I love the way this line rolled off the tongue: “Insistent raucous unceasing downpour” – and I caught the clever mid-rhymes (that brought rhythm)! – ‘doused, dunked, done’ – such wonderful alliteration.

Cathy

Love your use of alliteration- ” absolutely doused, dunked and done in”. Also your final line – surrender and laugh- is something I am trying to learn to do more often so I really connected with that.

Barb Edler

Maureen, oh my what a wonderful message here. I absolutely adored your line: “While countless soaked strangers, similarly unmoored, offered giddy wet dances of hello”. Yes, surrender to laughter together. Ahhhh…such a sweet, wonderful end! Sensational poem!

Glenda M. Funk

Maureen, I feel the pounding rain in your words and am glad you found laughter. I know the deluge isn’t always fun, but you would miss it if you lived in the desert and didn’t have many opportunities to get soaked in the rain! And look at this magnificent poem that rained down after the rain shower!

Jamie Langley

I love the progression of the 4 stanzas. Gentle rain to downpours. Great gobs. Swamped.
The repetition in 3rd stanza – step, step, step
and wet dances of hello

gayle

So many phrases to love here, but this one—“Absolutely doused, dunked, done in, so unexpectedly, so thoroughly swamped,” is amazing!!

Denise Krebs

Maureen, wow, what a downpour you have captured here with your words. This line makes me feel every drop:

Numbing to cold soaking pants, wild whipping hair, and bathtubs for shoes 

And I love at the end how you surrendered and laughed together.

Cathy

For my love of books….

N ever broken binding
O pened preciously to reveal
V irgin tales told in black typed prose
E nveloping my heart and mind
L ine by line, chapter by chapter
S inking into worlds previously unknown to me

Maureen Y Ingram

I love this – “V irgin tales told in black typed prose” – it is just wild how many different and imaginative great books there are! I, too, love how they can take you to new worlds.

Denise Hill

Even before I read that final line start word “Sinking,” I felt as though I was melting into this poem. Enveloped is another great word for how it felt. This just makes me want to go curl up with a book!

Stacy

Always a delight to read your words. I love the use of “sinking”- the last line is wonderful

brcrandall

And with your acrostic, Cathy, a book has been open for the rest of us. Here’s to your month, chapter by chapter, of sinking into worlds unknown.

Barb Edler

Cathy, I love the way you show how much a novel can offer. “Virgin tales told in black typed prose” is a perfect descriptor, and the “sinking into worlds previously unknown” is spot on! Perfect title, too! I couldn’t agree more!

Heather Morris

Cathy, I am so excited to be writing in this space with you. I love your last line – “Sinking into worlds previously unknown to me.” I live and learn through the books I read. They are so precious to me.

Charlene Doland

As a fellow book-lover, this poem truly spoke to me! Your opening line, “Never broken binding” also caused me to smile. My 27yo is as messy as they come, his apartment in total disarray pretty much always. BUT, don’t mess with his books, and don’t scuff any covers or bend any pages. His reverence for the written word melts my heart.

Ashley

The first time I saw you
Your striped polo shirt and jeans, my
Leather jacket and Criminology 
Eerie presentations and nine weeks passed
Romance would come much later

Journeys led us away like a tide
Our paths crossed once again
Everyday since we walk together

Kim Johnson

Ashley, welcome to VerseLove! I love those journeys back – timing is everything, and this shows that the magnet was stronger as time passed! Love this walking together.

Maureen Y Ingram

“Journeys led us away like a tide” – so beautiful!

Denise Hill

I just ‘awwww’d out loud at the close of this. How lovely. This is a Valentine poem, to be sure. Funny about the criminology and “eerie presentations” reference. I have NO idea what that’s about in detail, but I get it, and I’ll bet there’s a great story behind that.

Ashley

My husband and I met when he was a senior, and I was a sophomore in a Criminology class. We had to do presentations over serial killers.

brcrandall

“Journeys led us away like a tide” – definitely my favorite line! Love thinking about Criminology Eerie and eerie criminology.

Barb Edler

Ashley, your specific details to show you and Tyler Joe are delightful. I’m so glad your paths crossed again!

Erica J

Bryan thank you for such a warm welcome on the first day! The final line of your poem in particular felt like you were giving us all a gift of a flower (not just the person you wrote the poem about). I enjoyed how celebratory this acrostic was and it really showed me that acrostics can have such depth that I didn’t realize before!

My poem is about the word lollygag — it’s actually also for a separate poetry challenge I am participating in and so I am trying to double dip a little. When I think of this word, I think of my senior students and the dreaded senioritis and as I wrote I also remembered my own senior year when I delivered the graduation speech and made reference to Alice in Wonderland. It all came together in this acrostic:

Did You Mean Senioritis?
Loops and twirls spreading
open on the page as we
lay down a
line at a time, attempting care
yet we always seem to find the cracks in the
garden — rabbit holes to slip right on down
aimlessly seeking a
golden hour that is already passed.

Kim Johnson

Ooooh, lollygagging! I love lollygagging – and piddling. Piddling is perfectly fun, too. Those Alice In Wonderland allusions are wonderful here, the rabbit holes and the garden and the hour.

Maureen Y Ingram

I adore this acrostic word, Lollygag! So fun! There is something so unique about one’s senior year and how little anything seems to matter, how much fun one has. I love this line:
“garden — rabbit holes to slip right on down”

brcrandall

And in a poem, you captured that persnickety senior year. I often said, “I need you to get to a place that is developmentally impossible right now for you, because you’re adults, but for the most part, you’ haven’t done this life thing on your own yet.” The rabbit hole it is, indeed! And it culminates wonderful for the last line!

Kevin Leander

I love that you picked up this word for reflection and I really like how it plays against the title.

Rachel S

Yay for April!

Sliding out of dreams, her first request:
“Park. Mom, come? Socks on. Shoes on. Stroller.”—and
reveling in the clear air, 
I admit the park was calling me, too, 
nudging me to set down my load, waiting to 
gift me perspective.

Erica J

Rachel I love how the poem shifts with your admission in the middle line about being called to the park as well. If my own allergies weren’t so bad right now I, too, would be tempted to explore the park and outdoors! This made me want to very badly. I also think the last line is powerful because it invites the reader to ponder and think about how this shift in perspective can be a gift. Thank you for sharing!

Kim Johnson

That language of the invitation and all the key words of a child ready to go – how sweet and endearing that your little one wants to go to the park and spend time with Mom!

Denise Hill

I just gave a huge exhale at the “set down my load.” I’ve been sitting here at the computer all day, and your poem has just given me the kick I needed to get out and walk the dog. I need to be gifted some perspective as well. It is a gift, too, isn’t it? Thank you!

brcrandall

In six lines you just captured April, gifting all of us perspective (and you now have a word photograph of a moment in your life….while socks, shoes, and strollers are the rhythm.

Barb Edler

Rachel, what a wonderful snapshot of the beginning of a glorious day shared with your child. Your final line is especially powerful….setting down your load to appreciate the moment! I am on the same page with you about April!

Heather Morris

Your poem took me down memory lane to my daily visits to the part with my kids. I was so present during that time. I miss the fun those days brought to our family.

Rita DiCarne

I am not sure if I will be able to post every day, but I am shooting for a few times a week. I will definitely be working on the prompt every day. Looking forward to reading all the poems and finding inspiration.

Poems bring me joy
Opening my heart and soul
Evoking memories – happy and sad
Taking me deeper – inside to
Reflect, retrace, renew
Yielding to the call for quiet

Julie E Meiklejohn

Ah, yes…the writing of poetry has a way of just cracking hearts and minds wide open. I especially love your alliteration, and movement through process, in the line “Reflect, retrace, renew”

Rachel S

I LOVE “yielding to the call for quiet”. Poetry really does seem to quiet the buzz of the world, the buzz in my mind. And sometimes its call cannot be ignored! Thank you!

Ashley

Your alliteration when you write “Reflect, retrace, renew” summarizes the avenues of poetry so concisely and beautifully!

Glenda M. Funk

Rita, your poem expresses the thoughts I have about poetry, and I’m sure others will concur.

Kim Johnson

Yielding to the call for quiet is such a great way to start the day – the quiet of the house before others awake and dogs come crashing in (I say to my husband, “send in the clowns” and here they come running). Your chosen word is beautiful for today – I’m glad you are here.

Cathy

I so connect with your opening line “Poems bring me joy”. Writing them, reading them, sharing them.

Scott M

Rita, thank you for this! “Poems bring me joy” is such a wonderful line (and sentiment). You’re in good company here with this idea.

Heather Morris

“Reflect, retrace, renew” I love the alliteration, but each word resonated with me. This is exactly what poetry is to me. I was so excited to sit down to write my poem today even after a long day of teaching.

Mo Daley

Steven
By Mo Daley 4-1-22

So many years ago, when we were teens, you
Took a chance, summoned your courage, and asked me out
Ever patient, ever kind, ever giving, ever loving, my
Valliant hero; you’ve been there for me always in all ways
Entertaining me, infuriating me, challenging me, loving me
No other man can hold a candle to you, darling

brcrandall

Infuriating me. Ah, that’s love. Great to see you back this year, Mo! Welcome back…and Go, Steven, Go!

Rita DiCarne

Mo, I can so relate to your poem. My husband and I were HS sweethearts and have been together for over 48 years. My Chuck sounds a lot like your Steve. It really is funny how they can entertain us one minute and infuriate us the next! I like the repetition of “ever.”

gayle

Mo—what a lovely love poem!

Erica J

I love how you used both ‘E’s with the same kind of line/repetition. I also enjoy that, while short, there is still so much to learn about the subject of the poem and what he means to you and why he is so special to you! Thanks for sharing.

Glenda M. Funk

Mo, you’re getting a little steamy, girlfriend. I love your love poem and but your hubby will, too.

Mo Daley

A little out of character, I know!

Kim Johnson

Steven is blessed and so are you! Your lives together are filled with lake house time and lots of love. I’m glad you found each other, and I’m loving the next to last line. Oh, the truth. I’m raising my hand in solidarity with you there, friend.

Barb Edler

Ahhh, Mo, I love how you share your love for your husband here, the “Valliant hero”. Absolutely heart-warming poem!

Susan O

This poem shows such sweet love and devotion. I agree with the words that describe a long-term relationship of “entertaining me, infuriating me, challenging me, loving me.”

Andy Schoenborn

Oy, Vey!
Andy Schoenborn

Words. They are
Only words. But, I can’t
Resist a good puzzle and,
Darn it, today the words won!
Let’s part as friends, Wordle.
Everyone is tired of colored boxes anyway!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Andy,
So good to see you! I notice the enjambment and punctuation and pronouns so intentional. From They to I to the implied “you” when the speaker directly addresses Wordle– not breaking up with words but the colored boxes.
Peace,
Sarah

Andy Schoenborn

So good to see you, Sarah! I’m excited to connect with #verselovers once again.

Sherri Spelic

Oh, Wordle does it again! A worthy tribute to a deceptively simple distraction that has made millions into 5-letter word warriors overnight. “They are / Only words.” And yet.

Andy Schoenborn

Haha…thank you, Sherri.

Wendy Everard

Haha! Love this one! Thanks for the laugh, Andy.

brcrandall

Andy! Great to share another space together. I’ll cut you a deal…How do we convince more people to share Wordle poems over Wordle scores? Love: Words. They are only words.

Andy Schoenborn

Great to share space together, Bryan! Loved the prompt — now, there is the rub. We’ll see more of each other, I have no doubt, my friend.

Erica J

Andy,
This poem gave me a good laugh — especially with how you played with the line breaks to form the word WORDLE. I think we can all appreciate and relate to the frustration marked in this poem. Thanks for the chuckle and the sharing of this poem.

Andy Schoenborn

Lol…thanks, Erica. Good to see you, friend!

Kim Johnson

Oh no! If it got the best of you, it will get the best of me. Dare I try??? I’m tired of colored boxes, YES! But they call my name. And I answer. Every time. Love that you chose Wordle today!

Andy Schoenborn

I’m sure your streak will be intact, Kim. Be well!

Cathy

Oh Wordle- I wrote about the other day too. Your line- “Darn it, today the words won!” is often the frustration I feel when I can’t see those 5 green boxes of triumph.

Andy Schoenborn

Lol. Liked: “green boxes of triumph.”

Kevin Leander

This made me laugh and surprised me a bit–you set me up to go with the poem itself as your subject but then took a nice detour!

Andy Schoenborn

Thanks, Kevin! It was a fun way to start #verselove.

Charlene Doland

This poem made me laugh out loud, Andy. I’m a recent Wordle “convert,” and totally hear you. Oy Vey! indeed!

Ramona

Not sure that I’ll show up every day, but I can never refuse an invitation to play with words on the acrostic playground:

No amount of imagining could conjure these visions
In the dark of night that trouble my sleep,
Give rise to deep fears, and
Haunt me years after retirement.
There’s the class I can’t control, the
Math class I never attended, the
Affable teacher (Tara Smith) in her basement
Room I can never find, and last night an
Eratic field trip composed of former
Students, impossible to corral.
 

Andy Schoenborn

Hi Ramona,

Oh, those nightmares! Things usually get so weird when I have the that I just think, “Who cares? This is too crazy to be real!”

Thank you for sharing, and I’m glad I’m not alone. To better dreams!

Sherri Spelic

Hundreds of days spent in schools as a student then with students, certainly haunting material galore. The image of “Students, impossible to corral” is too real!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Ramona,

So enjoy the first moment of reading your poem. I slowly moved my eyes from the N to the S, processing the night and the mares and then pausing to reflect on my own before diving into your lines. The “Haunt me years after” resonates deeply with me– the student I overlooked, snapped at, noticed but didn’t respond to. The nightmares have changed to students on their cell phones instead of engaging in class.– or is that reality? And the “erratic field tip” — wow! Memories and nightmares for days.

Peace,
Sarah

Gayle

Every teacher, everywhere. The universal uncorralled students in the unfindable classroom! You nailed this one!

brcrandall

Ramona…you mean the visions continue, even in retirement? I relate most to finding that one colleague (who we need more than we know) and the ‘impossible to corral’ student! My reoccurring dream is when I’m teaching and I sink into a whole, being buried by quicksand. I know now to always wake myself up when I see it coming. Hope we see you more often than not.

Kim Johnson

Ha! I love this – – the haunting of the class we couldn’t control. Some classes are like that, and yet those seem to be the students who needed me the most. When your head hits the pillow tonight, remember that you made a difference and change up those dreams. Now math class, on the other hand……….

Stacy

Ramona,
Thank you for this! Your poem makes me want to write another acrostic with your word- Nightmares. Mine are similar. Rest well!

Jeni Bonaldo

I wrote about what I saw when I walked into my classroom today:

April 1st, 7:34 am

A group of goofy students
Pretend to have a dinner party, complete with tablecloth and cutlery
Right in the middle of my classroom, as
I walk in, nearly
Late and flustered, forgetting it is April 1st.

For a moment, I am confused by plates stacked with uncrustables, I am
Out of sorts- are they meant to be the fools
Or am I? It’s always hard to tell with these
Loony boys, but they
Smile wide, proud of their handy work, and then I smile, too.

Boxer Moon

I wish I was in the your class! Your poem makes me smile and think of how fun it was to be kid! 🙂 and how fun it is to be a teacher 🙂

Jeni Bonaldo

Haha. Thank you. It was a funny moment on a dreary day.

Gayle

love this so much. Lucky you, lucky kids!

Nancy White

So fun! Gotta love the “loony boys”! Sounds like a lot of love there! ?

Andy Schoenborn

Hi Jeni,

That is too funny! I appreciate the way you used an acrostic poem to set the stage for how your students set the stage for their prank.

I hope they can take a good joke as well as they give one!

Leilya Pitre

Just smiling! Thank you, Jeni, for sharing the funny moment. It makes my day too 🙂

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Jeni,

So love to witness this scene of goofiness and community happening in your classroom. We need more joy in our classrooms, and for students to claim your room as a space for this dinner party speaks to the comfort you offer. Smiles abound.

Sarah

Jeni Bonaldo

Thank you! I definitely want it to be a space of joy more than anything else.

brcrandall

This is true joy…I had 1st period boys once…27 of them and 3 girls, and remember moment like these fondly (then there was the year a crew of girls brought a full swimming pool into my class and filled it with goldfish. I taught around it, and without missing a beat, stepped in the pool and continued teaching. I hope you modeled this for them! Then assigned them to write, too!

Jeni Bonaldo

Haha! Well done.

Kim Johnson

Uncrustables! I love that they have set a table for these sandwiches and tried to humor their teacher! You matter to them, and they couldn’t wait to see your reaction on this day set aside for such fun pranks.

Jeni Bonaldo

Thank you for the kind words!

Kevin Leander

I love this moment. It takes me to those times when you can really see, as a teacher, that the kids are in it with you and also want to get to you somehow.

Heidi

I just love that! What a great way to break the monotony and inspire a smile!

Susan Ahlbrand

Jeni,
What a teacher you must be that the kids felt safe to do this in your space. This is just fun!

Julie E Meiklejohn

I love where this prompt took my thinking! I had a tough time settling on a direction to go, but since I’m playing “soccer mom” today, watching my daughter practice, I wrote about her.

Nearly Ten

Long limbs flail, never quite under control
Instantaneous shift from open-mouthed chortles to tears, then back again
Laughter from her core, not yet too worried about “cool”
“Yeet-ing” her clothes, the cat, her soccer ball, across the room with panache
“Just one more cuddle, Mom–don’t let go yet.”
Open-ended paradox is this sprite, a
Youthful body housing an ancient soul.

Jeni Bonaldo

I love this! I also have a sprite like this living in my house.

Gayle

Youthful body housing an ancient soul— this is a lovely tribute to your daughter!

Andy Schoenborn

Hi Julie,

I appreciate the use of “Yeet-ing” in this poem. What a great way to capture her age, personality, and language of the day!

Wendy Everard

Julie, I love this one! Line 5: instant tears. Loved your “open-ended paradox” and the metaphor in your last line. I really felt this one!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Julie,

I love the first vertical reading that the acrostic invites — first reading LILY JOY slowly. It is cool how this form slows our eyes and minds in processing the subject. And then the image of “Long limbs” is lovely in its, for me, familiar ways. The cuddles are such a comfort in gesture, but this word– the saying of the word alone is cozy.

Peace,
Sarah

brcrandall

The scene: ‘don’t let go yet.’ (sniffle…it goes way too fast) and the line, “open-ended paradox is this sprite” – what a flattering description for anyone. Thanks for sharing the happiness.

Wendy Everard

Bryan, thanks for reframing the acrostic for me. I, too, have undervalued it — but not after reading your lovely poem and thinking about how it has to potential to build a class culture.

I was musing on a subject when two of my favorite students entered the room, and inspired me. I wrote an ode to one of them, a senior whom I’ll miss dearly and who is going to college for Creative Writing:

Ode to Aamirah

Always in an excited flutter, pink hair brightening the space 
Around her, a whirling dervish of words, while
Mired, at times, in uncertainty:  College looms.  “Am
I ready?’ she wonders.  “Play some Maneskin!”  she cries.  Sweetly,
Reticently, she presents me with an offering:  
A Squishmallow – green, flowered, malleable as she is – and
Hearty is her laugh when she recalls almost calling me “Mom.”

Gayle

Some students earn a larger place in our hearts. The Squishmallow sends your image to a wonderfully quirky place!

Mo Daley

This is lovely, Wendy. Although I don’t know her, I feel like you have captured Aamirah’s personality here. I really like the whirling dervish of words.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Wendy,

Acrostic is ode. Ode is acrostic. Who wouldn’t love a “Squishmallow” and the way the role of a teacher squishes so many others into one. Her hearty laugh is a sign she will be just fine – -she is ready. Thank you for introducing us to Aamirah!

Peace,
Sarah

brcrandall

This line: A Squishmallow – green, flowered, malleable….the bounce from ‘mallow’ to ‘malleable’ was linguistic ping pong to my ears. A stunning stream of words (and I wonder….would they ever arrive if the leaves didn’t fall this way?

Chiara Hemsley

Wendy,

Your poem captured Aamirah’s energetic personality so beautifully. She sounds like a joy. Your last line made me smile as I recall times my 5th graders have made the same slip!

Charlene Doland

What a lovely picture of Aamirah, Wendy! I wrote an acrostic to my whole group of students, but you have sparked me to think of writing a poem for each of them.

Freddy Cavazos

What a wonderful person she must be. lovely poem.

Nancy White

Thanks for hosting today, Bryan. I love your poem, how it flows with such descriptive adverbs and phrases that please the ear when spoken aloud. I can’t even clone close, but here’s a simple acrostic about reading my new puppy, Daisy.

Waking up to MY DAISY PUP
By Nancy White

Mellow and sweet
You drape yourself over my neck, a hot squishy lump of
Dough
Alive and breathing steamy breath
Into my barely awake breast, 
Suddenly sleeping, your weight is under ten pounds
Yet you’re cluelessly choking me with your completely relaxed
Puppy body and I smell wet fur and lay my hand gently on your round puggy face with the black
Underbite chin; your furrowed wrinkled forehead that always looks worried rests its folds unbothered in the
Pure bliss of sleep.

Mo Daley

Nancy, those first three lines are terrific and relatable! Your sounds are terrific in this poem! Good luck with Daisy.

brcrandall

What a perfect moment to write about….a canine scarf dripping fur around the neck. I’m 50 now, but I can still smell the puppy breath of my first dog when I was 5….one of my earliest memories (it doesn’t last long). Cluelessly choking (poking, biting, begging, spazzing)….the key is the clueless….ah, but this week, during THIS IS US, when the writers punched me in the gut and I leaked a little from each eye, it was the puppy that was there to lick them dry. Pure bliss. Always.

Elizabeth

Nancy, I absolutely love the imagery present at the beginning of this poem. I’ve never imagined a dog as a “hot squishy lump of dough” but it makes complete sense now that I’ve read it in your poem. Really nice work!

Rachel S

Life is so simple for pups, right?? You’ve created such a vivid picture here, and I love your word choices: hot squishy lump of dough, steamy breath, black underbite chin, unbothered.

Ann

I love your sweet Daisy pup poem. You captured all the joy a puppy brings to the world. Enjoy her!

Jamie Langley

such a cute description of your pup – drape yourself over my neck, puggy face with the black underbite chin, unbothered in the pure bliss of sleep

Dave Wooley

Thanks for kicking this off Bryan, you are indeed the King of the Acrostics! You are always able to imbed some gems of imagery in your acrostics too!

Here’s my crack at Day 1:

Time seems to fold onto itself like an 
Origami monster,

Devouring the seconds, minutes, and hours…
Oh no! I’m falling behind, again, before I’ve had the chance to begin

Losing my grip on the melting minute hand in Dali’s dream 
I grasp at seconds that elude and disappear in the distance
Something needs to get done today, as I begin to realize
Today’s list will be tomorrow’s.

Jeni Bonaldo

I love the image of the Origami Monster. I definitely relate to this poem.

Gayle

Origami monster. This is my life! And the close is perfect. Today’s list becomes tomorrow’s. So true!

Nancy White

I love your “Origami monster” and the “melting minute hand”. Oh the crazy whirlwind of it all!

brcrandall

Dave, folding itself into an origami monster to describe time is simply brilliant, and I love trying to get a grip on the melting minute hand in Dali’s dream. Others don’t know your mad (I mean, MAD) skills with language, and I love seeing how you demonstrate, ‘I got this style, too.’

Elizabeth

Dave, this poem incorporates the exact feeling of what it means to have a to-do list. The image of time folding in on itself like an origami monster is a really intriguing visual, especially considering how quickly that can happen. The to-do list never fully goes away!

Heidi

Origami monster indeed! There’s always tomorrow….

Anna J. Small ROSEBORO

Thanks, Bryan, for a systematic way to capture and relay our thinking today. Today, my thoughts run to stories I heard of my mother, the second daughter in a family with five brothers. (FYI, the photo’s of “a” family.)

Baby Sister, Big Sister

C “Can’t I have what I want sometimes whines,”
O Our baby sister, Cora.
R Really it’s fun being one of five brothers with one older sister
A Around to help no that Mom’s not home.
 
 
E Ever since Mom went North with Dad to get a job in Pennsylvania
L Leaving us in charge of our bossy oldest sister, she’s
I Impossible to please ‘ cause she’s so
Z Zealous about being in charge.
A Always telling us we better do things right or else.
B Begging us not to tell Mom about the guy she’s seeing,
E Even baking us our favorite gingerbread,
T Thinking she can bribe us to be good, forgetting our parents told us,
H “Heaven is watching, so be better behave!”

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Glenda M. Funk

Anna, you have such a beautiful family. I can just hear Cora’s voice through your words. You have me thinking about my sister now! ❤️

brcrandall

First, I have to admit I blew up the family (not in like k’pow, but in screen-sizing). Stunning….perhaps there a family album of acrostics in your future. The joy radiates from that photo. So much humor from mom and dad going north and leaving the younger ones in charge of that older sister (and not telling mom about that guy….well, you know there’s a poem in that, too….perhaps even a ransom poem)

Rachel S

I love how you have reimagined these siblings interactions. Your poem reminded me of my own experiences with my siblings growing up, and I wonder if these similar feelings and bribery and rivalries exist in every family!

Kim Johnson

What a beautiful family! I love their smiles and especially the laughter on the one all the way on the right – she looks like she is laughing, having the best time of all. They are all so precious, and you are so blessed. I love your last line. It’s so true.

Rob Karel

Haven’t written poetry in almost 20 years. Please be gentle. 🙂 My husband and I are in the process of adopting two boys and my mind is filled with trying to balance the excitement and the fears of what lies ahead for boys with two dads.

Welcome Home
We’ve loved you since the moment we saw your names
Everyday brings us closer to you
Learning more
Caring without bounds
Our dream fulfilled by just your presence
Memories built
Everyday

How can we be enough?
Outsiders passing judgment
Many won’t understand that love is
Enough 

Glenda M. Funk

Rob, welcome to Verse Love. Your poem is tender and beautiful. “Love is enough,” and those boys are lucky to have two dads. And you are in the right place to find understanding and all kinds of love and acceptance. You are also in the best place to hone those poetry writing g skills. I’ve only been writing poetry since 2018. I hadn’t written more than a dozen poems in 50+ years.

Dave Wooley

Love is enough. This is a really powerful message, powerfully written. I love how you framed the second stanza with the question–especially as it’s one that I think every parent can relate to.

Gayle

Rob— these boys and you will create a perfect family. Welcome to our poet’s corner and welcome to love like you’ve never known before!

brcrandall

Happy fathering, Rob. As the Great Whatever had it, similar gifts were given to me, although I’ve always chosen the solo path. Love is enough. There’s nothing else to be written or said. In my home and office where books are my only wallpaper, I can fully attest that the only answer I’ve ever found is love. It wins every time.

Kim Johnson

Rob, welcome to VerseLove! What a beautiful tribute to these first moments with your sons. You are enough. Love is absolutely enough. I’m always thrilled when I read about parents who adopt children who are so thrilled to have new family members and who understand that time and moments and togetherness is what makes the difference! Congratulations on your new family, and we are happy that you are part of this writing community.

Stefani B

Rob, I love how you’ve jumped in on the first day with vulnerbale and personal connection. I cannot wait to see pictures and hear more about these boys. Thank you for sharing with us today.

Stacy

Oh my heart! This is so beautiful. “Our dream fulfilled by just your presence”- this line and your choice of Welcome Home- there’s is so much power and beauty in your words. Thank you for writing poetry today.

Chiara Hemsley

Rob, this is a beautiful welcome to your boys! I am so happy for you and your husband as you take this wonderful step into a grand adventure where love wins, always.

Susan Ahlbrand

Rob,
Welcome to VerseLove; I can tell we will love having you here.

I love your message, especially

How can we be enough?

Outsiders passing judgment

Many won’t understand that love is

Enough 

Alex Berkley

Just jokes
Or familiar references like
Really important theories
You have about Lord of the Rings

We sit
In the hospital
Like we’re in the backseat
Like we’re road tripping to Erie

But you’re lying in the bed
Everything will be ok

Obviously.
Kind of…

Sherri Spelic

I feel the familiarity: “like we’re in the backseat” and the uncertainty: “kind of”. Trying to keep it upbeat, connected to good times had. Your poems evokes a lot of emotions. The scene you set is clear and very real.

Gayle

The hope, the fear, the reality…. Obviously/kind of. This says it all.

brcrandall

Dear Alex, I don’t think I was ready for the punch of your 12-line poem…from “Just jokes” to the seriousness of this verse. I studied with Ruth Stone and on poems like this she’d laugh, then get serious, announcing, “You’ve written a pome (that’s how she pronounced it). Yes, you my friend have written a pome.” That first stanza is outstanding and the last two lines…..breathtaking.

Julie E Meiklejohn

Oh geez…my eyes kind of skimmed over the poem at first, caught the word “hospital,” then read down your acrostic, and I felt my stomach clench. What a helpless feeling. I love love love the last two lines, showing the dichotomy between what we show outwardly in a situation like this and that raw fear inside: “Obviously./Kind of…”

Kim Johnson

That shift from the road trip to the hospital packs a punch. From laughing to not laughing – I pray Jory is ok.

Jessica Wiley

Alex, you mix uncertainty with fond memories. I remember as a child that I used to sit in the kitchen around the grown people and quietly disappear, listening to their stories. You and a dear friend reminiscing about the past, but are wary of the present…I can feel that because you just never know.

“But you’re lying in the bed
Everything will be ok
Obviously.
Kind of…”

Your last line leaves a little worry, but clinging on to a little hope is quite reassuring. Thank you for sharing.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Lady in the Next Stall

She sings imagining dragons. Tuning
In her vocals, lathering her rhapsody
No thought of me. With Fun she trills
Gorgeously “we are young,” bathing in
Echoes her own. A locker room aria for two.
Refrains crescendo as I dry my hair.

Glenda M. Funk

Sarah, this is the feel-good poem I need today. I wish I were brave enough to “sing in the next stall.” What a treat this must have been. ?

Jeni Bonaldo

I didn’t read the title at first and thought you were writing about a teenage daughter, perhaps. I saw my own in this. I love the youthfulness of it.

Gayle

Made me smile so wide! The echoes are in my head…

brcrandall

SJD, So much to admire here (from the title leading the way) all the way to the refrain while you dry your hair. I am hoping she is singing Pat Benatar! … and I see that rhapsody and gorgeously inviting us into a little slippity-slide in our own little stalls. Rhyme and rhythm. Rhythm and Rhyme. Beautiful. BRC

Kim Johnson

…..so I’ll set the world on fire…..I’m singing now, too, wishing I were young…….

Barb Edler

Sarah, oh my goodness, reading your poem ignited a deep belly laugh in me. Adored “A locker room aria for two”. Your end is perfect. What a fun poem!

Scott M

Sarah, there are so many wonderful things happening here. I love that you are enjoying the “aria,” illustrated by the fact that “she trills / Gorgeously” the lyrics “we are young.” (And I love the fact that they are specifically those lyrics from a band called Fun. After looking them up, I was like, oh, yeah, I know this song, and I, like Kim, began singing along to this anthem-like song of the past). I’m also marveling at (and appreciating) the chutzpah — is that the word? — of someone to be able to do that. I get nervous, apologetic, and self-conscious when I’m answering my cell phone in a public space. I’m also just smiling wide imagining that first moment when you would be like, is that singing?, is she singing? Hey, she’s pretty good.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Yes, all of that. All of that is what I was trying to do in the poem. Every morning. She does this, and I don’t think she knows I am there! Beautiful.

Jessica Wiley

Oh shower singing! Sounds like you put on quite the performance, Sarah! The phrase “imagining dragons” makes me smile. “Lathering her rhapsody sounds sultry. Your music terms “trills”, “aria”, and “crescendo” bring it all home. I used to love to sing until I had to sing. Now, I don’t feel so bad when I turn up my 90’s R&B and bellow out all the words I never should have sang with my 16 year old insecure self! Bravo!

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Jessica,the singer is a stranger in the locker room,not me. I have never seen her. I just hear her every morning.

Saba T.

I love how the title is a whole backstory in itself. The line “A locker room aria for two.” makes it sound private and cozy. Wonderful piece.

Sherri Spelic

This is my first go at this. Coming off a month of slicing at TwoWritingTeachers.org, I’m up for a new challenge. Thanks for the warm welcome! For openers, an ode to my home base of 30+ years.
VIENNA

Verily, I say unto you that 
In no instance shall any other
Ever surpass your beauty or
Noble majesty; Behold, I
Name thee, Queen on the Danube,
Austria’s jewel unmatched! 

Glenda M. Funk

Sherri, welcome! I love your love of Vienna and seeing her through your words. I just returned home from Europe, and now I’m ready to go back.

brcrandall

Austria’s jewel unmatched! I have only a tiny, weeny, bitty story about Austria. I was in Germany hiking and got lost. Ended up spending the night in Austria at a youth hostel. The 24 hours, though, were enough to realize the nation was ripe for poetic discovery.

Julie E Meiklejohn

What a majestic-sounding poem! I love the more formal tone and feel…it truly matches the royalty named within. Beautiful!

Lisa Noble

Sherri,
I’m so glad you’re taking this leap, too. I see actors declaiming these lines in my head. What regal beauty you have conjured here.

Paul W. Hankins

I took Bryan at his invitation and created an acrostic from Emily Dickinson’s “I’m Nobody! Who Are You?”

“When I Attend the Meeting for the First Time”

I’m remembering,
More and more.

Nothing worth naming.
Only mental maintenance. 
Beneath the skin,
Ointment for an itch I
Didn’t mean to scratch:
Yesterday.

What is for seeing.
How is for wondering.
One question per person.

Ask it clearly and carefully.
Ready each system for a response.
Everyone will want to have a say.

Years go by and still I stand
Off to the side of this story
Until a period presents itself.

?

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Paul, I am so happy to see you here today! Welcome! I have been using Jenga blocks with words on them for preschool poetry writing on the theme of blooms, and whenever anyone asks me where I got the idea, I say, “Oh, my buddy Paul Hankins. He’s a genius. He came up with this and shared it.” Everyone loves it.
I like your lines that address the How and Why
What is for seeing.
How is for wondering.
Those two lines give such clarity on higher order thinking.
I am also loving these two:
Years go by and still I stand
Off to the side of this story

I’m thinking that it might be my preferred angle – – off to the side. Listening, watching, wondering. Pondering

Thanks for joining us as part of the VerseLove community of writers!

Tammy Breitweiser

These lines resonated for me:
I’m remembering,
More and more.

One question per person.
Ask it clearly and carefully.
Ready each system for a response.
Everyone will want to have a say.

Thank you!

Alex Berkley

I like that your poem tells a story. I especially like the lines, “Ointment for an itch I
Didn’t mean to scratch:
Yesterday.” and the ending: “Until a period presents itself.
?”
Love going from a yearning for a period which ends on an isolated question mark!

Glenda M. Funk

Paul, my poetry-loving friend, welcome. And thank you for returning my thoughts to the magnificent Emily Dickinson. This is one of my favorites and a good one for me to recite today. Favorite lines: “Nothing worth naming.
Only mental maintenance.” I’m right there w/ you!

brcrandall

Paul, I love this….and like you prompted towards me earlier, see the validity in taking lines from poems or the names of artists and seeing how the leaves fall to page. ‘Only mental maintenance. Beneath the skin’ – I know were divided by a period, but I read as “Only mental maintenance beneath the skin, ointment for an itch I didn’t meant to scratch.” The is all to say I love how you succinctly choose words to flow at the moment…this moment…

Elizabeth

Paul, I absolutely love the idea of writing an acrostic based on such a well-known poem. Really nicely done!

Jamie Langley

love this play on Emily Dickinson’s title – and the words – Ointment for an itch I
Didn’t mean to scratch:/ Yesterday. and the close – Years go by and still I stand
Off to the side of this story

gayle

Dog Love

Do not ask me to choose the appropriate dog for you
Or you will be sorely disappointed
Go to someone else for help. I choose 
Losers, dogs that don’t fit,
Over and over.
Veering away from what I SAID I needed
Every. Single. Time.

Do not look for a big strong dog to take on walks, 
Or you will find a fluffy, frightened lap dog in need of a place to heal.
Go in search of a quiet little fluff to fill the space the lap dog left in your life, and
Locate a tiny, troubled doxie who never saw grass from the cage she bred puppies in,
One who will never be truly house trained. Then,
Venture into adoption sites. Covid-crave a tiny cuddler and
Embrace a tiny terrier terror.  Say goodbye to your shoes. 

Do not ask me to choose an appropriate dog
Or you will fall in love with my mistake,
Granting a wish you didn’t know existed. 
Life is full of surprises. Accept the serendipity. A dog will 
Own your heart, even if selected indiscriminately. 
Visions are simply suggestions.
Embrace the ambiguity. 

(“You can’t always get what you want
But if you try sometimes, 
you might find
You get the dog you need.”)

GJSands 4-1-2022

gayle

Bryan—this was fun! And your thanks to our founder were both eloquent and so very true! Great first day poem!

Tammy Breitweiser

The idea of an “appropriate dog” is sticking with me…a unique combo of words I am loving today! Thank you

Sherri Spelic

I found this poem delightfully intriguing, especially as someone who has little to do with dogs. Your opening disclaimer sets up the reader to thoughtfully consider your particular choices, all of which underscore your true love for dogs of all sorts, but especially those whose needs call to you in some way. “Accept the serendipity” and “Embrace the ambiguity” are excellent pieces of advice not only for selecting dogs.

Alex Berkley

You have a lot of great lines here! I especially love, “Say goodbye to your shoes” and “Granting a wish you didn’t know existed.” Pets are definitely just that!

Jennifer

I’m a cat person,but this poem has convinced me that dogs may be an option. Thanks for a great poem!

Glenda M. Funk

Gayle, I love everything about this poem. I’d have to quote the entire thing to tell you my favorite parts. It’s perfection to this dog lover. I think dogs choose us as much as we choose them. That’s why we can’t advise others. This is a task for the dog, and I’m all about the rescue pups who rescue me. ? ❤️

brcrandall

GAYLE! Wow. Love this…the repetition for the way you let the leaves fall, but also “Don’t not ask me to….” I now have a terrier-collie mix….I got her at 11 months and they told me she was adopted and returned 4 times because of her….well, energy. When they called after two months to see how she was doing, I said, “I love her. She’s perfect.” The voice on the other end? “Really, You actually like this dog?” No, I love her. She’s my match, a spastic, tireless, loving, way too energetic, needy, playful pain in the ass. Apples rarely fall far from the tree. Covid-crave a tiny cuddler. I get it! BRC

Kim Johnson

Gayle, you had me with the first word of the title. I love everything about this. We always get the quirky dogs – – never the well-trained, “normal” dogs. Our dogs all have issues, pasts, baggage, hangups, quirks, fears, needs, anxieties…… That’s why I love this poem so. There is no well-fitting dog in my life – we just take them as they come and welcome them to the Johnson Funny Farm, where we are all misfits. I firmly believe it’s all about the love and you nailed it with “embrace the ambiguity.” Oh, yes. Such truth.

gayle

We call our house the “Sands Home for Wayward Animals”

Boxer Moon

A War Tal Menn Sees

Hearing thoughts melt within my fury
Always obsessed with flaming worry.
Roulette of misery, hinders my hurry
Delivering voids to those proclaiming unworthy.

Temperamental stages of late nights blaming early,
Onward to shaming someone surly.

Social normalcy a wishful, taming blurry.
Anxiety silenced by everyone’s complaining scurry.
You hear me?……. feigning… Surely?
–         

Alex Berkley

I enjoy the rhyming in your poem, it is never predictable and gives a cohesive somewhat bright rhythm in contrast to the dark tone. My favorite line: “Roulette of misery, hinders my hurry.”

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Boxer,
You always amaze me with your rhyme scheme and message! This is me on a Friday that is really Monday Part 5: Always obsessed with flaming worry. I know worry changes nothing, but it gives me something to do while I wait for the change……..<nailbiter>

Boxer Moon

thanks nail biter

brcrandall

Roulette of misery, hinders my hurry / Delivering voids to those proclaiming unworthy. Love these two lines.

Tammi Belko

Bryan — Thank you for this fun prompt. It really got me thinking about how I look forward to poetry month as my month of escape.

Escape

Evading demands of life and work on occasion is necessity
Sinking into words, succumbing to moments of inspiration becomes salvation
Clutching sights, sounds, lyrics of life, an elixir for my sometimes anxious soul
Appreciating what is, not bemoaning what isn’t
Pausing to discover balance on life’s teeter totter 
Evaluating where I am and where I am going, a journey on a page

gayle

“A journey on a page”—wish I’d said that!! This is so perfect—the essence of writing here, and escaping the day to day…

Dave Wooley

That’s my favorite line, too! A perfect way to end the poem and an invitation to more poems.

Rita DiCarne

Tammi, what a beautiful poem. Your word choice is wonderful – evading, succumbing, clutching. I needed to see/read this line today – Appreciating what is, not bemoaning what isn’t – that is always good advice. You make me want to spend the weekend “journeying” on the page.

brcrandall

I concur. It’s the last line for me: “Evaluating where I am and where I am going, a journey on a page” – this is exactly why I am so glad I stumbled upon #VerseLove last spring.

Susie Morice

I Wake in Oregon

I wake almost two thousand miles beyond my home,

wondering how I stood the last two and a half years without
allowing the world to step in till today, as I 
kick down the walls, fly the skies,
engage in my life with beloved family;

I revel in dawn with my
niece-child, her now-greyed hubby, her chickens, her birds, her garden, her sacred labs.

Oh, how I have missed this treasured nest,
reeled from the absence, but now
engaged once more in the crisp NW April 
glory
of life with poetry and loved ones and am
new.

by Susie Morice, April 1, 2022©

Tammi Belko

Susie,

What a beautiful place to wake! Your poem evokes images of love “revel in dawn with my niece-child” and tranquility “engaged once more in crisp NW April glory”. Enjoy your time in Oregon!

Glenda M. Funk

Susie, you deserve this travel, and there is no better place than the Oregon coast, so I hope you’re near the ocean. Drink in nature’s nectar. Revel till you’re cup overflows w/ family love and the joy of travel. Godspeed, my friend.

brcrandall

Susie, It seems home has found you, awake in Oregon, and Oregon awakening the ‘treasured nest,’ – all from allowing the world to step back in. Good Morning, Oregon. Hello.

Kim Johnson

Susie, I am so glad you are traveling and enjoying family time. And chickens, birds, the garden and the dogs. Oh, what blessings in the mornings to wake to these things. Your lines create the perfect picture of flying the skies and loving the freedom of traveling once again.

Barb Edler

Absolutely, gorgeous poem, Susie, I can feel your joy leaping off the page here. I feel the much needed reconnection, and love how all of these images flow to the final glorious end…”and am new”! Powerful poem! Enjoy and safe travels!

Leilya Pitre

Good Morning, Bryan! Thank you for giving this month such a wonderful start. I love your song to Sarah! She deserves every word in it.
My poem today and sad, grieving, and hopeful for my country, my people, my family, and friends.

Free Ukraine
Freedom, we all know, cannot be free because it
Requires strength, pain, and life sacrifices, but
Expect no less, without a doubt, from
Every man and woman, every youth and elder who will
     D E F E N D
Ukraine with honor, love, and pride
Kraїna, country, of sunflowers, Great Kobzar, and free will   
Resists tirelessly showing the world how to love
And fight for the better future of its children
In just a few days, the global world has witnessed
No force can stop these brave Ukrainian souls
Even as mighty as the “big brother’s” killing machine. 

Tammi Belko

Leilya — Your poem speaks truth! My heartbreaks for the people of Ukraine and these words — “No force can stop these brave Ukrainian souls/Even as mighty as the ‘big brother’s’ killing machine” — were especially powerful! My prayers go out to you and your family and friends.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Tammi! It means a lot.

Boxer

Nice work! Inspiring for all!!

Leilya Pitre

Thank you!

Sherri Spelic

I got chills while reading and rereading. Your opening statement prepares the reader for the pride and sacrifice you detail. “Every man and woman, every youth and elder who will
     D E F E N D
Ukraine with honor, love, and pride” Precisely. We have seen it, read it, heard it. Your poem lets us share your pride and cultivate a bit of hope.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Sherri! Hope helps me wake up every morning these days.

Glenda M. Funk

Leilya, your poem is everything I’m thinking and have thought about Ukraine. Ukraine is the shining example of resistance the world should be.i’m the face of totalitarianism. I know a lady i’m Italy who is fuming Air B&Bs in Poland for refugees as they pass through. You’ve reminded me that I need to reach out and offer to help w/ her efforts. It’s not enough to say #StandWithUkraine. I must do more. Peace and love to you.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you so much, Glenda! I found an outlet for me to help through a U24 project of the Ukrainian journalists translating the breaking news about the war. This helps me stay sane and feel like I am doing a little something besides the monetary donations.

brcrandall

Leilya, I am so happy to see you and your poem in this space, but more importantly to know you are writing from the (insert word here) place that is right now. My Grannie Annie (who taught me to love life and live whimsically, especially through poetry, came from the Ukraine as a little girl….Hynka Lysak became Ann E. Ripley. My prayers are win you, the land, and in contrast to brutality. This is the line I loved most: “Kraїna, country, of sunflowers, Great Kobzar, and free will” – It fed my cravings to know more about a place that brought its bloodlines into my own. All love to you, Leilya. All love.

Leilya Pitre

Thank you so much, Bryan! I didn’t know you had a Ukranian Grandma, but I am not surprized. You’d look great in vyshivanka, traditional embroided shirt.
When I read your poem this morning and saw the task, I immediately knew what to write. I can’t explain all the feelings I live through these days. Love you back!

Kevin Hodgson

There’s A-lways one poet
C-reating chaos out of the classroom
by R-efusing to bother to follow
the rules O-f the lesson –
S-ly and furtive, I’m guessing,
is where T-hat poet lives –
I-nside a space where a misplaced word gives
hope, C-reativity, and care: I’ll meet you there

  • Kevin
Susie Morice

Ah, Kevin – you sly fox you. Love it and the lyrical ring of this poem. I especially love (and I laughed as I read it) the touch of chaos of it. Susie

gayle

My kind of rebel. let me know what time to meet you!!

Paul W. Hankins

Kevin:

Tucking the operating word within the lines. THAT’S an idea. I wonder if the placement could get really techical (like it has to appear in a downward slant for a mood poem or appear to move upward for a joyful narrative). I like the idea of “misplaced words” finding themselves now in a poem.

Happy National Poetry Month!

pwh

Margaret Simon

There is always that poet and I love that we can count on you to skew things a bit…giving Creativity its flair!

Tammi Belko

Kevin,

Love this poem. You have truly captured the essence of creativity! Creative individuals never really follow the rules. Love this line: “Inside a space where a misplaced word gives hope”

Tammy Breitweiser

WOW! Love the chaos and the truth resonates from this piece. Thank you for sharing.

Glenda M. Funk

Kevin, this is clever. I wanted to think of a clever way to say something about acrostics (not my favorite form. Don’t tell Bryan!), but I needed to do something else. Maybe tomorrow. Keep rousing rebel! We need those who say, nope to the rules and expectations.

brcrandall

I am Cheshire-cat grinning right now, Kevin. Nothing better than out playing the impish invitation….a poem ready to go….a writer after my own heart (and would you look at this? I remember being on your radio show when I was still in the classroom….phew…has it been 15 years? Loved what you did here and look forward to seeing more poems to come from you.

Kim Johnson

You know that scene in Home Alone where they’re passing that piece of luggage down the family line, “Give this to Kevin……Give this to Kevin……Give this to Kevin…….Kevin’s not here! Kevin’s not here! Kevin’s not here…….” and the mom screams “KEVIN!” and faints. That’s you, isn’t it? Running around the VerseLove community without a suitcase, breaking all the rules. Bwahahahahahahaha I love this so much.

Scott M

Kevin, this was fun! I’m with you on this. Rules. Bah! Who needs them? I mean, I get that (according to Oxford Languages and Google) they’re a set of “explicit or understood regulations or principles governing conduct within a particular activity” or society at large, but, really, who needs ’em? I enjoy flouting them as often as possible…in terms of poetry that is, every where else, however, I try to be a law-abiding citizen…wait…why did this comment become so confessional all of a sudden…? Lol.

Jessica Wiley

Kevin, well…you’re the star pupil! I can tell you were the one labeled “troublemaker”, but your soul is great! Look at you now. I love this! The line “by R-efusing to bother to follow
the rules O-f the lesson –”…I think you are still that one, just now a teacher, who uses chaos and anarchy to create passion with your students!

Charlene Doland

“I-nside a space where a misplaced word gives
hope, C-reativity, and care: I’ll meet you there” — since my words are habitually misplaced, I would love to also meet you there!

Angie

Wow, Kevin. This is awesome! Yes, rule breaker!! ??

Saba T.

This made me laugh, it is exactly what I needed today. Clever & chaotic, perfect.

Glenda M. Funk

i am sorry

i knew when notification failed to arrive 

a reviewer said, sixteen voices need not apply
meta-pedagogies eschew rhyme & rhythm & the sublime 

seeklove of verse on some other shore. 
off with you and take Audre Lorde 
requited light requires more 
resiliant relevance & rubrics galore
young poets too need not apply 

—glenda funk
April 1, 2022

*For Sarah, Padma, Kim, Jennifer, Stacey, Mo, Barbara, Stefani, Leylia, Susan, Denise, Margaret, Emily, Seana, Allison. 

A note on NCTE’s proposal review process: NCTE sent acceptances yesterday. I received two for other proposals. Any member can review. Reviewers know the names of all presenters. The process is quick and uses a multiple choice ranking of accept, reject, combine. Reviewers are asked to provide a short rationale for their decision. I am shocked this proposal w/ 16 educators, an award-winning author, student participants, first-time presenters, and diversity was rejected. I am sorry.

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Glenda, your words are so heartfelt today as we had high hopes for sharing our joy, our love, our community of writers and the encouragement we all bring each other. Thank you for the hours that you invested of yourself into the proposal – for all of us. As writers, we are fiercely passionate about what we do. I, too, am sorry that we are not able to share our joy with others this year. But I also know this: the world may not be ready for what we have here, though it is so desperately needed. We have a Garden of Eden in paradise for writers, and reviewers know not what they stopped. But we shall rise. Onward we march, doing what we do best: writing, sharing, reading, encouraging. It’s what we do. Thank you, thank you, thank you – for your tribute poem to how we are feeling and for all you mean to all of us in this group! I’m sending a big group hug and passing around the chocolate……

Susan Ahlbrand

Kim,
Your words so eloquently capture my thoughts and feelings—as they often do.

Our little world is so special and full of light. For now, we will continue to share and celebrate regardless of the “rejection.”

Glenda,
Your poem is full of emotion. Absolutely no need for you to apologize. It’s their loss, and we so appreciate your efforts in pulling together the proposal.

Margaret Simon

Oh, Glenda, thanks for your recognition of this disappointment. I have never been able to guess which proposals will be accepted. I did one with two friends that I wrote and thought it was kind of a weak offering (insert self-deprecation here) and yet, we were accepted. Go figure!

Susie Morice

Dang, Glenda…ya gotta wonder what the heck… Perfect poem here today. Despite that “rejected” business, I know that you and this list of scholars/writers are light years ahead of your class/clearly ahead of your time. Love, Susie

Leilya Pitre

Thank you, Glenda! Yes, I too, received this awful email, Glenda, and was shocked. Your acrostic says it all; we know where that “other shore’ is for verse lovers!! I don’t even want to go into politics of the selection process. Good thing, we know how and where to express ourselves. Thank you, Sarah Jane D., for this opportunity!

Paul W. Hankins

Glenda:

Yes. I have stopped writing proposals for the time being. When some post four out of four acceptances, and I see yours rejected. Well. . .that serves as more artifact and evidence for me. And I am LOVING serving and sharing more locally here in Indiana at the moment. I note how you work “light” into this piece/comment. When I see the names in your address, I can mentally add the surnames and this makes me feel even more saddened for the declination of the ideas that might have been in this space.

pwh

Tammi Belko

Glenda —

Your poem captures your disappointment. This line “Seek love of verse on some other shore” feels like a huge slap in the face. I’m so sorry your proposal was rejected. Given the topic and the poet teachers involved in your project, I think NCTE is missing out on something amazing.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Oh, Glenda! I know how much of you went into this. And I’m sorry that you feel an apology is needed. We are grateful for you AND for all the love you shared in putting the proposal together. I am sorry for the loss of being together in a shared space and being able to meet in person. This is an extraordinary group, unlike any other. The celebration we bring to our writing each month happens because of every writer – there will be a time and a place in the future that we will bring this love to a broader community. For now, I celebrate you, your writing, and our month of verselove. I am sending all kinds of hugs to you today.

Sherri Spelic

I’m sorry, too, that your multi-voice proposal was not accepted for the next NCTE conference. I also know that your commitment to promoting new voices remains and that means a lot. “seeklove of verse on some other shore” lets me feel your disappointment quite directly.

Fran Haley

Glenda, I cannot even begin to understand… but oh, the power here in your response, so much more than “i am sorry” …it’s a loss for great love seeking to be shared, the snuffing of light ready to kindle. Beautiful lines, standing out bright and sharp against the fog (i.e., failure on the part of reviewers and systems). I am sorry, too.

Mo Daley

Thanks for acknowledging how disappointing this rejection is. Your poem reads like sweet revenge to me.

brcrandall

Glenda, We Are Sorry. The same was true for a team my colleague in Florida put together. When I saw the names and the purpose, I thought, “This is a no brainer.” Nope. I kept getting acceptances from the same proposals over and over and over again, but the one that was hit out of the ballpark. Foul ball, I guess. I see those names above…their loss, indeed….and I like ‘seek ove of verse’ — looking forward to all your poems this month.

Glenda M. Funk

Thanks, Bryan. I received the email deluge for my other two proposals and kept looking through them to see if I missed something. I know the rejected proposal is as good as the other two.

Stefani B

Oh Glenda, I love how you’ve applied this email into your poetry today. I too was shocked when I got the email, maybe this proposal can be turned into something else??? Love your line “requited light requires more,” as it transfers to so many experiences in education.

Barb Edler

Glenda, your poem shares your disappointed so well, but you do not need to be sorry. It would be nice to be able to understand the rejection which remains the mystery and increases the feelings of frustration. Love your end! “young poets too need not apply”. I hear you! Hugs!

Denise Krebs

Ah, Glenda, thank you for your I’m sorry poem. It’s really heart-felt and lovely. Congratulations on the other proposal acceptances, by the way. I think it was a great opportunity for NCTE’s conference, but not it will be their loss. I love these lines in your poem today:

requited light requires more 

resiliant relevance & rubrics galore

young poets too need not apply 

The last line is sad.

Angie

Thanks for sharing the story in poem form. Very disappointing indeed but y’all are still amazing <3

Saba T.

I went and Googled what NCTE is. Such a heartfelt poem. I especially love the line “seek love of verse on some other shore” because it’s so relatable. We’ve all been victim to a version of it at some point in our lives.

Maureen Y Ingram

Glenda, I am absolutely bummed for you and everyone at this rejection – it feels like the kind of session that folks would welcome back again and again, if they ever dared let the presentation happen! What an informative, creative, and ultimately sad acrostic poem you offer here. Love the idea of ‘requited light’ and the alliteration is awesome –
requited light requires more 
resiliant relevance & rubrics galore

(Sorry for my delay at commenting – it’s been a whirl of a few days!

Jennifer

Inner peace, the stressful move is done
Thankful for the creative community of poets, painters,ponderers, practitioners
Husband and I finally live in the same town
Artists fill galleries of powerful pieces packing punches
Craving creativity, I dip into my unconscious well
As Odysseus, my Ithaca, claiming my family and “kingdom” once again

brcrandall

Huge hug to Ithaca, Jennifer. I’m from Syracuse and did my undergraduate in Binghamton. Welcome to CNY…I’m glad you found the inner peace of poets, ponderers, and practitioners

Susie Morice

Wow, Jennifer! So exciting! I love the “claiming” here! Good for you! Susie

Tammi Belko

Jennifer,

Congratulations on your move. Sounds like you certainly have found a place of inner peace in your new home. Love your allusion in the last line: As Odysseus, my Ithaca, claiming my family and ‘kingdoms’ once again.”

Glenda M. Funk

Jennifer, I did not know you and your husband resided in different towns. I love the Odysseus allusion. I think about epic poetry often and find your lines a perfect nod to The Odyssey. You are so dang good, my friend.

Cathy

Ithaca is a wonderful place! I had to stop and read your poem because I was there just a few weeks ago. It is a very creative community! I am in Rochester, NY so not far away.

Maureen Y Ingram

Love the alliteration of “the creative community of poets, painters, ponderers, practitioners” – what a fab community to be a part of! Glad you and your husband are reunited.

Christine Baldiga

I’m excited to be dipping my toes in to this month long poetry event, having watched from afar via Fran Haley. As I sat down to write, a ladybug sitting on the window caught my eye and inspired the verse below. When I finished I had hoped to take a picture of the beetle on the glass showing its lakeside viewpoint but apparently the insect had flown away! On to a better view? How could that be? Note to all: living on the lake is a gift I get to live each day and will probably be the focus of many of my words this month.

Lucky little ladybug
Attached to the window
Dreaming of possibilities seen
Yet the glass stands in its way
Boldly hanging on
Unaware of the problem
Grateful for the view

brcrandall

But the two of you have a lakefront view, and that is wonderful…that’s where the possibilities are!

Christine Baldiga

most certainly Brian!

Fran Haley

Oh, Christine – how profound an observation of dreaming of possibilities and being unaware of the unseen problem, a metaphorical glass ceiling or wall, which keeps a ladybug (or anyone) from attaining or becoming. I love “boldly hanging on” and the reminder of being grateful for the view – just so many points to ponder, thanks to this lucky ladybug on your window and your poetic insight. Your light shines through my own window this morning. So happy you’re here.

Christine Baldiga

a love poem to my view, and the blessings of living here for sure!

Margaret Simon

I live on a bayou and use it for inspiration most days. I’m happy to see you here, Christine. Boldly hanging on, aren’t we all?!

Christine Baldiga

Yes – we are all boldly hanging on. Glad to be back writing poetry and reconnecting with writing friends!

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Christine, this melts my heart – – this little ladybug, boldly hanging on with all hope of the dreams, unaware of the problem of the glass but having a happy heart for the view. There was a movie once where an animal was the only way of hope and helped a person – knowing that once the animal crossed the threshhold, there was no way back to the land of the living but it was the only hope for the person in peril. I wish I could remember the movie, but it was the kiss of death for my dog loving heart that the animal gave its life, and the person watched it trot off into a certain death knowing it had granted life. Oh, my heart hurts every time I think about it. This little ladybug reminds me of that movie.

Christine Baldiga

Oh my! I must find the name of this movie! Thank you for your comments.

Saba T.

“Unaware of the problem
Grateful for the view”
Such wonderful lines.

Maureen Y Ingram

This is fun! Love the idea of the ladybug “Boldly hanging on/Unaware of the problem” – we should all be so blessed!

Scott M

Like Sexy, but, You Know, with Poetry

All he needs is two turntables and a microphone. (where it’s at) Don’t
Call it a comeback, though.  They’ve been here for years.  Rhymin’
Ripley (like Ladies Love Cool James) says Poetry’s gonna knock you 
Out and don’t go chasing waterfalls (although everyone needs a little TLC) Tay
Swift tells us to shake it off, shake it off, but the Literary BRC, like 
Timberlake, is bringing acrostics back, those other poets don’t know how to act
It’s just true that all these poets lack (uh-huh take it to the chorus)
Can’t you see that Big Rip is bringin’ acrostics back!

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Thank you for this fun prompt on day one, Bryan.  After reading it, I couldn’t shake the Timberlake song out of my head, so I just ran with it.  I tried to pay homage to your chosen poetic form and hip hop (ish) songs from the past.  I hope you enjoy it.  As a way to apologize (Lol), I offer up those three literary nom de plumes for you!

brcrandall

Dang, Scott. This is impressive. You are fusing universes here and it’s way cool. I am not sure if you know writer Torrey Maldonado, but he comes at me with verse like yours all the time…I had to check to see that it wasn’t him. Truth telling, too: when one knows music, especially hip hop, one has the game play of poets. Thanks for this. Appreciate it.

Leilya Pitre

That’s a skillful play around Bryan, hip-hop, and acrostic, Scott! Love your sense of humor and word choices 🙂

Paul W. Hankins

Scott:

Crandall cites your “fusing universes” and it is a spot-on response to the piece here. It’s like a found piece that lives in the lyrics we might share. This one sounds as much as it reads.

Thank you for sharing. Happy National Poetry Month!

pwh

Boxer Moon

“You cant write if you can’t relate trade the cash for the beef….. ”
Please Scott dont hurt ’em…
Awesome work 🙂

Maureen Y Ingram

Scott, this is awesome! I love especially,
Poetry’s gonna knock you/
Out and don’t go chasing waterfalls …”
I was singing and reading and moving to the beat!

Dixie K Keyes

Lost & Found

He had lost a lot when I found him–a brother, a family, a home.
Almost half of his life gone in a whisp of time.

And there he was in a Facebook photo, a serious but

Cheeky Chico.
Hating the world, but knowing himself; his
Inner guru strong.
Calling stoically for a new family,
Onboarding for a slow bonding with us.

Now, for seven years now, he has had a new family:
Two sisters (Summer and Cocoa-Bean) and a mommie.

And, he is Chico Bunny-Bear, Chico Chimichanga, and Security Patrol.

He enlightens all of us in his 10 pound Pug-huahua form.
Found. Lost no more.

brcrandall

So glad to see Dixie in the house again! And I am loving Chico tremendously, especially as I prepare for procedures this morning and have my loyal Karallyne Karma Cupcake girl at my side. The first two lines keep sticking with me, as well as ‘Chico Bunny-Bear, Chico Chimchanga, and Security Patrol.’ My son’s name is Chitunga so Chimchanga rang in my ears.

Jennifer

I love the love you have for Chico, and the line “And,he is Chico Bunny-Bear…”

gayle

Your poem evokes all the rescues we have embraced—and isn’t it wonderful? “Found. Lost no more”. As it should be for every dog, everywhere…

Wendy Everard

Dixie, loved this and the way that you embedded the acrostic. “Cheeky Chico” was adorable. I had to read it again when I got to the last stanza because I wasn’t sure if you were talking about a human! Loved that ambiguity about it, that you humanized your canine friend so well. This was lovely.

Maureen Y Ingram

This is a very dear poem, an ode to a much-loved “Pug-huahua” I really like how you embedded the acrostic within your larger poem, making his name and its meaning (love “Inner guru strong”!!) the heart of your poem.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Bryan, inspiration has dropped like leaves to the ground before being scattered throughout my poem today. From you and Flooded with Imagination, 2021 when my eye read “freedom” and “flooded” as Fleedom, from Fran and her beautiful “love crayoned,” cmargocs “April hare”, Kim’s “DrDoolittle,” Margaret’s “verse love,” and of course, from Sarah – for everything. Thank you for the chance to play today. That invitation to go gremlin and rogue won me over (ever a Star Wars fan). 

Fleedom

Frog has opened the gift of Sarah’s Seeds, a
Love crayoning of words blossoming through life
Every day prompts scattered
Each an April hare pop, a 
DrDoolittle of conversing with alphabeticals
Of rehearsed verse. love
My own verse-ion of fleedom

Dixie K Keyes

I love the creativity in this…the multiple ways you played with cap, punc, and space. My favorite–the “April hare pop.” Extraordinary!

brcrandall

A Dr.Doolittle of conversing with alphabetical…..Yes! Your own verse-ion of fleedom. Ribbit Ribbit. To be honest, last year April helped me to believe in freedom once again. So here’s to another year!

Fran Haley

OH. MY. STARS. Jennifer, this whimsical collation astounds me! I love this blend of freedom and flooded – this unique sense of “fleedom” that I want to turn ‘round in my mind for a long while. Definitely has a sci-fi/fantasy feel to it. Your “own verse-ion” – too good!- of fleedom sparkles with many colors, new and fresh like spring itself. I am thoroughly delighted to see how far a seed of love crayoned goes. Thank you ?

Wendy Everard

Jennifer, this felt so bouncy, imaginative, and excited — I’m also excited to begin! My favorite image: “a/love crayoning of words” — elicited feelings of my childlike enthusiasm as a I waited for 4/1! Beautiful words!

Glenda M. Funk

Jennifer, you are a wordsmith full of clever syllabication. Lord knows how often I misread. I must embrace that more often. “Alphabeticals” is such a fun word. Play on!

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Jennifer, the randomness and creativity here are amazing, the way you pulled rabbits (or April Hares) from a hat to work this magic in your very skilled and clever way. I love the verse-ion, too, uniquely your very own. It’s fun to read!

Alexis Ennis

This is adorable, brilliant, creative, and fun to read! You have such talent for playing with words.

cmargocs

A mashup of acrostic and found poem–how fun and whimsical! “Fleedom” should be a word–the act of getting away, breaking away for freedom’s sake.Ooh, now I’m getting a lesson idea for my fourth and fifth grade writers…WordSmash! Thank you for my nod in your poem, too!

Maureen Y Ingram

Jennifer, what a fun amalgamation, a new word created! Fleedom! love this

Dee

Good morning Everyone! This is my first time participating in the Verselove. The introductory poem was a great way to illuminate Dr. Sarah Donovan. Thanks for sharing Bryan. When it comes to writing I am still grappling with my self-efficacy so I am grateful for this space where I know my writing will not be judged but instead celebrated. My poem is about my first born Hope!

Hope
Obedient in every way
Precious gift from God
Effervescent, Ebullient, and Elated
Hope

Dixie K Keyes

A mantra for our day. Thank you!

brcrandall

“I love / to believe / in hope” ~ from a poem, “The World’s Oldest Trilogy” by Brendan Kennally. It is my motto…to move throughout the world effervescently, ebulliently, and elated. Write on!

Christine Baldiga

What a beautiful tribute to your first born. I too will be a newcomer this April. Looking forward to sharing poetry

Margaret Simon

Hope is such a wonderful name and strong, active verb for our days. I love your word choices for E! Loving way to begin.

Wendy Everard

Dee, I love this! The fourth line proved memorable in its alliterative “e’s. Nice work!

Ramona

Love the repetition in your “e” line and this beautiful tribute to your daughter, Hope. I’m a partial newbie (having posted just a few times in the past). And now I’m off to search for the poem Bryan mentioned.

Kim Johnson

I have always loved the name Hope. Yes, a precious gift from God. A reminder every day of the miracle of life.

Maureen Y Ingram

Beautiful, Dee! I love your use of alliteration in the fourth line, “Effervescent, Ebullient, and Elated” and it is particularly sweet that it is the lengthiest line. Such a joyous description of your child!

Margaret Simon

Bryan, I am swooning over your poetic letter to Sarah. She nourished us and keeps us coming back for more. What a wonderful way to start our month of writing.

Pause before the sun rises
Open your heart, bleed on the page.
Even when you don’t want
To.
Rehearse verse. Love
Your offering. No matter how small. You are enough.

DeAnna C

Margaret,
Thank you for sharing your poem today. I love how you pack a punch in a short poem honoring POETRY.
The following line spoke to me, as I tend to read the prompt and start my process even before my morning coffee.

Open your heart, bleed on the page.

brcrandall

Rehearse verse. Love your offering. No matter how small. Thanks, Margaret….now I have a mantra for the month.

Fran Haley

Succinct and perfect for the day, Margaret – more than enough! This could be my own portrait in the pre-dawn, my own blood flowing. Writing is a commitment like any other. A relationship requires some sacrifice (if it is to endure). Poetry in particular gives back so much – it takes on its own life. Love the internal rhyme “rehearse verse.” Poetry swims on sound.

Christine Baldiga

Oh how I love these words and how you started national poetry month with your loving words to poetry. As I dip my toes in this new (to me) platform your words bring hope and inspiration.

Kimberly Haynes Johnson

Oh, how brilliant. The first two lines I thought couldn’t be topped…..then came the third and fourth. From nod to applause……the last line, cartwheels!

Wendy Everard

Margaret, I so appreciated your wordplay in line 5! :). And I love your reassurance in Line 6. A good reminder!

Ramona

Margaret, “love your offering” has to be my favorite phrase from your Poetry acrostic. I’m clinging to it as I jump in today.

Alexis Ennis

What a great poem about the power of poetry!

Maureen Y Ingram

Beautifully simple poetic shout out to poetry! Love the single word line “To.” so much – makes me think it could be a stand-alone description of notes before writing..as in, answer this first, what/who will you write “to”?

What a beautiful writing habit you encourage here, Margaret – “Pause before the sun rises.” Lovely!

cmargocs

I am excited for this new writing opportunity! My acrostic is based on my “rabbit, rabbit, rabbit” superstition on the first of each month. Bryan, your intro is so full of word playfulness, it’s hard NOT to be inspired to write–thank you!

Rabbit, rabbit, rabbit
April pops up like a hare in the grass, kicking March aside
Bringing a sense of urgency to each school day
Beyond the normally controlled chaos
Instructor anxiety begins to build, closer and closer to
Testing week.

Rabbit, rabbit, rabbit
April sniffs the air like a nervous bunny, cute 
But on edge, counting calendar days
Budgets must be spent and data must be entered
In a race to the finish
That is still months away.

Rabbit, rabbit, rabbit
April will hop by more quickly than we’d like
Bringing May’s immutable demands and deadlines
Bursting with pride or bemoaning lost opportunities
It happens every year, different students, different challenges, yet
The ending never really seems to change.

Kim Johnson

I’m so glad to see you here first thing this morning! I have a friend who says rabbit twice on the first of every month – if she doesn’t post Rabbit, Rabbit on Facebook, I call and check on her. I had never heard of this superstition, and now I try to honor it – – just in case. I might need to say it three times like you – (rabbits multiply – say rabbit this month and next month we’ll have to say it a dozen times). You are so right – April is a race to the finish! I love that line, as so many teachers are feeling that right now. I’m hoping it will not hop by more quickly than I’d like (at least for next week, spring break). For now, I think of the end of my driveway in the spring – all the little wild bunnies will come out, for that is where they live. And I will smile as I see them…..and then drive by and worry that they will not make it back to their holes to beat the hawks that also watch for them there, and then I will reassure myself: cute as they are, the hawks also must eat……

Fran Haley

Chris, I am thrilled to see you here! And what an acrostic! So many layers of meaning, from the superstition to the metaphor of April and the education world… nervous, sniffing the air, heightened alert and anxiety for sure. It works SO well. I find myself twitching as I even as I respond to this perfect poetic picture…oh and rabbit rabbit rabbit. In case. 🙂

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

I am reminded of a command a teacher once repeated to us – QQLAB, Quick, quick, like a bunny – whenever he’d get us moving in your words today. And oh, how that urgency to make sure everything is wrapped up hits teachers this month. My favorite line: “April pops up like a hare in the grass, kicking March aside.” I’m ready for some kicking!

brcrandall

And there you have it, Rabbit (Frog loves the bunnies). What catches my ear (and envy) is how ‘Rabbit Rabbit Rabbit’ works as first lines and the letters that fell to the page. I can’t help but see a rabbit popping from warren wiggling his nose and whiskers. ‘April pops up like a hare’ – Well, I say you have a poem to share with students today!

Glenda M. Funk

Love seeing you here. Welcome! I’m unfamiliar w/ rabbit superstitions. Hum! Where have I been? But these many teacher anxieties are so familiar. I wonder how the heightened anxiety of this year will impact the normal spring deadlines. Wonderful personification and alliteration throughout.

Ramona

Chris, there’s so much to identify with in your acrostic. Testing week, counting calendar days, bemoaning lost opportunities. I’ve never heard of this superstition. Good thing to learn about it on the first day of a new month!

Alexis Ennis

Love the use of rabbit in the first lines as well as acrostic!

Maureen Y Ingram

“Rabbit, rabbit, rabbit” is a new superstition for me! I certainly know “In a race to the finish,” though, as a sensation in April – I am always astounded at how little is left of the school year when you return from spring break. Very clever acrostic!

Kim Johnson

Bryan, what a perfect way to start the month of VerseLove! I cannot think of a better way to begin our month long writing marathon than this standing ovation to the woman who makes it all possible – who gives us safe space, honors our voice, and invests in us as writers in so many ways. I like the way you used Rhyme & Rhythm in your poem, her sports poetry book title that features many of our poems. She is an absolute blessing in my life, and I ended the month of March yesterday with a blog post at kimhaynesjohnson.com thanking her for planting the seeds of writing habits in me back in 2017 after meeting her in 2016 at NCTE. I am a better person today because of Sarah. Thank you for hosting us today with acrostics!

Today, I’m writing a version of acrostic called a Hashtag Acrostic – an acrostic that is written with words that “hashtag” photos that capture a personality or hobbies – I have used these with new groups to introduce ourselves. I’m hashtagging my 3 schnoodles – Boo Radley, Fitz, and Ollie

#Barksateverything
#Oneofakinddog
#Overthetop
#Rescuedandwanted
#Abandonedforweeks
#DrDoolittlewouldrun
#Lordhelpuswiththisone
#Expressiveeyebrows
#Youcan’tnotlovehim

#Foodhog
#Independentspirit
#Transcendentalhippie
#Zendog

#Outgoingsocially
#Livestoplayfetch
#Liketotallyclumsy
#Intelligentpuzzlesolver
#Everybody’ssweetheart

cmargocs

Kim, the descriptions of your beloved canine companions are fun! I don’t think I’ve ever met a transcendental hippie dog, but now I very much want to–sounds like my kind of furry friend. This challenge is going to be fun!

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Kim, I love each of these dogonalities! Though Boo Radley might have fully captured my heart. You’ve given us the complete image of each in so few words. And it makes me want to find a dog to rescue once more. So much love from you for your schnoodles found in each line!

Dixie K Keyes

Makes me appreciate our doggies even more! My favorite lines are “expressive eyebrows,” “Zen dog,” and “liketotally clumsy.” In fact, I think I’ll make my acrostic about one of my doggies. Thank you!

Fran Haley

Kim, the hashtag form works perfectly here to capture the spirit of each dog. Makes me want to be right in the middle of it all!! The background of your Boo Radley really pulls on my heartstrings; I rejoice that he went from abandonment to abundance. This week I saw a blue German Shepherd puppy; didn’t even know these existed. Had to restrain myself from bringing her home and naming her Blue Radley 🙂

brcrandall

Thanks for sharing your blog! Earmarked (or is that doggy-eared). This is what I love about this month and our writing. Take a task, make it your own, play, and teach others something new. Brilliant. I can so do this: #krazy #ass #ridulous #affectionate #lovenugget (Karal)(who is still sleeping by my side)

Glenda M. Funk

Kim, it’s fitting that your fur babies take center stage in your acrostic. I might need to write another acrostic and try my hand at hashtag acrostics. This is a fun form, #barksateverything describes Snug for many years, but he has recently given the UPS man a break! I also want to echo all you’ve said about Sarah and the blessing she is in my life.

Maureen Y Ingram

I have never heard of hashtag acrostics – but, wow, they really inform us about your dogs’ personalities, so clever and funny! I laughed at “#Foodhog” and feel glad that I grew up before hashtags could have been used to describe middle school me, hahaha.

Fran Haley

Bryan, I love an acrostic – I believe this ancient form is underused.Thank you for the wellspring of inspiration and energy this first morning of VerseLove. Gorgeous lines in tribute to Sarah for the space and place to sprout and grow poetically, exponentially. A stunning offering.

I read your acrostic and went to the refrigerator to start breakfast, pondering…and there, on the refrigerator door, is…

The Drawing My Granddaughter Made During a “Sleepover”

Six years old, blissfully
Unaware that it’s the emblem of a 
Nation being invaded, she announces:
Franna, I am making this for you.
Love crayoned on the paper as
Our own special symbol.
When night falls, we put on our pink pajamas
Emblazoned with these light-seeking faces
Radiating joy of now, promise for tomorrow.

Sarah J. Donovan, PhD (s/her)

Fran,

I love this scene of you at the refrigerator re-encountering your granddaughter’s drawing of a sunflower. Your poem makes me want to climb into that drawing to be “blissfully/Unaware” with “Love crayoned” and “light-seeking faces/Radiating joy”. That you share hope with us in this scene, promise– is welcomed today. Thank you for your poem.

Sarah

Fran Haley

Sarah: thank YOU for the gift of your words and the provision of this place to soak up their power, to grow, to give back. You radiate so much strength, rooted in peace. I am a grateful beneficiary.

brcrandall

The shine of sunflowers and the pink of generations in pajamas is the joy for this morning…And of course ‘Franna’ is (s)imply amazing. I hope the next time you sleep at her house, you pick up a box of crayons and draw a picture for her fridge.

Kim Johnson

Fran, I love the poems you write of your granddaughters. I wish all grandchildren could have a Franna as loving and fun as you. The crayoned love speaks to my heart. Children truly do give of themselves through art, and I think of these pajamas that you share as something special between you. I think of the poem you wrote about the night she called you to be sure you were wearing yours – and you went and changed. What a special blessing that she wants to be just like you! You are her hero, you know. That last line honors the generation of today and tomorrow, as here you stand together giving wings to your sweet Scout.

cmargocs

Fran, you have shown me that inspiration can truly be found everywhere, first in your SOLSC, and now on your refrigerator! You have a special knack for making connections between the everyday, outside world with all its hardships and flaws and softening the edges with heartfelt, insightful emotions.

Jennifer Guyor Jowett

Franna! How I love that moniker mix of your name and nana! I can’t think of anything sweeter that love crayoning, which I want to read as a compound word in addition to the subj/verb structure. This sneak peek into the sleepover and the hope and promise of tomorrow’s is a beautiful way to open the day.

Christine Baldiga

Hello Franna!
I missed the deadline for Slicing last month but have enjoyed reading your posts! This one is particularly moving and inspired me to subscribe. I am dipping my toes in to this month long event thanks to you!

Fran Haley

CHRISTINE!! I am thrilled you’re here! I have missed you. Thank you for these amazing words that have moved my heart this morning. Can’t wait to read your poems!

Margaret Simon

“Love crayoned on the paper” Ah, sweet child who radiates joy and promise. This is a beautiful tribute.

Glenda M. Funk

Fran, out of the mouths of babes, right? I will never look at sunflowers the same way again after learning about Ukraine. You’re poem is a lovely tribute to childhood innocence and a reminder that symbols have power.

Angie

What a beautiful poem and I love the “blissful unawareness” of the symbolism of the sunflower.

Maureen Y Ingram

Fran, what a gorgeous, poignant word for your acrostic! I am moved especially by the line, “Franna, I am making this for you” – hearing her innocence and joy, wishing such for all children; the juxtaposition with the horrors happening in Ukraine and her sweet gift leaves me breathless and filled with prayer. (I love that she calls you “Franna”!)

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